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Dark Rainbow sequel

#2
Thats great ..iam fiddling around with my next one on paper at the moment some times its hard to get in the 'ZONE' .. in other words i get abit stuck i think the big nobs call that writters block dont they?..good to see you back by the way..
 

Anneliese

Happy go Lucky
#4
sydneyalias1325;198874 said:
I know I've posted the whole story of Dark Rainbow on a thread last year and I'm here to let you know that I've been working on Dark Rainbow 2. I started writing the sequel last February and it is on halfway to completion.

After so many crazy and intense stuffs that occured in the first, I am sure many of you were left with mixed feelings and some of you might feel that there was not enough time to understand what a specfic character wanted to do or something to fix/deal with something that bothers the character in the story.

Don't worry, in the sequel, there are more things that will be explored through because there are few things that would have to tie up part of loose storylines from the first.

If you're really curious what the main plot of the sequel would be then let me know. For your information, it is not a continuation from the first because I never intended to do a sequel to Dark Rainbow but most of characters and story aspects will be still there.

I probably would get the story done just in time for the holidays (around Thanksgiving between Christmas).
Looking forward to it!!
 
#5
Update on this sequel...


The story is turning out to be really GREAT so far and in part of me is telling me that this one might be even better than the first. It should be interesting to see what comes out because few of my friends read my work in progress who also read the first, told me that they are liking this one better than the first and I'm not so sure why.

So I took some look over at the story overall and I think I'm getting to the point where I think this one definitely will be better than the first which most sequels failed to do so and it should be a GREAT thing. Terminator 2, Godfather 2 and Aliens are the movies that most people are claiming to be the best sequel but to me, I don't really think it's the best sequel in some other ways because most sequels tend to be 2 times bigger on action or special effects or whatever there is but except for Godfather 2, it's an continuation of the first.

What I feel that Dark Rainbow 2 may be different than those movies and other sequels is that it does not go 2 times bigger of anything but to be a stand alone of its own.

In this one, it doesn't pick up where the first one left off where Jack, Haley and Julie finally got reunited at the end of story after a revelation of Jack's death wife- Leanne. The story picks up like few weeks later but it is not where it opens at. It opens in a complete different direction like not what you would expect but it helps you to know what to expect things that will be lay out for the rest of the story, pretty much similar to what I did with the funeral part in the opening of the first where Jack encounters Cheyenne where it showed what you expect of what the whole story will be about.

From so far what I wrote, the excitement and thrilling moments seem like it couldn't stop since it's still being carried over from the first and it still keeps going but you'll be in for another fun ride! Brace yourself for a very wild ride during the 2nd half of the story because there will be a nice trend of suspense and action sequences starting from the cementary scene to the carnival scene (a huge action scene in that part where you will get your heads spinning) to a final confronation at a glass looking-like house scene, more like a large garden/green house which will look larger on scale than the first as in similar fashion of from airport scene to car chase to underground subway scene from the first.


Here's what the sequel will be about...

After the father (Jack) is reunited with his long lost daughter (Julie) but seems feeling strange about his daughter's mother (Haley) especially with her ongoing activities until he is being chased by couple of pimps only because they want to take his daughter away to bring her back to mother safely.



Here's the opening scene, just to knock your socks off and see what you'd think but it's not that a big spoiler on what will happen next especially with what happened in the first because that won't occur until next part after the opening =)


"Dark Rainbow 2"


In a small isolated room, it is so dark and nothing can be seen except a lamp being lit. The camera swifts and turns slowly toward the lamp. A man sitting near the table is revealed and it is a black man wearing a king crown-like hat. He is wearing fancy gold jewelry around his neck and wrists. His name is Nino Williams.


There is another black man sitting opposite Nino and his name is Arvin Dawson. He wears sporty-like type of clothes.


He says, “I want to kill this son of a bitch right now!”


“I know you do but we have to do this in my way. You got that?”


“Why? And for what?”


“Just trust me, man. You want to get in trouble, wouldn’t you?”


“I don’t care! I want to get this over with!”


Nino grabs Arvin’s neck and slams his face onto the table. He screams, “Open your ****ing eyes! I know you want to get your girl back but we have to do this in a right way, do you?”


Arvin’s nose is bleeding and says, “**** you, man! Why did you do that for?”


“For not listening to my advice so you wouldn’t risk yourself into a big trouble. You gotta keep this cool and low down.”


“Mother****er and you better **** off!”


“Listen to me, nigga…do you want to live off a better life?”


“Yes.”


“Let’s go.”


The camera turns to start following Arvin and Nino when they step out from the room.


Down in the hallway, the walls are very teal blue and neon green and it is so bright but the camera continues to follow them. By the time, they reach to a large area in the warehouse and there is a person being tied up on a chain around the body including the neck. The person has a blank winter ski mask so it wouldn’t reveal who the person is.


The camera moves up toward the hang person in a quick movement then it is on the floor moving in a small circle slightly left in a wide shot showing Arvin and Nino walking toward the location of the person is hanging at.


Nino says, “We will win, you bitch.” He shoots the chain and the person falls onto the floor with a boom. There is dust and some broken woods flying over after the body falls with a heavy thud. The camera is moving toward the person’s mask and translates into black.


At night time, the camera moves down toward a woman from the street light and begins following her. The lady is wearing a short black skirt and a white shirt that can easily expose her body. There is a car passing by on the street but the lady waves at the car. The car pulls over and the camera slowly turns when the lady leans over to the window of the car to talk to a guy.


“Can I catch a ride with you?”


“Sure, hop in.” She gets in the car and they leave off.


Few blocks down, the lady says, “Are you looking for fun?”


“What do you mean for fun?”


“Well, let’s say…do you want a head or to ****?”


“Both. And what do you charge?”


“$100 for both. Do you have a place?”


“Yes, I do. We can go to my place.”


They pull over to the guy’s apartment and she follows him. The camera pulls up to the roof of the apartment and turns slowly. There is a man standing at the roof and watching some prostitutes walking around the street asking for sex and drugs.


The man is Nino Williams and he pounds a pack of his cigarettes onto his hand palms to pop out a cigarette. He picks it up with his mouth and lit.


He says, “What a beautiful place to live in, those women is so wonderful. I adore them so much; this is why I pump my own big and beautiful cock so they can enjoy play with.” He cackles.


He walks down to the street to meet prostitutes. Three prostitutes walk toward Nino and grab around his arms to walk together. They start laughing and performing sexual acts around him to attract the drivers. They walk to an alley, a dark alley where no one can see what they do.


In the alley, Nino gives them some crack and cocaine to get them high so they all can have sex with him. The camera slowly rotates around the prostitutes while they are smoking crack and sniffing cocaine. Lastly, Nino sniffs up the remaining cocaine to get high and the camera turns upward to do a full sight onto Nino and the prostitutes while the camera is facing down then everything turns into white.

About twenty-four years ago, at a field, everything is so bare but filled with long grass and the outside is very windy. The camera moves around through long grass toward a man who is kneeling down on the grass. He has tux on and is dressed as best man for the wedding. He seems feeling so down and depressed.


to be continued...
 
#5
Update: The story isn't done yet and I haven't bothered getting around to it for past few weeks but here's more, just to keep things going...I'll post it later tonight.
 
#5
sydneyalias1325;201306 said:
Update: The story isn't done yet and I haven't bothered getting around to it for past few weeks but here's more, just to keep things going...I'll post it later tonight.
oh yes i know how you feel when you just havent got that up and go to write thats it ..i do like reading what you write and keep up the good work.. that nexts tory i was going to write thats not going to be happening i have got rid of that one all together but iam sure i will think of some thing else ..after i have finished the one iam doing now iam letting the cogs have an break as i have to use the old grey matter for better things like my assignments at my school etc..plus let some one else have there fun in the sun for an change (thats you)..
 
#6
About twenty-four years ago, at a field, everything is so bare but filled with long grass and the outside is very windy. The camera moves through long grass toward a man who is kneeling down on the grass. He has tux on and is dressed as best man for the wedding. He seems feeling so down and depressed.


Another man who approaches to Jack is Jack’s best friend named Scott Spooner. Jack is kneeling down and keeps staring at the ground.


“Jack, what’s wrong buddy?” Jack isn’t answering him.


“Well, you need to say something and is something bothering you?”


“Why do everything bad always happening to me? I mean look at you, we just kindled our friendship after not being in touch for almost a decade.”


“Don’t tell me that something has to do with Cheyenne or
Haley.”


“What makes you think this has to do with Cheyenne?”


“Well Jack, I knew you used to like her.”


“Yeah, I know I used to like her but that doesn’t have to do with everything. Don’t make me remind you that Haley is somewhat like her in some ways.”


“Jack, I know. I know. Can we finish this once we get over with the wedding ceremony?”


“Yeah, let’s go.” He gets up and leaves with Scott.


At a church, the camera moves down from a cross that sits on the top of the church toward a humvee limo and slowly turns toward the entrance of the church. It begins following the bride while she is walking down the long aisle to meet her newly husband.


She reaches toward her newly wed husband and the reverend. The husband slowly opens up the bride to reveal the face and it shows Cheyenne. Then the camera turns and moves to show the line of best men and bridesmaids. Then the camera pulls back to show the whole church while Cheyenne and Daniel while they are making their vows for marriage.


Few hours later, there is a wedding reception at a fire hall and the camera travels through bunch of people while they are dancing, picking up foods and drinks. It shows Daniel pouring a large amount of beer onto several cups that people make a toast and the camera turns to continue travel around toward a private lounge when it follows the white wedding dress walking with someone. They sneak in the lounge and they check to make sure no one is there.


Cheyenne says, “Hey handsome, what’s your name?”


“Issac and what’s yours?”


“Cheyenne and nice to meet you.” She blushes lightly.


“Nice to meet you and what are we doing here?”


“Can we **** in here?”


“Why do you ask me that? You just got married and you have to go behind your newly husband’s back?”


“So? I don’t love him and I’m just using him for everything so I can take half of everything.”


“What the hell are you thinking? Don’t you even think this is so wrong?”


“Yes, I know this is wrong. However, I married him because of my son. Dominic just turned one and I don’t really love his father at all. He has been abusing on me and Dominic physically.”


“I understand that, Cheyenne but why did you marry him in first place then?”


“I just told you, just to take half of everything that he has for Dominic’s sake. Can we just **** before someone sees us?”


Issac pulls his pants and tears up Cheyenne’s underwear. Both of them get so hot and begin panting. They feel so much desire for more sexual so Cheyenne lends over on a table and she puts her left arm onto Isaac’s left arm. She squeezes harder and says, “More…more…more.” As she continues panting.


Few minutes later, at the reception, Daniel is smiling and talking to people but he begins wondering where Cheyenne is at so he looks at Jack and Scott. Jack and Scott approach Daniel and Jack says, “What’s up?”


“Have you seen Cheyenne anywhere?”


“Not that I know of, let’s go and look for her.”


They start searching then they reach toward the door of the lounge room. The music begins playing lightly and Jack opens the door. He gets stunned when he sees Cheyenne is having sex with Issac. He turns Daniel and says, “You won’t believe this…”


Daniel steps in and his mouth falls open when he sees Cheyenne riding on Issac on the bar counter in the lounge room. Suddenly, he feels so hurt inside himself but he gets pissed and starts crying at the same time. He walks away feeling so empty and he walks off nowhere.


Cheyenne hurries put on her underwear and starts running after Daniel. Issac walks out in slow motion as he passes Jack and Scott. Jack looks at Issac like he wants to warn him about Cheyenne.


Jack says to Issac “Why did you do her?”


“She attempted me to and she requested for getting some.”


“Yeah but that’s how ladies are. They are so good at convincing men for sex. You should have known that better but I’m warning you for this once don’t be with her and don’t marry her.” Issac leaves off without saying anything but he did hear what Jack say.


At outside of fire hall, Daniel is standing under a small tent with a porch and is crying. Cheyenne walks approaching him slowly and whispers, “Daniel?” Daniel refuses to respond.


“Daniel? Please talk to me.” He still refuses to answer. She tries to hug him and he walks back. He finally turns toward her and says, “Why did you do it?”


“Daniel, please listen to me and I know I was stupid. I’m so sorry that I’ve ruined our wedding day.”


“Tell me this Cheyenne, why should I be listening to you? Only because you love me? What the **** are you thinking? Yeah, sure you were stupid but that doesn’t change for who you are!”


“Come on, Daniel. I still love you and I want to stay with you.”


“No…no…**** you, Cheyenne!”


He walks off and continues walking nowhere to be found. The camera turns toward Cheyenne and she collapse down onto the ground and starts sobbing. Then the camera moves up overhead her and continues to pull away and everything turns into white.
 
#6
Present day, in Los Angeles, the sun is about to set. There is a dog running down to the beach from the porch. A fifteen years old girl named Julie Lovejoy runs toward the dog and calling, “Minky”. The kind of dog is a chocolate lab mix type. Julie pets her and gives her a kiss. Minky licks on her cheeks and lips.


Jack walks down to the beach toward his house and he sees Julie is playing with Minky. Minky knows Jack is coming and she runs toward him. She goes through between Jack’s legs and keeps wagging her tail. Julie walks toward him and Jack says, “Where’s your mother?”


“She said she had to do a quick run to the store to get few things.”


“Are you really sure about that?” He seems suspicious then he raises his eyebrows.


“Yeah, that’s what she told me.” They start walking back to the porch of Jack’s beach house. The music begins playing as the camera starts pulling away while they’re walking to the porch.


About an hour later, Julie’s mother named Haley arrives at Jack’s place as the camera turns when she gets out from her car to the trunk to collect shopping bags. The camera continues to follow her as she gets in the house toward the kitchen. She drops the bags on the floor in the kitchen.


Julie walks down from the stairs and approaches to Haley. She says, “Hey Mom, how’s shopping?”


“Pretty good and I got ourselves some dinner so we’re going to have a cookout. Where’s your Dad?”


“He’s in the shower.”


“All right.”


Couple of hours later, the camera starts rotating around Jack, Haley and Julie while they’re eating dinner outside at the porch.


Haley says to Jack “What do you really feel about the whole thing? I mean we are trying to reconnect with each other after everything that happened few weeks ago.”


“Honestly, I’m still trying to figure some things out. I mean I’m so glad that I found out that I have a daughter which I never knew about. And with you coming back into my life, I’m not so sure what to think about that despite to what happened in the past that caused us to be apart.”


“Jack…you haven’t gotten away from that thought, don’t you?”


“Well, I don’t.”


“Please, Jack. I need your help.”


“When we finally saw each other few weeks at that restaurant, didn’t you really think things would have been better?”


“At some point, yes.”


“To me, it won’t.”


“Why not?”


He gets up and walks down to the beach. He stares at the waves of the ocean and listen to the sound of the waves. Julie gets up and walks toward Jack at the beach and says, “Dad? Are you ok?”


“I don’t really have a good feeling about this especially about your mother.”


“Why would you feel this way?”


“I don’t know…something is telling me that something isn’t right around here.”

The camera turns toward Jack’s face slowly with suspense music playing as he looks back to his beach house staring at Haley. Haley is cleaning up the table. He turns back to Julie and says, “Hmm…maybe I shouldn’t tell you this right now, not when she is around.”


“I’ll call you tomorrow once I’m done with shopping with my friends. Then we can set up a meet, sounds good?”


“Yeah, sounds perfect.” Both of them walk back in the house. Haley says, “Jack, are you all right?”


“I don’t know.” As he walks by and sits down in the living room. He grabs a picture that is standing on the coffee table. Haley says to Julie, “Can you go upstairs, please?” Julie leaves upstairs. Haley follows him and sits down next to him.


“Jack, tell me. What’s bothering you?”


“Hmm…do you really want to know?”


“Why did I come back to you?”


“That’s what I’m asking, I’m just wondering why you came back to me.”


“Because I love you, Jack.”


“I don’t think I believe you.”


“Come on, Jack. Why do you have to think about the past that we’ve done?”


“****in’ Christ, Haley. Why don’t you even wake up?”


“Wake up on what?”


“Didn’t you lie to Candice?”


“Lied to her about what?”


“About what happened with us like why did we break it off?”


Haley gets quiet and feels guilty about it.


“Haley, you told Candice that you blew me off and you had feelings for your ex. And that didn’t exactly happen.”


“Jack, I know I’ve cheated on you before and I know that was the real reason you broke it off with me.”


“And don’t you even forget once you cheat, you’re always going to be a cheater. And you know what? Sometimes I even wonder if I’m the real father to Julie.”


“You are.”


“Let’s see about that.”


“Jack, I haven’t seen anyone after we were split and I raised Julie on my own.”


“Really? Yeah, I’m sure you did.” As he turns his face away and rolls his eyes.


Haley turns over and sits on Jack’s lap. “Jack…why are you acting this way to me?”


“Just tell me the truth. Why did you come back? Why did you want to find me? Don’t tell me this is because you still love me.”


Haley puts her hands onto Jack’s face then petting gently and gives him a kiss.


“I love you, Jack.”


Jack turns away and lies down on the couch. Haley gets up and walks away. The camera turns toward Jack then moves passing Jack toward a picture that is standing on the coffee table. It reveals a picture of Jack, Haley and Julie together that is taken two weeks ago.


The next day, outside at a park, the camera is moving toward Jack from the ground then turns facing Jack’s face then reveals Julie shows up next to Jack.


“Hey Dad…”


Jack looks at Julie and smiles. He says, “How’s shopping?”


“We had fun and I bought several new clothes, thanks for giving me some money to get more clothes.”


“Anytime.”


“So, since my Mother isn’t here and you told me last night that you were feeling something isn’t right going on around here, right?”


“Yeah.”


“What do you mean by that including my mother?”


“Well, for one thing, did you ever know why I wasn’t there when you were born?”


“No, my Mom never told me a thing about it. All she said was that she left you.”


“She hasn’t told you a thing but that? Well, you know that isn’t true. The real reason that I wasn’t with her when you were born was because she cheated on me and I can’t have a tolerance on cheating. So here’s a thing, I know she is seeing someone behind my back.”


Julie seems surprised and says, “Dad…how do you know that?”


“Just a hunch. And when someone cheats, will always be a cheater.”


“That’s true and what I’m about to tell you about her. You are right that she is seeing someone but…she has been with him since I was born.”


“Since you were born? Wow…why am I not that surprised about that? I just ****ing knew it.”


“But the real reason she came back to you is because I forced her to and I asked her to. I wanted to know who my real father is and I wanted to meet my father.”


Jack begins having small tears coming out from his eyes. He hugs and holds Julie. He whispers to her eyes “Thank you so much.”


“I love you, Dad. I’m very happy that I met you and to be honest, I want to live with you, not with my mother.”


“Why’s that?”


“You will not going to be pleased to hear this…the person that Haley has been seeing is named Arvin and he is a pimp. He turns her into a prostitute. Prostitution is her job. And also Arvin has been attempting to request me to have sex with him and my mother doesn’t even know about it. I’ve tried to tell her but she didn’t even listen to me but too busy to be in love with that sick pimp mother****er.”


“He asked you for sex? Requested you to have sex with him? Jesus Christ. I am going to take custody of you but the problem is we were never married.”


“We’ll find a way, don’t worry. Besides isn’t your friend, Scott, a cop?”


“Yeah, he is and I haven’t talked to him in long time but I’ll look into getting in touch with him especially with your situation.”


“And also she is working with another pimp named Nino. He and Arvin are best friends and they work with each other closely.”


“Nino Williams? I’ve heard of him. Why am I not too surprised with all of this? I mean, I don’t see a reason why your mother has to do that kind of stuff especially lying to me all about it.”


“Yeah, I don’t understand that.”


“I better hope she isn’t turning into next Cheyenne.”


“Cheyenne?”


“She used to be one of my good friends when I was young.”


“What happened?”


“Wait…you never knew what was going on around here?”


“No, my mother never told me a thing.”


“That’s funny because I do believe this is the reason why she is hiding her dark secret.”


“Probably.”


“Cheyenne died few weeks ago and she was killed by my ex wife named Leanne. But I never knew exactly why she did this. Then Leanne committed suicide because she wanted to prove the truth that she still loved me. I never believed her and she was gone for 3 years by faking her own death to get herself disappeared. When she came back and she finally admitted that she was seeing someone even already had kids with that person. And I never had a kid with her. The truth is that I never knew who the person was. Leanne didn’t tell me who the person was but I know I will find out who the person is. Honestly, I get this feeling that there is a big web that connects to each other and I think I might have an idea of who is really behind this whole thing.”


“That’s crazy, Dad. No wonder why you are fed up with lot of things because people cheat, betrays, backstabs and hurt each other for all wrong reasons.”


“I know and I am somewhat surprised that you haven’t had a slightest idea of what’s really going on.”


“I mean I did see some things but I never knew the reason why because my mother never told me anything about it. Even she wanted to hide the information about you.”


“Maybe I should follow her when she goes to work.”


“Yeah and that would be the only way that you can find out what she is really up to.”


“Don’t worry Julie, things will be okay.” He smiles.


The camera turns away from them and starts traveling through traffic of people walking at the park.
 
#6
At night, Haley is collecting her stuff to get ready for work and Jack says, “You got everything?”


“Yeah and thanks. I love you.” She approaches him and gives him a kiss. Then she leaves and the camera turns toward Jack’s face with sinister theme music playing. Jack nods lightly and smiles.


“You’ll be caught.”


Jack waits until Haley leaves the house then he walks out to the back of the house to get in his car to start following Haley.


On the street, while Jack is following Haley, he calls Scott from his cell.


“Hey Scott.”


“Jack! How have you been? It has been long time.”


“I know and I’ve been good but I’ve had better days.”


“Jack…what’s going on?”


“Well, I need your help but can you meet me somewhere?”


“Sure, where?”


“Down in an alley off from Sunset Blvd. Be there in about 10 minutes.”


“Ok, I’ll see you there.”


Jack sees Haley pulling in at a parking ramp building and he pulls over into an alley. He stays in the car while waiting for Haley to come out on the street.


Few minutes later, Haley finally comes down to the street and Jack widens his eyes. He says, “What the ****?” He sees Haley wearing a tight shirt and a skirt even she changes her makeup and fixes up her hair into a really sexy woman, like how a prostitute wears.


Jack gets out from his car and shuts the door quietly that no one can hear. He starts walking down the street following Haley. He feels his phone is vibrating and it is a text being sent from Scott saying “Where are you?”


Jack sneaks in a small spot of a building where Haley wouldn’t see when she looks what is behind her. Jack types in, “Meet me at the corner near the parking ramp building but leave your car behind.”


A little while later, Jack finally meets up Scott but Scott sees Haley continue walking down the street. Scott whispers, “What is she doing here?”


“I have no idea.” Then all of sudden, they both see a black man approaching toward Haley. Jack and Scott sneak around the corner and hugs against the building while trying to sneak out to see what Haley and the black man are doing.


The camera zooms toward Jack’s face in slow motion and he says, “Wait…isn’t that Arvin?”


“Arvin? Are you ****ing serious?”


“Pretty much like him.”


Scott looks closely to get a clear sight on the black man and it reveals to be Arvin. He says, “Yeah, it’s Arvin.”


“Goddamn it. I just knew it. She ****ing lied to me.”


“What do you mean you just knew it?”


“Well, about twenty years ago but I can’t remember how long ago it was. Anyway, I was the one who broke this off with her because she cheated on me. So I left her and I never got in touch with her anymore after that. So I don’t know what she has been doing during those times but all she said that she didn’t see anyone but raising Julie on her. I do find that story is bull****.”


“Exactly, it’s bull****.”


“So from what I figured, I do know she went back with her ex but I wasn’t sure which ex it was and at the end, I’m not so surprised on who the ex is.”


“Jack…you’re starting to worry me a little bit. I mean I can tell you are on the surge of getting revenge.”


“Well, at some point I do feel this way but I just can’t take this anymore and I’m tired of those mind **** games and being lied to. But there is a good reason to it.”


“What’s that?”


“My revenge is not for having Haley hurt me, the only thing about revenge that I want to do is get Julie to stay with me.”


“You mean taking custody of Julie?”


“Yeah, that’s why I need your help.”


“Jack…what happened?”


“Julie told me that her mother- Haley isn’t raising her properly and also Haley didn’t even believe her own daughter’s story especially when it came to the point of Arvin asked or requested Julie to have sex with him.”


“Oh good ****in’ Christ. That’s sick.”


“I know and don’t forget Arvin’s a sick ****.”


“I see where you want to go with this and I will help you to get through this, don’t worry.”


“Thanks buddy. I appreciate your help.”


“What’s scaring me the most of this is that Haley is turning into next Cheyenne.”


“Yeah, more likely. God, this isn’t even so nice! I mean why do I always have to be the person to get ****ed over?”


“Majority of people are dumb enough to do that.”


On the street, Arvin approaches Haley and gives her a make out like how much they miss each other. Haley holds his hand and start walking together.


Arvin says, “How’s Julie?”


“She’s pretty good and she finally met his father.”


“I really want to be the father.”


“I’m working on that but the problem is that Jack figured that I’m up to something.”


“God damn, how the hell did he figure that?”


“I have no clue. I still love him and I still want him but I want you more.”


“You want me more than Jack?”


“Yeah, you’ve been very helpful and I finally got to do what I enjoy the most to get
more money.”


“Do you ever think that Julie might be suspicious of what you’re doing for living?”


“I don’t know, I mean she is so much like Jack. She has similar psychic feelings as Jack does. Besides that, I really want to have kids with you.”


“Are you sure about that? If you still want Jack then why would you ask me about kids’ issue?”


“Look Arvin, I haven’t had a kid for almost sixteen years. And you never had a kid of your own.”


“I know but do you really think I have a time for that? I mean look at what we do and what would they think based on what we do?”


“I don’t know but I know Julie will never be too fond of this if she finds out.”


“Why do you think she never be too fond of this?”


“Come on Arvin, she’s so much like her father. Her morals, ethics and thoughts are pretty much same as his.”


“Let’s see what happens and we better do our job now.”


They walk into a building where Arvin lives in to meet Nino. In a stairway, Haley pushes Arvin against the wall and starts kissing him.


Back outside on the street, Scott and Jack start walking across the street to do some scooping around. Jack says to Scott “You go in and I’ll wait here. I mean I don’t want Haley to know that I’m here and she doesn’t know you.”


“Yeah, I’ll go in and check it out.” He enters the building and everything is so quiet but he hears light panting, groaning and moaning sounds. He keeps searching around the building then he approaches toward the stairway but he hears the sounds getting louder.


He opens the door quietly and slowly peeks up in the open space of stairway and he sees Haley bend over the pole in a far sight. Haley has her mouth open like she is moaning but Scott also sees her body is moving. He jumps out of stairway and hugs against the wall.


He whispers, “Damn, Jack ain’t going to like this.” He walks out of the building and sees Jack sitting down on the sidewalk with his head down onto his knees.


“Jack? Are you ok?”


Jack looks up at Scott and says, “Please don’t tell me that Arvin is ****ing Haley.”


“I hate to tell you this but they are.”


Jack gets really mad then gets up and starts walking back to the alley. Scott follows Jack and says, “Jack…Jack…talk to me. I know you’re fed up with everything and I understand that but you asked me for my help so you better start listening to me so you can do the right thing and finish this for good.”


“Thanks for being here with me. We will finish this for good.” They walk away from each other and leave.


Back inside the building, Haley and Arvin are getting dressed up then they walk up to meet Nino. In Nino Williams’ room, he is sitting down by his desk sorting out money that prostitutes made for him. He looks up at Arvin and Haley when they walk in the room.

“What’s up?”


Arvin says, “We just had our fun time.”


“Isn’t that great?”


“Oh ****in’ yeah, Haley is so awesome and she is so great at any positions.”


Nino looks at Haley and says, “Do you want to make extra money? You can go ahead.” He smiles at her.


“All right, thanks baby.” She approaches him and gives him a kiss. She walks toward Arvin to give him a kiss and she squeezes his butt. She walks out to the street.


The camera is facing Arvin’s right hand and starts turning around surrounding Nino and Arvin as in a circle when he sits down on the chair.


“Is everything all right between you and Haley?”


“Yeah but she told me that she still loves Jack and she rather to stay with me.”


“Do you still want her?”


“Yes, of course I do.”


“Then find a way to take her away from Jack. You better take Julie away from him too!”


“I know and that’s what I’m going to do because Jack was never around when Julie was young. I was.”


Few minutes later, there are few prostitutes coming in and they start undressing to start making love with Nino and Arvin. The camera is facing a woman’s butt following in same direction where she is walking to then moves toward a window and everything turns into white.
 
#6
The next day, at Jack’s house at the beach, Jack is walking with his dog named Minky on the beach getting some exercise and fresh breeze air to relieve his stress. He sees a car being pulled in the driveway and it is Haley. She gets out from the car and starts walking toward Jack.


Jack says, “Hey Haley, what’s going on?”


“I’m so exhausted and I need to get in shower.”


Jack chuckles and escorts her to the house.


In their bedroom, Haley throws her purse onto the bed and starts to undress for shower. Jack stands by the door and watches her. Haley walks in the bathroom in their bedroom and the door isn’t shut. Jack waits until he hears the water starts running then he stares at Haley’s purse on the bed. He walks toward bathroom door to sneak in to be sure Haley is in the shower then he grabs Haley’s purse to nosy in what is in the purse.
Suspense music begins playing while Jack is looking through the purse and he finds some condoms. He looks at the condom and bathroom door at the same time. He starts shaking his head and starts thinking. He places the purse back on the bed and walks away.


A little while later, Haley gets out from the shower and starts drying herself. Jack walks back up to the bedroom. Haley says, “Why didn’t you join me in the shower?”


“I just had to run down to get a cup of water. I was thirsty.”


“Can you do a favor? Can you find my medicine in my purse for me please?” The music begins playing again in a slow beat when Jack reaches toward the purse but Haley just realizes that she is forgetting something and she grabs her purse away from Jack at the same time when he reaches to it.


“Never mind, I’ll find it myself.” Jack stands there and raises his right eyebrow. He says,


“Is there something wrong?”


“Nothing.” She searches through her purse and finds her medicine but at the same time, one package of condom falls out from her purse when she pulls her medicine out.


Both of their eyes are widen open when they see a package of condom fall onto the floor.


“Jack…No…”


“This is why I was not sure if you really love me.”


“Jack…I didn’t lie to you.”


“I don’t think you should say anything. You lied to me.”


“What did I lie to you about?”


“Oh yeah…so many things. You said you weren’t seeing anyone. Also you said you didn’t cheat, and you stopped your addiction. I think you better leave.”


“Jack…no, I want to stay with you.”


“Why do you need another chance? When are you going to ever ****ing understand? I think I’m going outside and I want you out by the time I get back.” He walks out and takes Minky with him.


Haley starts crying and starts packing her things. She calls Julie and tells her to stay with Jack. She takes everything to her car and she opens her car door. She looks at the house then looks at Jack while he is playing with Minky. She continues crying and she says, “I’m going to miss you, Jack.” She gets in her car and leaves off. The camera starts pulling away when Haley is leaving.


Later at night, at a mall, Julie is working as a cashier at a clothing store. The announcement is made to notify people that the mall is closing in 15 minutes.


The camera starts following the legs of 3 people while they are walking to get on the escalator to bring them to second floor. The music begins playing while the camera continues to follow them then finally turns to reveal them. There are two black boys and a white boy who are around Julie’s age. A black boy named Chris and he is a son of Nino Williams. Another black boy named Darrell and the last one named Marshall. Both of them are best friends of Chris.


They stand against a pole talking but actually they are waiting for Julie to get out from work. At outside of the mall at the parking lot, the camera moves down toward Jack’s car as he is pulling in the lot. He parks in and turns off the engine. Jack looks at the time on his watch and says, “Boy…I hope Julie is all right.”


Half hour later, Jack is waiting but he sees couple of security guards coming out from the mall so he gets out from his car and approaches to them.


Jack says, “Sir, can I go in and look for my daughter named Julie. I’m supposed to pick her up from work.”


One of the guards says, “Sure, no problem. Go on and I’ll open it for you.” He unlocks the door to let Jack in through the back door. The guard tells the other guard in the office about the situation. Jack continues walking out to the mall through a long hallway from the back door.


At the clothing store, Julie and one of her associates who is her best friend named Sara are locking up the store. There are still few remaining customers walking around in the mall. Julie and Sara lock up the steel door of the store then they start walking.
Few minutes later while they’re walking, there are three boys start following them. Julie and Sara hear them walking behind them even though they look at them to find out who is behind them. One of the boys gives a sex sign to them and one of another give a sign of blowjob. Julie and Sara scoff at them and continue walking away from them.


Chris says, “**** this, let’s get them. All of us need to get laid.” They start running after them and grab them. Jack is still walking and he hears running footsteps above him. He whispers, “Oh ****, Julie better be all right.”


Chris, Darrell and Marshall hold Julie and Sara against the wall and they try to do sexual touches against them. Julie knocks Chris’ testicles using one of her kneecaps so she could escape but she fails. Chris shoves Julie against the wall hard and is about to choke her.


With a surprise, Chris is being pulled away and his face is being smashed against the pole. It is Jack who has done that then the other two boys shuffle out pocket knives. One of them yells, “You mess us up and we will **** you up.”


Jack is still holding against Chris’ neck and says, “Why are you trying to hurt my daughter?”


Darrell says, “Because she kicked him in the balls.”


“There has to be a reason that she did that.”


“He is trying to talk to her into makeup.”


“Bull**** and I know who sent all of you to here. All of you guys better zip your ****ing pants up or I will put all of your cocks into the sink dumpster where it will hurts the most so all of you can’t get laid. I can’t stand this anymore!”


“Let him go!”


“**** you! I’m not letting him go until you start walking now! I don’t care if you want to beat me up, I’ll be waiting!”


Darrell says to Marshall “Come on, man. Let’s go.” They finally start walking away and Jack pushes Chris onto the floor to let him go. Chris gets up and starts running away.


Jack snarls, “God damn ****ing pussies.”


He says to Julie and Sara “You two are all right?”


Both of them nod at him and Julie says, “Thank god you’re here.”


“Do you know any one of those boys?”


“Well yeah but not personally. Chris is Nino Williams’ son and the other two are Chris’ best friends.”


“Nino Williams…very interesting. I think your mother and Arvin were the ones who had him sent Chris down.”


“My mother?”


“Why do you think your mother is seeing Arvin?”


“You got a point.”


“And your mother isn’t living at my place anymore. I kicked her out and it is up to you on what you want to do so what do you want to do?”


“I still want to live with you but I want to see my mother though and talk to her so I can figure out what I want to do.”


“All right, I can drop you off at your mother’s.”


A little while later, at Haley’s house, Julie and Sara get out from Jack’s car and starts walking away from each other to their houses. Jack stays there until he is sure that Julie gets in the house. Julie gets in the house and she locks the door.


Jack leaves off and the camera starts pulling away but it is turning left to reveal 2 cars being parked across the street. It starts moving down toward the taillights of both cars and moving slowly to reveal that there are Nino and Arvin’s people in the car including Chris, Marshall and Darrell. They are parking there because they are waiting for Jack to leave so they can go after him.


At Haley’s house, Julie walks around to find her mother and keeps calling “Mom? Are you here?” By the time, she reaches to outside at the porch and sees her mom sitting down smoking cigarettes and being upset.


She says, “Mom, are you ok?”


“That ****ing asshole kicked me out.”


“You mean my Dad?”


“Yeah! Who else do you think?”


“Calm down, Mom. You don’t need to start mouthing me just because you’re mad that my Dad kicked you out.”


“Julie…he has no right to do that.”


“You two were never married and what is the point of that anyway? It is his house and he owns that house, not you. You should have known that.”


“I don’t ****ing care, I just can’t do this alone and I can’t live alone in this house.”


“Well, why did he kick you out anyway?”


“He found out that I lied to him.”


“Lie about what?”


“I told him that I wasn’t with anyone and I wasn’t seeing anyone but after I was getting out from shower, I had to get my medicine out from my purse and somehow a package of condoms fell out from my purse. He saw the condoms and you know where that went to.”


“So he must be thinking that you might have been a prostitute?”


“In a way, yeah.”


“See? That’s what I’ve been trying to warn you to not see anyone. How can you be stupid like that? I’m sure this is the reason why he left you long time ago.”


“No! It’s not that!”


“Don’t lie to me, Mom. I can tell from your actions.”


“Go live with him whatever you want and I don’t give a ****. Get out!”


She starts chasing Julie and starts hitting her. Julie is trying to run away from her but she makes it to her bedroom with a door being slammed in front of her mother.


Julie packs everything up in bags and starts throwing those out of her window. She dials her cell phone and starts calling Sara for help.


“Sara? I need your help to pick up my stuff. I’m moving out and my mom has been physically abusing me so I need to get out of here now.”


“All right, I’ll let my parents know and they can come over with me to help you.”


“Ok, hurry!”


Julie continues throwing her bags out of her bedroom window. Sara shows up and starts collecting Julie’s bags. Julie walks out of her bedroom and Haley grabs her hair out of blue. Julie slaps her mother right on the face like she is about to fall onto the floor.


“Why do you have to start hitting and abusing me around?”


“I’m your mother and I have every right to do that.”


“For that kind of unreasonable punishment, it is completely unnecessary!”


Then Julie runs away to get out of the house.


Haley screams, “I’m locking up the whole house and you better don’t ****ing come back!”


Julie meets Sara on the side of her house to pick up the rest of her stuff.


At Sara’s house, Sara’s parents are worried and asking Julie if she is ok and they are in almost frantic. Julie says, “My mom pulled my hair when I came out from my bedroom. She was completely pissed off about my Dad because he kicked her out of his house.”
One of the parents says, “Well, both of them were not married and there is no point of getting so pissed over this.”


“I know.” They leads her around the house and helping her out.
 
#6
Few minutes later, rain begins down pouring and there is some thunder going on. Jack continues driving knowing that no one is behind him but the next minute, he looks at his rear mirror and sees 2 cars turning onto the same street as he is traveling on.


About seven blocks ahead, there is a long hill dip and bumps, almost like one of those streets in San Francisco. Both cars are traveling fast and begins tailgating against Jack’s car. Jack looks at the mirror and gets mad so he starts speeding up to get away from the 2 cars.


Both cars starts smashing and hitting Jack’s car. Chris rolls down the car window and yells at Jack “Now look who’s a pussy right now and I told you earlier that we will come back and now here we are. You’re seriously ****ed!” Jack steers the wheel toward left to start smashing the car that Chris is riding in.


Chris starts to cackle and says, “Is that all you got, bitch?”


Jack manages to steer faster to get away from them and by the time he turns left, there is another incoming car approaching directly to him and smashes Jack’s car.


Jack’s car is being smashed and gets stuck in between with two cars that he couldn’t get out. Chris loads up his gun and is about to shoot at Jack. Jack widens his eyes and shifts his car into reverse. He slams the gas to move the car backwards just in time when Chris starts shooting. Jack bends his head over against the passenger’s seat for his safety while he tries to move his car in reverse.


He successfully escapes and turns his car around in 180 degrees. Then he escapes to get away from them. Chris and the other 2 cars continues to travel after Jack.


Few miles ahead, Jack pulls into a park and continue steering in a high speed to avoid the other 3 cars but he sees a tow truck coming down on a hill in the park approaching to Jack’s car. There is a strip of water on the left next to the trail where Jack is driving on at the park.


Jack says, “God damn, why are they still on my ass?”


With a surprise, the tow truck approaches closely toward Jack’s car and smashes the car. The car flies directly toward a tree and rolls over twice. It lands with the hood upside down. Jack passes out and Chris gets out from the car. He grabs a glass with a paper rolled out from the top of the glass. He lit up to start a fire then he throws the glass onto Jack’s car to create a fire.


The car is on fire and Jack is still unconscious. Then everyone leaves off, leaving Jack in the car while it’s on fire. Few minutes later, someone runs toward the car while it is on fire. Someone has a black hood on so it wouldn’t reveal the face of the person.


The person kicks the window to pull Jack out of the car and picks him up. Within seconds, the car explodes and the person puts him down and checks on the pulse to see if he is still alive. The person whispers, “Jack, are you wake? Wake up, Jack.”


Jack finally wakes up but when he opens his eyes, he sees everything that is so blurry to him. He couldn’t even see the person who saves him. But Jack says, “Who are you?” Then he passes out again and everything turns white.


A transition of white leads to seemingly moving white bright lights being spaced out with ceiling as in a long strip and the camera slowly turns and rotates to reveal Jack being on the gurney. Jack is still unconscious and the doctors and nurses are checking his blood pressure and everything.


Few days later, at the hospital, Jack is still sleeping on his bed. He has cast on his right leg and his left arm. The camera turns slowly toward a chair and rotates once to reveal Candice. Candice is a long time best friend of Jack’s. She is sitting down and looking out at the window.


Few minutes later, she hears Jack mumbles saying “Brittany…Brittany” and she turns her head toward Jack. She gets up and walks over to him and says, “Jack? Are you awake?”


Jack still doesn’t respond to Candice and he keeps mumbling. She tries to put her hand onto Jack’s right shoulder and shake to attempt to wake him up. Jack finally wakes up but he is in confusion like he doesn’t know where he is at. Then he looks at Candice and says, “Candice? Why are you here?”


“My friend was the one who saved your life. He was at the park last night and he saw a car being crashed. When he found out that it was you and he contacted me so I went to the emergency room last night. I stayed there and waited until they sent you to a room from being in ICU.”


“I was being chased by two pimps.”


“Two pimps? And was anyone else notified that you’re in hospital?”


“No, why would you ask if anyone is notified?”


“Just a thought, and by the way, the hospital already contacted Haley.”


“Oh ****…”


“What? What Jack? What’s going on?”


“****…I don’t want Haley to know that I’m here. Mainly because the two pimps that were after me, she works with them plus she is secretly dating one of them behind my back even though she was still dating him when she came to see me first time in long time.”


“Are you ****ing serious, Jack?”


“Yeah, this **** is much deeper than you expect.”


“Damn, when I heard you mumbling about Brittany, you know…Brittany and I were talking about you on how many things that you’ve gone through with bunch of bull****. I told her that I was afraid that you’d be in so much deep **** than what you think and looks like I’m right all along.”


“Well Candice, it’s what I expected and it’s that I’m not surprised about. The point is why they have to be onto me that I didn’t even do anything but to keep torturing me.”


“That’s a good ****ing question.”


“Perhaps, it’s about their pure jealousy, control and power.”


“I’m sure it’s one of those and love isn’t all about one of those.”


“Yeah and respect too.”


“Do you miss Brittany or something?”


“Is it because I was mumbling about her?”


“Yeah.”


“I honestly don’t know. Probably because I missed her and I just miss being around with the fun times that I had and it’s just that I’m tired of dealing with bull**** on love and relationships. There is no absolutely ****ing necessary to keep a dark secret and also to be the one who cheats. Somebody needs to use their own ****ing common sense.”


“And trust too. Why do people always have to break the trust and to continue playing with bull**** games to get what they really want? What about sharing lives with each other?”


“To them, they think love is about having a great feeling of being natural high. To me, they’re ****ed when they’re thinking that way. Where’s Julie? Did she ever know that I’m here?”


“Yeah, she knows and she was here for past few days. I contacted her right away when I found out all about this. She was so upset and very shocked. I mean she never knew why it is necessary for Arvin, Nino and Haley have to send someone to track you down. She’s at work though.”


“****…I hope someone isn’t after her too since I’m sure that Haley knows that I’m alive. I think she is going to send someone to here to finish me off.”


“Jack…I’m sorry. I didn’t know that she was doing something behind your back.”
“Don’t worry about it. Just do what I tell you. Please get ahold of Scott and have him come over. Just to be precautious.”


“All right, I’ll go and get Julie. I’ll find Scott.” She leaves off.
 
#6
Out in the main lobby in the hospital, the camera stands behind couple of security guards while they are watching the security camera on the small television screens, it shows Haley is walking in the hospital and the camera turns to reveal the security guards. Then it swifts around to start following Haley’s legs while she is walking. The music starts playing while the camera continues to follow her to enter the evaluator. The camera continues to follow her and it stands while she is standing inside the evaluator.


The evaluator brings her to the floor where Jack is staying at and it opens to let Haley out. The camera resumes to follow her around. The music starts to increase when Haley walks past Candice. Candice sees her and she doesn’t say anything to her. She gets in the evaluator and she turns facing toward the door. She keeps staring at Haley. Haley turns her face to check on Candice while she is walking toward Jack’s room and she smiles.


Candice mouths, “I’ll kill you and you deserve to die.” The evaluator door closes.


In Jack’s room, Haley walks in and Jack is watching T.V.


“Hey Jack, are you all right?”


Jack doesn’t seem too happy to see her and says, “So, why did you come here?”


“I want you to know that I still love you.”


Jack yells, “Enough with that love bull****!”


“Why you don’t love me anymore?”


“Come on, are you ****ing kidding me? I know you are still seeing your ****ing nigger lover. Wasn’t it him who raised Julie with you?”


“He would like to be a father figure to Julie.”


“And along with that prostitution job? I don’t think so. Julie don’t deserve that kind of lifestyle.”


“**** you, Jack. I make her do what I want her to do.”


“You shouldn’t. No parent should be controlling their children’s lives.” He shakes his head.


“Come on, I want to stay with you. I love you so much. When I first saw you a while ago after not seeing each other for long time, I realized how much I’ve missed you and those times that we had together.”


Jack closes his eyes and becomes more furious. He shakes his head while his eyes are closed.


“Get the **** out.”


“Please, Jack. Don’t do this.”


Jack opens his eyes and stares at Haley with a pissed off look on his face. He blows, “Get the **** out of here, Haley! I’m tired of hearing your love bull****. I’m tired of hearing your begging so get out! Or I’ll call the nurse to get a security to escort you out.”


“Come on, Jack! You know that I love you!”


“This is it!” He presses a button to call a nurse on his T.V. remote.


The nurse comes in right away and says, “Hi, what do you need?”


“Can you take this woman out of here? If she doesn’t, can you get the security please?”


The nurse says to Haley “Madam, can you leave? Visitation hours are over.”


Haley screams, “**** you! Why do you want me to leave? Why are you making me leave? Please don’t leave me.”


Jack looks away from Haley and ignoring her. Haley continues yelling and the nurse is trying to pull her away from the room. Finally, Haley breaks through and runs toward Jack. She is about to slap Jack’s face but Jack quickly grabs her hand and pulls her arm down causing a sharp pain. Haley stops yelling then she starts crying.


Jack becomes more ferocious and screams at her “Why would you do that? Get the **** out now!” He pushes her but luckily two security guys show up and pull Haley out of the room.


They escort Haley out of the hospital and the camera turns toward Jack. Jack exhales and seemingly pissed at the same time. Everything turns into white that translates to a car headlight.


The camera starts moving left from the car headlight and reveals Candice getting out from the car. She walks inside the mall and she sees Julie sitting down at a table in the food court with her friends. She approaches to Julie and says, “Hey there.” She smiles.


“Hey you, how have you been? It had been a while.”


“Just peachy and yeah, it has been.”


“How’s my dad?”


“He’s healing up and he wants to see you.”


“Can I go see him now?”


“Yeah, come with me.”


Julie smiles, “All right.”


She gets up and saying good byes to her friends. She walks away with Candice to her car.


The camera is moving upset down while following Candice and Julie when they’re walking down in a hallway in the hospital to see Jack then it starts turning back to normal slowly. As they approach to Jack’s room and they see Scott and Issac standing and talking to Jack.


Jack looks up at Julie when Julie gets in the room and Julie says, “Hey Dad.”


Jack smiles at her and says, “Hey baby, how are you?”


“I’m so glad you’re all right.” Her voice breaks and she runs toward him and hugs him firmly. Jack closes his eyes and keeps smiling while hugging her. Julie backs out and her eyes are still watery.


“Dad…who are they? Why are they here?”


“The black guy is my best friend named Scott and we were so close when we were young. We didn’t even get in touch with each other for long time until now. And another is Issac; he’s Cheyenne’s ex husband.”


“Cheyenne’s ex husband?”


“Yeah, why?”


“I’m just surprised that he’s here, I mean you know…”


“Yeah and we’re friends because he realized that he could have trusted me in first place.”


“So, why are they here? I mean I see Scott’s wearing a badge so what’s going on?”


“Do you know how I got into an accident?”


“Yeah but I never knew who was involved.”


“It was Arvin and your mother. They sent out Chris, Darrell, and Marshall to put a hit on me. So, the reason Issac and Scott are here is that they’re going to help me to get out of here and put you and me to a safe place to stay low for a while until I get better.”


“Sounds like a plan.”
 
#6
fantastic what an great read ..love how you have it really set out ..alot better what i can do thats for sure hope that one day so one contacts you and says can we talk..thanks for sharing with us..
 
#8
To two of you, thanks and I'm curious...up to this point of this sequel, which one do you like better, the first or this one?

And also I may be considering on throwing in few of my older stories that I wrote long time ago in here. Those stories that I wrote were so much different than what I'm writing now for Dark Rainbow 1 and 2.
 
#8
Few days later, at night, the camera moves toward the right door of a car from the headlight slowly and a woman gets out from the car but the camera stays onto her feet and legs. It starts following her while she is walking across the street to Arvin’s building.
In Arvin’s building, the door opens and reveals the woman. The woman has very dark red hair, almost close to brunette color, is also wearing tight black leather pants and jacket. She has a great shape and firm breasts even her appearance look almost like an actress named Anna Hathaway but only hotter. Her name is Ursula Lynch.


Arvin smiles when Ursula comes in and says, “Hey there, my sweet cupid.”


Ursula snaps, “Don’t ****ing call me your sweet cupid. I’m not your goddamn cupid, you **** ****!”


“Damn. Calm down, baby.”


“Don’t call me baby at all, what the hell did I tell you?”


“Why? I thought you are? What’s wrong?”


“Why are you with that ****ing skank Haley?”


“Good question…because I love her so much.”


“You love her more than me?”


“No, baby, not that I mean.”


“What the hell do you mean by that?!?” she explodes.


“Where’s my money?”


“Not until you answer my question.”


Arvin chuckles then he rub his right hand against his lips and gets up from the seat. He approaches behind Ursula’s back and Ursula tries to resist from him but he starts touching her body lightly until he reaches up to one of her breasts and begins squeezing. He begins smiling and he moves his head toward her head. Ursula gasps and moans once but she grabs Arvin’s hand and says, “Stop please.”


Arvin pushes her body down against a table and starts ripping Ursula’s pants off while holding her down with his hand against on her neck. Ursula starts screaming but Arvin slaps her face to make her stop screaming then he finally reaches to the point where he rips her underwear off and the rest. The camera moves away from them and turns toward another room where Haley is sitting in a tub in a bathroom.


In the bathroom, Haley is lying down on the tub and she is being injected with a needle on her left arm. She is in blank state and being high however she gets up and approaches toward Arvin while taking towel off. She walks up against Arvin’s back body to feel the touch of his body. Arvin stops what he is doing and grabs Haley. He picks her up and starts carrying her.


Haley moans and keeps repeating, “Arvin, **** me. Please **** me.” Arvin carries her to the kitchen and goes inside her on the counter. Haley starts moaning louder and louder where she says, “Harder…harder…**** me harder!!! More!!! Harder!!!”


The camera again turns away from them and starts moving slowly toward Ursula on the ground while she is lying down on the floor. The music begins to intensify while Ursula is lying down starting at Arvin and Haley in the kitchen. A tear drops from one of her eyes and the camera goes directly toward her eyes and everything goes into black.
Arvin walks off toward Ursula and takes all of money away from her. He snarls, “This money ain’t yours, bitch. It’s mine and you work for me, you ****ing whore!” He kicks her and spits on her. And he walks away.


Downstairs in a basement of Arvin’s place, the camera follows Arvin while he’s walking down in a hallway toward a large room. The large room contains a pool, few arcade games, a bar and poker or cards table. The camera continue moving toward a group of people at a round table after Arvin walks away from the camera and begins rotating around the people while they’re sitting by the table playing cards and having drinks.


Nino slams the table and screams, “You’re a cheater, you little ****er!” He grabs his gun then cocks and shoots at a man sitting across from him. Arvin approaches to him along with Haley and says, “Nino, you gotta calm down and we have something important to talk about but we have to go to the other room and talk.”


Nino looks up at Arvin and gives a clown funny type of face. “To get some booty? Goddamn, where’s my ****ing booty call? I need some! God! What the ****?” A group of men at the table start laughing.


“What the ****? Why do you think this is funny? Do you think this is ****ing funny to you, you little ****ing ass?”


The group quiets down and Arvin says, “Nino…face it, this is serious and we gotta talk.”


“What the hell does this concern to?”


“This is about Jack and that is why we have to talk.”


“Damn…are you telling me that he’s alive?”


“I rather not to say it in here, let’s go to the other room.”


“Okay, let’s go Mister Jiggles Giggles and let’s do our own butt ****ing in that room.”


The group starts laughing uproariously. Arvin chuckles a little and shakes his head.


In another room, Nino, Arvin and Haley enter and sit down at a table that has a lamp near the edge of the table.


Nino says, “So what’s going on? You were trying to tell me this concern about Jack.”


Arvin says, “Jack’s still alive and he’s in hospital.”


“How do you know that he’s alive?”


Haley says, “I just went to see him at the hospital and what else is there going to be?”


Nino snarls, “****! Is there anyone else with him?”


“Yeah, Candice, Scott and Issac were there.”


“Issac? Are you kidding me? Why is he there with Jack?”


“I don’t know and why do you ask?”


“Obviously, they have a history together.”


“What do you mean by that?”


“Perhaps, you should figure out why Jack left you long time ago and I know this has to be connected with Issac, his wife Cheyenne who used to be Jack’s best friend and Cheyenne’s ex-husband named Daniel.”


“So, isn’t this supposed to be the reason why Jack told me that he had to settle things down before he would able to talk to me few weeks ago?”


“Yeah, exactly.”


“How would you figure that?”


“Hello? I used to be friends with Daniel and that’s how I was able to keep on track of things.”


“That should be interesting to find out and I swear to ****ing god that Jack is hiding something from me for long time.”


“I’m sure he is but what if you’re wrong?”


“Oh Nino, I know I am not wrong.” She grins evilly.


Arvin says, “I think we should go to the hospital to catch Jack.”


“Oh yes, we should.”
 
#8
Few days later, at night, the camera moves toward the right door of a car from the headlight slowly and a woman gets out from the car but the camera stays onto her feet and legs. It starts following her while she is walking across the street to Arvin’s building.


In Arvin’s building, the door opens and reveals the woman. The woman has very dark red hair, almost close to brunette color, is also wearing tight black leather pants and jacket. She has a great shape and firm breasts even her appearance look almost like an actress named Anna Hathaway but only hotter. Her name is Ursula Lynch.


Arvin smiles when Ursula comes in and says, “Hey there, my sweet cupid.”


Ursula snaps, “Don’t ****ing call me your sweet cupid. I’m not your goddamn cupid, you **** ****!”


“Damn. Calm down, baby.”


“Don’t call me baby at all, what the hell did I tell you?”


“Why? I thought you are? What’s wrong?”


“Why are you with that ****ing skank Haley?”


“Good question…because I love her so much.”


“You love her more than me?”


“No, baby, not that I mean.”


“What the hell do you mean by that?!?” she explodes.


“Where’s my money?”


“Not until you answer my question.”


Arvin chuckles then he rub his right hand against his lips and gets up from the seat. He approaches behind Ursula’s back and Ursula tries to resist from him but he starts touching her body lightly until he reaches up to one of her breasts and begins squeezing. He begins smiling and he moves his head toward her head. Ursula gasps and moans once but she grabs Arvin’s hand and says, “Stop please.”


Arvin pushes her body down against a table and starts ripping Ursula’s pants off while holding her down with his hand against on her neck. Ursula starts screaming but Arvin slaps her face to make her stop screaming then he finally reaches to the point where he rips her underwear off and the rest. The camera moves away from them and turns toward another room where Haley is sitting in a tub in a bathroom.


In the bathroom, Haley is lying down on the tub and she is being injected with a needle on her left arm. She is in blank state and being high however she gets up and approaches toward Arvin while taking towel off. She walks up against Arvin’s back body to feel the touch of his body. Arvin stops what he is doing and grabs Haley. He picks her up and starts carrying her.


Haley moans and keeps repeating, “Arvin, **** me. Please **** me.” Arvin carries her to the kitchen and goes inside her on the counter. Haley starts moaning louder and louder where she says, “Harder…harder…**** me harder!!! More!!! Harder!!!”


The camera again turns away from them and starts moving slowly toward Ursula on the ground while she is lying down on the floor. The music begins to intensify while Ursula is lying down starting at Arvin and Haley in the kitchen. A tear drops from one of her eyes and the camera goes directly toward her eyes and everything goes into black.
Arvin walks off toward Ursula and takes all of money away from her. He snarls, “This money ain’t yours, bitch. It’s mine and you work for me, you ****ing whore!” He kicks her and spits on her. And he walks away.


Downstairs in a basement of Arvin’s place, the camera follows Arvin while he’s walking down in a hallway toward a large room. The large room contains a pool, few arcade games, a bar and poker or cards table. The camera continue moving toward a group of people at a round table after Arvin walks away from the camera and begins rotating around the people while they’re sitting by the table playing cards and having drinks.


Nino slams the table and screams, “You’re a cheater, you little ****er!” He grabs his gun then cocks and shoots at a man sitting across from him. Arvin approaches to him along with Haley and says, “Nino, you gotta calm down and we have something important to talk about but we have to go to the other room and talk.”


Nino looks up at Arvin and gives a clown funny type of face. “To get some booty? Goddamn, where’s my ****ing booty call? I need some! God! What the ****?” A group of men at the table start laughing.


“What the ****? Why do you think this is funny? Do you think this is ****ing funny to you, you little ****ing ass?”


The group quiets down and Arvin says, “Nino…face it, this is serious and we gotta talk.”


“What the hell does this concern to?”


“This is about Jack and that is why we have to talk.”


“Damn…are you telling me that he’s alive?”


“I rather not to say it in here, let’s go to the other room.”


“Okay, let’s go Mister Jiggles Giggles and let’s do our own butt ****ing in that room.”


The group starts laughing uproariously. Arvin chuckles a little and shakes his head.


In another room, Nino, Arvin and Haley enter and sit down at a table that has a lamp near the edge of the table.


Nino says, “So what’s going on? You were trying to tell me this concern about Jack.”


Arvin says, “Jack’s still alive and he’s in hospital.”


“How do you know that he’s alive?”


Haley says, “I just went to see him at the hospital and what else is there going to be?”


Nino snarls, “****! Is there anyone else with him?”


“Yeah, Candice, Scott and Issac were there.”


“Issac? Are you kidding me? Why is he there with Jack?”


“I don’t know and why do you ask?”


“Obviously, they have a history together.”


“What do you mean by that?”


“Perhaps, you should figure out why Jack left you long time ago and I know this has to be connected with Issac, his wife Cheyenne who used to be Jack’s best friend and Cheyenne’s ex-husband named Daniel.”


“So, isn’t this supposed to be the reason why Jack told me that he had to settle things down before he would able to talk to me few weeks ago?”


“Yeah, exactly.”


“How would you figure that?”


“Hello? I used to be friends with Daniel and that’s how I was able to keep on track of things.”


“That should be interesting to find out and I swear to ****ing god that Jack is hiding something from me for long time.”


“I’m sure he is but what if you’re wrong?”


“Oh Nino, I know I am not wrong.” She grins evilly.


Arvin says, “I think we should go to the hospital to catch Jack.”


“Oh yes, we should.”
 
#8
Two days later, the music begins to intensify while the camera moves in a different angle onto a car while the car is pulling into the parking lot at the hospital and the camera turns when someone gets out from the car. It continues following the person while the person is walking and the camera is focusing on the person’s legs profile.


Inside the hospital, the person reveals to be Arvin and he is dressed up as a surgeon. He walks into the elevator and continues to find Jack’s room. Scott walks out from the elevator just walking by Arvin as he steps in the elevator.


Scott stops walking and he turns his face toward the elevator door as it is about to close but he sees Arvin. He mouths, “What the f…” He runs toward the security office for assistance then he runs up to the floor where Jack is staying at by using the stairs.


In Jack’s room, Arvin walks in and he places out a large kitchen knife from his pocket. He walks toward Jack’s bed and stabs onto the pillow but at the same time, he realizes that Jack isn’t on the bed. With a surprise, Jack blows the door out to knock Arvin out and Arvin falls over onto the bed. Jack quickly grabs a stick and slams it onto Arvin’s face. Arvin passes out and Jack falls onto the floor since he is tripping and limping.
Scott makes to Jack’s room and sees Jack is lying down on the floor but he is okay.


“Jack! Are you all right?”


“Yeah, I’m all good and I’m not hurt. I’m safe but we better get out of here now.”


“Yeah, I’m going to get you out of here.”


He helps Jack to stand up and sits down on a wheelchair. He escorts Jack out of hospital while the security is arresting Arvin and placing him in the holding room.


At outside of hospital, Jack says, “Please stop. Can you do me a favor?” Scott stops pushing the wheelchair and says, “What?”


“Can you take me back in? I want to talk to Arvin in the holding room.”


“Jack…don’t.”


“I just want to talk to him face to face, that’s all I’m asking. I mean what would be the point where he would be continuing to go after me for some little tiny love life bull****?”


“Let the police take care of this.”


“Scott…just take me there, okay?”


“Okay.”


Back in hospital, in the holding room, the door opens with Scott pushing Jack and placing him face to face at the table where Arvin is sitting across from where Jack is at.
Arvin has black and blue bruises on his forehead and few cuts and scratches on his face. He seems pissed when he sees Jack. He snarls, “What do you want?”


“To talk is all I want.” Jack says in a calm voice.


“There is nothing to talk about and I don’t see a reason that we should talk. I ****ing hate you and I hate you for what you did to Haley.”


“Haley? Are we here to talk about Haley? Aren’t you so blind?”


“I ****ing loved her! I took care of her after you left her! I ****ing raised your ****ing daughter! What the hell does that tell you? You’re such a ****ing scumbag!”


“That does not answer to my question of you being blind to your love life. Do you really think Haley is your true love? You’re blind to the truth, that’s all I’m trying to tell you.”


“I don’t care about your question. All I care about is how you left Haley with nothing. It’s pretty simple that you actually left her for Leanne.”


“Leanne? Are you trying to talk to me about Leanne? Leanne had nothing to do with this. Maybe you should ask yourself this, what would you feel if your ex was telling her new guy a lie?”


“I don’t care what you think. The point is that you left Haley to raise a child on her own.”


“Excuse me? How would I know if she had a child? And there is no point where you don’t want to listen to the truth, the whole truth of everything. In fact, there is no reason to have a grudge against me only because you believed what Haley told you. You shouldn’t be jumping into conclusions but since you had done that and I guess this will be finished. I don’t understand why you have to blow up over those situations without listening to another side of truth?”


“**** you, Jack. **** you! I don’t need to hear any **** from you!”


“Are you really sure that is what you want? Don’t forget…payback is always a bitch, and I’m sure you are aware of that, don’t you, a dumb **** nigger?”


Arvin screams and yells back at Jack while Jack pushes his wheelchair out of the room.


“Ready to go?” Scott asks.


“Affirmative.”


Few weeks later, at a warehouse, the outside is still bright and cloudy and the camera moves down from a crane toward two UPS trucks, two vans and a steel proof truck that carries bunch of money but it is an empty truck.


The camera turns toward Nino as he gets out from his car and he approaches Haley.
“The plan is set and we have to free Arvin. He is being transferred to a detention center but we have to do one thing first before we can get to Arvin.”


“Let’s finish this.”


Everyone packs their things then they put on several of ex-President of United State face masks on then leave off.


One hour later, a car arrives toward a side street and the camera slowly moves toward the car door as it is opening. The camera stays on the person’s foot and begins following while the person is walking in the bank.


Inside the bank, the camera is continuing following the person and it reveals to be Haley and the camera moves away from Haley while Haley is walking toward left of the building. The camera turns to show the bankers counting money for customers then turns to follow a man who is a manager when he walks up on the stairs. The camera pulls back but stays on the manager as he gets in a room then it turns and starts moving down back to first floor. It starts traveling through people inside the bank building toward the spinning door back to the car that park on the side of street and turns to reveal Nino.


“Boom time.”


The camera turns toward thug number 1 and says, “10-4.” Then again, turns to thug number 2 in another car and says, “10-4.” All of them place their masks on and they cock their guns.


Inside the bank, the camera turns toward a suitcase that is sitting next to a vase. Nino presses a remote and the suitcase explodes. Everyone in the bank begin screaming and falling down to lie down to cover their heads. Nino and other thugs run out from their cars and trucks toward the bank. They enter the bank with guns and bags.


Nino yells, “Where’s the ringleader of the circus?” No one answers then he continues, “You better get up now or I’ll start killing one by one!” Finally, the manager stands up and says, “I’m here.”


“Okay, thanks.” He shoots him then approaches him to take the key. He says, “So…who’s the slowest water pump farting aide in here?”


The lady stands up and says, “Yes?”


“Okay, I need you to come with me and I want you to take me to the safe.”


The lady takes Nino and other thugs to the safe and they begin collecting money and placing money in bags. Couple of minutes later, they walk out of the safe room carrying bags and they approach to where Haley is lying down at. Nino says, “Come with me.”


Haley gets up and says, “I want to take all of Jack’s money out of his account, now.”


Nino points his gun at the aide and snarls “Do it!”


The aide says, “What’s his name?”


“Jack Craven.”


“The record shows that he closed his account.”


“****!” She shoots her and says, “You’ve been pussy whipped.”


They all run out of the bank and leave off as in a right timing when the police arrive.
Few hours later, the camera moves down toward Arvin when he is being transferred onto the bus for prison. The camera moves closely toward the ground and starts moving through the line of prisoners including Arvin. Arvin walks onto the bus to find a seat. Four of guards walks in and locks every prisoner up on the bus. They close the see-through steel metal door and sit down. The bus leaves off.


Few minutes later, while the bus is still traveling on an isolated road, two of muscle type of cars including a steel truck is steering toward the bus in a high speed. Both muscle cars speed up to pass the bus while the steel truck is still behind the bus.


Few miles ahead later, the bus driver sees two muscle cars blocking the road and begins to slow down while Nino rolls down his right side window of steel truck to take an aim on the bus with a heavy type of gun to fire a hook that can attach toward the bus to pull back. Both muscle cars drive away leaving a steel wire to fire off the bus tires.


Eventually, the bus hits the wire and flips forward over upside down. The steel truck pulls back to pull the steel to break the bus apart and it goes boom. The steel truck pulls up and the camera turns in a fast and steady speed while Nino and the others are doing a rescue for Arvin while killing all guards and leaving other prisoners behind. Arvin joins with Nino in the steel truck and leave off.


Few days later, the camera follows Arvin toward the porch outside of his place and Haley is standing at the porch. Haley keeps looking at buildings as sightseeing. Arvin says, “Hey Haley, are you all right?”


“I don’t know, Arvin. To be honest, I don’t know what I’m doing here.”


“What do you mean?”


“I mean I don’t know why I’m here with you and I don’t know why I went ahead with the plan that we had.”


“What the hell are you talking about? I’m lost here.”


“Do you really love me?”


“Of course, I love you.”


“If you love me, then let me go.”


“Let you go? I mean for what?”


“So that I can get on with my life and figure out what I really want.”


“I think you lied to me about Jack.”


“What did I lie to you about him?”


“You lied to me that he left you.”


“I didn’t lie to you. He actually left me.”


“What did he leave you for?”


“To find a ****ing woman for himself, that lying ****er!”


“I don’t believe that would be true. I think I’m the reason that he left you. I think you told him that you had feelings for your ex which implied me as being your ex. He left you because you wanted to come back to me.”


“Did Jack tell you that?”


“No. I figured that out because after I was in the holding room, Jack came to see me and he asked me if I’m blind to the truth. I believe I’m starting to see the truth out there.”


“The truth? What’s the truth? What truth are we talking about?”


“Why did you have to lie? Isn’t love about lies?”


“To protect Julie.”


“Well, Julie knew and if you were trying to protect her then how did she know in first place?”


“I don’t ****ing know! Why don’t you ask her?” She leaves off.
 
#8
Little over fifteen years ago, Jack slammed the door and started walking down in the hallway then he stopped. He stood against the wall and began sobbing.


“Why does she have to do this to me?” He punches a hole on the wall. He screams, “**** you, Haley!”


An elderly man approached Jack and said, “Sir, are you all right?”


“No, I am not.”


“What’s going on?”


“My girlfriend and I just broke up. She was telling me that she still had feelings for her ex and that she wanted to go back with him. So I don’t know what to believe.”


“Women…wow, totally women. It’s a no surprise but they are ****ing ****s.”


Jack chuckles a little and said, “Not all of them.”


“Well, they are full of ****; they don’t give a jack half ****.”


“Their emotions are roller coasters.”


“Why would she do that though?”


“I have no idea. Supposedly, I guess no one know anything about love. But whatever she did to me was not a love. She harmed me, physically and emotionally. She also cheated on me few times which I never tolerance for cheating. Cheaters are for ****ers only.”


“Perhaps, it’ll be better if you leave her for good and move on with your life.”


“That’s true and that’s what I’m planning to do. It’s a fact that nobody knows how to let go or to move on. It’s pretty sad to know that.”


“Love’s tough but nobody knows how to use it. Everything isn’t about love at first sight.”


“****, I hate hearing love at first sight because it doesn’t exist in that way. There is no point of people getting so feel good when they discover love but not knowing what it meant to them.”


“Love’s a tough topic.”


Back to present day, Haley zips her pants up and collects money from her customer. She gets out from the car and begins walking on the sidewalk. She walks back to her place but Arvin and Nino are not there. She walks in the bathroom and she stares at the mirror. She put her hands on her belly like she is about to feel sick. She exhales and moves her head down to relax her neck.


One year later, somewhere outside of Los Angeles, the camera begins tracking through the woods following a hovercraft. The camera moves slowly while the hovercraft is approaching toward the dock then starts moving to rotate around to reveal Jack and Julie as they are getting off from the hovercraft. They walk onto the bridge while the camera is pulling back to reveal Jack’s secret place, a safe house.


Inside Jack’s house, Jack and Julie walks in, Jack says to Scott “Hey there, is everything good in here?”


“Yeah and I need to talk to you.”


“All right, just in few, let me put some stuff away.”


At the counter in kitchen, Scott and Julie are sitting next to each other and Jack is standing in kitchen across from them.


“So, what’s up?”


“I just got off a call from Dominic Mann.”


“Dominic Mann? Cheyenne’s son?”


“Yes.”


“Okay, so what about him?”


“He just found some new information and he wants to stop by to talk to you.”


“Some new information about what?”


“About Leanne, Cheyenne and Daniel.”


“What? What does Leanne have to do with this?”


“I have no idea.”


“Well, I’m not sure what it would be despite knowing that Daniel is Dominic’s father.”


“I know and I was there at Cheyenne’s wedding. I saw what happened.”


About twenty four years ago, at outside of fire hall, Cheyenne was sitting down in a small tent and crying. Jack walked toward her and sat down.


“Cheyenne…” Cheyenne was not looking at him and was ignoring him. Jack puts his hand onto Cheyenne’s shoulder lightly and said, “Cheyenne, look at me.” Cheyenne finally looked up at Jack and said, “I screwed up.” She sobbed brawly.


“Why did you do this?”


“I have no idea.”


“What? Excuse me, what do you mean you have no idea?”


“I’m confused with what I want to do with my life.”


“Come on, Cheyenne. There is no point of being confused because too many people are being like that. It’s not so shocking to me.”


“Jack! Women are too emotional, you know that!”


“And who doesn’t? The point is that if you had done this then you shouldn’t have gotten married in first place if you don’t know what you want.”


“I’m confused because I still want you, Jack.”


“Aren’t you kidding me? Oh my god…”


“No, I’m not kidding you. You were so good to me because you treated me so well.”


“We’re not dating or anything like that. I’m your good friend and that’s what a good friend would do. To care about others.”


“I know that and I know I shouldn’t have done that.”


“I don’t see a point of you trying to hurt Daniel only because of how many guys hurt you in the past. You can’t live with the past, that’s because you haven’t let it go or moved on at all.”


“It’s hard to let go.”


“I don’t see a reason why you lied to Issac about Daniel that Daniel hurt you a lot and that you married Daniel because you wanted child support payments for Dominic. Do you know what? That’s the most stupid thing that I ever heard of.”


“**** off, Jack!”


“Are you telling me to **** off? Then I guess, this is pretty much it and I’m done. I’m leaving for good.” He left off and the camera pulls away when Jack was walking away.
 
#8
Few hours later, Dominic arrives at Jack’s house with Issac, Melissa and Danielle. Jack and Scott give them hug and Jack says, “Come on in.” as he smiles. Julie walks out with Melissa and Danielle for a tour. Jack, Issac, Scott, and Dominic sit down at a table and Dominic places a suitcase on the table. Jack says, “So, what’s going on? Do you need to tell me something that concerns Daniel, Cheyenne and Leanne?”


“Yes, everything is in the suitcase.” He opens the suitcase and there is lot of papers of records. He continues, “Do you remember who Mr. Dark was?”


“Yes, I remember him and he was the one who was trying to play mind games with me and Cheyenne. He was the one who was trying to show me some proof about Leanne.”


“Yes, that’s him. So do you know who he really was?”


“No.”


“Mr. Dark was Daniel.”


“Daniel? Are you serious?”


“Yeah, it was him.”


Jack seems surprised and says, “What the hell? Why did he do this to me?”


“I don’t know why but of course, he did this to Cheyenne because of a revenge of what Cheyenne did to him that broke the marriage.”


“Seems like he had the motive. And what about Leanne?”


Dominic places out few birth certificates and Jack looks at those. Jack says, “What? Oh my god…”


“Pretty sad, huh?”


“So unbelievable…Leanne ****ing had children with Daniel? No wonder why she went missing for 3 years after faking her own death. This is the dark secret that Leanne was hiding from me.”


“Yes, she had children with Daniel.”


Jack gets up and threw a glass toward the wall. He walks off to outside and stand next to a small pond near his house. Scott walks up to him and says, “I’m so sorry, Jack.”


“I don’t understand why this has to happen to me all the time. Why do women always have to **** me over and such?”


“That’s a good question.”


Later at night, at Los Pacific Exotic Bar, the camera follows Jack through bunch of people toward the bartender and sees Brittany. Brittany is surprised to see Jack and says, “Hey Jack!”


Jack smiles and says, “How have you been?”


“Been good and I’ve missed you.”


“I missed you too and do you think we can talk somewhere else?”


“Yeah, I’m getting off in about 10 minutes so you can wait here until I’m done here then we’ll go somewhere else.”


“Sounds good to me.”


“All righty, can I get you anything while you wait?”


“Yeah, I’d like to have screwdriver.”


“Right coming up!”


Jack finally gets his screwdriver and seems relaxed while browsing at bunch of people at the dance floor. He says, “Wow…I remember what happened with Candice and Fred when Fred tried to get into her pants.”


Ten minutes later, Brittany walks off and leads Jack out of the bar. Both of them grab ice cream and walk over to the beach.


Brittany sighs and says, “What have you been up to?”


“Lot of things, really.”


“What happened to Cheyenne?”


“She died about a year ago and the twist was that Leanne was the one who killed her.”


“Leanne?!? Your “so-called” dead wife?”


“Yes, that’s her.”


“That’s sick and she was alive?”


“Yeah, she faked her death and went on missing for 3 years. I just found out that she went to see Cheyenne’s ex husband even had children with him.”


“That’s so twisted as ****, seriously. Your life is pretty much ****ed.”


“I know and I don’t deserve it.”


“You don’t and I’m so sorry, Jack.” She gives him a hug then hugs him tightly like she misses him.


“Leanne died on the same day Cheyenne died. She committed suicide because she wanted to prove me that she loved me.”


“That’s so full of ****, so bull****. There was no reason for her to do 3 years disappearance just to spend the time with the guy.”


“Pretty much so and also here’s the other thing, I just found out that I have a daughter.”


“You do? Wow.”


“She’s living with me right now.”


“Where’s her mother?”


“Her mother is working with two pimps and in fact, she’s a prostitute.”


“What the **** is wrong with her?”


“That’s a good question. She begged me to give this another try and to work things out. I declined because I knew she was lying all along even I knew she was still seeing her ex. Her ex is a pimp also.”


“Wow, you are lucky that you still have your daughter living with you.”


“I know but her ex is onto my ass because he wants to take my daughter away from me and return her to her mother.”


“That’s even crazier!”


“Pretty much so. Do you want to come along with me to my house? So you can meet my daughter and some of my friends?”


“Yes, I’d love to!”


Few days later, at a carnival somewhere in Los Angeles, the camera turns and rotates around bunch of people while they are waiting in line for rides, playing games and eating. Jack, Brittany and Julie are having a fun time and they are walking together carrying drink and small meal of food while they are sightseeing through.