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Haiku!

Jalu

Steve's Destiny
Lotus,

I think Hallarian is right, however you can always claim "poetic license" and make it a haikutus or a Lotus haiku. Think about it.

Lotussan said:
Whatever, it's my haiku, so who cares? I always said it was bad, never said anything but....But it's mine, and my right, I think...If you don't like it, then don't read, ok?
 

Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Sunlight in your eyes
My love, my most precious one
This rose blooms for you
© Oct 2004, by: TLW, all rights reserved

Darling, my beloved
In your eyes I see the sun
This flower blooming
© Oct 2004, by: TLW, all rights reserved
 

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