'Black Ice'

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Here are the list of people in this story...

Agent Blake Swayne ..Steven Seagal
Agent Millie Lut'e ... Rainbowcolours
Charley ... Jules
Lucille ... Kimonosoul
Dark Rose ... Orangatuang
Benji Pil ... Lonewolf
and last but not least (T.D) the big kahuna of the F.B.I
Caitlin Drew..

I will give abit more on the storyline in an few days when iam alot better..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Here is my storyline ..'Black Ice'...

You think that heroine cocaine etc are addictive maybe so but compared to ' Black Ice' there nothing..and this is how the F.B.I. had there job cut out for them when they came up against an female that not even they could stop her name is 'Dark Rose' ..you mess with her 'Black Ice' you lose and if you mess with her you lose so thats why the F.B.I. agent in he would have to be good because 'Dark Rose' had some thorns up her sleeves just itching to kick some F.B.I. butts ...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I have nearly finished writing the story hopefully i will put it here in an couple of weeks...i just like teasing just an teeny tiny bit...plus my school commitments come first..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Here goes nothing..'Black Ice' written by Heather.k.Crisp..
( alias ORANGATUANG)..


'It was an stormy night and DARK ROSE was working late at her lab she had been working hard over the past few weeks to perfect her recipe for 'ICE' but not just any form this one was going to make the current 'ICE' look obsolite she was naturing it like it was her child only making sure all the ingredients were the best ..her partners in crime Charley and Lucille were running late again as there day time jobs they were strippers ..Lucille(alias Voilet) and Charley (alias Lotus) the money was fair and as soon as 'DARK ROSE' had her 'BLACK ICE' perfected there wont be any need for them to work again..

The devious plans 'DARK ROSE' had up her sleeve and she just had to find some 'suckers' whom would try her drug as
an expermient and she didnt have to look far as for there was always druggies hanging out side around the lab area its like they had an 'sick sense' and they were not fussy they just wanted there next fix no matter what the cost ..
'DARK ROSE' was not that stupid the druggies that she chose had to sign an paper that if anything did go wrong she wouldnt have any families or friends breathing down her neck after two guys had signed then they could proceed with the testing..

Charley and Lucille had to strap the guys in for there safety because god knowa what the re-action was going to be ..once strapped in 'DARK ROSE' proceeded with the injecting of the drug nothing seemes to be happening just an flinch of the wrists and twitching then all of an sudden there skin seem to bubble and become itchy even thought they were strapped in they could still scratch and when they saw that there blood was 'black' thats when they freaked out Charley said 'look at the heart machine' both the guys hearts gave out within an couple of minutes of scratching them selves...

My,my wasnt 'DARK ROSE' impressed she had not expected this she thought they might get an huge head ache at the most but this is an bonus now her evil plan can really get into action ..
She had an real big 'beef' with the FBI as an few years earlier they killed her father in an botched incident they said he was killed by accident but she finds that hard to beleive after all they always cover up things all the time but not this time she wants the FBI agent whom was behind it pay big time and when 'DARK ROSE' does some thing its not by accident...

'DARK ROSE' got Charley and Lucille to dispose of the dead druggies and not in the alley or dumpster she had to think ahead of these smart ass FBI sods there was an ol un-used factory that was going to be demolished in an couple of days so she got her partners in crime to go dump them there ...and to wait for her phone call in the morning...

'DARK ROSE' was woken by knocking on her front door she went to look through her peep hole in the door and saw it was the FBI...so she quickly put on some clothes and she answered the door..
Agent Lut'e asked 'can we have an chat' and 'DARK ROSE' said'only if its outside' 'why' asked Lut'e and 'DARK ROSE' said 'have you got an warrant of any kind' 'no' said Lut'e 'then its outside or nothing' 'DARK ROSE' replied..
The other agent asked 'do you have an dog' 'no' replied'DARK ROSE' and when the agent put his head over the fence an german shepherd lunged at him with teeth barring after the shock he said 'i thought you said you didnt have an dog' 'i dont iam just looking after it for an freind' said 'DARK ROSE'..he said 'i surpose you think your funny' 'DARK ROSE' replied ' think mate i know iam funny' or maybe the dog saw your face and could smell PORK'and just what do you mean by that' he asked 'if you dont know then you ard as dumb as you look ' DARK ROSE replied..

'DARK ROSE' asked what was his name and he told her 'Blake Swayne' 'well Blake Swayne get your ass off my property now and your partner too or i will let the dog chew on some FBI ass...even if its abit chewy...(t.b.c.)..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
As the feds drove away 'DARK ROSE' got an phone call from Charley 'the factory is still standing' 'DARK ROSE' replied 'you hid them well didnt you?' 'yes' said Charley 'well then there's nothing to worry about then' 'DARK ROSE' said and hung up..
'DARK ROSE' had to go out for an while and she wanted to take her baby for an run what is her baby you may ask?..its her Red Corvette and her number plate reads BITCH-1 ..
before she left she nearly forgot to grab her specially made jacket which had an little zip pocket in her sleeve to hid her weapon ..which she never left her place with out ..she had an few enemies ...as she pulled away from her house she noticed that an taxi was following her being the cool chick she is she just went with the flow her turn off was coming up and that would be the real test sure enough when she turned off so did the taxi anyway she made an detour to the shopping market and the taxi went and parked up an few cars from her she got out and proceeded to go into the shopping centre and making an pitstop at the ladies she went into one of the cubicals to get her gun ready for some action if needed that one thing you dont provoke this girl even for an bluff ...as 'DARK ROSE' left the ladies she couldnt beleive her eyes it was that male FBI agent he was speaking to another agent they do stick out like dog balls just like church people always coming knocking on her door..one day she came to the door in the nude that soon stopped them ...any way she went into the super market and to her surprise she could still get her mobile phone to work and she rang Lucille whom was just leaving to work and she said 'can you come pick me up' Lucille could tell in 'DARK ROSE' voice she was annoyed 'yes ' Lucille said 'i will be there in about 20 minutes ' 'DARK ROSE' asked the manager of the supermarket 'can i please use your staff entrance as iam being followed' 'no worries' he said he showed her where it was and she thanked him...

'DARK ROSE' rang Lucille and gave her directions on where her location was and she didnt have to wait long Lucille said 'what about your car?' 'Dont worry i will be back later to fetch it' 'DARK ROSE ' said 'but first i want to make sure its ok i dont want any fed germs on her' and when they drove past 'DARK ROSE' bent down just as well she did because there were agents still sniffing around like the hound dogs they are ..Lucille said 'the cars ok' ....(t.b.c.)
 

KimonoSoul

Wacky on the Junk
Ooooo Heather! I just found this! I'm flattered that you would write me into your story! That really cool, girl!!!

Do you want to hear something funny? My step-dad calls me Lucy!!!
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
KimonoSoul;178107 said:
Ooooo Heather! I just found this! I'm flattered that you would write me into your story! That really cool, girl!!!

Do you want to hear something funny? My step-dad calls me Lucy!!!

Well thats freaky eh girl?..sorry i didnt get back before now my lovely computer decided differently..all is well now ..but iam just abit busy the next couple of days but will continue my story soon..plus iam not really in the mood girl on top of every thing else that time of the month i can say that here because 'guys' are to scared to come to this part of the site..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Crap just lost what i just wrote ...i dont write it down on paper i write it as i go iam far too tired to bother now let my grey matter have an break and i will get back sooner or later...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I tried to post abit more to my story and it was denied next time i do write some more if it gets denied again i will and can delete my whole story..simple as that..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
After Lucille convinced 'DARK ROSE' that the car was ok she sat back up that car meant alot to her it was her fathers and she didnt want the pigs doing anything with it..she had made up her mind to get away for an few days and she was going to be taking Lucille and Charley with her but first she wanted to make sure that the lab was shut up tight and locked down like fort knox...and she always had the formula for 'BLACK ICE' on her she never truste any one even the nearest and dearest...
'DARK ROSE' had an cabin up in the mountains away from the rat race and that well hidden they couldnt find it the feds she meant..it was still daylight when they got to the cabin but they were bushed all all crashed just about straight away once they had everything un packed...
The next morning there were all chirpy and could take on the world all except 'DARK ROSE' she had been kept awake all night nearly by her friging phone going off even on silent it as still buzzing it was Lut'e she wanted to see 'DARK ROSE' in two days for more questions...
So she kept her date with Lut'e as she walked in she could see that Lut'e partner Swayne was sitting in her office as she walked up to the counter to let Lut'e know she was here and didnt like being kept waiting as Swayne walked out of her office it looked like he had an stick up his butt the way he was walking and the glare 'DARK ROSE' gave him could send shivers up an dead man..
Lut'e asked her to come in and when she went into the office the head of the F.B.I. was there her name was Caitlin Drew and she wanted in on the questions..when all was done 'DARK ROSE' couldnt wait to get out of there as she left Lut'e asked Swayne 'is the device in place' he said 'yes' like she was born yesterday 'DARK ROSE' thought that they were up to some dirty tricks but there nothing to what she has planned if they want to play games then let them begin...(t.b.c.)..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
On her way home 'DARK ROSE' put an call in to an male friend of hers by the name of Benji Pil he was an wiz bang clever bloke when it came to gadgets she said to him 'met me at my home in an hour' 'what no hi how are you' Benji said?..she replied 'well how are you' 'fine ' he said 'now whats up'?...she said 'i need you to disarm an device on my car' 'no wories i will just grab my bag of tricks ' as 'DARK ROSE' pulled into her drive way she saw an car across the way and just continued to go into her drive as she got out the car the person sitting in the car across the street got out and proceeded to walk to her door it was the head of the F.B.I. Caitlin Drew 'what are you doing here' 'DARK ROSE' said Caitlin replied' i just what to speak to you alone with no vultures hovering' 'Well talk iam not stopping you''DARK ROSE' said ' I hear that Swayne has made it his job to take you down no matter what he is very set in his ways' 'is that right' 'DARK ROSE' said 'iam surposed to be scared i have seen scarier heads on an cabbage' ....they sat and seemed to talk for ages but it wasnt because there was an knock on the door and it was Benji 'iam sorry but you will have to leave ' she said to Caitlin 'can i have an drink of water ' Caitlin asked 'sure' said 'DARK ROSE' she knew that Caitlin would have not come alone and didnt want to go off at the mouth at waht they were talking about so she made an deadly cocktail she gave Caitlin some 'BLACK ICE' and Caitlin said' i better go thanks for the drink' 'DARK ROSE' thought to herself yes bitch it will be your last...
As Caitlin was waking back to the car she seemed to sway but got to her car she started up her car and drove off while she was driving her heart started to race and she started to drive all over the place just missing other cars and people then she looked in her mirror and saw her face was bubbling and oozing black blood from there she collasped dead at the wheel heading into traffic colliding with other cars at the end of the carnage it looked like world war three no one else was killed luckliy of course it hit the news headlines that the Head of the F.B.I. was dead and 'DARK ROSE' saw at the press conference she saw Swayne and Lut'e were there talking through there butts as pigs always do any way this is just the beginning...(T.B.C.)
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Aint it an buggar when one looses there writing mojo wonder if Steven ever has that problem..wgen i do come back to write i will be finishing this story off i have already had ideas for my next one but thats way down the line though this time iam writing it on paper so if this site is having an 'hissy fit' i wont lose anything..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Nearly done hopefully by the weekend i will have the finishing touches on this one..nearly lost an couple of my pages of writing last night had to go answer the phone and when my back was turned my cat Xena decided to pinch them jumped up on my table grabbed and nicked them 'bloody critic' do you think i had fun chasing her getting them back the little buggar..and the smirk on her chops when i got them from her cheeky girl...so to those whom read my crazy stories keep checking..thanks for your time..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
The phone rang and it was Benji he said 'the jobs done' ..'DARK ROSE' said 'thanks i will give you an phone call later when iam not so busy'..When she did ring back she asked him'would you like to come around for tea?' he replied 'yes' of course 'DARK ROSE' wasnt take the chance on Benji not spilling his guts to the feds so she had to take care of him tonight..she asked Charley and Lucille to tea as well so they could help her with the disposal of Benji later..after tea he complained of feeling abit crook and he asked 'where is the bathroom' Charley showed him where it was and shortly after she came back there was an crash in the bathroom when she went back he was dead and told 'DARK ROSE' so they could go get the plastic to roll his body up in an of course they used gloves because of all the blood and gunk ..Lucille went and got the wheelbarrow to put his body in to wheel to the boot of his car they lifted his body into the boot then once they had his body in his car 'DARK ROSE' said 'i will go dump his body at the dip there is an huge hole there no way will he be found for an while she phoned Charley to met her at Benji's place under the cloke of darkness so no one got to suspicious..all went well of course and made sure they didnt leave anything to incriminate them selves and all went back to 'DARK ROSE'S' place to crash ..


The next day 'DARK ROSE' had to take Charley and Lucille to work and she thought she would kill two birds with one stone by just driving by Benji's place and everything was alright no suspicious happenings...as they were driving along an cop car appeared out of no where and pulled them up of course they all thought there goose was cooked and when the cop asked for 'DARK ROSE' licence she freaked out because she has never had one and she floored it spraying the cop with stones and sh.it off the road ...of course the cop wasnt impressed and got in his little cop car to give chase ..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Now of course the little cop didnt like that getting an gob full of road crap 'DARK ROSE ' said 'hang onto your knickers girls we are going to be in for an ride'...she had to laugh when she saw the little cop trying to keep up with her she had an little suped up car he had called for back up and up ahead they had laid spikes down of course she wasnt that stupid but as for the cop behind her well he must have had rocks in his head ...she swerved but he wasnt so lucky when he hit them he lost control and rolled and slid along on the roof of the car...the little twerp was ok he got out of his car with help from other cops but he soon wont forget that wild ride...didnt they know the have to be up early to catch 'DARK ROSE'...(t.b.c)..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Any way her and the girls got back to her place with out any other hassles and she put her she-beast in the shed ..when they got inside no sooner did that happen then an unmarked pig car pulled up how did they know it was an pig car because it stuck out like dogs balls..plus they must be really stupid not to know how clever she is..just to act the part Charley and Lucille sat down and put the tv on and 'DARK ROSE' hit the shower when they got to the door she was out of the shower and ready for the pains in the ass ..she was that pissed off amd sick and tired of these losers coming down on her she told them to take there scwarny asses and hit the road because she isnt going to even going to give them the time of day now that pissed Swayne off and just when he was going that 'i bet you are slippery when wet' then all of an sudden he felt an whack in the mouth and she said 'wet enough' as blood was running down his mouth ..'now get the f*** out of my house, i hate it smelling like bacon'..(which is short for pig) ..As they drove off Lut'e said ' you just love putting your foot in it dont you?' you just cant help your self man has always got to have the last word well i guess she showed you'and Lut'e laughed and thought to herself he might shut up for awhile..any way with those dicks on there way 'DARK ROSE' wanted to put her plans into action and go for the one that was behind her dads demise..(t.b.c)..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
'DARK ROSE' and the girls had an busy time ahead of them they had to get some of the 'black ice' into the fed building as it was pay back time ..and to do that she might have to stoop to there level and play possum with with..she got Lucille to drop her out side the building and for Lucille to go get her duds on to do her bit..'DARK ROSE' walked in and could see that Swayne was sitting on his ass like they work that hard any way with his nose in the trough she knocked on his door and he spilt his drink in his lap she said 'now whos wet'?...any way he asked 'what are you doing here?' and she said 'believe it or not to apoligise' Swayne said 'is that right ' and she said 'look if you dont want to accept it thats ok just proves you lot are the ones with the problem'..

She could feel her temper getting hot but just as she was going to say something else Lut'e walked in and said 'what are you doing here?' and Swayne said 'she is here to apoligise' and Lut'e said 'and you believe her' with that 'DARK ROSE' picked up her bag and walked out as she did she said 'you can all go and OINK yourselves...As she was leaving Lut'e insisted that she make sure she does leave the building by getting Swayne to escort her out 'DARK ROSE' said' get your paws off me' and with that she slapped him in the kisser hard!!!!..it mustr have hurt as he let her go..
he said an few choice words but she has heard worse as she left the buiding she rang Lucille to do her bit she walked in the building with tow water bottles and they had just an little extra added to it she walked straight past Swayne and Lut'e put one bottle in his office and one is hers and was in and out in minutes..'DARK ROSE' is an truly bad bitch she didnt care whom she knocked in the fed building if an few civilians were taken out well thats life...

Soon people started dropping like flies left right and centre but do you think those two would die no way!! they must have an charmed life soon there was mayhem in the streets as word got out about what was happening in the buiding the cops closed off the area and no one was aloud in the building or out for that matter which was in 'DARK ROSE' favour at least they could get out of the city with out any questions being asked...again..

'DARK ROSE' and her partners in crime got back to the lab just to check things out and she was to find out she had an traitor in her camp 'Lucille'...while Charley and her were making sure all was ok 'DARK ROSE' heard Lucille talking to Swayne looks like all was an heap of lies she must have got bushwhacked by Swayne and offered an deal if she played along with them and as for those people being dead was all an roost..in other words bull sh.it!! now she knew that she had to take Lucille out and make sure it was done right..

They all slept at the lab that night and the next morning 'DARK ROSE' fixed Lucille and Charley and pancake breakfast but making an extra special batch for Lucille she scoffed her pancakes down and said 'i have to go thanks for the great pancakes' and 'DARK ROSE' thought to her self yes my dear they will be your last..(t.b.c.)
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
To those whom enjoy my little stories the end is near on this one ..over the weekend the finishing touches will be done ..i think its not my best story but it must be ok if people are generally interested..an big thanks again..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
As Lucille drove off she rang Swayne and said 'iam on the way to see you' he said 'ok' being an man off not much to say..(whom are we kidding)..as she was nearing the fed building she just happened to look in the rear view mirror and saw that her face was bubbling up and oozing goo all over the place just thought she felt something warm ..she freaked out and lost control of her car and she hit several other cars before coming to an halt slamming into an parked truck..there were people running around helping people in there cars and by the time they got to Lucille she had died..

Lut'e and Swayne had both heard the comotion and of course had to see what was up not knowing that Lucille was the cause of all this chaos..

Lut'e was the first to see Lucille dead she was an mess alright and Swayne well no one stopped him he had to see for him self of course he was pissed but you get that ..
He got into his car and Lut'e asked 'were are you going?' 'were do you f****** think' he said ..Lut'e said 'she will be waiting you know that dont you?' 'good' he said as he drove off..
He drove like an mad man going through red lights nearly causing several accidents himself..(just typical and they say woman are bad drivers well really)..

'DARK ROSE' said Charley 'i want you to go this is between him and i its going to end today and there is only going to be one left standing' DARK ROSE' must have known something because she told Charley to take the beast..and as she left 'DARK ROSE' slipped some thing into Charleys jeans pocket..what was it?..

'DARK ROSE' saw Swayne drive up onto the lawn an d he was at the door knocking on it like the devil was on his back..he kicked it in but he wasnt going to get any thing out of 'DARK ROSE' except 'you know it doesnt taste that bad' and with that she collapsed on the floor and died she had taken double the dose of the 'black ice' and she didnt have to go through all that bubbling and oozing crap either ...so all that rush to get there was in vain as he would never know what was really behind her eveil ways there had to be more then just her fathers death...

Any way in the weeks to follow Charely turned on 'DARK ROSE' because she thought that she had given her the recipe for 'black ice' but didnt she have an shock coming it was just an recipe for pancakes sucked in girl...like 'DARK ROSE' said TRUST NO ONE!!! she had got rid off the 'black ice ' recipe by burning it to an crisp so you see 'black ice' died with 'DARK ROSE'....the end.....
 
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