Haiku!

Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Walking with you, dear
Hand in hand so happily
Discovering love
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Roses, and Jasmine
Fragrancing the evening air
Lets enjoy our time
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
My love so divine
Dear you stimulate my mind
And my heart follows
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Special and true, dear
That is the feeling I feel
And it's oh so real
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Cherish you darling
Can't you see that I would do
Anything for you
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
This heart full of love
It beats for you, my darling
Oh, how it needs you
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ZenLateralus

Disposition Seagal
This might have already been asked but since I have a bad memory I'll ask. What are the rules for writing a Haiku. I mean, I think there is supposed to be a certain number of syllables per line and other rules.
 

ZenLateralus

Disposition Seagal
Guess I found my answer on another thread written by Amos :

Quote:


How to write Haiku

In japanese, the rules for how to write Haiku are clear, and will not be discussed here. In foreign languages, there exist NO consensus in how to write Haiku-poems. Anyway, let's take a look at the basic knowledge:


What to write about?

Haiku-poems can describe almost anything, but you seldom find themes which are too complicated for normal PEOPLE's recognition and understanding. Some of the most thrilling Haiku-poems describe daily situations in a way that gives the reader a brand new experience of a well-known situation.


The metrical pattern of Haiku

Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units. In japanese, this convention is a must, but in english, which has variation in the length of syllables, this can sometimes be difficult.


The technique of cutting

The cutting divides the Haiku into two parts, with a certain imaginative distance between the two sections, but the two sections must remain, to a degree, independent of each other. Both sections must enrich the understanding of the other.
To make this cutting in english, either the first or the second line ends normally with a colon, long dash or ellipsis.


The seasonal theme.

Each Haiku must contain a kigo, a season word, which indicate in which season the Haiku is set. For example, cherry blossoms indicate spring, snow indicate winter, and mosquitoes indicate summer, but the season word isn't always that obvious.

Please notice that Haiku-poems are written under different rules and in many languages. For translated Haiku-poems, the translator must decide whether he should obey the rules strictly, or if he should present the exact essence of the Haiku. For Haiku-poems originally written in english, the poet should be more careful. These are the difficulties, and the pleasure of Haiku.
 

Serena

Administrator
ZenLateralus said:
I just copied it to here from another thread. Probably should have gotten permission first though.

No, not at all. Thanks for doing that. :) I couldn't remember myself what constituted a haiku.
 

Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Thanks, Zen...

I break the rules, but try to stick by the syllables...

Julie, neither do I, I have a horrid memory, but funny, it seems they come to me, it's kind of odd...

Actually, I don't remember which movies they are from in most cases, I just remember he's said them, and most of the lines I quote aren't totally accurate, either...

I happened to see the patriot and FDB recently, I think this one was from one of them...:)
 

Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Dear, I love you so
No-one to rise above you
You have all of me
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Just to be near you
Dear, that is my dream come true
Oh, such sweet dreaming
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
Happy and sweet dreams
Where the world is my oyster
But you are the pearl
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Lotussan

I Belong To Steven
You near me, darling
That is all I'll ever need
You are everything
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