'Bad Blood'..

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
'Bad Blood' (continued)...

Tobias said ' i have had enough of this iam out of here' Sarrah waited for an few minutes before they too left to go to Terri's parents place for her wake..They had to make an quick detour to any other friends place to drop off the girls and off they went ..
Terri sure had an few freinds and clients that really cared about her shame she was gone she was only 38 ..Sarrah and Natalie had an hard time finding an place to park so they did an no-no and parked on some ones lawn..iam sure they wouldnt mind as those people were at the wake too..
During the wake Natalie and Sarrah were remembering the good times and bad times and they both said an few words
in memory of Terri..
There was an knock at the door and it was Tobias drunk as an skunk and his breath would make milk go cuddly ...Natalie said'We dont want you your kind here' 'my kind what do you mean by that?' Tobias asked and Natalie said' you and your murdering *******s' and with that said she threw hot coffee in his face Tobias grabbed his sister by the throat and said' you bitch you do that again' and Sarrah came in and she hit him in the bread basket (stomach) and he soon let go...Tobias men were just outside and came in forcing there way through all the upset people poor Vino had to stay in the car because she was not trained enough as yet ...any how Terris father told them all to get the f*** out of his house Tobias did say 'dont think its over not by an long shot' like get over your self ' Sarrah said 'you donkey'...Tobias said' i just wanted to talk to my wife' ummm that would be ex' Sarrah said..he replied 'theres one thing you should know woman and that is you are my property and no stupid divorce is going to stop me getting back whats mine' Sarrah said 'ohhh cry me an river and piss off'...Sarrah could see that Tobias men had came to the wake with weapons under there coats how big of them...but they knew that they were beat for the time being iam sure that Sarrah hadnt seen the last of the jerks...
It was an very emotional day and all Sarrah wanted to do was go pick up her kids and go back home and relax..Natalie dropped her off and said'you be ok girl?' 'of course' Sarrah said 'just need to chill out for an while' and off Natalie went ...

While Natalie was driving along she thought that she saw her brother and Vino having an smooching session like big deal was an cheater always an cheater any way Natalie was to worn out to even confront the bullsh.it artist saying he loved Sarrah what an load of bollocks..
When Sarrah got closer to her front door it was an jar and being the smart cookie she is she rang the police and for once they were there in no time amazing..There asked Sarrah to stay outside just on the safe side so Sarrah pulled the pram back from the door no one saw that there was an car just crusing up and down the street suddenly it pulled in the driveway two men grabbed Sarrah and shoved her in the back seat and leaving her son sqealing his lungs by the time the police it happened so quickly that the police didnt even get an chance to see the number plate ...while she was in the back seat Sarrah tried to open the door Vino said 'dont bother ' Tony and Dean said' do you really think you could do all what you have done without payback' Dean rang Tobias and said' we have her' 'bring her around to the front door'...No way was she going to get out of the car so they had to go get Tobias and he wasnt in any mood for Sarrah or any one else giving him the sh.its...He just leaned in the car and grabbed her around the waist and pulled her out Sarrah was scratching at him making blood stream from his face ..by this time he had enough of her scratching and not to mention yelling in his ears he carried her to his bedroom and locked her in there..he asked Dean and Tony to make sure she put on the clothes he had laid out for her after she had bathed..mean while Tobias had to go and finish his little meeting with Dovid whom had grown very concerned for Sarrah and her family and was thinking of being an snitch and ringing the police and telling them were Sarrah was but Tobias wasnt that stupid he knew that he use for Dovid was done so he did him there and then in the study...just snapped his neck like an twig...and he called Vino to bring Dovid's car around to the front door and got Vino to drive it down to the lake and let it roll into the water and it sunk in know time...Vino rang Tobias and he got Dean to go pick Vino up while Tony still kept an eye on Sarrah..

Mean while Sarrah was scared at least she was ashamed to admit it she heard footsteps and the door opened and it was Tobias Sarrah got up off the bed and walked over near the door to make an break for it Tobias said'go ahead make my day' Sarrah went to make her move but he was far to much quicker he grabbed her and he shut the door and locked it..he forced her onto his bed and began ripping off the close he made her wear sarrah said' let me f****** go'
'no way 'he said 'this is just like old times' Sarrah could feel her self giving in to him which she didnt want she saw an bottle on the cupboard and som ehow she grabbed it and slammed him up beside the head and saw her way out..or so she thought(To Be Continued)..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I have made some changes to the ending of my story why you may ask because i can..nooo the ending i had didnt ring right sooo iam in the process of making it sound better hopefully with in the next couple of days i will have it here ...
 

take-sensei

Die Hard Seagal fan!
Mama san said:
Heather,
While I'm thinking about it, I saw Anthony LaPaglia on a
TV talk show the other night. He has a TV series here
in the states called "Without a Trace". He said he was
from Adelaide, Australia. He also has a brother by the
name of Jonathan LaPaglia. He was in a TV series called
"The District" and he played a cop by the name of Kevin
Debreno. Jonathan is also a doctor in real life. He just
likes acting better. "The District" last show was in 2004.
I miss it, it was a very good show.
God bless,
Mama san
Sorry that I interupt, but I have seen a few episodes of "Without a Trace", and at that time it was a very good tv serie (a bit like CSI, but then only focussed on missing people), and from that serie is saw Anthony LaPaglia for the first time, and I find it a good actor!

So sorry that I interupted but thats what I wanna say about it.

take care

greets take-sensei
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thats 100% right Mama san there Adelaide fellas..that show Anthony is in is showing here in Adelaide at the moment..its not bad at all he plays the part very well..so what do you think of my story Mama san?..just wait for the ending there might be an twist...
 

take-sensei

Die Hard Seagal fan!
Heather,

Tomorrow I'll read Bad Blood, I'm looking forward to the story and also too my role in it :) (again thank you very much for adding me in the story)

After I've read the whole story I'll give my feedback and comment on it.

I wish you a good night!

take care

greets take-sensei
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
I have finished the story ...finally it is the longest one i have done..i wont be writing any more until next year after this one
and i am leaving this story open as i will have an second 'Bad Blood' in the works ...i hope to put the finale to my story this weekend some time in between baby sitting and doing this that and the other...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thank you...I really dont know where my writing bug has come from because none of my family have it ...I will continue writing as long as people like reading them..later today i will be putting the finishing touches on this one ..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Ok time for the finale..'Bad Blood'...

Sarrah rolled him off her and as was went to grab the car keys he grabbed her..'you have to do better then that to whack me girl' Tobias said ..He pulled her down onto the bed and this time and no way was she getting away Sarrah fought so hard to stop him from doing what he said he had the right too..She was yelling out for him to stop but it fell on deaf ears it just spurred him on more Sarrah just thought of her children while he pleasured himself after he was done he had the nerve to say to her 'you are still one hot momma' Sarrah just slapped his face ..didnt see that coming did he sucked in...
Sarrah went to move from the bed and Tobias said 'were are you going?' 'to the shower' Sarrah replied ..she picked up her clothes and went into the bathroom and still managed to nick his car keys as she slipped them into her jeans pocket..
While in the shower he came in and told her he had to go and return an important phone call and said'dont try anything silly like escape' but was Sarrah going to listen to him hell no..!!..she quickly got out of the shower and dried and dressed her self there was an window which was just an little ajar so she lifted it up and locked it so it wouldnt come down she moved her butt as quick as she could as she got through the window her shirt sleeve got caught on an nail as she tugged she lost her balance and fell just as well it wasnt far when she was running to his car she felt an trickle down her arm as she looked down it was an deep cut she just ripped her shirt sleeve off and rapped around the cut just for now..
When she had got to his car there was no one in sight she knew it was time to ski-daddle (move her fanny) but she didnt see Vino but Vino saw her take Tobias B.M.W. my god Vino thought heads are going to roll and it aint gonna be mine she thought..
Tobias Vino yelled Sarrah has taken your car..why didnt it surprise him that Sarrah didnt listen to what he said..he thought to himself..well 'dont just stand there what do you want an invitation'Tobias said 'get the f*** after her'...
So Dean and Vino gave chase they could see her in the distance through the dust from the dirt road she could see them in her rear view mirror and saw her opportunity to pull off into the thick bush and as she did she killed the engine and just waited ...sure enough the silly dicks went straight past her ...An ways up the road Vino said' I think we be had'..'Noooooooo ' said Dean ...

As Dean and Vino limped back to Tobias he could see they were empty handed and did that please him sh.it no..
'Dont worry Boss' Dean saidtommorrows another day and when she finds out were Natalie is she will be quiet pissed.
Tobias replied ' I hope that you both made sure there wasnt an inch of evidence left at her place when you did the job' 'no way ' 'we made sure of that Tobias'...

Sarrah had forgotten that she still had her cell phone and luckily it still had battery charge on it and so she rang Natalie and an guy answered 'hello'he said'who the hell are you' Sarrah said 'iam an doctor at the hospital' Sarrah's heart just sank..'please tell me her condition''she is alive just though it was touch and go''thank god' Sarrah said and she would be there soon..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
As Sarrah arrived at the hospital the doctor she spoke to met her there at the counter..he said 'she had an drug over dose' 'what 'said Sarrah 'thats not possible she hates even taking normal pain killers unless its really bad'..the doctor said 'she is still very groggy, but iam sure she will know who you are'..
Before Sarrah sat down she asked'where are my kids?' the doctor said 'there at the police station ' so Sarrah rang and confirmed that and they were the police officer she spoke too said' we will bring them there with in the hour' 'thanks' said Sarrah..
Mean while Sarrah sat down beside her friends bed side and she must have nodded off because when the doctor touched her shoulder she woke with an start..'sorry' he said 'but the police are here with your kids'..the girls were so happy to see there mum and her son well he was an asleep no surprises there..after she was re-united with her children the doctor noticed that blood was oozing out of her make shift bandage ..he insisted on checking it just as well he did it was grouse to say the least he cleaned it up and put several stitches in it and gave her an needle to stop any thing further happening..by this time Natalie was fully awake and boy wasnt Sarrah glad to see that..

It was good to get out of the hospital and time to get back home to get an few things as Sarrah didnt want to stay at this place for the moment and Natalie wasnt going to be staying by her self either ..so they all went up to Sarrah's grand mothers old cabin in the sticks..it was an very curvy road and can very dangerous if not careful as they were driving along an car came up behind them at an great speed it was Dean and Vino how the hell did they know where Sarrah was going ?..any how as they got level with Sarrah Vino drew out an pistol and was going to shoot and Dean saw another car coming the other way too late Sarrah breaked hard and stopped but Dean cars swerved to miss the oncoming car and went straight through the guard rail and when it hit the bottom it blew up...it all happened so quickly ..There rang the police and they were there promptly for once...my god Sarrah said'all this death when is it going to stop?'...

Her phone went off and it was Tobias it was he who was in the other car guess he thought that Vino and Dean were becoming an pain..so what do you do to an pain get rid of it..any way he was saying ' well girl were to now?'...just as he said that he drive past with Tony and the cheeky guy had the nerve to blow Sarrah an kiss..and said'catch you later?'..and he was gone ...Natalie said' he wouldnt dare would he?'.....The End...( stay tuned in the new year for 'Bad Blood' 2) ...to those who have read this story i thank you...its been an pleasure..
 

masterd48

Member
excellent, i am working on my own story with Seagal and featuring Tony Jaa in a guest role. if members would like to read it please let me know-i have titled it "Savage Vengeance"
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Thanks..I for one would be interested in reading it ..I know my spelling in my stories are not correct some times but at least i enjoy doing them and i just love reading so when will you have yours here?..i like the title..its an shame Stevens people dont take an peek at some of our (fans) stories they might come up with some better movie titles....
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Get ready ..The saga continues coming soon ...Bad Blood 2..
if you think you have read something now just wait for the end...
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Ohhh you are just pulling my leg arent you Glimmerman?..do you think the first one was that good eh?..it will be in an couple of weeks or so...would you mind if i put you in the second one?..just for an kick..it would have been here sooner but iam back at school Monday ..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
21..lol naaa i wish just say old enough to know better and young enough to be bad..ok i can do that ...if you look in the calendar you will see...and you i bet you are just an young bloke with alot ahead of you..
 

ORANGATUANG

Wildfire
Yes Suzy iam sure i can work you into the second story i think i have the perfect part for you and of course you are just going to have to wait and see ...but thats all i will be putting in this one if any one else is interested iam sure i will come up with an couple more stories this year...
 

GlimmerMan

Huge Member
Young? I wish. I am young at heart, haha! I'm 27. A lot ahead of me? I certainly hope so. You live in Oz don't you? It's my current ambition to work a couple of years in the Police here and then move to Australia, as I hear they love British cops!

PS - I checked the calendar. ;)

G-Man
 
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