Steven Seagal Movie I made up...

[Prisoner 1137]

I was on another board, People knew how much I liked him because I would always sport him in my sig. Well, My friend as me a question about if I had to make a movie what would it be about. Well, I decided to make one up.

Title of the movie would be called:

Race For Time

The two main stars would be..

Steven Seagal and John Travolta

Steven Seagal would be in any kind of shape, but I would have him in like The Glimmer Man Shape.

John Travolta would have the looks of when he was in Swordfish.

I'll just give you the main part of the movie, Alright here it goes.

Mitch McHogan *Steven Seagal* an ex-CIA Agent who retires, After an Mexican Gang called Los Locos was hired by Simon Drake *John Travolta* to capture his daughter. Simon was Mitch's close friend in the CIA, Simon had framed Mitch for the murder of his wife. Finger prints and his .45 handgun was left behind at the murder scene, Mitch had came back to find Police at his house. Miami Police took Mitch to answer some questions, Simon was well known down in Miami for dealing drugs and stealing cars. Simon knew Mitch didn't do it, but he knew a judge and paid him off some money to make Mitch go into jail. When they put Mitch on trail, Judge Maxwell told him that he was Guilty and was going to prison for life. When time went by, Mitch got a letter from someone telling him that his daughter was kidnapped and you have 48 hrs to try to get her back. Mitch had to find a way out quickly.​

That is what I have right now, but I thought of some quotes for Steven and John.

Mitch McHogan:"Simon says Your Life is over" *Mitch says this after he killed Simon in the final fight*

Simon Drake:"Com'on Mitch, Time is running out."

Mitch McHogan:"It doesn't matter if you lock me up, You have my daughter and she belongs to me." *This is were Mitch finally meets up with Simon and his daughter Kelly, After breaking out of prison.*

I'll probably add more later, but this is just a start.

 

[Serena]

Well done, Prisoner! You really should add more. Even in chapters or installments, which I kind of like, anyway. I definitely like the premise of the movie. Sure, it's kind of along the same lines as some of his other movies--ex-CIA agent, needs to rescue family member--but it's what works for him!

And I do like John Travolta--he does play a great villian! Broken Arrow and Face Off spring to mind--not to mention Pulp Fiction.

And great quote: "Simon says Your Life is over."

We've had a couple others write little stories like this, Heather and Tora I think of off-hand. We always enjoy them. It doesn't matter how good you think they are--or aren't. It's just an entertaining diversion.

I hope you keep going with it.

 

[Amos Stevens]

Thanks Prisoner!! Think Seagal might find what good stories he could get from his fans alone..we have a couple more members here that contribute stories-but we haven't got one for some time Tora & Heather?????

 

[seagalfan128]

damn, that's not bad at all. that's pretty good, I like it. The gang can use another name besides Los Locos though lol. Anyways, you should seriously continue the story, you should put it in screenplay format and maybe even add a camera track then combine. So you have the story, dialogue and tell what the camera is seeing...It'd be cool.

 

[suziwong]

Thanx Prisoner.. really very nice..


suzi

 

[Prisoner 1137]

Thanks, I'll add more. I only said Los Locos cause I couldn't think of another name. I'll figure more stuff out, Thanks alot for looking.

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Now i could live with that John Travolta and Steven Seagal sounds good to me..its good to see some more stories iam not in the mood for writing ..Hey you know perfection takes time Amos ..

 

[KATHYPURDOM]

Prisoner I like this story so far. So far it sounds like an interesting movie. Steven Seagal and John Travolta in a movie together sounds great

 

[KATHYPURDOM]

Now i could live with that John Travolta and Steven Seagal sounds good to me..its good to see some more stories iam not in the mood for writing ..Hey you know perfection takes time Amos ..

Heather when you are ready for another story just let us know. I love reading your stories, but I know that you are busy with school and other things. So when your ready, I'll be here.

 

[Serena]

Thanks, I'll add more. I only said Los Locos cause I couldn't think of another name. I'll figure more stuff out, Thanks alot for looking.

Glad to hear that, Prisoner! Like I said, even if you just add a little at a time, it's kind of fun that way also. Nothing like anticipating the next scene, eh?

 

[snooch]

if you made that into a movie i bet it would be the best steven seagal movie since out for justice a very good idea my dream movie would be a buddy movie with steven seagal and adam sandler but i think that will always be a dream.

 

[Prisoner 1137]

Heh, I really could think that it would be a tight movie. I know for one thing, Having Seagal vs Travolta in a gun battle would be really sweet. Just picture the old gun battle in Face off, Now that was tight. I'm still doing more work, I'll probably jot some notes down at work.

 

[Lollipop]

1137, that sounds like it could go somewhere!! I loved Face Off!! I think having them together would be good casting! Work some more on it we want more!!
Tora and Heather were writing for us for awhile, I don't know what happen to that!

Thanks 1137, we love to be entertained!!!

 

[aikidoboynj]

I liked the story...I wrote a story on here a while back it was so long i retired after, and it was only the beginning of the movie haha