This Is Another One Of My Storylines....

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Ok..Here goe's.."Eye Of The Dragon" story by Heather.K. Crisp..(Orangatuang)........

My name is Sally Wild..and this is my adventure..I was really excited about seeing my Japanese freind Tai ..We met over the internet in an chatroom..
My plane landed at the Tokyo Airport at 6pm Thursday night and Tai was there waiting for me ...as i came through the entrance to the lounge Tai was there it was so exciting
to see her in the flesh so to speak...

She gave me an big hug and away we went as i was bushed and needed sleep so Tai and i headed off to her home and when my head hit that pillow i was down for the count..
The next morning Tai wanted to take me to meet her uncle who owned an little noodle and rice resturant on the way there she was really unsettled because she kept looking in the rear view mirror as if she was being followed i said "what's up" and she said that
she was just being really careful with her driving as she looked at me with an forced smile..

We arrived at her uncles resturant and he was an very old man about 70 i reckon and really frail..Tai was the only family he had and he raised from the age of 6 when her parents were killed in an fire...her uncle had an surprise for her this morning he said to her "the time has come were i must hand this resturant to you" iam an old man and have not got long to go before i die"..this upset Tai her uncle was her life ...but she knew he was talking the truth and he told her that there was also an family heirlom
that he wanted her to have to had been handed down from one generation to another and it was time Tai knew about it...

Her uncle took us down to an cellar under the kitchen and hidden in an closet was an sword it was solid gold with an handle of an dragon and eyes of rubies ..it was know as the "eye of the dragon" known to be at least 500 years old...Tai and i were stunned and boy it was heavy...it took Tai and i to lift it but we are girls ya know..

Her uncle saw an light go off which signaled that some one was in the resturant so we all went back to the resturant...it was just some customers who wanted an serve of fried rice and sweet and sour pork...
Some one else came into the resturant too it was her uncle's partner an american by the name of Benjamin Tanner....he asked Tai who was i? and she said that iam her freind from Australia Sally Wild...
He introduced himself and then he went out into the kitchen as he was an cook...Tai said " he is an good cook, but i dont trust him" and i said "why's that"?.. because she has heard that he is involved in the "black sorrows" they are ninjas who have been trained by him so i have heard" she said...and whats sooooo good about him " i asked ..
she said "he is an master in martial arts"...ohhhhh ok" i said..

He must have heard us talking and came out and said "can i help you ladies" and i said
"not likely"...he was only there for an few hours and that was too long for me some thing about him made my blood crawl..
He said that he had to go and take care of some buisness i thought yes i bet you do..
he went out and got into his black hummer and off he went..
"Phewww" i said to Tai he gives me the chills and she agreed she confined in me that he has been trying to get into her pants but thank god her uncle has always come in at the right time...

The next day Tai and i had to go to the market for her uncle and get some greens and that...we were walking along the footpath and Benjamin drove past us in his hummer
and went around the corner and seemed to have vanished into thin air..we didnt worry about it to much and continued on our shopping trip..when we were done Tai had to go to the ladies so i just sat down at an table to wait for her..talk about an "ghost" when i looked back around Benjamin was sitting there..he had an couple of his henchman with him he said"so your an aussie eh"?...i replied "yes" he said i must say i have always wanted to try out an aussie" "and an whole lotta woman aussie at that"..
I replied "babe you couldnt handle me"...trying to piss him off by saying that just turned him on he some how thought it was ok to paw at me he grabbed me and kissed me real hard on the lips i thought they were going to "break"..i scratched his face that made him let go..he said before he went "this is not finished"..and off he went with his
hench man in tow...
Tai asked what had happened as she could see i was abit shock up i told her and she was most upset.i said "girl dont worry, i will get him"..

When we returned to the resturant we heard her uncle and Benjamin in an heated arguement ..Benjamin was just abit pissed off i guess he found out that her uncle no longer needed him and on top of that he was told that Tai will be the soul owner of the resturant when he dies...as Benjamin left he slammed the glass door so hard it shattered .....

That night Tai and i went to an movie not far from the resturant as we were leaving i had that creepy crawlly feeling come over me again..we got back to the resturant about 11pm and we were going to have an cuppa herbal tea and all of an sudden there was an crash in the resturant and it was the "black sorrows" they were standing
there like they were king **** and in walked "him"..had his face covered but i would know those "eyes" anywhere...Tai's uncle came down from his room and two of his henchman grabbed the por old man and dragged him to Benjamin her uncle knew hwo it was Benjamin asked "where was the sword" Tai and i were shocked he even knew about it..but being the creep he is he must have heard us talking ..her uncle said "go to hell" and Benjamin said "most likely" but you first" then he pulled out an dagger and cut Tai's uncle throat....Benjamin said"search this place leave nothing unturned" i went to go and see to Tai's uncle even though there was nothing that could be done and he stood in front of me and said" dont bother, just sit down " and he pushed me down
and said "i willl come back to you soon"...he had made this sooooo personal one he killed an innocent old man and two he "pushed" me...i signaled Tai and she and i slipped out the front door or should i say what was left of it and ran our butts off....

He realised that we had gone he got into his hummer and cruised the streets trying to find us...
But we had hid in an alley with homeless people all night..when dawn came we had to go back to the resturant upon our arrival the police were there and said to Tai" that her uncle had been killed, victim of an robbery" but we knew what really happened but
didnt want to confuse the police....they are sooooo easliy confused...

Tai had to make arrangements for her uncles funeral and all his affairs..we knew that Benjamin had the sword and we discussed it and know matter what it took it had to be returned to the rightful owner which was Tai....and she is going through enough right now and iam alot stronger then her..

Sure enough about an week later Tai got an phone call from Benjamin and he said" if you want this sword back..i want your freind"..he said "i will send my hummer with one of my men"...and he said " if you want it back no tricks ok"?..
Tai was feeling really bad that i had got involved in this mess i said"girl i will bring it back"...

Right on cue the hummer was outside of Tai's home and tooted twice, i went out and got into the hummer..they put an hood over my head so i couldnt see where i was going..they pulled into an driveway and pulled me out of the hummer and took me inside......

When they took off the blindfold i saw the sword on the table..he said"go ahead " he came down the stairs in an black robe.."Have an seat" he said as he came and sat by me..he told his geeks to leave........he said "you know i never had any intentions really to give that sword back dont you"?...as he was getting closer to me and getting handsy..and i said " hell i knew that and do you really think that i would let you have your waywith me"?..."wrong" then i hit him on the head with an bottle and he was out i grabbed the sword and saw that there was an window open i hung the sword over my shoulder and slid down the pipe "owwww" heat burn..that was fun ..not..

I ran out onto the street and hailed an taxi and i was outta there...

I got back to the resturant where Tai and i arranged to meet and i knew he would come back there...he came screaming down the street an million miles and hour and jumped out of his car before it had stopped..idiot!!!!..
He came to the door and said"no f****ing door is going to stop me" and kicked it in..
he went straight for Tai and i said"come on big boy come get me" he soon changed his mind to me and said"bitch you are gonna pay"...i ran as hard as i could and he was gaining on me he lunged at me and we crashed to the road and he was on top "now what are you going to do" and i said "this" and i kicked him in the "goolies".....yeah that would be right here come the cops always late...any way Tai got the sword back..
Benjamin and his so called "black sorrows" were sent to jail but for only 3 years ..dont figure huh?...soooo at least i have got him outta my hair for at least for the time being
i stiil have to think whats next?.......

Cast of Characters
Steven Seagal .........Benjamin Tanner...
Heather Crisp........ Sally Wild...
Anita Anderson..........Tai..
Damien Smith...........Uncle
Thats all folks ...
 

Serena

Administrator
Heather, that was pretty darned cool! :cool: :D Well worth waiting for! ;) I liked the simple cast--not a lot of characters to clog the story. I laughed out loud at a few things--like the police getting easily confused, and you kicking him in the "goolies". :D Did you have some movie or book in mind when you did this, or did the ideas just come to you? Pretty clever there, girl! I can tell you did a lot of thinking on this one. You sure are a "whole lotta woman aussie". ;) :D And I really liked how you didn't kill him off at the end, but left it open.....to be continued? ;)

Good job, Heather--very well done and quite enjoyable! :)
Now start thinking of your next one! :D These are fun!
 

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Isa Marie

Banned
Hey Heather....

What can I say about your amazing stories????? :D

If Hollywood knows about this.....wowwwwwwwww we really will lose you, dear, because you will go away, never mor will recognize us as your friends anymore :D, you will be famous..will get an Oscar, will be close to Steven...and will forget us forever !!:( Ohhhhhh noooooooooooo!!! :(

And the Oscar goes to.....

HEATHER !!!!!!!!
:eek: :D:D:D:D
 

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Amos Stevens

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Great job Heather! Even if Seagal was the bad guy you let him live & left it open for an easy sequel! Good job & not too many characters to get confusing either
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I couldnt knock him off..that would be silly then there would be no point in writing anymore...me get an OSCAR..lol..good one..iam glad that my hard work pays off..iam not doing anymore until the new year my poor brain needs an rest..but iam still thinking of an sequel to this one..but not till next year...it makes me feel sooooo goood
and steven iam waiting for your comment?...eh Serena ...nah that aint going to happen isamarie none of his people would contact me about me storylines things like that just dont happen to me...soooo girl you have no fear i would never forget anyone here ..and as for famous not me..iam just an FAN with an dam good imagination ...thanks Serena, isamarie, and amos...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Whoopssss sorry missed that bit Serena no i didnt get any ideas from any books or movies girl...all this story is original just straight from me...no help of any kind....
 

Isa Marie

Banned
ORANGATUANG said:
I couldnt knock him off..that would be silly then there would be no point in writing anymore...me get an OSCAR..lol..good one..iam glad that my hard work pays off..iam not doing anymore until the new year my poor brain needs an rest..but iam still thinking of an sequel to this one..but not till next year...it makes me feel sooooo goood
and steven iam waiting for your comment?...eh Serena ...nah that aint going to happen isamarie none of his people would contact me about me storylines things like that just dont happen to me...soooo girl you have no fear i would never forget anyone here ..and as for famous not me..iam just an FAN with an dam good imagination ...thanks Serena, isamarie, and amos...

He says:

Ohhh Yes...I am really proud being part of that story written down by Heather !! She is great and the movie was really a success !! :D
 

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ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Geez....that would be the best..it aint gonna get that far isamarie but just to think that he thinks that my stories are good is enough for me...i dont expect an "personal"
message from him saying that..that doesnt happen to me either..thanks girl for that little pic..iam off to have an hot lemon and honey drink i have had an sore throat coming on for an couple of days but i stick by my word...when i say i will do something i do or will...or maybe "Dr.love" can come and give me some treatment...
 

Isa Marie

Banned
Yes, Heather..Dr. Love just trying to find some treatment to you ! :)

Look below. ahahahah:D
 

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tora

Funmaker
Great great,Heather,you got it going,didn't ya,whole lotta aussie woman :D
That's a good story and Seagal looks like a real ******* here :D
 

Serena

Administrator
ORANGATUANG said:
.....iam off to have an hot lemon and honey drink i have had an sore throat coming on for an couple of days but i stick by my word...when i say i will do something i do or will...or maybe "Dr.love" can come and give me some treatment...
Hey, Heather. You can't be getting sick! You have a cool Christmas party coming up! :cool: :D
And as I recall, it sounded like it was going to be a LOT of fun! ;)
Hope you feel better quick, Heather! :)

Here's a little Christmas cheer to help you along. :)
 

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Robert P. Olsson

BigBellyFilm
WOW!!!

Heather, your scripts are truly great, and fun to read. Would be cool to see the real thing, I mean, all your scripts could work as features.
Maybe you are the one who can bring back Steven to the theathers.

/Robert P. Olsson
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
My sore throat has been coming on for an few days Serena and being busy doing other things i have neglected it..now iam suffering my own silly fault..i love the pussies thanks..ummmm isamarie if he is looking for an elixer to my heart he doesnt have to his already got that...as for my throat i will not it on the head..hey tora your story "blade of honour" was great girl it was alot better then mine in an lot of ways..
Thanks Robert for that and me bring him back to the threaters nah ..thats one thing he has to decide for himself and what ever it is we will just be happy wont we?...ok.
 

tora

Funmaker
Heather,you better be well there :)
And truly,your stories are great in their own way.You can't write like me and I can't write like you.But we can write like no one else :D
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thats it girl..we are our own us..ohhhh its scary just thinking if i had an "twin" yikes i dont think this forum could handle it..DOUBLE TROUBLE...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I have been thinking and thats dangerous but iam going to have an longer break then i said from writing any more stories..let some one else entertain you like tora's story is excellent and should be taken futher (like tv or bigger) mine are just little tit bits and nothing to even consider in that way...tora has an real gift and all the best girl..to those who have read mine thanks for all the comments and that..Heather.
 

bbryant

Banned
You both are very talented, my talent, none!!!!!!!!
And we enjoy reading both of you!!
It is like being in a book store I go thru all the different section because I like a little of alot!!!!
 

tora

Funmaker
Heather,just don't give up on it.The further you go,the better you get.We can make Seagal happy one day :D
 
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