Mystery Mom
Queen of the Mist
Give the guy a break
Geez the guy has dumped his heart and soul into sharing his plot line with us and all you cynics can do is tear it apart.
So what if it has bits and pieces that seem similar to other movies. Every Civil War movie has cannons in it, so does Under Siege - does that make it like Gone With the Wind? - not!
It's a decent plot line, a decent story and whether or not it fits Seagal is immaterial. Writing is hard, damn hard. Making characters behave the way you want is equally hard. They don't alway agree with your ideas and take on a life of their own. Making a story move fluidly from one scene to another has its problems. Anyone who writes seriously knows and understands what this person has gone through and is going through.
Offering constructive criticism is much more appreciated than ripping every idea the guy has presented apart.
All you armchair critics should take your remote and channel surf. Maybe you will find something there to satisfy you.
Sydneyalias1325 - I think your story line has merits. I wish you luck and smooth writing in finishing it and maybe, just maybe somewhere you can find an interested party that will bring it to fruition.
Myst
Geez the guy has dumped his heart and soul into sharing his plot line with us and all you cynics can do is tear it apart.
So what if it has bits and pieces that seem similar to other movies. Every Civil War movie has cannons in it, so does Under Siege - does that make it like Gone With the Wind? - not!
It's a decent plot line, a decent story and whether or not it fits Seagal is immaterial. Writing is hard, damn hard. Making characters behave the way you want is equally hard. They don't alway agree with your ideas and take on a life of their own. Making a story move fluidly from one scene to another has its problems. Anyone who writes seriously knows and understands what this person has gone through and is going through.
Offering constructive criticism is much more appreciated than ripping every idea the guy has presented apart.
All you armchair critics should take your remote and channel surf. Maybe you will find something there to satisfy you.
Sydneyalias1325 - I think your story line has merits. I wish you luck and smooth writing in finishing it and maybe, just maybe somewhere you can find an interested party that will bring it to fruition.
Myst