Amos Stevens
New Member
"VICTIMS"? gulp,not me-not if it's at the hands of Seagals character..I can think of easier & less painful ways to go!
This Is Another One Of My Storylines....
- Thread starter ORANGATUANG
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ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Fair enough...its only an story its not real life...i will just stick with who i was going to any way at least the girls wont let me down...
Amos Stevens
New Member
Hey I just thought of a victim for ya Heather...your ex!
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Until further notice i wont be writing the sequel to this story ...so i wouldnt be too hopeful for there even being an sequel..and as for my ex i really couldnt be bothered.
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
If you like tora..when iam feeling up to it i will do that sequel but it will be my last though...so i intend to make it some thing pretty wild and fun...just something that even steven will never forget...so girl just keep looking from now and then and one day you shall see....ohhh just confirming it will be called "jacks back"..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Ok.."The Aussie Connection:Jack's back"...story by Heather K.Crisp..(orangatuang)...
After i had seen Jack off at the airport i had got an call on my mobile that i was neede back at the station asap...when i got back i had found out that Max our boss had been killed an victim of an hit and run accident the driver didnt stop..Max was killed instantly.....we were all upset of course because he might have been an tough boss but he also had an heart at times...so not much more was done that day we all went home and prepared for the next day and to make arrangements for Max's funeral...
I heard an knock at the door and it was Karen she was the daughter of Max ..she is also an detective ...she wanted to get to the office early as she was really uptight about something she was looking through her dads desk and came across some documents that he had that could be damaging to the station.....her dad was invovled in an very secretive case that looks like killed him it involved drugs and guns that were still coming in my city and he didnt want to tell me because he had already contacted Jack and they were doing this job together..him from California and Max from here Jack was surposed to ring Karen tonight and let her know when he was coming...spot on wasnt he he rang Karen and she said"Karen here who's this?" and Jack said"it's Jack iam back"....he asked were Max was and Karen told him he was not surprised Max knew the risk when he took this on ..Jack said "iam sorry Karen " ...
After the phone conversation Karen and i went back to my place and she stayed with me that night i put her up on an sofa bed...during the night i get woken up by Karen saying that there is someone in the house..i grab my trusty gun and go down stairs
and i could hear some one in the kitchen i kicked the door shut on the persons head and i tuened on the light all i could see was "jack" sitting there on his backside with milk all over him i said "**** Jack" Karen came in and she just laughed he got off his pride and wanted to give me an big hug "no way" i said he went and had an shower and just lucky i had some clothes of his from before aint i?...
Before we knew it it was morning and Jack was bushed so we went to the station and when we got there they had already appointed another boss an chick this time her name is Sabrina Woods...and she had an off sider by the name of Jess Carter..her right hand wowman i guess you could call her..
After all the howdy do's we all got back to our work..Sabrina had put Karen and myself on the case that Jack's invovled in and Jacks not gonna like that..tuff titties i say...
The king dick who was causing all this rukus goes by the name of "big boy" and he has two bad ass woman working for him they are "jackie and jill" they think that they can run my city with all this crap well they have picked the wrong chick on the wrong day to mess with...iam not letting that happen and i will see to it that its all cleaned up ..
Jack came to the station expecting to find Karen and i there wasnt he in for an surprise
when Sabrina tells him that we are in on the case i can see that face now and those "eyes" say it all...any way Karen and i had to see two witnesses who had seen the whole accident that killed Max..they were Leonardo and isabella they were an couple they were walking along the footpath when they saw what happened..They say that an car came out of nowhere and slammed right into him and didnt stop but isabella has excelent eyesight and got the rego number..so we took all that back to the station and guess who was waiting there "JACK"..he was not an happy chappy but he will deal with it us girls taking over his jobs isnt that an shame...
When we left the station with Jack he had an feeling that we were being followed so he said "hang on girls" then he took off like an shower of **** and sure enough his feelings were right..he lost it at an corner and the car flipped and slid anlong the road when it came to an stop Jack was out to it and Karen was out as well and i could see
an van pull up and an couple of guys get out and they pulled me out of the car and took off leaving Karen and Jack ..as we were leaving i saw an ambulance go by us so i knew that they would be ok..as for me who knows?..
We got to our destination and i was once again pulled out of the van like an rag doll and taken to an cabin and chained to an chair...the two bad girls "jackie and jill" came in and started to ask me questions they slapped me around abit but i wasnt gonna break then in walks "big boy" and he asked me what i knew and i said "bite me"..his two bad bitches didnt like that and Jackie hit me that hard she broke my nose.. i said "do that again bitch and i will kick your ass" they just laughed..
Anyway "big boy " had contacted Sabrina via fax machine that he had me and he wanted that document or this bitch gets it in more ways then one......naturally Sabrina contacted Jack and Karen and notified them of the situation and Jack knew what he had to do ...he said to Karen"i have to do this alone ok?" she wasnt agreeable on that because she wanted to see the ******* that killed her dad so Jack reluclently said"ok"..but we do it my way"....
Jack knew this type of crook and he knew that "big boy" would have his hoon's out side making sure that no one got inside...There was an knock at the door and it was Karen she had the document and "bigboy" took it from her and then the two bad girls "jackie and Jill" came in they unlocked my handcuffs and said" we want an fair fight" i might have had an broken nose and hurt like hell but i wasnt going to let these bitches touch me again..Karen and i got back to back and then i said "bring it on"...then all hell broke loose need i say Karen and i kicked there ass bigtime and poor "bigboy" was packing it too because guess who was waiting outside for him..yep "jack"...and he had an score to settle he kicked "bigboys " butt into next week ....so after all the mayhem i can say it all ended well i hope they all like jail food because they are never to be realeased from jail...Karen is coming along slowly and as for "jack" its true that the good guy always gets the girl and that he always will have this one...case closed.....or is it?....
Cast ot characters..
Steven Seagal...Jack Knife
Sara Good.........Heather Crisp
Sabrina Woods..Serena
Jess Carter......Julie
Karen Connor..Kathy
Jackie.........tora
Jill..............Jalu
Leonardo ..leon
Isabella..isamarie
"big-boy" ...amos
After i had seen Jack off at the airport i had got an call on my mobile that i was neede back at the station asap...when i got back i had found out that Max our boss had been killed an victim of an hit and run accident the driver didnt stop..Max was killed instantly.....we were all upset of course because he might have been an tough boss but he also had an heart at times...so not much more was done that day we all went home and prepared for the next day and to make arrangements for Max's funeral...
I heard an knock at the door and it was Karen she was the daughter of Max ..she is also an detective ...she wanted to get to the office early as she was really uptight about something she was looking through her dads desk and came across some documents that he had that could be damaging to the station.....her dad was invovled in an very secretive case that looks like killed him it involved drugs and guns that were still coming in my city and he didnt want to tell me because he had already contacted Jack and they were doing this job together..him from California and Max from here Jack was surposed to ring Karen tonight and let her know when he was coming...spot on wasnt he he rang Karen and she said"Karen here who's this?" and Jack said"it's Jack iam back"....he asked were Max was and Karen told him he was not surprised Max knew the risk when he took this on ..Jack said "iam sorry Karen " ...
After the phone conversation Karen and i went back to my place and she stayed with me that night i put her up on an sofa bed...during the night i get woken up by Karen saying that there is someone in the house..i grab my trusty gun and go down stairs
and i could hear some one in the kitchen i kicked the door shut on the persons head and i tuened on the light all i could see was "jack" sitting there on his backside with milk all over him i said "**** Jack" Karen came in and she just laughed he got off his pride and wanted to give me an big hug "no way" i said he went and had an shower and just lucky i had some clothes of his from before aint i?...
Before we knew it it was morning and Jack was bushed so we went to the station and when we got there they had already appointed another boss an chick this time her name is Sabrina Woods...and she had an off sider by the name of Jess Carter..her right hand wowman i guess you could call her..
After all the howdy do's we all got back to our work..Sabrina had put Karen and myself on the case that Jack's invovled in and Jacks not gonna like that..tuff titties i say...
The king dick who was causing all this rukus goes by the name of "big boy" and he has two bad ass woman working for him they are "jackie and jill" they think that they can run my city with all this crap well they have picked the wrong chick on the wrong day to mess with...iam not letting that happen and i will see to it that its all cleaned up ..
Jack came to the station expecting to find Karen and i there wasnt he in for an surprise
when Sabrina tells him that we are in on the case i can see that face now and those "eyes" say it all...any way Karen and i had to see two witnesses who had seen the whole accident that killed Max..they were Leonardo and isabella they were an couple they were walking along the footpath when they saw what happened..They say that an car came out of nowhere and slammed right into him and didnt stop but isabella has excelent eyesight and got the rego number..so we took all that back to the station and guess who was waiting there "JACK"..he was not an happy chappy but he will deal with it us girls taking over his jobs isnt that an shame...
When we left the station with Jack he had an feeling that we were being followed so he said "hang on girls" then he took off like an shower of **** and sure enough his feelings were right..he lost it at an corner and the car flipped and slid anlong the road when it came to an stop Jack was out to it and Karen was out as well and i could see
an van pull up and an couple of guys get out and they pulled me out of the car and took off leaving Karen and Jack ..as we were leaving i saw an ambulance go by us so i knew that they would be ok..as for me who knows?..
We got to our destination and i was once again pulled out of the van like an rag doll and taken to an cabin and chained to an chair...the two bad girls "jackie and jill" came in and started to ask me questions they slapped me around abit but i wasnt gonna break then in walks "big boy" and he asked me what i knew and i said "bite me"..his two bad bitches didnt like that and Jackie hit me that hard she broke my nose.. i said "do that again bitch and i will kick your ass" they just laughed..
Anyway "big boy " had contacted Sabrina via fax machine that he had me and he wanted that document or this bitch gets it in more ways then one......naturally Sabrina contacted Jack and Karen and notified them of the situation and Jack knew what he had to do ...he said to Karen"i have to do this alone ok?" she wasnt agreeable on that because she wanted to see the ******* that killed her dad so Jack reluclently said"ok"..but we do it my way"....
Jack knew this type of crook and he knew that "big boy" would have his hoon's out side making sure that no one got inside...There was an knock at the door and it was Karen she had the document and "bigboy" took it from her and then the two bad girls "jackie and Jill" came in they unlocked my handcuffs and said" we want an fair fight" i might have had an broken nose and hurt like hell but i wasnt going to let these bitches touch me again..Karen and i got back to back and then i said "bring it on"...then all hell broke loose need i say Karen and i kicked there ass bigtime and poor "bigboy" was packing it too because guess who was waiting outside for him..yep "jack"...and he had an score to settle he kicked "bigboys " butt into next week ....so after all the mayhem i can say it all ended well i hope they all like jail food because they are never to be realeased from jail...Karen is coming along slowly and as for "jack" its true that the good guy always gets the girl and that he always will have this one...case closed.....or is it?....
Cast ot characters..
Steven Seagal...Jack Knife
Sara Good.........Heather Crisp
Sabrina Woods..Serena
Jess Carter......Julie
Karen Connor..Kathy
Jackie.........tora
Jill..............Jalu
Leonardo ..leon
Isabella..isamarie
"big-boy" ...amos
Well,I'm not alone there,Big Boy is with me
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
So does this one get your seal of approval tora?..i hope you liked it iam scared now amos might kick me butt..
Amos Stevens
New Member
Big boy huh...hmmmm,atleast I'm still alive!
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Only an try eh?...well i think its ok for some one like me who dont know how to write very well or spell for that matter...
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
eek: you read it amos never mind "big boy" i wouldnt knock you off...at least not yet..
KATHYPURDOM
Steven Seagal Fan
I love that story Heather. You and I sure know how to kick ass right? I think we really worked good together and with Jack on our side no doubt we would win.
Good job and it sounds like there could be another story coming up in the future?
Good job and it sounds like there could be another story coming up in the future?
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Yeah right tora..as if any of his people read this thread and see these stories i doubt it
mine would be no way good enough for him ..but thanks girl for saying it and Kathy i like your avitor and iam glad you liked this one..i wouldnt hold out for any more from me for awhile...
mine would be no way good enough for him ..but thanks girl for saying it and Kathy i like your avitor and iam glad you liked this one..i wouldnt hold out for any more from me for awhile...
Quote:
Originally Posted by justice808
I am dissapointed I am not in the cast
BTW...Thanks Suzi !!
Originally Posted by justice808
I am dissapointed I am not in the cast
Hummmmmm Sorry...I guess not...Certainly he will be too busy living his own new story !!tora said:When I make up my own story you'll be in.And the rest of the folks get their roles too
BTW...Thanks Suzi !!Attachments
Heather!! I love this, I love this, I love this!ORANGATUANG said:
ESPECIALLY my role!!
This is sooo cool!
Sorry I wasn't able to be back here until today, but what a great surprise to come back to. Well done, Heather! You obviously put a lot of thought and time into this. More, please! 
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
You are kidding aint ya!!! ..Like i said to tora no one is going to take much notice of my storylines...but iam glad you liked it Serena...how are you feeling Serena girl better then friday i hope?..
