unleashed story

[rastafari]

this is my story for unleashed:

1)steven seagal is sitting at home in his london apartment when he gets a call from an old pal of his who tells him to met him in one hour

2)seagal turns up for the meeting(next to the river themes)to tell talk to his friend and he tells him that there is a man stealing money from bank accounts accross europe and tells seagal to bring him in unhurt

3)seagal at his packs some stuff(gun,knifes just in case)

4)seagal lands at zurich airport(this scene of out the obliwitz school of directing) and goes to his motel are whatever they are in switzerland

5)next morning seagal goes to a contact of his in the city and asks about the guy he is after and he is told he about leave the country and go into france so seagal heads off to to the swiss/french border where along the way he stops of at a swiss bar and gets involved(for no real reason other than to put a fight scene in)in a fight with some locals

6)unscathed he arrives at the border and waits for his man but the criminal spots seagal and waiting for him and turns the car around but seagal has already seen him and chases the guy through the swiss countryside(5 minute car chase)

7)eventully seagal gets his man after a short fight and puts him in the car and is ready to take him back to england


from here i am stuck on what to do next but what do people think of that for a films so far(thats about the first 25 min but i have got the one fight scene in)
anyone else fthink of a way to continue the story

 

[Lotussan]

ummm, maybe someone breaks into his place and tries to kill him?
That would surely be a good reason for some more fighting...
And after he beats the pulp out of this person
(all in self defense, right?)
he can interrogate them, and then he can perform some Seagal
magic kinda like Jack Cole did...
He knew exactly how to get info out of them, eh?
Just a thought...

 

[chief_ryback]

as they're going along in the car, some goons run seagal's car off the road and then he beats the living daylights out of them with an armco barrier. the crook legs it. seagal then finds out where the goons came from by going through their wallets etc. goes to the place, brains everyone but the crooks not there. then in some bizarre twist he finds himself in a power plant/submarine/navy ship/passenger train. the film ends and is restarted with the title under siege 3. everyone cheers.

 

[rastafari]

next half of movie

8)seagal arrives back in dover harbour and takes his eye of the criminal for a few seconds and the guy escapes and seagal goes after him but the criminal tells the police that seagal is guy they want and the police arrest seagal but not before seagal puts 4 of them down(nice quick fight scene)

9)seagal is released on bail by a female friend from the past and he tells her he is doing one last job before he retires and she agrees to help him find the guy

10)seagal gets a tip off from someone that he will be at a hotel at 8.00pm and seagal and friend head off to cut him off before he leaves again but seagal finds things tough as the criminal has some friends waiting there for seagal but sadly not enough as seagal takes care off them quickly enough(good fight scene) and seagal escapes unhurt

11)seagal hears that the guy is headed of to france and seagal drives down to dover to wait for him and stays overnight in a hotel(and gets passionate with his naked lady friend)

12)following day seagal waits and sees the guy he is after and decides to let him go into france as seagal as some contacts in france that he is gonna call and help him

13)scene moves to paris with seagal meeting with 2 old pals from seagals days in cia and they decide to help seagal bring the guy in

14)seagal finds out were the guy is in paris and then lady and ex cia go of to find him put he escapes out of warehouse window which he as been hiding in and when the cia agents catch up with him they find out that the criminal is better with his hands than they thought and he kills them and the lady pulls a gun on him but the criminal is to fast and shoots her

15)seagal heres what has happended on the news and decides its time for vengence abut before seagal can act on it as he leaves his hotel room he is hit over the head and knocked out

16)seagal wakes up in the old warehouse and the criminal tells seagal its over for him and that he should never have come after him and he leaves seagal hanging by a rope with 4 guys outside the room to makesure he dies painfully

17)seagal is carrying knife and cuts himself free the guys from outside come in the see if seagal has dies but seagal is gone but before one of them contacts the criminal seagal finishes them off violently

18)with the criminal set to leave europe finally and head off to south america seagal arrives at the airport and suprises the criminal who thought he was

19)seagal and the criminal go head to head in the final knife showdown outside the airport with seagal coming out on top in another violent fight scene

20)seagal arrives back in london and hands in the criminal(although in a body bag)

21)seagal heads off back to the usa for his retirment


okay so its not as good as tj writing and the spellings dodgy but i wrote it in a rush....still think its better than out for a kill and with ringo lam doing it i think this would be good......anyone here think of any bits that would not work???