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Now for them to all get there butts into gear as they all left it was in two cars Lazza and Sarah went in one car and Casey and Marissa in the other but hidden around the corner was this bitch Amanda Collins she has found out where Casey's crib is and she wanted to go check things out for her self she was notorious for breaking into homes an old hat at it and Casey forgot to set the alarm when there left thinking that things were going to be ok ?? yeah right ..any way Amanda pulled around to the front of the house waited an few moments to make sure no one came back then as she got out of her car she was being checked out by an neighbour of Marissa's the lady was out taking her garbage bin in Amanda went over to her and said 'hi iam an friend of Casey's and he said it was ok if i came around' the lady fell for her charm and they just chatted for an few minutes and then Amanda walked back to the house and got out her little tool to open up the door and was open she turned around and waved at Marissa's neighbour and walked into the house...she put on some gloves i mean why? because the neighbour will say some thing to Marissa when she gets home then the shit will hit the fan ..its not her neighbours fault just this bitch Amanda is an real piece of work...any way Amanda walked al threw the house even sitting down having an glass of wine from the fridge she went into Casey and Marissa's bedroom she got all his clothes and with an knife she got from the kitchen she cut them all up and he has some nice stuff as we know and as for Marissa's clothes didnt even touch them because she didnt have an beef with Marissa just Casey and she was out to hurt him one way or another ...once she had done the damage she did she calmly walked out of the house locked up got in her car and drove off and waved again to Marissa's neighbour whom was out walking her dog ...while Amanda was in the house she planted an couple of bugs not in any bedroom she wasnt that perverted to listen into things that go on in there bedroom she did draw the line

 

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there .. she just wanted to know if there was any thing said about Michael as she was working for that mad son of an bitch now and the money she was getting paid well you know she would do in her own family members thats how wharped she is ...she was not far from Michaels dig when he rang and he asked'well did you get in the house?' 'yes' she said 'and yes i planted an couple of bugs and no way will they find them' 'good' said Michael 'because ya know how unpleased i can be if things dont go my way' any way Amanda had to go do some other shit for Michael as he was cooking up some thing and it can only be bad he called an friend yes sadly he had friends an guy he had known for years from his visit to Russia his name is Boris an bloke built like an brick out house muscles on muscles some what addicted to steroids this bloke any way he wanted Boris to come to america to cause help get rid of Casey ..yeah right get rid if Casey like thats going to happen he is like an bad rash you cant get rid or an itch you just cant scratch either way get rid of Casey tell them there dreamin....

around about now Marissa and Casey have arived at the C.I.A. building and as suspected it had gone to rack and ruin ..rubbish and crap in the foyer and an drunk at the front counter what the hell Marissa thought she went up to the drunk and just pushed him off his chair she was that pissed ...first day back at work after the babies were born and the agents have treated the place like an yunk heap guess there were going to be an few asses on the chopping block ..

any ways Casey went and checked threw the other offices it was like an pig sty every where he went and where did he find all the agents in the board room drinking and carrying on and girls were doing some stripping on the table he had to ring Marissa and she said she wanted ALL agents to the board room NOW !!! and Sarah and Lazza were checking out the rest of the C.I.A building rounding up all agents pissed or not over 50 of them in one room was going to be an tight fit but shit happens ....heads are so gonna roll ....

 

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When Marissa walked into the room you couldnt hear an pin drop because it wasnt going to be an pretty sight they could see that she was pissed the fact she thought having time off having her babies she could trust her agents and that they would do there jobs and not be little children..some acted like 5 year olds as the bickering that has been going on any ways Marissa is going to take care of all that right now Casey just sat down and let his woman do what she does best take care of business she told all to shut up and sit down and she said 'as far as iam concerned iam totally disgusted how the lot of you have handled things what i want is to hear from each of you one by one why you should keep your jobs?' and she got Casey and Lazza to get the agents to line up and Sarah had to make sure that all went good no trouble makers as she would kick them out ....Marissa only spent 5 minutes with each agent and took down them names etc... to put in the 'keep' or 'toss' list every thing went rather smoothly 10 of the agents were kicked out for being either drunk or stoned on the job thats how much the C.I.A. had gone to the dogs the F.B.I. would be pissing them selves laughing ...out of the rest of the agents some were given sorry ordered to take leave to shape up or ship out some were just given warnings one more stuff up there out she kept 20 on also with very strong warnings and theyw ere ordered back to work right away and were warned that she had her eye on them..it left alot of bad blood with soem agents but who gives an shit they are paid to up hold the law not f*** it up....

 

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Mean while Michael was planning his next step and Amanda is going to makes sure Casey gets whats coming to him yeah good luck with that girlie ....he aint scared of taking an female out he has done that before and hasnt given it an second thought you f*** with his family you can say your prayers he wanted Amanda to get all done up to actually go to the C.I.A headquarters and if she was dressed the way she had planned no way would even Casey pick up on who she was hell an fake C.I.A badge is easily made up and gun which would be the real thing Michael wanted her to get into there computer base to put an virus through it that would make all the worat mother f***** in the prison system get an early realease Michael had done his home work and had his eye on 8 of the worst crims that were on death row he was thinking if they did live threw what he had planned he would make sure they were let go and live the rest of there punny lives out ..these creeps are mostly drug lords that had been all put away by one person as he would say Casey f****** Ryback but time had come for him to learn he aint all that ...

 

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This Amanda chick didnt take to kindly to rejection as it was her way or the high way and that is why Casey got rid of her at least he had the balls to tell her face to face not by text message ...she was just getting to pushy as she is alot younger then him and what he found in Marissa was alot of maturity and class ..he knew it was about time he really settled down and began his life proper because when all this shit is doen with Michael he is calling it an day (retiring) hopefully he will live to see his retirement but with Michael whom knows ...Casey has always been an good man shame others havent seen that but when it comes to some dirt bag trying to hurt his family they will be the losers ...Finally Marissa had all her agents sorted out..the men from the boys so to speak and put them to work and this time gave them an warning f*** up one more time and they all get early retirement she was in no mood for being stuffed around with being an new mum her hormones were running wild and the mood swings well yes ...Casey knows all about that ..Sarah and Lazza had been out scooping the streets for any sigm of Amanda and Michael as they were bosom buddies now probally screwing each other stupid but hey let them because there screwing days will soon be over ...if its an bang they want its an bang they will get ...and it was nearing closing tome for the C.I.A. building and Marissa was totally whacked her throat was sore from yelling at the agents and telling them how its going to be she did say that if they all dont pull there fingers out there asses they will be the laughing stock and wont the F.B.I like that ..yes indeed ...and we all know what they think of the F.B.I right?

All Marissa knew is that she was tiring of this jerk off Michael all her other cases havent been an thorn in her ass like this one but she will make sure she will inflict as much pain as possible on Michael Casey is an pussy cat compared to Marissa ...any ways she called Casey 'where you at?' she asked and he said' just around the corner be there in an few hon' 'hon?' Marissa thought whats he up too? never called her 'hon' before and she wasnt in the mood for any suprises thats for sure
sure he has had an few woman in his life and has got married and had an couple out of marriage (on the side) but none of them have held an light to Marissa sure she may not be to every ones liking but Casey must think the world of her for what he was about to ask her ...BUT that will have to wait as he knows Marissa just wants this son of an bitch Michael exterminated !!!...

 

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Before i continue with this story just an note to any one thinking of posting other then any comments about my story here FORGET IT! this is my page get lost..and if you persist i can end my stories as quick as i started them and iam sure there may be one or two members that may be upset about that as i believe they like reading what i write ..so just lets that be an warning ok?

 

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Lazza was sitting in the car waiting for Sarah to come out of the ladies loo and he saw Amanda he knew this was her because he had an photo of her as she was in the system she had done an few things in her adult life things like fraud and she has been questioned about an couple of her so called boyfreinds gone missing look out Michael watch your back?? Lazza thought but hey they deserved each other ...so yes she was not an nice person would sell her mum for the right price ..Sarah got into the car and asked 'what?' 'there she is' said Lazza said and buggar me she seemed to be walking towards them they could have so easily got her but Marissa just wanted them to report if they saw her so Sarah got on her mobile phone nad rang Marissa 'hey' she said' Lazza and i have Amanda in our sights what do you want us to do?'Marissa said'get her' 'ok' said Sarah Amanda must have had her head in the clouds because as she walked past they car Sarah got out asked if she was Amanda Collins and when she said'yes' Sarah grabbed her arms and slammed the handcuffs on her
and shoved her in the car and when she went to say some thing Sarah would say'shut up' ...she was going off her tree saying 'my lawyer will have an field day with you bitch' and Sarah said 'where your going you wont need an lawyer' Amanda said'you cant hold me against my will its against the law' and Sarah said ' iam the law and i can do what i dam well like so shut the f*** up ' any ways Amanda did shut up Sarah was becoming more and more like Casey each day and that was an good thing ...Lazza had to go to check some thing else out so he just dropped Sarah and Amanda at the C.I.A building and an couple of agents were waiting to assist Sarah with Amanda just in case she decided to be an stupid bitch and try to run..she said'what am i doing here?' and Sarah said 'welcome to your nightmare ...Marissa is waiting for you'.......

 

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well so much for this story being my last ...maybe not this year but iam going to be writting another one i saw 'submerged' last night and it ended as if it could be another one done..sooooo i will attempt writting an second 'submerged' and they is going to be an miracle right from the start in my stories any thing can happen..this one is going to be called

'Submerged 2: Betrayal'

thats all i have right now...

 

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Now all we have to do is get you and your story to some studio and get it made.

Great work.

Peace

 

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Now all we have to do is get you and your story to some studio and get it made.

Great work.

Peace

Oh thanks Kotegashi ..aint nothing iam having fun writting them and iam sure the few that read them like what i do ..and iam sure the 'man' himself doesnt mind or i would be told ...

 

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If Amanda wasnt scared she should be as Marissa was going to be the one interigating her and she was really in no mood for bull shit ..and if Amanda didnt want to talk well Marissa had her ways she had some truth serum hidden away in her office in an wall vault and if Amanda didnt want to talk Marissa would make her an little naughty but Marissa was fed up about this little shit kicker Michael always one step ahead of her...and if its the only way to get info out of Amanda so be it whom was going to say anything it was just going to be here and Marissa in the room ...so she either talks or is made to...and of course Amanda clammed up so Marissa went out of the interigating room locking it behind her of course ..went into her office and opened up her wall safe she was not kidding she did have the truth serum she did need some assistance in holding Amanda still while injecting it so she called for Sarah as Casey was elsewhere and Sarah held her as Marissa injected it in of course Amanda has just signed her own death warrant cause if any one thta knows Michael sees her coming out of the C.I.A. building there will be an bounty on her head..just because Amanda may have screwed Michael didnt mean shit to have hey an roll in the hay is an roll in the hay ...after Marissa was done with Amanda she gave her another injection to come back and that she wouldnt have known what happened ..hey that the C.I.A. for ya..sneaky buggars

Marissa asked'where is your uncle?' 'dont know 'Sarah said having said that Sarah saw some one walking noooo sorry strutting up the hall way she thought oh god nooo he hasnt or isnt BUT he was he had an this bright pink shirt i mean BRIGHT like hot pink she met him in the hall way as Amanda had to have an pit stop (loo) an she couldnt make her escape ...Sarah said'o.m.g. what are you thinking?' 'what' he said 'iam supporting breast cancer plus real men wear pink' 'ok' she said he asked 'wheres Marissa ?' ' oh she is in her office'

 

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If Amanda wasnt packing it by now she should be because when Micahel finds out she has been made to talk she has signed her death sentence just cause she has the looks and that she is jsut an piece of ass to him...when she came out of the loo she caught an glimpse of Casey and started to walk to him Sarah intercepted that she said' i want to see Casey' Amanda said 'well thats just not happening ' Sarah said 'you f**** up once you dont get an second chance' and Casey turned around and he came up to Amanda and said' keep the f*** away from me you are one messed up chick'

 

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But Casey had that affect on the female sex he just has that 'thang' ya know and Amanda must be dreaming if she can just walk back into his life and pick up where they left off ..not going to happen Casey only was into one woman and thats it no more wandering eyes ...plus he was going to ask Marissa if she would be his life partner but he may be in for an shock as she aint the marrying kind sure she will gladly be his but just not in the biblical sense ..as for there babies well theres millions of people in the world that aint married and there happy ore so then an ring on ones finger and what an piece of paper...he wont have to worry cause when Marissa loves some one it with her heart and soul and that person will know that..

Any way Amanda started to make an scene yelling and screaming of course getting Marissa's attention she came to see what the hell was going on and said'i thought this bitch was gone?' and Sarah said'sorry she had to have an pit stop and then Casey turned up' ok' Marissa said 'get her out of here now' and Casey said ' you heard her move it' Amanda lashed out at Casey and with her claws gauged the side of his face boy like he must be getting slow and blood pissed every where and Sarah grabbed Amanda around the neck to restrain her and she hit an certain nerve and boom she was out to it the good old sleeper move works all the time..Sarah called for medical help yes the CIA may be an pain in the ass at time but no one cant say they dont care about there own..an doctor was there to assist in no time boy Amanda meant business she sliced his face deep alright as for getting surgery Casey being Casey wanted to have the scars to remember that he will in time gets his ...

 

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well so much for this story being my last ...maybe not this year but iam going to be writting another one i saw 'submerged' last night and it ended as if it could be another one done..sooooo i will attempt writting an second 'submerged' and they is going to be an miracle right from the start in my stories any thing can happen..this one is going to be called

'Submerged 2: Betrayal'

thats all i have right now...

Sorry folks but i wont be writting this story ...i have upset some big chiefs sooooo the story iam writting now will be my LAST ...but never mind i enjoyed it while it lasted and iam bowing out happy as...so i will end this current story around christmas and that will be it ..i will drop in from time to time that wont change but as for my stories it ends with this one thanks to all my 'fans' ......and just so we are clear when i say 'big chiefs' i dont mean BIG CHIEFS i mean other fans and iam not naming them because thats just not me ...just so things dont get mis understood ...i guess these fans are just jealous dont know why at least they have more of an chance meeting steven and just wanted me to stop ...

 

[Kotegashi]

Sorry folks but i wont be writting this story ...i have upset some big chiefs sooooo the story iam writting now will be my LAST ...but never mind i enjoyed it while it lasted and iam bowing out happy as...so i will end this current story around christmas and that will be it ..i will drop in from time to time that wont change but as for my stories it ends with this one thanks to all my 'fans' ......

Shame, really enjoyed your storie and was excited for S2: Betrayal.

Hope stuff settles down quickly so you can resume the stories.

Peace

 

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Shame, really enjoyed your storie and was excited for S2: Betrayal.

Hope stuff settles down quickly so you can resume the stories.

Peace

Oh i think its been an good ride mate fun while it lasted and iam sure some may be thinking what the ??? but never mind like i said i shall finish the one iam doing up and then ..have an early retirement i think

have alot of things on next year hopefully an job and alot of home improvements ...but thanks

 

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Now for the final touches to this story iam sad it has to end but really i have had fun....and i wouldnt change my mind even if the man himself asked me too because iam done ...

While all this shit was happening because Amanda couldnt take no for an answer the phone in Marissa's office was going off its hook finally they got hold of Amanda and shoved her in handcuffs until they escorted her the hell out of the building what happened to her now wasnt any of there concern ..So Sarah showed her out and even had an taxi waiting for her and made sure she got in it she gave Sarah the finger as she was driven off Sarah didnt give an shit just glad the bitch was gone...as she walked back into the building an car sped past and some thug starting shooting just as well Sarah was out of range but sadly an few people of the public were killed or injured including two agents with in minutes it was chaos as cops galore were there and an couple of ambulances oh yes and of course the friging F.B.I. boy they must have an keen nose always sticking it in every body elses business the C.I.A. had things covered along with the police but know the F.B.I. had to make them selves look big...one agent in the F.B.I. was an pain in Caseys side they had have some bad blood towards each other for years and for him to show up here wasnt going to help at all .. the way this fed walked up to Casey like he was shit hot well really what an joker he said to Casey 'long time no see' and Casey asked 'what the f*** you doing here?' and the jerk said'my job why dont you do yours' oh them are just fighting words see they is no love lost between them still
but sadly there going to be working together as Marissa got an phone call that its not an request BUT an order from some one higher then her its out of her hands ...oh boy let the games begin....

 

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