Heres a song i wrote to Steven

Martina Taft

Steven Seagl Fan #1
i was thining again about Steven and i had nothing to do all day and i wrote this to him, i dont know if you like it lol but i kinda like it anyway here goes:

steven
you're eyes shine brighter than fire
and I hope your ponytale is for hire
when i look at the mirror i see only you
behind that pony tail theres something really true
steven
i hope in the future there can be only me and you
because frankly im sick of just staring at you
when you smile you touch my heart
like a bolt of lightning you strike me like a dart
steven
now i realize there is noone but me and you
everytime i see you on tv i cry too
i hope we can grow old together
and our passion will be as light as a feather
steven
seeing you in action makes me thrill
you kicks and punches pierces my heart like a drill
please tell me your love for me is true
for all eternity i will wait for you
steeeeeeeeeeeeeeeven
oh steeeeeeeven
oh
oh my love
oh
steven

When you grin your special smile
i stop everything and think for a while
how special you really would be
if you were here with me!!

well its kinda hard to get the feeling because you dont have the melody only the lyrics lol but i hope you enjoyed the song anyway :D

Okay i edited it so the moderatros wont get angry at me ROFLOL and i added a new verse what do you think of it?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
 

Pandora

Member
Loved the song except what's for hire LOLOLOL!!!!! Ooops - that's the old lady coming out in me again....
 

aikidoboynj

"Lookin fit Nelson"
Here is my song

Steven you used to be the man
You used to kick everyones can
Now since your so fat
You rely on a gat
You had a good career- now its a wreck
Its easy to see- you show up for the check
Why not wise up and retire
Your situation is so dire
Someone needs to shout!
Steven go work out!
Do like Sly and Arnie
and MAKE ONE last Good Movie!
 

Martina Taft

Steven Seagl Fan #1
Oh im sorry lol!! I just wanted to express my true feelings okay maybe itwasn't appropriate. hmm and also there was an intermezo that would really lift the song.. you cant really hear how its supposed to sound, which is a shame.

I edit the first post and added a replacement line and added a new verse, i hope this is better? what do you think of the changes???
 

KimonoSoul

Wacky on the Junk
I think it's really cool....is there a drum break? There is an old creepy song by Alice Cooper called "Steven."
 

Martina Taft

Steven Seagl Fan #1
a drum break!? wow thank you kimnosoul! you saved the song! i didnt even think about adding a drum break! no its vocal only for now i cant write notes lol :cool: but with a drum break that would make a clear difference for the better. maybe if we add it between every verse (or is that too much?) what kind of drumbreak did you have in mind? ROFLOL
 

KimonoSoul

Wacky on the Junk
Maybe more like a drum solo somewhere in the middle! lol!! Cowbell!!! That's what we need! MORE COWBELL!! Seriously though....I think your song is fine the way it is.....in my mind I heard kind of a classic rock-ish type tune.
 

Martina Taft

Steven Seagl Fan #1
Cowbell eh kimono? hmm i dont know maybe it would be a hit! I completely rewrote the song but I dont wanto post it because its very naughty. maybe theres oroom for some cowbell in ther.e. ill see what i can come up with,

Love, M. :cool:
 
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