'Bad Blood'..

[ORANGATUANG]

Yes i have been thinking about writing another one of my short stories ...i dropped that one 'black fire' just couldnt get the writing flowing ..but now with this new one boy is it going to be good even if i say so myself..and theres NOT going to be any holds barred..in other words well just wait and see..hope fully i will deliver in an couple of weeks as i have still got school and other things to do ...if any one of the fans here want to be included in this story let me know ...

 

[ORANGATUANG]

The storyline is as follows:

An woman who wins the custody of her twin daughters from an very dangerous relationship and how her husband is hell bent of getting his girls back even if he has to kill to get them he is an mob boss and every one he comes into contact with turns them bad...

 

[ORANGATUANG]

The cast as is..

Steven Seagal as Tobias Vuss
Starmaiden as Natalie Vuss (his sister)
Anneliese as Peggy(one of his women)
Kimonosoul as Candy(one of his women)
fio as Terri ( sarrah's lawyer)
lonewolf as Tony ( Tobia's right hand guy)
Take-sensei as Dovid (Tobia's lawyer)
Orangatuang as Sarrah( Tobia's wife soon to be ex)
stevenseagalfan as Vino(henchman no 1)
supertom as Dean (henchman no 2)

 

[supertom]

Orangatuang can I star in the film as your foot-stool?

 

[stevenseagalfan.]

Yes me to!

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Ha..Haaa i needed an laugh ..now come on guys if you were in my story i would have an much bettter part for you...iam already half way through writing my (rough) copy on paper but i surpose if he can change things around in his movies i can ad to my stories...if you both are serious i will ad you both in the last part of my story but i wont be able to ad any more in this one...let me know a.s.a.p ok?...as i was thinking about adding two more hench men..

 

[starmaiden]

am with u Heather ...this is VERY intersting I have to say that.....am very excited and CAN NOT wait till I read it...it's amazing I believe.
yyyuuuuuuppppppiiiii .........can not wait.

 

[take-sensei]

jaaaaaaaaaa GREAT, I'm Tobia's his lawyer, hahaha I hope I'm a good defender for Tobia's

Thanks again Heather for adding me in the story, and I've a GREAT role, thank you

We will wait for you when you release the story, but all I can say is: take all your time for it, and use all your good ideas, feelings and fantasies! I wish you all the luck and succes with it!

take care

greets take-sensei

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Want the good news or bads news about your role take-sensei?...just stirring ...iam sure it will amuse people as well as interest them like i said steven is the bad fella is this by that i mean 'bad'...no nicey nicey...he is getting off to lighty in his movies so iam going to change that.....

 

[stevenseagalfan.]

Ha..Haaa i needed an laugh ..now come on guys if you were in my story i would have an much bettter part for you...iam already half way through writing my (rough) copy on paper but i surpose if he can change things around in his movies i can ad to my stories...if you both are serious i will ad you both in the last part of my story but i wont be able to ad any more in this one...let me know a.s.a.p ok?...as i was thinking about adding two more hench men..

yes yes i like to read it to so put me in please.(lol)

take care stevenseagalfan.

 

[stevenseagalfan.]

Want the good news or bads news about your role take-sensei?...just stirring ...iam sure it will amuse people as well as interest them like i said steven is the bad fella is this by that i mean 'bad'...no nicey nicey...he is getting off to lighty in his movies so iam going to change that.....

ok soo he is bad hmmmm lets see it.


take care stevenseagalfan.

 

[ORANGATUANG]

ok soo he is bad hmmmm lets see it.


take care stevenseagalfan.

Be careful what you wish for because you might just get it...ok i have already written you into the story..

 

[ORANGATUANG]

'Bad Blood' written by (Orangatuang) Heather.K.Crisp...

It was an beautiful morning and Sarrah had just dropped her kids off at school and she had an doctors appointment to confirm is she was pregnant again..
Her girls were 8 years old an bit of an age gap but Sarrah thought they would love another sister or brother..
After the doctor she had to go do some shopping and pay some bills as Tobias was surposed to be on one of his business trips..And while she was shopping she thought the girls had been good this week so when she picked them up Sarrah brought them an icecream..

When she was driving into the driveway there was another car there it was Tobias sisters Natalies car she was quiet upset as she had found out from the private dick that Sarrah had hired to check up on Tobias that Tobias was screwing around with two other women..and Natalie had proof in her hot little hands...Some of the photos were quiet explict and Sarrah just threw up not on the photos luckily and any other female would rip them up but not Sarrah 'vengence is better served hot' so they say..what really pissed her off was that the women he was screwing were surposed to be her freinds ...Candy and Peggy..

The next day Sarrah cool, calm and collected called up her so called freinds and invited them around for an cuppa and an chat it would be one they wouldnt forget when the girls got there they were all smug and up themselves Sarrah said ' we are all happy' 'good' said Sarrah ' because you two an both are back stabbing bitches' Sarrah showed them the photos of course they denied it but photos dont lie...They were carrying on like pork chops Sarrah said ' theres the door dont let it hit you on the ass on the way out' Sarrah heard them talking to each other outside Candy said'we have to tell Tobias' they both nearly jumped out of there skin when Sarrah said 'go ahead tell the pompus ass, and while you are at it tell him iam getting an lawyer' Peggy said 'you know he aint going to like that' and Sarrah said'stiff sh.it then he shouldnt have taken his old boy out for an walk should he?'...'ohhh by the way just to ad wood to the fire tell him he is going to be an poppa again'

So off the two ex freinds went as fast as there legs could go and Sarrah went and rang an lawyer she found an lawyer by the name of Terri and thought she will do and she made an appointment for the next morning....she dropped the girls off at school and went straight to the lawyers with photos in hand when the lawyer saw them she said ' good lord' even to her they were bad ...Sarrah said' i want to file for an divorce and full custody of the girls'..
Terri said'i will get back to you in an couple of days' ..
When Sarrah had got back to her car she turned her cell phone back on and there were messages from Tobias going off his tree at her and telling her he wouldnt be home till night fall like Sarrah gave an toss...

It was about 9pm he walked in the door and Sarrah said 'dont even deny it you son of an bitch' Tobias could see Sarrah had bags packed and the girls were at Natalies place for the time being 'Iam taking the girls and we are going to an safe house ' Tobias said'i dont think so bitch' is that so' Sarrah said as she drew the curtain there was an ploice car waiting out the front to escort her ..and one of the police officers would stay with Tobias until she was gone..on the way the would swing by and Sarrah would pick up her girls from Natalies and then to the safe house ..

(To Be Continued).....

 

[ORANGATUANG]

An couple of months had gone by and Tobias had been served with the divorce papers and his lawyer Dovid had been to see him to see all was handled right Sarrah was aloud to in the company of her lawyer Terri go back to there home to get her most important belongings..When she and Terri got there Tobias was there with his lawyer and also an couple of police officers to keep the peace Sarrah wanted to get in and out as quickly as possible she could see the 'glare' he was giving her but that was just to prove what an 'dick' he is at times..as soon as she got what she wanted Tobias made sure what she took was hers and she was out of there...Tobias lawyer said'and where do you think you are going'?...'To follow her' Tobias said 'i dont think so' said his lawyer...'ok i will leave it at that for now' said Tobias ..

Sarrah got an phone call from Natalie she said' Tobias has still been having wild parties and even wilder women at the house' and Sarrah said ' So girl like i care' ...Sarrah and the girls had moved out of the safe house and into an single story flat ..Natalie and Terri and the police were the only people who knew where she lived Sarrah had taken the girls out of the school they were in as the head mistress said an couple of women had been asking about them Tobias once again to 'spineless' to do it himself...

Well the day had arrived for the court case and Sarrah was abit freaked out not knowing what the out come would be she thought the judge could go in favour of Tobias who knows?..As Sarrah and the girls and Terri walked in you couldnt miss that Sarrah was starting to show with her pregancy ..the girls were very clingy to there mum if she had her way her girls wouldnt even be at the court but its about the girls so Sarrah said to them that everything will be ok ...

It was an morning session so hopefully the judge is going to be in an good mood and it will all be done in one day..Sarrah became more concerned when the judge came out of his chambers it was an male all of an sudden Sarrah was thinking the worst..thinking he might side with Tobias..
As the morning wore on and Sarrah and Tobias got on the stand and there lawyers did there jobs the judge said he is adjourning the case until later today so we could actually all have an break..the girls were hungry so Sarrah went down to the tuck shop with Terri and the girls had some tucker..Sarrah wasnt feeling to well and she had to make an quick exit to the ladies to throw up..
Terri kept an eye on the girls and who turned up with his lawyer but Tobias the girls didnt leave Terri's side no matter how hard he tried to talk to his girls no way did they budge.Tobias asked 'where's there mother any way?' Terri said ' she's in the ladies' 'not that its any of your concern'...Sarrah came out of the ladies and went and asked 'can i have an glass of cold water thanks?' and sat back down the court clerk had found them and said the judge had made his ruling we all went into the courtroom to await judgement ..
The judge said to Tobias 'iam shocked at you sir,an family is an sacred thing and you had to go and stuff that up' 'what would have happened if your girls had walked in on you with an woman/women?..No i cant see this is an healthy situation' there fore iam awarding your wife full custody'...Sarrah said 'excuse me your honour but i prefer Sarrah' 'point taken' the judge said...the judge added 'if Tobias got his act together in the next 6 months he would consider his ruling but until then he is too have NO CONTACT at all with his girls or his child yet to be born' Tobias yelled out 'No one is going to stop me' in closing while Tobias was still going on and on the judge asked 'when are you due, Sarrah' and she replied in 3 months your honour' 'and may i ask what you are having?' ' thats ok its an BOY'...
Case Closed---------( NOT BLOODY LIKELY)...(To Be Continued)..

 

[Anneliese]

Good writing Heather as always!!!

Thanks for including me Mistress, hey?? Hope he got enough stamina for all of us???????????

 

[Anneliese]

Can't wait for the rest of the story.................................

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Hell anneliese the fun hasnt begun yet ..'Bad Blood'(Bad Blood)continues.....

The weeks seemed to drag on for poor Sarrah at least her girls were happy at there new school Terri had become an real good friend and Natalie grew closer too..Time was here for Sarrah to have junior she rang Terri who luckily had an couple of days off and asked her 'get here now' Terri only lived 5 minutes from Sarrah while she was waiting for Terri to arrive Sarrah rang Natalie and asked'can you please pick up the girls from school this afternoon?' 'No worries said Natalie..

While waiting for Terri outside with her bag and that Tobias right hand man Tony drove past not knowing that is where Sarrah was living it was just by chance..Tony stopped just up the road from Sarrah's place and waited when Terri had arrived Tony followed them luckily the hospital wasnt far and once there Tony phoned Tobias and told him 'Sarrah's at the hospital' Tobias said' iam busy right now interviewing two more guys ' 'just hang around there and try not to be seen by them' he said...

Sarrah had know that Tobias was into the mob and all there unsavoury doings...thats another reason she wanted there girls out of there ..

Any way it sounded like Sarrah's son wasnt going to wait he had enough of his free board and lodgings..Terri was in the delivery room for support and Natalie was in the waiting rooms with the girls awaiting news...with in an hour he had arrived with everything in its place in other words perfect...
Tobias had rang up his lawyer and asked 'can you meet me at the hospital,i want to see my son?'..Dovid said ' ok but dont even go into the hospital till i get there undertsand?''ok ' said Tobias' i will be there in half an hour' Dovid said..

True to his word Dovid was there in half an hour it was Tobias who was running late just typical !!!..When they got to the hospital door Natalie noticed them and said to the security 'there here' and Dovid had explained that Tobias wanted to see his son and had cleared it through the judge who handled this case the judge had said he couldnt deny him seeing his son ..
'Iwant to see my son'Tobias demanded just as he had said that Sarrah came out of the lift in an wheelchair straight from the delivery room ..'you can see him but only through the glass'said Sarrah 'no closer'...

Tobias didnt like that at all he became irrate because he couldnt get his way but thats just like him..sulks like an child..The security were getting abit itchy toed and asked Tobias to leave but of course he had to have the last word
'no way are you going to just be rid of me Sarrah' 'you belong to me always'...Sarrah said 'get this jerk out of my face before i bitch slap him' Sarrah said'dont think just becuase i have just had an baby i cant do it, think again'...
as he was walking out he said' thats what i love about you girl you spunk'' yeah dont worry guys iam leaving but dont think this over Sarrah not by an long shot'...

NOW THE STORY REALLY BEGINS.....

Sarrah was aloud to go home only after 3 days in the hospital she had nothing to worry about as Natalie and Terri were taking turns looking after the girls..When Sarrah had got home from the hospital there were an few other friends there to surprise her with an little party her son was an very good sleeper just as well with all the ohhs and ahhs over bubs..Sarrah went and put her son in his crib he wasnt even wet so she didnt bother waking him ...after settling him down she said to her friends'thanks for all your support through this trying time and iam so blessed too' 'but you will all have to excuse me as iam going to have an nice cool shower and then i will be down'...
As the bathroom was fogging up an message had appeared on the mirror it said'I will be watching you' some how Tobias or one of his henchman Vino or Dean hell it could have been Tony his lawyer had got in and left the message
when Sarrah went down stairs she told Terri and Natalie and Natalie said 'My brother is an prick' Sarrah said'what you know this now' and they all laughed...
Sarrah said 'if he wants an war then he has got it'...Natalie said 'aint you worried girl' 'No' said Sarrah' one of these days he will push to far then well thats when there will be no holes barred'...
Terri heard the bubs crying and went and got him he was soaking wet and hungry so Sarrah fedhim and bathed and changed him and no sooner she done all that he was asleep again..
The day had soon turned into night and Terri had to go as she had an really early clients appointment in the morning and Natalie was just abit tipsy so she wasnt going any way except to bed in the spare room which had an nice sofa bed...so it was lights out for every body and terri bid them all bye until tommorrow some time....

(To Be Continued)...

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Sarrah was woken by her son crying 'blimey' she said its 8.15 and her girls were already up and ready for school Natalie made sure they were she was up early had an bad dream and just couldnt get back to sleep so Natalie said'dont worry girl i willtake them to school catch you later'..'ok ' Sarrah said.So Sarrah got her son and changed and bathed him and of course he needed to be fed..she was just about to relax for an bit and the phone rang it was Terri's office the receptionst asked'have you heard from Terri?' No' said Sarrah 'she had an early appointment with an client thats all i know' the girl said 'well she didnt show, can you please contact me if you hear from her thanks?' No worries Sarrah said...
Sarrah was abit concerned so she rang Terri's cell phone and it rang through to her message machine.'hi girl when you get this message please phone me' Sarrah said..

Sarrah had an few errands to run and then she was going back to her place when she got in the door she popped on the tv and an newsbreak had come on saying that an car had gone off thr road and the driver was killed..Sarrah's blood ran cold and she rang Natalie but she was not available so she took her son down to the local police station and said' i would like to speak to the police officer in charge of this accident' She didnt have to wait long and an officer came out and took her into her office and told Sarrah what had happened there were two sets of tyre tracks skidding on the road and Terris were the ones that were pushed by another car down the embankment the officer said'if its any comfort she died instantly' and Sarrah replied 'there's no comfort in death'...and walked out visibly upset..
When she had got back to her car she put her son back in his car -cot and and when she got behind the wheel and pulled down her sun shade an note fell out and it read 'one down' when she looked up she saw an car take off quickly Tobias had given Vino and Dean there first task....
To gutless to do it himself...he thinks he is above the law well we will just see wont we...he doesnt know Sarrah's law..

When she was on her way home she came across the car that sped away earlier she parked an bit back from it and she saw Tobias walk out and get into the car she started her car up and drove past slowly just to intimidate him its was Vino and Dean she had her window down abit and he was yelling at them she was so cool and calm and just drove off calmly ...
When she had got back to her place Natalie was there and was very upset looks like she had heard ..she had been drinking and Sarrah said'where are the girls' 'dont worry there at an sleep over ' Natalie said..
Natalie was so pissed off she wanted to go give her brother an piece of her mind but Sarrah being the girl she is convinced her not too..at least not tonight..ok?..'Dont worry girl let the prick stew in his own juices' said Sarrah..

Tobias had thought that he would have heard from Sarrah or Natalie for sure but guess he was wrong..
On the day of Terri's funeral Tobias had the nerve to show up like an bad penny un-invited he wasnt in the crowd he was to pussy to do that no he was over the other side of the road looking from afar..of course he had to have his henchman with him and Tony his right hand man but where was Dovid?..
Natalie saw him and was going to go over and make an scene but Sarrah stopped her ..and being the smart ass he is he put his arms out like he wanted an hug..not bloody likely more like an boot up the jinker would be more suitable..Sarrah thought..Tobias could see that Sarrah had his kids with her and he was about to come over when Tony said' dont be so stupid, she is just being an bitch be patient Tobias ' Tony said...

(To Be Continued)..

 

[stevenseagalfan.]

hi Orangatuang/Heather,

first thanks for including me to! but I have a question about the character!
Is Vino a man or a woman?(I hope its a woman)

And i have a great Idea for you to.
If i was you, i give this script to Steven Seagal him self so that we all can act
in this movie for real ( i hope you like this idea)
Let me know what you think of it.
And maybe it's also a big comeback to for Steven Seagal as a great Actor.(we hope so)
A movie of hi's fans and with hi's fans, sounds good i hope!!!!!

BUT IT'S JUST A IDEA!!!!

take care stevenseagalfan.:apeace:

 

[ORANGATUANG]

Holy crap!!! are you an girl?..stevenseagalfan i didnt realise this but i cant go back and change what i have written it will stuff it up soooo yes Vino in this case is an female ok?..thanks for throwing me an 'curlie' one...Thats an nice thought but i dont think this story is any where near what steven would consider ...but thanks for saying so iam glad some one thinks its ok...i will write some more later today or tommorrow...i have an humungus headache at the moment so until then bye..