This Is Another One Of My Storylines....

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
"The Aussie Connection"..Story by Heather .Kaye. Crisp..(Orangatuang)
My name is Sara Good iam an top notch detective and i dont take any crap..
My day started with an phone call it was my boss Max Todd, from the Wudinna police station they had found an young womans body in the alley way..

Of course when i got there the place was crawling with people every where i
hoped that they hadnt stuffed up the crime scene..
One of the other female detectives Jenny Smith was there when i got there and had already started bagging alot of the evidence..the victim would have only been of 21 at the most what an waste she had been stabbed once clean through the heart..killed her instantly she also had needle marks in her left arm...Jenny said "just another druggie" and i told her "dont beleive everything you see"..

The coroner was putting her into the body bag to be taken to the morgue and he gave me her belongings...Which included handbag,cell phone, watch and other personal items and i found something that the coroner missed it was her passport...

She was from America California to be exact..this is the part i hate doing passing on bad news to the next of kin..but some one has to do it right?..

The victims name was Maryanne Cole her parents are Dr Robert Cole and his wife Dr Anne Cole..they said that they had not heard from there daughter for 2 weeks which was really weird because she always rang them once an week
they reported this to the police in ADELAIDE but no action was taken..
They were upset of course but glad that some one had an heart and told them.."thats my job" i said..

The parents were sending over to Adelaide an guy who could help me in finding these *******s and bringing them to justice the way that i and this guy seemed fit..

I went back to my boss Max Todd and told him and he said that he will make sure that i got his full surport..

I had to be at the Adelaide airport by 6.am the next morning to pick up this guy his name is "Jack Knife".. no problem got there and i was looking for an old guy like fat and bald or something..i felt like an dill he aint that i tell ya..ohhh mama..we met and he was jet lagged so i took him back to my place were he could have an shower and food and sleep...while he was in the shower Detective Jenny Smith rang me and said that she was sending an e-mail through for me...it said "back off bitch" i dont take to kindly to threats of any kind.....i didnt tell Jack because it was on an need to know basic and he didnt need to know at this time..

Anyhow it was getting late and i was tired so i had an quick shower and hopped into bed..during the night i was sure that Jack checked on me an couple of times buit i dont have to be worried i always sleep with my little Deringer under my pillow...
He must have heard something outside because i heard the front door close
i looked out my window and saw him in the shadows of the building he saw or heard something alright scum were outside my home he just walked up to the car and pulled the driver out through the window and the other two thought that they could belt Jack up..my god he flattened them within an couple of minutes..and i heard him say to them "dont f****** come back"...i saw him walking back to the door and shot up into my room..i wasnt gonna ask..

Funny i didnt get any other threats after that i wonder why?...lol..
The ring leader s name is "fatman" and his hoods think that they can just take innocent lives and get away with it there are sooooo wrong they dont know this girl....

In the next two days we were waiting to spring on these scum bags we knew where they were because of an insider...whom is now in protective custody...
any way in we went guns and **** going everywhere i lost Jack he was near me and then gone i knew he could handle himself anyway ..hey he is Jack..

After all the creeps were either killed or taken in the wagons Jack was still missing in the warehouse..big brave me went in and i saw that the fatman had Jack in his sights i saw an glass jar and through it and hit fatman in the head and as he fell the gun went off and shot Jack!!!! ****.. but there is any happy ending he only got shot in the shoulder and i looked after him with T.L.C. for the next week ..but all good things come to an end i knew he had to go back to the states ...he said "dont worry kid, i will be back we have that connection ..that aussie connection"..The End.......

Cast ......
Jack Knife...Steven Seagal.
Sara Good...Heather Crisp.
Max Todd ..Max Phillips..
Jenny Smith..Nikita Yar..
Maryanne Cole..Anita Anderson..
Robert Cole..Geoff Hill..
Anne Cole...Ana Hill..
Fatman...Tom Collins..
 

Serena

Administrator
This was really good, Heather!! :) I'm impressed, girl! I really thought the ending was cool!
You nursed him back to health, but knew he had to return home. But still left that "Aussie Connection" door open. ;) :D Well done, Heather!! :)
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Good that i didnt waste my effort then huh?...iam ONLY thinking at the moment of an sequel this is only going to be an two part story...any more will be over kill..what i need are suggestions for an sequel?..."the aussie connection:NAME????..For an example under seige2: Dark Territory..so if any one has any ideas i will listen to them and the one i chose i shall put in the credits..is that ok?.....so bring it on....Heather.
 

suziwong

Administrator
Staff member
wowwwwwwwwwwww !!! Heather this is great !!!
Cong..

it sounds good !! Detective Heather !!!! welll !!

suzi
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thanks Suzi...i aint finished yet..there will be an sequel and i have already named it so to any one who was going to think of an name dont worry it came to me today..it is

"The Aussie Connection:-Jack's Back"...how does that sound when iam on an roll there is no stopping me iam already half way through writing it up on scrap paper..so keep your eye out here and you aint seen nothing yet...
 

KATHYPURDOM

Steven Seagal Fan
Heather I really enjoyed reading your story.:):D You did a great job on that and I am sure that the sequel will be just as interesting. I like the title of the next one.:)
 

Serena

Administrator
ORANGATUANG said:
Thanks Suzi...i aint finished yet..there will be an sequel and i have already named it so to any one who was going to think of an name dont worry it came to me today..it is

"The Aussie Connection:-Jack's Back"...how does that sound when iam on an roll there is no stopping me iam already half way through writing it up on scrap paper..so keep your eye out here and you aint seen nothing yet...
Good name, you clever girl! ;)
The one I was thinking of was "The Aussie Connection--Orangatuang Revisited". :D
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Sorry Leon maybe next time huh?...thats one i will use one day Serena thanks..glad you liked it Kathy..and tora i think that you can have an role in one i do ...now iam thinking ....
 

Hallarian

New Member
Good story, Heather!

When you make the movie, Serena and I could be Tecnical advisors as you nurse him back to health and Amos can carry stuff, Right? Please Please!!!!
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Ummm i dont think thats gonna happen Hallarian.. me making an movie that is i dont think its even good enough for any one else to pick up..but in saying that the "right" person or people might be able to do something with it who knows an girl can dream ..
In my sequel iam looking for any members (victims) who might want to be in it ..just drop me an line here and i will take it from there i wont say what part people will play that would just kill it so whos willing to be in it?..let me know ASAP...Heather..i have to srike while the irons hot or my ideas will fizz out...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I know the perfect role for amos?....and name in my sequel...which should he play and good guy or the bad guy?..Hmmmmmm he has always said he is an bad boy sooooooo
we will see i have the perfect role i hope he will join in...
 

KATHYPURDOM

Steven Seagal Fan
Heather put me in it please. I know that you will take the best part, but just don't let me die:):D There now I'm on the right thread.
 
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