Exit Wounds 2-(Justice For All)

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thanks for that girl..as long as people are generally intrested in reading my stories i will try to keep it up..obvisiously this 'talent' of mine has been hidden and it takes an guy like Steven to bring it out in me..i have to thank the big guy for letting me take on another chapter of this story ...thanks again halkush..
 

tspoons

Member
Wow!
just got myself a coffee and got cosy to read all of your story Heather. I have been off line for a while with computer problems.
I love this story....when is lola going to get some action? xx

Missed you all xx
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I hope to put abit more here over this long weekend some time amongst my busy agenda ..hey dont worry tspoons your couple of minutes with Mr Suction lips s coming soon ..poor steven i do put him in it sometimes but hey i love it..and do you know what the best thing about stirring him up is?..that he cant come back at me thats what makes it soooooo delicious.
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Just an quick note i have FINISHED this story and just to let some stew in there own juices to find out the last chapter ..who else is going to met there maker?..well there is FOUR still to die ..just keep in mind expect the unexpected...
 

Mystery Mom

Queen of the Mist
I have that dead skunk

ready to go....

a perfect over my head slam dunk and whammo right in the kisser!!!
Myst, er, Donna Lim
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Ohh you girls!!..now the beginning of the end....

After T.K. funeral things had got back to some sort of normalitiy but no way were these fallen going to be forgotten Orin is going to make sure of that..and this just made Orin more determined to get Mr Big and sort his ass out once and for all..the time was now.

Latrell had got word off the street from one of his snitch's that Mr Big had his henchman distributing drugs to young ones as young as 10 years old and they were going back to there schools and selling it there..where are the friging parents?..

Any way Donna and Mabel had just come back from an quick break and had to be picked up at the airport they didnt have to wait for an cab as they was an cop there to take them home regards of Orin ..Mabel said ' iam just going to confirm this ok?' she rang Orin and he said 'yes' so of course the girls got in the car it was an plain car not an cop car didnt want any of Mr Big men know that..

But of course this cop were no cop it was Jeff the girls knew some thing was up when he drove past the precinet and Donna tried to restrain Jeff when he had stopped at the lights but he pushed an button on the dash board and he quickly put on an mask it was an poison gas which killed Donna andMabel with in an couple of minutes..Jeff rang and told Orin where they were and when they had found them the girls looked like they had been dead for days grey in colour ..

Chief Hinges was really getting worried about all this killing his luck will run out one day lets hope its sooner then later ..Unknown to them Jeff had already received his next order of whom was next ?.and this time is was really going to hit hard for Orin ..

Chief Hinges was on his way home and as he was nearing his place an van came out of no where and rammed him from behind making him lose control of his car and he hit an brick wall he was dazed he could make out an figure walking towards him but before he could get to his gun the killer shot him point blank range in the chest he was dead before he even hit the steering wheel.

No one knew that Chief Hinges had even been killed for an few hours and when they were notified sh.it hit the fan and Orin had said' thats it if this prick wants war he has got it' he grabbed his piece and got in his car and went on the war path only as he does..Henry had heard that Mr Big was holding out at an sleazy hotel with an couple of tarts and would meet Orin there when he did arrive Orin said to Henry ' stay here this is my fight' and Henry just said ' go get em'
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Orin did have his gun but his best weapons were his feet and hands alot more lethal my oppinion..any way he didnt even bother knocking just kicked the door in thats his hello any way he grabbed Mr Big my the neck and started slapping the crap out of him .. after he had finished playing with him he just picked him up throw him out the window shame that it was 10 floors UP!!!..Orin had NO intentions taking this scum bag in alive any way..You could he the body slam into an car below as the alarm went off ...so much for Mr Big !!!(t.b.c)
 

Mystery Mom

Queen of the Mist
Cough, Cough!!!

choke, gag, splutter, argh, gasp, sigh, wheeze........


That's it, I'm dead, never had a chance. not one deadly blow and a rotten dead skunk in my bag just waiting......


Donna....
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Well how can that acting not get an oscar its in the post girl...sorry you were one of the victims but i knew you would like it..hey even the ones whom you think wont meet there maker will ...i will have the ending to this one up and here with in the weeks end i hope just love playing an buggar..
 

Sue

c/o naughty corner
Oh no, is it going to be Mavis? She'd better make sure she has clean underwear on tomorrow just in case.
 

Mystery Mom

Queen of the Mist
You want me to tell you what to do with the dead Skunk????

The perp deserves, at the very least, to have it put where the sun don't shine. Only I want it to go straight down his throat so that he can get every tasty bit of it sliding down his gullet.

Let's see, head first, with a string tied to its tail, tie the string around the perp's neck to keep the animal from sliding all the way through, feed the carcass in his open maw one inch at at time, and he needs to be fully conscious and totally aware all the time you are doing this. Of course by now the thing has been dead for several weeks waiting for this moment and it should be good and slimy. Be sure to clamp his ugly teeth tightly down on the critters - well you know the spot where all those oily juices are stored. I want this reprobate to know he is going to suffer and take a long while to die before he heads off to his eternal rest. I also want him to be so disgustingly smelly that the nether regions won't want to let him in and he will have to wander through purgatory for a long, long, long time!

Vengeance is MINE!!!

Donna Lim
 
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