This Is Another One Of My Storylines....
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ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Just "one" less now.....
Amos Stevens
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What if that species of bug is near extinction Heather?
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
More like me...be extint ....just think one person here would just love that..all i have to say to her is "bite me"...
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
My next story is in the works i got "bored" the other day and got thinking..Its called
"TRUST"...just an continuation of "Eye of the dragon" sort of....not an very imaginative
title but the storyline is good..it will be here soon?.....
"TRUST"...just an continuation of "Eye of the dragon" sort of....not an very imaginative
title but the storyline is good..it will be here soon?.....
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
But of course Serena ...it will start the new year off with an "bang" soooooooo to speak thats all iam saying.. dont want to spoil it all together..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Ok here it is.."TRUST" Written by Heather.K.Crisp...(Orangatuang).......
Time had gone by so fast since Tai and i put Benjamin and his brats in prison..Tai and i
had become partners in her uncles resturant and i went through all the right chanels to become an citizen as i had an job there and loved the people around me...
From time to time we would get an letter from Benjamin saying how sorry he was for what he had done and so one saying that he had become reformed...
How can an rat change?..they cant..
The warden of the prison rang us and said that Benjamin was getting out in an couple of weeks and he wanted to see us just to make sure that what we had to do if he had any sort of revenge planned...
As we got to the prison i felt really uneasy but prisons would do that to any one i guess we got to the gate and told the guard that we were here to see the warden and he rang to check and after it was confirmed he let us in...
Another guard escorted Tai and i to the wardens office and we were announced he told us that Benjamin had seemed to have changed for the better in prison and he was an marvel prisoner..and his hoons were behaving themselves too....
After he explained everything to us he called the guard in and he escorted Tai and i back to the front gate as we were going through the walkway Tai said "sh.it there he is"...sure enough he was out in the yard with his hoons doing some exercise he was only wearing an black singlet and jeans and as much as i hated to admit it he looked good..He saw Tai and i and he came over and he was talking to us as we were walking along, the other side of the fence thank god.
He said to me " Hey babe wanna take an walk on the wild side"..and yelled out to Tai and said " did you get my last letter"...we just kept walking with the guard and he let us out..."Ok" what is this letter"?...sorry letters he is talking about"..she said " i didnt want to tell you because we made an agreement not to associate with him".."well thats the whole ideaTai what were you thinking"..I said to her "what about trust girl"
"i thought i could trust you, we made an pact not to talk or see him ever again, what happened to that"?...then she dropped an real bombshell on me she was "pregnant" and guess who the daddy was?....she said that one day she went to the prison just to talk to him and find out why he did what he did to her uncle and she was abit tippsy and he took advantage of that and had sex with her so now she has to deal with her pregnancy....I couldnt be angry with her for long because she is my freind and i love her....and an abortion is totally OUT of the question she is having this baby it will brought up with out an father ..every child should know its dad but in this case no way.He knew she was pregnant and he is just playing on her mind but it wont work with me...Any way thats what was up with Tai ..i said "girl you should have told me sooner".. but i told her that "dont worry i wont let anything happen to you or your baby"..
I started looking around for another place for Tai and i to live and i only had one week to do it...Tai had to sell her uncles resturant but it had to be done an really nice gentleman brought it..and her uncles sword was brought by an museum for one hundred thousand yen....so that prick will never get his hands on that it in an vault ..
Found it!!!!..its an two bedroom home spacious back yard and even an pool room which i love to play....we moved in the next day and it was already furnished .....
The warden of the prison rang me and told me that Benjamin had been realised form prison and his hoons with him he was picked up by another guy...
An few weeks had passed by and i had to take Tai to the hospital for an checkup on junior...i told her that i would be back in an couple of hours because i had to go to do some shopping i was driving around looking for an park and found one ..locked up my car and went into the shopping centre when buggar me if i didnt see him all by himself
he was near the vegetable stalls i moved quick smart out of there..as i looked back he must have seen me through the glass windows he just jumped over the turnstiles and out the doors, but lucky for me the door slammed into him and through him back giving
me time to get into the car and move....as i was leaving i saw him the rear veiw mirror
getting into his car and soon was coming up quickly behind me ..it was on i was going along diving in and out of traffic and so was he it was getting hairy one of my tyres blow and i lost control and spin, spin ,spin.....my car ended up on its side and it was leaking fuel quickly he came and he pulled me out and carried me off ..and shortly after up she went the car blew sky high and landed on the medium strip no one was hurt and luckily no other cars were involved...meanwhile iam trying to get away from him even though he has just saved my life ..he tried to tell me that he had changed and i thought no way once an crim always an crim.....i kicked him in the shins and ran across the medium strip and into an park...i ducked into the ladies loo..no way can he come in here..he did though there was another lady in the loo and told him to get out
While i was there i rang the hospital and spoke to Tai and told her the situation and it was getting dark too..Tai said " girl i can catch an taxi home" "ok" i said ..i looked at my watch and it was nearly 10pm and Tai was well and truly home i came out of the loo and walked across the park he came out of the bush's and grabbed me i kicked and bit but that didnt do much to him only made him more determined to do the "wildthing"
He pulled me along and forced me into his car which had locks that could only be opened by an alarm and he had it didnt he ..he started to touch me in places i didnt want him to i pawed at him and scratched him but that only made him more turned on
before i knew it he had total control of me and while my mind was saying "no" my body was saying "yes"..i surcumb to his advances and after he was done he said" you never know Tai might have an playmate" ....which could be an strong possiblity as he didnt wear an condom and i had just gotten over that time of the month...sh.it!!!!!
When i had got home Tai was beside herself not knowing were i was and she had called the police and had an search party out for me because they knew Benjamin was out of prison too...
As the months passed Tai had an little girl named Josie..and me well i had an liitle girl too named Maggie...and Benjamin well he just vanished ..maybe an leopard can change its spots.....The End...
Cast of characters..............................
Steven Seagal....Benjamin Tanner..
Heather Crisp........Sally Wild.....
Anita Anerson ......Tai......
Time had gone by so fast since Tai and i put Benjamin and his brats in prison..Tai and i
had become partners in her uncles resturant and i went through all the right chanels to become an citizen as i had an job there and loved the people around me...
From time to time we would get an letter from Benjamin saying how sorry he was for what he had done and so one saying that he had become reformed...
How can an rat change?..they cant..
The warden of the prison rang us and said that Benjamin was getting out in an couple of weeks and he wanted to see us just to make sure that what we had to do if he had any sort of revenge planned...
As we got to the prison i felt really uneasy but prisons would do that to any one i guess we got to the gate and told the guard that we were here to see the warden and he rang to check and after it was confirmed he let us in...
Another guard escorted Tai and i to the wardens office and we were announced he told us that Benjamin had seemed to have changed for the better in prison and he was an marvel prisoner..and his hoons were behaving themselves too....
After he explained everything to us he called the guard in and he escorted Tai and i back to the front gate as we were going through the walkway Tai said "sh.it there he is"...sure enough he was out in the yard with his hoons doing some exercise he was only wearing an black singlet and jeans and as much as i hated to admit it he looked good..He saw Tai and i and he came over and he was talking to us as we were walking along, the other side of the fence thank god.
He said to me " Hey babe wanna take an walk on the wild side"..and yelled out to Tai and said " did you get my last letter"...we just kept walking with the guard and he let us out..."Ok" what is this letter"?...sorry letters he is talking about"..she said " i didnt want to tell you because we made an agreement not to associate with him".."well thats the whole ideaTai what were you thinking"..I said to her "what about trust girl"
"i thought i could trust you, we made an pact not to talk or see him ever again, what happened to that"?...then she dropped an real bombshell on me she was "pregnant" and guess who the daddy was?....she said that one day she went to the prison just to talk to him and find out why he did what he did to her uncle and she was abit tippsy and he took advantage of that and had sex with her so now she has to deal with her pregnancy....I couldnt be angry with her for long because she is my freind and i love her....and an abortion is totally OUT of the question she is having this baby it will brought up with out an father ..every child should know its dad but in this case no way.He knew she was pregnant and he is just playing on her mind but it wont work with me...Any way thats what was up with Tai ..i said "girl you should have told me sooner".. but i told her that "dont worry i wont let anything happen to you or your baby"..
I started looking around for another place for Tai and i to live and i only had one week to do it...Tai had to sell her uncles resturant but it had to be done an really nice gentleman brought it..and her uncles sword was brought by an museum for one hundred thousand yen....so that prick will never get his hands on that it in an vault ..
Found it!!!!..its an two bedroom home spacious back yard and even an pool room which i love to play....we moved in the next day and it was already furnished .....
The warden of the prison rang me and told me that Benjamin had been realised form prison and his hoons with him he was picked up by another guy...
An few weeks had passed by and i had to take Tai to the hospital for an checkup on junior...i told her that i would be back in an couple of hours because i had to go to do some shopping i was driving around looking for an park and found one ..locked up my car and went into the shopping centre when buggar me if i didnt see him all by himself
he was near the vegetable stalls i moved quick smart out of there..as i looked back he must have seen me through the glass windows he just jumped over the turnstiles and out the doors, but lucky for me the door slammed into him and through him back giving
me time to get into the car and move....as i was leaving i saw him the rear veiw mirror
getting into his car and soon was coming up quickly behind me ..it was on i was going along diving in and out of traffic and so was he it was getting hairy one of my tyres blow and i lost control and spin, spin ,spin.....my car ended up on its side and it was leaking fuel quickly he came and he pulled me out and carried me off ..and shortly after up she went the car blew sky high and landed on the medium strip no one was hurt and luckily no other cars were involved...meanwhile iam trying to get away from him even though he has just saved my life ..he tried to tell me that he had changed and i thought no way once an crim always an crim.....i kicked him in the shins and ran across the medium strip and into an park...i ducked into the ladies loo..no way can he come in here..he did though there was another lady in the loo and told him to get out
While i was there i rang the hospital and spoke to Tai and told her the situation and it was getting dark too..Tai said " girl i can catch an taxi home" "ok" i said ..i looked at my watch and it was nearly 10pm and Tai was well and truly home i came out of the loo and walked across the park he came out of the bush's and grabbed me i kicked and bit but that didnt do much to him only made him more determined to do the "wildthing"
He pulled me along and forced me into his car which had locks that could only be opened by an alarm and he had it didnt he ..he started to touch me in places i didnt want him to i pawed at him and scratched him but that only made him more turned on
before i knew it he had total control of me and while my mind was saying "no" my body was saying "yes"..i surcumb to his advances and after he was done he said" you never know Tai might have an playmate" ....which could be an strong possiblity as he didnt wear an condom and i had just gotten over that time of the month...sh.it!!!!!
When i had got home Tai was beside herself not knowing were i was and she had called the police and had an search party out for me because they knew Benjamin was out of prison too...
As the months passed Tai had an little girl named Josie..and me well i had an liitle girl too named Maggie...and Benjamin well he just vanished ..maybe an leopard can change its spots.....The End...
Cast of characters..............................
Steven Seagal....Benjamin Tanner..
Heather Crisp........Sally Wild.....
Anita Anerson ......Tai......
Amos Stevens
New Member
oh relish,I thought for a moment it was a sequel with little me in it...well when you bring Benjamin back again remember ME,I will kick his butt for you & Tai 
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Ok amos...i have already got an part for you ...you should know by now or tommorow what it is?...but you will have an different name as an couple of the guys here will..it is the sequel to "TRUST".....I have already started on the sequel on paper it should be here in the next day or three..who said women can only do one thing at once i shall kick there ass...before i even sit down and come here i do all my chores and what ever ..but when school starts back for me in just over 4 weeks that might slow me down abit..but just an "wee" bit...
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
I surpose i can tell those who are genuine about reading my stories the title its
"TRUST:THE BETRAYAL"........coming soon..
"TRUST:THE BETRAYAL"........coming soon..
KATHYPURDOM
Steven Seagal Fan
Heather that story was great.
I am waiting for that next installment. You do write interesting stories. I can't seem to pull myself away from the pc when I'm reading them.
They seem to get more and more interesting. I will be waiting for the next one to come up.
I am waiting for that next installment. You do write interesting stories. I can't seem to pull myself away from the pc when I'm reading them.They seem to get more and more interesting. I will be waiting for the next one to come up.
Too cool, Heather! 
Well done! I was glad to sit back and read this after the hectic last couple of days and thoroughly enjoyed it. And I liked that little surprise ending--Maggie! Now another good reason for a sequel! 
Good job, Heather! Thanks for not making us wait until after the New Year.
Well done! I was glad to sit back and read this after the hectic last couple of days and thoroughly enjoyed it. And I liked that little surprise ending--Maggie! Now another good reason for a sequel! Good job, Heather!
Thanks for not making us wait until after the New Year.
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Thanks girls i have always loved the name Maggie Serena if i ever had an girl that would be her name...iam not saying much more because i dont want to spoil it..till then ..