I want to put it on here but the problem is that this story has several profanies going on so I am not sure what the adminstrator would do with it plus it takes too long to adjust the dialogue lines that has profanies in it.
This forum has software that automatically censors most profanity. That is why you see words like f*** or B******, etc. in some posts.
You will have to post it in bits in any case- the most I could get posted at one time was just a bit over 3000 words. The software is much happier in 1000 word blocks, give or take a few. Handling bits like that should be easy to do your own choice of censoring vs. the software.
At the cemetery somewhere in Rochester, New York, the camera is at the coffin, moving slowly toward a man named Jack Craven. Jack is a tall, dark, handsome guy, dressed up in a black shirt, tux, suit and pants. He has black hair, dark brown color of eyes, smooth skin, shaved, and his hair is done in some spike style with mousse. He is standing there, staring at the coffin where there are several different kinds of flowers laying on the top of coffin.
The camera continues moving slowly toward the priest from Jack. Then it continues moving away from the priest to show the people who attend at the funeral. Some people especially women are crying, filled with tears and in despair as along the sorrow theme music is playing and it stops when the priest starts talking.
The priest say, “The time has gone by, this is the time to end but the spirit of love does not die in our soul. It stays there.”
He pauses and continues, “Leanne Craven, a wife of Jack Craven, gave her blessing in her soul that she loves her husband very much.”
He stops talking for a moment and continues, “This is not a perfect world, and we all know that. Love does not always make our world perfect but to create a strong connection of each other to keep our souls alive. The word of love is extremely powerful but nobody ever really understands what a love really meant. Love is a feeling of unspeakable but you fall for someone that you really want to spend a life with. Along with that, love is always harmful because at times, you couldn’t give up what you really want or want to be with someone who you are really close.”
He stepped down and letting Jack speak, the music resumes. Jack walks onto the position where the priest stands at and stands next to the priest. He is crying and keeps clearing his throat to try to handle his sorrowfulness and the music stops.
He says, “I completely agree what the priest says about love. I have been betrayed about love before especially in my friendships that I had from before including relationships. I’ve never been in love before until I met Leanne and I saw something in her that I knew that there was a strong connection going on but I didn’t expect it to happen too soon. What I believed that it’s wrong to fall in love too quickly, that’s how things screwed things up. I have seen many of that in my experience but that doesn’t mean that I experienced it but like the priest said that nobody is perfect, either am I. I had done some wrong choices in the past and everybody makes their own mistakes. The only thing is that not too many people learn how to forgive and accept others for who they are especially when it comes to the truth. I had bad experience of going through that especially from my mother. At some point, she can’t accept for admitting the mistakes that she or I made. It drove me mad because that’s not part of love. Part of love is to forgive each other especially when you trust someone that you’re really close to and accept the mistakes that they make. People do need to get another chance to make up the mistakes that they caused. Some don’t but I don’t really know because love is so complicated. How can we create a perfect love? No one really knows. Love touches when someone feels a click when it comes to your eyes, heart, mouth, appearances, and more importantly personality. People have their own differences.”
He quiets down and shuts his eyes for a little while letting the priest do the prayer. After he gets done, Jack continues, “Think about what’s the definition of love is. I will always be with you, anywhere you go, your soul stays with me. I love you, Leanne.”
He starts crying then the priest gives him a hug. The priest whispers to him “May the soul be with you, Leanne will always be with you even inside your heart. Love actually never dies only if you love her truly.”
The camera pulls away from the coffin as when the people are starting to walk away then sweeps toward Jack slowly when he walks over to the coffin and kneels down by the coffin. The music begins to intensify. The outside is raining and people have their umbrellas up when they walk out from the funeral.
Jack has no umbrella on him and he is kneeling on the grass by the coffin, gets all wet and is crying. There is one woman standing by her car, she is watching Jack weeping over at the coffin. Her name is Cheyenne Mann. She gives that snotty, two-faced expression like she doesn’t care for Jack as her friendship.
Cheyenne is few inches shorter compared to Jack, has light brown hair, blue eyes and has the appearance that beautiful and seductive look that could easily kill. She is wearing a tan pants with a black turtleneck sweater on.
Few minutes later, Jack finally stands up and says, “I’m going to miss you but I will see you again in my soul life. I love you.” He shuts his eyes for a minute, trying not to cry more but he has to cry. He finally stops crying for a little while when he begins walking away from the coffin. The music changes into a suspense theme.
The camera is following Jack’s back leg while he’s walking toward his car however he sees Cheyenne and he gives that disgust look at her. The music ends.
Cheyenne says in a sweet and soft voice “Jack...”
Jack looks up at her when he reaches to his car and says in a small snarl voice, “What?”
“Why do you have to be this way to me? I’m your friend.”
“Am I your friend? No, it doesn’t look like a friendship to me, anymore.”
“Whoa, take it easy, Jack.”
“You’re telling me to take it easy? Who in the hell you think you are? Know that, you have betrayed your trust, that’s why we lost our friendship.”
“I have betrayed my trust? No, I didn’t.”
He becomes little more agitated and says, “Yes, you did. How many times do I have to go over this again? You’re such a damn whore, don’t you know that?”
“I’m not a damn whore! By the way, who just died?”
He rolls his eyes and says, “See? You don’t even hear things out. That’s why we lost our friendship after you got married.”
She becomes silent and not knowing what else to say.
Jack says, “There you go. You don’t have anything to say. I just need to know something, why you wouldn’t even understand what a friendship is?”
“I know what a friendship is!”
“No, apparently not.”
“Why would you say that?”
“I’m not going to repeat myself over this. My friends have ****ed me over this. Do you know why? Because they were too busy worrying about their own relationships and worrying about keeping themselves out of boredom. It wouldn’t involve you but I’m just saying it from my own experience, you know that already.”
“You had your reasons and I have my own reasons too.”
He scoffs and gives out a small laugh. “You have your own reasons? Not when you were with guys.” He says.
“Not when I was with guys? That’s a lie; I never did anything with them.”
“Okay, I still don’t believe you and I’m not going to fight you over this piece of crap. You had no reason to come up to see me to talk about something.”
He gets in the car and left quickly without saying anything more to Cheyenne.
She shuts her mouth, folding her arms and standing there on the road. She watches Jack leaving and she gives that disappointed expression on her face because she needs someone to talk to and Jack refuses to hear her out.
Later at night, at Jack’s house, downtown in Rochester, he arrives at his house and goes in the house. In the house, he feels down and extremely tired from his grievances about his wife’s death. He walks toward the couch and collapses on it with his feet up on the arm of a couch. He takes his shoes off slowly then takes a pillow and covers his face.
Sorrow music begins playing as when Jack feels confused and lost because of too many things happening in his whole life. Betrayal has been happening in his life at the whole time and he hates that. He finally goes sleep.
Few hours later, he wakes up with his head down and is staring at the picture of himself and Leanne when they got married. He moves his head back and stares at the ceiling. He gives a sound of sigh and says, “What is Cheyenne thinking? Why did she come to me earlier? Well, I think I better leave.” He stands up then begins packing his things up and ready to move back to Los Angeles.
The next morning, Jack has all of his things out of the house and stand at outside of his house to take a last look of his house with his memories. Then he gets in his car and leaves. The camera pulls away from Jack’s car when he leaves and continues moving to show the full location of where his house is at.
Later in that day, in a conference room where the President of the United States is having state of union speech, he is discussing about current economy that is improving and also dealing with today’s world.
He says, “In conclusion, many things that we have right now in America are improving and I will make sure of that we are trying to make the choices wiser to help to support our freedom and get what we need to support our system.”
He walks off as along the camera turns toward one United States Senator and follows him, the suspense music begins playing.
This Senator’s name is Joseph Long, in early forties; partially shaved light brown hair, hazel eyes, usually has some red color on his face from being in very stressful situations and is about 5 foot and 8 inches tall. He is walking down in the aisle through lot of people from the press and doesn’t say anything about the comments as along the camera begins following him.
Down in the aisle, the music ends, there is lot of people screaming, some of them are protesters and supporters including the press and Mr. President orders one of his secretaries to make a statement to the press so the press could shut up. Personally, he hates press and always tries so hard to avoid them.
Joseph continues walking and takes out his cell phone because it is ringing which catches him off-guard. He says, “Hello, Senator Long speaking.”
The caller is using a distorting voice and says, “Joseph Long?”
“Hold on one second.”
Joseph puts his phone on hold and whispers, “****.” The music resumes but with very light beats this time.
He keeps trying to get away from those crazy presses so he can take the call. Finally, he finds and goes in a phone booth inside the building and answers the call.
“Ok, I’m here, what do you want?”
“Joseph…I know you want to have a plan on killing the President and Vice President so you can become President. But you have to do it on your own to get that chance.”
“Yes, of course, I do. I am aware of that and what can I do about that?”
“My advice for you to get what you want is to follow what I tell you.”
“Tell me more about it.”
“I have arranged a meeting for you to meet someone and you will have your chance but you will have to do whatever it takes. But it's all in your head.”
“What? Whatever it takes? What the hell?”
“You’ll figure it out, you can start that from there and you will know because it will happen there.”
“Setting up to meet two women at a hotel and I should expect to know where to start from that place, is that what you’re saying?”
“Yes, you’re set to meet her at night a week after today at Four Stars Hotel in New York City.” Then he hangs up.
Joseph closes his eyes, then opens his eyes and keeps staring at his cellphone. He is trying to figure out what he would able to do, clears his throat then walks out from a phone booth and continues walking to meet President of the United States. The music ends.
At the White House, in President’s conference room, a place where he works with his paper work and stuff like that, Joseph knocks the door and enters the room.
The President says, “Yeah, what do you need, Joseph?”
“Just making sure everything is all right here because I have to go home for few weeks and it is an emergency. There are few things that I have to do.”
“All right, I’ll have someone cover for you and go ahead, take your time off.”
“Mr. President, thank you so much and I will see you in few weeks.” He leaves the office.
Few hours later, somewhere in Virginia, the camera is moving around the location and continue following toward two vans that are in motion on the highway. Cheyenne and her husband named Isaac are driving in one of those two vans. They are on their way to pick up their 2 daughters from a college in Baltimore, Maryland.
Isaac has black hair, goatee, full-rounded face, skinny, only few inches taller than Cheyenne but not as tall as Jack and tend to wear formal clothes. He has been married with Cheyenne for nearly 25 years now and they are happily married ever.
In Baltimore, Maryland, the camera moves down from a street light toward the door of a van when Cheyenne and Isaac arrive. There are several people helping their children to pack up to get ready to go home for the summer. Two daughters named Danielle and Melissa Mann.
Danielle is 24 years old, has light blonde highlights along with brown hair color but it is curly and is about same tall as her mother- Cheyenne. She has hazel color of eyes, has a similar resemble of Cheyenne such as beautiful and seductive can kill. Several guys fell in love with her.
Another daughter named Melissa; she is 21 years old, is blonde, has straight hair and is about 3 inches shorter than her sister and mother. She is more of a science geek, has some kind of preppy style in her and unlike her sister, she has a secret style in herself that no one even really know that she is really prettier than Danielle.
Both of them run out from their dorm building and hugged Cheyenne and Isaac. Then they go in the building to collect things to go home for the summer.
Couple of hours later, Cheyenne and Isaac are back on the road, returning to home in Virginia. Danielle is with Cheyenne and Melissa is with Isaac. The camera keeps moving toward Cheyenne’s van and goes directly to the front window.
Danielle says, “Wow, this year has gone by pretty fast and I already have plans for the summer. Hey mom, aren’t you supposed to go away for few days sometime next week?”
“Yeah, I’m going to visit my friend in New York City.”
“Who’s your friend?”
“Ashley Hutchison, you barely know her. Last time you’ve seen her was when you were a little girl.”
“I am not sure if I remember her or not. What about Dad?”
“He got a call two days ago and he has to go out on business tomorrow and he won’t be back for couple of weeks.”
“All right, Mom…I want to ask you something.”
“Yeah, sweetie, what is it?”
“What do you really believe about being in love?”
Cheyenne exhales and says, “What do I really believe about being in love is knowing the person that you love and the one who is always be there for you, no matter what. You see, I just like the fact that seeing the one who you love that gives you a natural high. A true love is something really special and a very precious thing. Not a lot of people can find that.”
“Oh, I understood your perspective about love. Something about what you said is a little different than what I believe about love.”
The camera zooms at Cheyenne’s face slowly like giving a sign that Cheyenne knew that something was up about Jack that her daughter might have met him already. Cheyenne says, “Really? I would like to hear that out.” She makes it sound like she needs to know because she admits that she did make mistakes about love in her past and she knows that she hasn’t found what a love really meant and Danielle didn’t know that.
Danielle says, “I don’t need your advice for that, I only asked you that question because I wanted to make some comparison for myself based from what I learned through from my experience and also from few lessons in one of my classes that I took when I was in college. You know, they offered a course about love, friends and relationships that you can get some ideas and tips to make things better for other people. Do you know Jack Craven?”
The camera moved toward Cheyenne’s eyes and she seems surprised and shocked then she says, “Jack Craven? You asked me if I knew him.”
Danielle says, “Yeah, why are you giving that surprise look on your face?”
Cheyenne gives out a small laugh and feels like she doesn’t know what to say but says, “That name actually came out of blue but I knew the name and I don’t know him. So what about him? Is he your guy or something?”
Danielle smiles lightly then laughs and says, “No, it’s not what you are thinking. I have a boyfriend and he lives down the street from our house and we’re still together. Anyway, Jack Craven is one of those people who usually go to different schools and make a speech about it. It was very interesting because there are so many things that people could encounter for their relationships. He is a psychologist who can talk about tips and advices on friendships, love and relationships.”
“Oh? Yeah.” Then she laughs and continues, “Yeah, I’m sorry. I’m totally forgotten about your boyfriend that lives down the street. He is such a sweetie and totally cute!” she exclaimed but psychologically, she wants to have sex with her daughter’s boyfriend and she doesn’t show it to her daughter her true inner feelings.
“Yeah, he is but he’s the one for me. We’re connected to each other, not only based on lovemaking but only with our soul and things in common with each other and I love him so much.”
“Yeah, that’s good to hear that.” She is actually starting to feel guilty about herself.
“Weren’t you going to say something about Jack Craven?”
“Well…umm…not that I can think of but I haven’t thought up of someone like him being a psychologist to teach something about love and friendship. But I just thought, it is pretty nice to have that and where is he from?”
“Yeah, it’s pretty nice to have someone come in and discuss about those kinds of issues. He’s from Rochester, New York. Didn’t you go there about a week ago?”
“Yeah, I did. I went there to see old friends of mine that I knew when I was in college out there and I had a good time.”
“Something just came in my mind; do you really love my dad?”
“Yes, of course I do, why do you ask?”
“Well, because I didn’t think you guys are getting along that well anymore but it’s ok to tell me the truth and I’m your daughter so you don’t have to hide anything from me. I said that because I know you lied to me about Jack Craven. He was one of your friends that you had when you were in college. I know you do really need to find a good friend or someone close that you can talk about things to. Right now, I’m an adult and as of being your daughter, I would love for us to get along by telling each other the truth and still love each other as family. I love you, Mom. I wanted you to know that, no matter what because forgive, truth and admit each other is part of love, not only for a special person that hits you right on the face for your feelings. It counts part as a family.”
Cheyenne seems surprised how her daughter actually knew a lot more than she does and she begins having watery eyes because the words that Danielle said to her actually threw on her face knowing that she made several mistakes about love in her past but there is one idea that she comes up with is betrayal.
She wants betrayal to make up for mistakes that she made and says, “Gosh, I’m so lucky to have you as my daughter and you actually woke me up but I’m telling you that I still love your dad and we’re not separating or anything like that but I appreciate hearing that out from you that you want our family to forgive each other about the mistakes or anything like that. People can get upset but some of them don’t accept or some do and it’s really hard to get that though. I never actually thought up of anything like this when I was your age but I did realize it when I was getting married.”
“Mom, it’s all right. I understand what you were going through and I love you. You might not be a perfect mother all around but this world isn’t that perfect because everybody do anything pretty much, some of them are stupid or not so basically, I don’t care because I forgive.”
“Thank you, Danielle.” As when she starts crying a little bit and continues, “Yeah, I lied to you about Jack but I’m sorry about that though because I didn’t want to think about that past because it’s over and I love you, too.”
She smiles as along Danielle smiles too. The camera pulls away and continues moving toward Isaac’s van. In the van, Isaac is driving and Melissa is sitting on passenger’s seat.
Isaac says, “Melissa, I want to tell you something.”
“Yeah, Dad?” as she is not paying attention to him while she is playing with her cell phone.
“I’m going away on business tomorrow and won’t be back for couple of weeks.”
“Yeah, all right.”
“And your mother is going away on a trip to visit her friend in New York City in next two days so I want you to make sure things are ok at around the house.”
“What about Danielle?”
“Forget her; she’ll be busy with Tim so I know that she won’t be around that much over the summer. She is starting to have a life on her own at this period and you know that you’re the last daughter of the house so I’d like you to do that for me, please.”
Melissa gives a desperate sigh and says, “All right, Dad, I’ll do that. Dad…why is my mom keep going out of state and visiting around?”
“Uhh…well, I honestly don’t know because I am getting this feeling that we’re not getting along that well. I loved her so much but she seems like she’s not getting what she wanted.”
“What does she actually want?”
“She hasn’t admitted anything to me that much lately but I think something is up though. Gee, I don’t know if I can say this to you because it’s a personal love relationship that I have and I didn’t think she really understood what a love is. I tried to help her out to understand it but I knew she wouldn’t hear it out. I tried to accept the fact what she did in her past which I did but it appears that she keeps doing it now also.”
“Dad, I think you better go talk with my mom about that when you have a chance. I know you have been busy going out on business trips which is part of reason why my mom is going out on trips to visit her friends. But I know it’s hard to feel that way but I think maybe it’s because you two are beginning to lose trust in each other and not forgiving each other, maybe it is a problem but you guys really need to talk to each other. You had your beliefs about love and I have my own beliefs too.”
“Yeah, I am considering on doing that when we get home and also raising two daughters and a son in my family really gave me a new perspective about life and love. It has more meaning than you’d think. Being a father is the best thing in the whole world that I can be and it gave me an impact to realize that I have so many different choices that I can follow for in my life that I want to ahead for.”
“You’re a really great dad, you know that and time just go by. Unexpected things can happen and life is always hard. I have seen different girls who kept complaining how hard their life is, it made me sick because it showed me that they didn’t have a full understanding of what a love and life really is meant to them. They just want to create something so perfect and GOD! I hate it when I hear something about that because they should know that no one is expected to be perfect, people make their own mistakes. I’m just glad that I’m not one of those types of girls like that.”
“Falling in love is very addictive and harmful.”
“Yeah, I know. I always have wondered what my mother usually does and she seems like she’s pretty nervous when we were around her, it seems like she is missing something in her life.”
“I understand what you’re saying and unfortunately, I can’t tell you that. Your mother has gone through hard times.”
“Why can’t you tell me?”
“Because it’s something that I can’t share you with but I only can share you with my experiences that I can go through with something that you can learn from a guy. Your mom has to be the one who should be telling you this.”
“Yeah, I know that and it just seems funny to me that my mom just got afraid of saying something about love and stuff like that. It sounds like she had done something wrong but I could tell that she won’t admit that she did something wrong in her past.”
“Life is all about betrayal, friends and love relationships are all part of that but it won’t occur only if you have done things right.”
“I just hate betrayal. I just wanted her to know that I still love her, no matter what, if I know the truth.”
“Truth is the biggest thing of all so is forgiving too.”
The camera pulls away from the van and showing the location.
In Virginia Beach, Virginia, the two vans arrive at the Mann’s house as the camera move and swift slowly as the two vans are parking on the driveway. The house is kind of big for a regular house which has 3 floors and a basement. It is in suburban area where there are neighborhoods around.
Isaac, Cheyenne, Danielle and Melissa get out from the vans and start unload things out from both vans. A handsome young gentleman named Tim runs over to Mann’s house and begins helping them out.
Tim is 26 years old and has blonde hair, light blue eyes kind of like arctic blue color but it is very sexy color that attracts several girls easily to fall for him. He is wearing a white tank shirt showing his smooth and muscular skin on his both arms that Danielle likes to play around with. He also has a tan color shorts on.
Danielle runs excitedly toward him and jumps onto him. Her legs wrap up around Tim’s waist. Danielle and Tim are laughing and hugging each other because they haven’t seen each other for a while.
Danielle says, “Hey, my sexy baby!!! I missed you so much!”
“Here comes my beauty peach princess!”
Both of them smooch each other. Cheyenne stares at both of them and begins feeling jealous. She even bite her lips for Tim, she’s having a lust for him.
Tim says, “Hey Isaac, what are you doing? I’ll help you guys out to unload the vans.”
“Yeah, no problem then let’s do it.”
Tim looks back at Danielle and stares at her eyes and says, “I love you so much. Want to do something tonight?”
“Yeah! That’s what I am coming home for! But we have to get those things done first though.”
Then they all unpack things off from the van. While they are unpacking, Cheyenne keeps having an eye on Tim and trying to give him a seductive look so Tim could get an attention from her so he would come to her sometime for an affair but Tim didn’t get away from Danielle though and he did look at Cheyenne twice while unpacking.
Couple of hours later, in Los Angeles, California, at the International Airport, Jack walks out from the spinning doors in semi-slow motion with a taste of romance and revenge mixed type of music and continues walking toward a car and gets in.
In the car, there is a woman named Candice Picci, a very good friend of Jack Craven’s, she has long dark brown hair color, dark brown eyes, wearing blue jeans, a pink spaghetti drift tank top shirt with black leather jacket and is about 5’9” tall.
She says, “Hey Jack.” As when Jack gets in the car with her.
“Hey, what’s going on?”
“Not too much going on and I heard that your wife died few days ago and I am wondering why are you here?”
“Yeah, she died but can’t always expect the truth because I know Cheyenne will be coming to see me for help. Maybe I'll do my thing.” Then he chuckles and continues, “I decided to come here because I thought maybe I’d refresh things up and clean up my past everything about Cheyenne which led to Leanne’s death. Well, too much sick story going on especially with the friendships that I had that was so screwed up.”
“To do your thing? Heh. I wonder what that would be.”
Jack laughs and says, “You know what it is.” And he winks.
“Yeah, of course, you sexy *******.”
Jack smiles then smiles and says, “Tsk…I don’t think so. I’m not trying to play with you because I have my own morals about friendships and love.”
Candice giggles and says, “Yeah, I know, Jack. And we’re good friends to each other.” Then both of them give each other a hug then she begins driving.
On an expressway in Los Angeles, the camera keeps moving around the city to show location then move toward Candice’s car and Jack says, “Candice…Cheyenne showed up at Leanne’s funeral. I began to wonder why she did that but I think she wants something from me.”
“Really? Hmm…that’s really strange after you two haven’t gotten in touch with each other for a long time.”
“Yeah, I know and I wonder how she found out where I was.”
“Ha…she must be one of mysterious whores out there.”
“Boy…she much worse than that. She couldn’t get enough of her hole.” And he chuckles.
“A hole that can be placed on a dilido.” Then she begins laughing off-burst.
Jack continues laughing and says, “Man, I don’t understand those women nowadays. They’re just fall in love too quickly to get some sex or want to have a lover. But…hell we all know that sex is fun but it’s not the first thing that people should have in their mind especially guys.”
“Yeah, I know. It’s still remains as a mysterious psychologist thinking. It’ll be interesting to take a test out of it and find a way to change that but it’s difficult to do that.”
“It is. I’d love to try that kind of test and find the truth about sex. Consider that, it may be a mistake to come up with a thought about the affection on an opposite sex and they don’t look at each other’s personalities to find the connection of love and to create a great relationship. But it’ll be treated differently so anything can’t give an answer which is totally full of ****.”
“Indeed, it’s a full of **** but blame it on human’s nature and emotions but not all of it.”
“Yup, what a tough ****.”
The camera pulls away from the car and continue traveling through the city. A little while later, it moves down from a streetlight toward Candice’s car when she pulls in her apartment where Jack is living at.
Candice says, “Jack, you know…”
“There’s a guy that I’m totally interested in but I’m so unsure about him though and he asked me the other day to meet him at Los Pacific Exotic Bar tonight so can you come there with me so I can be sure that I’m safe when I bring a friend with me. So can you do that?”
“Yeah, sure. I can do that and also I was considering on going to a bar tonight with you, just to lighten things up for myself. So yeah, I’ll go with you.”
She smiles and says, “Good. I’m so glad that you’re here.”
Jack smiles back at her and say, “Yeah, it’s so nice to see you again since it had been a while since I went back to New York. I’m just glad that we’re close as friends after I met you through Leanne. But god, I really miss Leanne so much and my heart is not letting go from her and it’s because I still love her.” He begins sobbing lightly and continues, “I just wished that she’s still here.”
“Jack…it’s all right. I know how you’re feeling but I’m here. I missed her too. Remember this, your soul is still alive and she is in your soul, don’t you ever forget that.”
Jack sighs and says, “Yeah, thanks, Candice. Well, let’s hit it up.” Then both of them take Jack’s duffel bags out from the car and go in the apartment.
Back in Virginia Beach, at Mann’s house, the camera moves toward the house, continue moving through the window and there is 6 people sitting at the table for family dinner. Isaac, Cheyenne, Tim, Danielle, Melissa and Dominic are sitting together for dinner.
Dominic is a son of Cheyenne but is a stepson of Isaac. He has straight dark brown hair and shaved. He also has a small build-in muscle on his body and wearing white tank t-shirt to show off his muscles. He has blue eyes and a small goatee. He doesn’t have a girlfriend otherwise he is always busy with his work on construction like building houses and stuff.
Everyone sit down and begin serving their foods for dinner. They are talking endlessly and having a good time. Cheyenne stares at Dominic and gives him that “don’t say anything” look. Since Dominic knew where Cheyenne was coming from, he went through lot of things with her because Dominic’s real father left them for good with unknown reason.
Cheyenne stares at Tim and says, “Tim…I guess you’ll make sure that you take care of Danielle?”
“Yeah, I’m sure of that and why are you really worried about that?”
“It’s just nothing; I just wanted to be sure that someone takes care of her very well.”
“All right, I’ll be sure of that.” He smiles at her.
“AHHHH!!! I need another glass!” She laughs and runs off to grab another glass of wine. She stands still in the kitchen but releases her body toward the counter in the kitchen. She keeps thinking about one thing and she mouths to herself “I want to **** Tim so bad.” Then she gives out a big sigh and walks back to the dining room.
“How’s the food going?”
“Awful! This tastes like a stinky sea pussy smell!” Melissa yells.
“Cut it out! And grow up!” Isaac shouts.
“Melissa, remember what we talked about? Don’t threat your mother by making those comments. So just go now.”
Melissa gets up from the seat and slams the chair against the table. She yells, “Why don’t you both ever understand anything?!?”
“Excuse me?” Cheyenne says.
“Mom…I knew what you did in your past and I don’t like what I was hearing about it because you’re so damn dirty and I couldn’t believe that my dad married you!”
Cheyenne gets so embarrassed and feels so insulted but she cries at the same time. She says, “Melissa! SHUT UP! AND GO AWAY! I don’t even want to see you anymore!” She runs out of the door then sits down on the porch and sobs.
Melissa gives that small smirk on her face and says, “You have a weak heart and you’re not a strong person.”
Isaac yells, “MELISSA!!! YOU BETTER WIPE YOUR FACE AND SHUT YOUR MOUTH!! And why do you have to be this way?”
“Oh my god, why? Why?!? WHY!!!!” Then he slaps Melissa’s face in a big cannon firing-like way. Melissa’s body throws off onto the floor and starts crying. Isaac says, “How do you feel about that? You better don’t make that kind of comment to us anymore or we will have to report you to child support services for that kind of behavior. And…why do you bother being this way?”
Melissa feels so speechless and not able to think of one thing to say because of a big slap that her dad gave her. Then she runs away to her room. She slaps her bedroom door then jumps onto the bed, taking a pillow cover her body and starts crying.
Isaac walks out of the house and sits down with Cheyenne with his arm around her back.
“Feeling okay, baby?”
“No.” she says with heavy tears coming out from her face.
“Cheyenne…really, I didn’t really expect that coming. And you know…I am starting to worry about how our kids would react to this if they find out about your past.”
“I know and it’s hard to tell them the truth.”
“Truth is one of the biggest of all, you know that.”
“Honey, I know I’ve lied a lot in the past and I still am doing that now.”
“What do you mean by now?”
“Well, for one instance…to our kids and also I lied to Jack which that thing that never change.”
“They deserve to know the truth or if you hold onto that for long time then they wouldn’t feel loved for you anymore. By not telling the truth can hurt relationships and family a lot, I meant that…A LOT. Better to know the truth than nothing.”
“Yes, and I know I can’t hide the past that I had.”
“Well, Cheyenne…what else am I supposed to do for you? We’re married to be meant to each other and also I helped you a lot throughout to not ignore your mistakes that you made from your past but all I can say right now is that you haven’t changed one thing for yourself is to admit the truth, no matter what. Truth can always hurt people but they will get used to it because they can feel better and can find a way to get known each other better. In a way, who knows if they experienced same mistakes that you made but they learned from it so who knows? And also when someone admits the truth then they could either accept each other or not. I haven’t seen that from you yet. I’ve been patient with you and I have a lot of hope that you’d become into a better person only if you tell the truth.”
Cheyenne gives out a big sigh with heavy exhale then she wipes her tears off from her eyes and says, “Isaac, thank you for being there for me to support me and that’s why I loved you so much but I still know that I still have some things that I have to change for who I am because this is starting to make me feel so bad because I made that big mistake once and it seems like I’m making that big mistake again.”
Then she gives him a big and tight hug. They walk back inside the house. Danielle says, “Are you feeling ok, Mom? You know…I couldn’t believe what Melissa was telling you, which took out by a surprise.”
“Yeah, I’m feeling ok but I’m disappointed with everything about what went on in here.”
“I know, Mom.” She walks toward her and gives her a hug.
“I love you, Danielle. I won’t forget what we talked about on our way to here from Baltimore.” Cheyenne lets the hug go then continues, “I’ll take care of dinner, and you can go off with Tim and have fun.” Then she smiles.
“I love you too, Mom.” She gives her a kiss on the cheek then runs off with Tim.
Isaac walks toward Cheyenne and pulls her to have their bodies touching each other while they are hugging. Cheyenne smiles and says, “I love you so much, Isaac. I’m so lucky to have you in my life after seeing you understanding where I’ve gone through in my whole life and you accepted me for who I am.”
“I love you too. Yes, I accepted you for who you are. That’s part of love too. When we first met, I knew that you didn’t understand what a love really meant until someone came to you to show how much a guy really care about you and accepts you. And also I didn’t get myself freaked out about the mistake that you made because it was your honesty and I deserved to know the truth to make us understand each other better and find out what we really want for each other including in our life too especially our children.”
Cheyenne grabs Isaac’s hand and leads him upstairs to their bedroom. Then when they get to their bed and she pushes him onto the bed. She takes her shirt off slowly and leaving her bra on. She jumps onto him and begins kissing him slowly from his belly area to his lips as along while the camera is moving slowly on their left side toward the edge of their bed going toward to where their heads are at.
Back in Los Angeles, at outside of Los Pacific Exotic Bar, the camera moves down toward the street from the big Los Pacific Exotic Bar sign then continues following Jack and Candice while they are getting out from Candice’s car and walking inside the bar. The camera continues following Jack and Candice while they’re walking inside the bar, traveling through bunch of people who also are dancing and drinking. The music is blasting very loud but it doesn’t break the roof.
“Wow…I haven’t been in a bar for long time.” Jack says.
“Really? You sound like you didn’t have a time to spend some fun time on your own.”
“Well, I don’t but at least, it’s something that can keep my mind off from whatever I’m thinking about. So, find your guy yet?” Then he chuckles a little.
“Aww…no, Jack. But shouldn’t we try to find him then?” then she giggles.
He laughs and continues, “Candice…why wouldn’t you go on and find him yourself? Give him a surprise.” He grins.
“Okay, I’ll go find him by myself and I’ll see you in a bit.” She gives him a quick hug and runs off to find a guy that she is expecting to meet up with.
Jack walks toward the counter of the bar and sits down on a high chair. He feels so relaxed then says to the bartender “I need a bottle of mike’s hard lemonade.”
“Right coming up.” The lady bartender says.
“Thanks.” He smiles. Then he turns his head away and browses carefully on other people in the bar. He begins thinking while he is waiting for his drink.
The bartender walks toward Jack bringing his drink to him and says, “There you go, handsome.”
Jack laughs little then smiles and says, “Thanks, what do I owe you?”
“It’s on the house.”
“Oh? Okay thanks.”
“It’s a no problem and I’d like to have a talk with you.” As she speaks in a nice, sweet soft sexy voice implying that she wants him.
“So…what would you like to talk about?”
“Umm…” as she is putting her right index finger onto her lips and starts biting her finger a little and continues, “How about we start introducing ourselves?”
Jack smiles and says, “Ha…wouldn’t you like to get know me?”
“Hell yeah, why not?” As she pushes her body little bit further across the bar counter.
“Umm…I don’t know but I’m nervous about this, really. Because I haven’t been around here in a while or haven’t been at a bar in long time.”
“Really? What is stopping you? Handsome.” As she tries to lighten him up.
“Well…I don’t think I should be telling you this.”
“I’m listening then.”
“Well…I actually have been feeling down lately. My wife just died few days ago and I just got back here few hours ago flying from New York.”
“Aww...I’m so sorry. I didn’t know that.” She places both of her hands onto Jack’s hands and holds his hands to give a small firm holding.
“Thanks. I do really love her a lot but it just hurts me because of after what I had gone through long time ago.” As he is about to give a down feeling look when he’s about to cry and also he tries to avoid a spark feeling from the bartender.
“Need more drink?”
“Give me 3 shots of goldschlager.”
“Goldschlager? Are you crazy?”
“Hahaha, no. I love that kind of shot and I haven’t had it in so long time.”
“All right, right coming up.” As she hurries pouring goldschlager into 3 shots and places it on the counter in front of Jack.
Jack is about to grab a shot and the bartender stops him.
“Wait!!! Maybe you should make a wish before you could drink or make a commitment?”
“Ok…well then, here’s my wish…I wish that I can get past with the death of Leanne so I can have some fun for my own time and that there is nothing against to that because we already forgave our soul but it’s important that I can’t forget about her.” Then he drinks a shot very fast. After he swallows the shot and he clears his throat. He continues, “Wow…it’s so good!”
The bartender smiles at him and says, “What’s your name then?”
“Jack Craven and what’s yours?”
“Brittany Starsky, nice to meet you, Jack.”
Jack smiles and says, “You too.”
Brittany Starsky is the bartender, she is about 5’ 7”, has brown hair color, brown eyes with an average body. She’s wearing a blue jean pants along with a black string tank top with part of her belly body showing. She also has her hair up.
“Jack…I’m getting off working here pretty soon and I am wondering if you would like to hang out with me around here and go do some drinking game and dance?”
Jack gives a sigh and says, “Brittany…I appreciate you asking me this and I don’t think I can do that.”
“Aww…come on, Jack. It’s really nothing and you need to have some fun on your own. It would be better for you because you can escape from something that you have in your mind based on what you’re thinking about.”
“I don’t know…” Brittany puts her hand on Jack’s mouth to cover his mouth and says, “Jack…don’t say that you don’t know…just finish up your last 2 shots and drink it up! And I’ll take you over and do drinking game with me, trust me…you can forget what you’re thinking about.” Then she gives him a wink and a smile to cheer him up.
“All right, fine. I’ll finish it up.” He drinks last 2 shots then he begins feeling little buzzed and he starts laughing little. “This is so good.”
“Good boy, Jack.” She jumps onto the counter and grabs Jack’s face and gives him a kiss on his cheek.
He gets blushed and says, “Damn you, Brittany.” He smiles at her. Brittany begins laughing at him and says, “Well…see? That’s what all fun is about!”
“Yeah, I know…well why not, you just go finish whatever you do then you can join me, all right?”
“Yeah, great!!! I’ll see you in little while.” She gives him a last look before she walks off. Jack keeps staring at her while she walks off and begins thinking about things over and starting to realize that he has to start feeling better about things are still out there especially, he knows that he still loves Leanne but he can’t replace her though. So he thinks in his head, “Leanne, I know you will forgive me about this and you know that I can’t replace another lady for you so I just need something to make myself feel better instead of feeling so falling apart from everything that went on in my life so I need to look for something to keep myself alive so I should start doing that and it’s the only way that I can keep myself away from it.” Then he asks another bartender for a drink of long island iced tea then walks away from the bar to find Candice.
The camera travels through several people dancing while following Jack to find Candice. Jack finds Candice and she is dancing with one guy. The camera rotates around Jack’s front face in slow motion while the music is playing slowly along with sinister theme playing then Jack’s eyebrows goes into an anger expression when he sees the guy is dancing with Candice then all of sudden he disappears.
The guy that is dancing with Candice, his name is Fred Savage, he is about 2 years older than Candice, and he has black hair with dark green eyes. He also has a goatee and shaved nicely. He also has some blonde highlight in his hair and is black. He’s wearing tan pants along with a green t-shirt and brown suit. He begins dancing closer and closer toward Candice otherwise he wants to feel a little hard-on.
Candice wraps her arm around Fred’s neck and keeps smiling at him. As the camera still moving around Candice and Fred while they’re dancing but the camera is rotating in an opposite way from where they’re dancing.
Fred smiles back at Candice and give a kiss on her lips. He says, “Having fun?”
“Yeah, especially meeting you.”
“So, what do you think of me?”
“You’re a really nice guy, I mean you’re really attractive but I have to keep telling myself to not fall into you that fast.”
Fred laughs and says, “Well, it happens. You’re feeling this way because you’re having a desire and possibly a lust.”
“Oh my god, shut up!” she begins laughing and continues, “You better behave now or we won’t do anything later.”
“Or won’t do anything later? What are you implying to?” as he is trying to tease her in a friendly way.
“Oh my god…get away from me!”
“Let’s change the subject and I want go get some another drink, want some more?”
“Yeah, please.” She smiles.
“I’ll be back.” He speaks in a creepy and serious tone.
The camera moves toward Candice as she is about to feel worn out after dancing too long then continues moving around her then Jack shows up right at Candice’s face out of blue.
Candice is panting, kind of tired from dancing and suddenly feels surprised when Jack shows up right at her face.
“Jack…what are you doing here? You know…I don’t want Fred to see you here. Because he would think that I’m having another guy.”
“No. I wouldn’t have been here now but I’m here because I need to tell you something.” His voice sounds serious and in a hurry.
“What? Jack…what’s wrong?”
“Well…I have to tell you something about this guy that you’re seeing.”
“HUH?!?” she couldn’t hear him really well because the music is blasting too loud then she continues, “What about him?”
“He knows me.”
“He used to date Cheyenne.”
“Oh my god, really?”
“So, why are you afraid of seeing him?”
“Because…I somewhat beaten him up long time ago while we were young.”
“Well…what does this has to do anything with now?”
He rolls his eyes and says, “I know that he wants to have a revenge for what I have done to him. He hurt Cheyenne, he abused her. That’s why I beat him up long time ago but let me tell you this…I do know that Cheyenne still have a feeling for him.”
“Why would you think like that?”
“Because I know that Cheyenne couldn’t get enough of her desires.”
“Aren’t you referring this as her sex obsession?”
“Something like that.”
“Oh lord…well, I don’t know what to say but all I know that I don’t want to be around with guys that Cheyenne used to be with or guys that are trying get in women’s pants. Of course, we know that she’s so dirty and very slutty.”
Jack gives out a small chuckle and says, “I know but what else can I do? Think twice before you can react to your actions and I better get out of here before he comes back.”
“Yeah, I’ll see you in little while then.” She smiles at him when he is about to walk away.
“I’ll be here if you need me.”
He walks away and returns to the bar counter. He sits down on the high chair and waiting for Brittany to get her shift done.
Fred returns to Candice and gives her the drink.
He says, “Enjoy the drink.” Then they tap the glasses and drink. They continue dancing and somewhat still cuddle with each other while dancing. When it comes to a slow dance, Candice puts her head onto Fred’s neck like she’s falling in love with him.
The camera moves toward Jack slowly while he’s watching Candice is dancing with Fred. His face expression is making into a jealous and angry expression then he begins to shake his head lightly. Then he turns around facing at the bar and he rolls his eyes. He walks off and search for a table to sit down. He finds one and sits down while waiting for Brittany.
A little while later, Brittany finally gets out from work and joins the table with Jack.
“Hey you.” She smiles.
“So finally you’re done working then?”
“Yeah, that’s it for the night so we can spend some time together, how’s that sound?” She smiles.
Jack chuckles and says, “Spend time together tonight? Wouldn’t that be too soon to you?”
“I don’t care and I just feel like I want to spend a night with a man tonight, just that I’m in mood for getting some.”
“Well, aren’t you even concerned that we barely know each other?”
“Yeah, I do see your point but I just feel like I want to have some. So aren’t you going to do it with me?”
Jack sounds little nervous and shy at that time when she asks him that and he says, “I wouldn’t mind but one night stand is not my biggest thing so I never really consider myself on doing those things so I don’t know. I mean I would but we hardly know each other at this time.”
“Jack…I totally get it, I get it but wouldn’t you care, anyway?”
“Well, what’s the real reason that you want to do it with me, not other guys?”
She laughs a little and says, “You’re so cute when you’re nervous about that. I want to do it with you because you’re a very nice guy who really cares about people and their things. You even also accept people for who they are. In addition to that, you’re so hot too. Affection comes to my impression.”
Jack laughs and says, “I’m so hot? Is that it? Ha, affection isn’t important to me that much but yeah it would be true that affection comes to people’s impressions.”
Brittany smiles and gives him a hug. She says, “Well, yeah that’s it for now but we can get know each other more if you’re interested but tonight is enough for me but we can get know more after though.”
“Actually, I never really get that impression when women said that I’m hot and stuff because they don’t really say it to me. And also, it’s just that I’m a widow.”
“Really? You never really get any impressions when women tell you that you’re a hot? Very interesting but in my opinion, you are anyway.” She laughs.
Jack smiles and says, “Well, thanks for your comment.”
“Shall we dance?”
“There we go.” As he smiles at her when he leads her into the dancing floor and starts dancing. Brittany wraps her arms around Jack’s neck and her face is facing real close to Jack’s. She seems like she’s ready to give him a kiss. The camera is rotating around them slowly while Brittany is wrapping her arms around Jack’s neck as along her face is closing up toward his face and kiss. She is feeling very pleasurable while she is kissing Jack. Jack is feeling overblown and surprised because he hasn’t been kissed in a long while even he likes the way the kiss goes so he keeps going on and on with the kissing.
He pulls his head away and says, “Brittany…I love your kiss and thank you.” He smiles at her.
“My pleasure and I even love yours too.” She quickly grabs his face and starts kissing more. The camera pulls away from them and far away from the people at the bar.
Few minutes later, Jack and Brittany are still dancing close to each other even they are so close. Brittany lays her head down on Jack’s shoulder and her eyes were not moving. She is thinking of many things inside her head like she’s falling in love with Jack.
Jack has his right hand lying on back of Brittany’s neck and his left hand is still wrapping around Brittany’s stomach. He starts being quiet and thinking even he begins having a small tears coming out from one of his eyes. He is feeling so speechless and not knowing what he would do. He would want to move his life ahead after Leanne’s death but he seems couldn’t.
Jack whispers to Brittany’s ear, “Want to leave now and go to your place?” Brittany pulls her head up, smiles at Jack and says, “Yeah, I want to go now.”
“All right, I have to let Candice know so I’ll be right out so go outside and wait by the door.”
“Hurry up!” She exclaims in friendly and flirty way as she smiles widely at Jack. He chuckles at her and walks off to find Candice.
Jack walks through bunch of people to find Candice then he stops and looks shocked at the same time. He feels like he couldn’t even go up to see Candice and wants to leave right away. He sees Candice and Fred are being so orgy with kissing and such. Even he sees Fred keep squeezing Candice’s butt so hard at frequently times and also he sees that Candice keeps giving that the most pleasure facial expression while she moans when Fred keeps grabbing her butt. Jack makes that disgusted look on his face and says, “What the hell are they thinking? God…what a perverted ****er!”
So he steps back and waits until Fred wouldn’t catch Jack in his sight. At last, Fred walks off to the bar to get more drinks. Jack runs a little to catch Candice and says, “Candice…I’m gunna go now so I’ll see you in the morning.”
“Jack...what’s wrong? Why are you acting like this?”
“No…I’m not telling you this right now and I have to go now before your sick pervert guy comes. I’ll be so dead if he sees me so see you in the morning and I’ll talk to you about it. But to warn you…don’t get laid from him, ok? But I know you won’t listen anyway so see you.” He walks off like disappears as a ghost. Candice says, “What the hell?” Then Fred comes back and continues dancing with her.
The camera is at front of Jack and still following at same speed as Jack is walking rapidly from the dance floor to outside of the club to meet Brittany. By the time when he reaches outside and the camera pulls up to give a good sight of the location on the street while Jack and Brittany is walking on sidewalk. They are holding hands.
At outside of Los Pacific Exotic Bar, on the sidewalk, Brittany says, “What happened in there? You seem pissed so what’s going on?”
Jack sighs and says, “My friend is dancing with a guy that I once knew when I was young. I knew who that guy was and I warned my friend to be careful when she’s around with him.”
“Why? What happened in the past?”
“You know…when I was at Leanne’s funeral, I got an unexpected visitor who I haven’t seen in long time. That visitor is my long lost friend and her name is Cheyenne. I haven’t seen her since after she got married.”
“Quite a long time.”
“Yeah, I know. When I saw her again for first time, I refused to talk to her even she told me that she needed to talk to me about something so that’s when I came back here right away to get away from her.”
“Hmm…something that you two did before?”
“No, not really. We were never together or dated or anything like that. We were just hanging out and such but nothing more than that. However, that guy who my friend is dating with…he used to date Cheyenne. One day when Cheyenne came to me being hurt and stuff. You know the thing with being hurt by love and stuff. So I didn’t like seeing people getting hurt so I went to see him and I gave him a small beating so he could have deserved it. I mean come on; you know how those ****ing guys are!”
“Gladly, you’re not one of them so be lucky to be like that though.” As she tries to give him a cheer.
“People are criticizing on their life and I mean what the **** are they doing? They just keep saying that it just happens. That’s a ****ing lame excuse. So I was like no, it was done by your choice and not only by the way things had happened. God, I want to stop talking about this because I had enough of that for long time and nobody seems to understand how to enjoy their life to their fullest while they’re not in relationship? But no, they are too busy worrying about finding an opposite sex to screw around with but in a harm’s way.”
“Jack…what could I say about that? Didn’t you date that many women in the past?”
“No, only few of them. The most reason was that I haven’t found a woman that was interested in me as much as I was interested in one of them. Then I suddenly saw them hooking up with other guys afterwards. So that’s when I began wondering about many things that went on out there in life. That’s the thing that I don’t even understand is that people just keep looking for a hook up or asking to go out to do whatever they desire for then they get ****ed and end up coming up to me and telling me that their guys turn out to be assholes, full of themselves or a hot-tempered. What was I supposed to do then? So then what’s the point?” He laughs a little and continues, “Let’s get out of here, and want to go to Starbucks to get some cappuccino?”
“Yeah, let’s go there and sit down for a chat too.” She smiles.
“All right then.” Jack smiles and holds his hand onto Brittany’s and walks off together on the sidewalk.
Back at Los Pacific Exotic Bar, the camera rotates around on few couples while they’re dancing then moves toward a music group who is playing on the stage then moves down onto the dance floor and moving toward Candice and Fred while they’re dancing.
Candice still wrapping her arms around Fred’s neck and smiling at him but her face changes a little, her expression shows a disappointed look on her face. Fred begins puzzling at her then he tries to not bother asking her but wouldn’t get away from it so he says, “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing is wrong, why did you ask?”
“Your expression is telling me something and it looks like you were disappointed with something so what is it?”
“It’s not about you.”
“Well, I’m all to hear it anyway.”
“No, I don’t think I have anything to tell you anything at this time.”
Fred becomes angry and agitated so he breaks the dance off with her. He snarls, “Don’t have anything to tell me at this time? You’re lying!”
“Why all of sudden you’re pissed off about over this a simple thing? I hardly know you and we just met tonight. It takes time to get know each other so I don’t see your point of being pissed off.”
“I deserve to know even though I have a right to know.”
“**** me? Let’s get onto that then.” he gives a small smirk on his face.
“No! Get away from me now!” as she is about to walk off but Fred keeps grabbing her arm and pull her over to him.
“No, I’m not letting you go! Stay with me until I get laid from you.”
“No! You are not getting any from me!”
“Why? I needed some.”
“Why? Why didn’t you ask yourself why?”
“Because of my sexual desires and I need it. I can’t get enough of my own sexuality.”
“Wow…you know what? That’s the lamest thing that I ever heard. You…you…just get out of my face right now or I’ll call security if you don’t let me go!”
“Lamest thing, yeah I know it is but sorry, no excuses but I’m still making you to get laid with me then.”
She turns around and kicks Fred’s testicles with her kneecap then she yells, “Get the **** out of my face! You pervert!”
Someone yells “Yeah mother****er!” out of blue.
She runs away to find a security for assistance. She finds a security and tells him that a guy is harassing her then he walks off to search for Fred. Fred sees the security is looking for him so he keeps walking off to get out of the security’s sight.
Candice finally runs out of the bar, she keeps panting and getting tired from running. So she runs to get in her car and locks herself in. Her head collapses onto her arms while her arms are on the steering wheel of her car and begins sobbing.
Fred walks out quietly without having any security guards seeing him then he sneaks out and scares Candice by showing up at her car’s front window. He slaps the hood loudly and yells, “Candice! You won’t get away from me! You are still getting one from me!”
Candice starts screaming even she opens her window a little so the guards could hear her screaming. The guards finally hear her so they run over to her car and catch Fred. They shove him down onto the hood and handcuff him. Then they pull him up and start asking questions.
The head in charge of the guard says to Candice “Madam, are you all right?”
“Yes, I am and thank you so much for catching him.”
“Ok, well I have to ask you few questions before I can take him to the police so what happened in there?”
“We were meeting up there for first time and we were just getting along fine even I had one of my friends with me. But he has already left so I continued dancing with him then I was starting to feel disappointed because of what my friend told me so Fred started getting all pissed on me like he wanted to know what was going on. Even I told him that it was just nothing and I didn’t want to say anything because of first time meeting so we hardly know each other. Then he started harassing me even I kept telling him to go away and such. Then now, here he is.”
“Ok, thank you, madam. I got your story. I’ll put it on report and have the police verify the report to charge him for harassment. You may go now and have a nice night. Drive safely.”
He turns around and takes Fred in his custody. Candice sighs and drives off. The camera pulls away from the street while the guards are taking Fred in their custody until the police arrive while Candice’s car is departing.
At Starbuck’s Coffee place, the camera moves slowly around the corner seeing Jack and Brittany sitting down chatting and laughing. Brittany feels in so love with Jack whom she keeps staring at him even she sometimes bites her finger. She says, “You don’t even know that!” She laughs.
“I don’t know that? Oh Really? Tell me about that!”
“No!” she snickers.
“Come on! Your eyes are still telling me that you’re into something.”
“No! I am not!” She grins and still laughing.
“Really? Maybe you’re seducing me.”
“Maybe you’re right but I’m not telling you.” She giggles.
“Maybe or maybe not? Oh, I think you are.” Jack smiles.
“Well, you’re so tease.”
“Wow…Jack, Leanne was so lucky that she had you.”
“Why would you say that?”
“Cause you’re so much different than any other guys that I’ve met and I was just surprised that you don’t have that much interest about sex or to screw around for fun as first thing from your mind. You just keep playing around to avoid that topic and talk about something else to get know each other more than what things should be.”
“Brittany, look…you didn’t have to say that even I knew what you were going to say but I appreciate that but it’s who I am. And I did that for a purpose.”
“Yeah, I know you were doing it for a purpose and even I knew that you were sick of seeing other guys getting what they’re looking for and you don’t.”
“Well, you know…Leanne was not the perfect lady herself because she had done mistakes in her past including her relationships with other men. Lot of them are doing same thing but this kind of thing does bother me a lot though because it seems like nobody even really understand how to take enough patience for themselves.”
“Yeah, I know what you are trying to say. But it’s so ridiculous.”
“Absolutely…everything’s so ridiculous.”
“So, you’re saying that Leanne did pretty much similar what Cheyenne did?”
“Somewhat but not exactly.”
“Well, Cheyenne has so much desire for her own sexuality and she likes to **** guys around and couldn’t get enough of her horniness. Leanne isn’t like that. She usually gets serious when she goes in relationships but the only difference is that Cheyenne doesn’t really care who she ****s with while she’s still in relationships because she still sleeps with other men. That’s outrageous from what I knew.”
“Wow…Cheyenne seems pretty crazy lady herself and she likes it when guys are feelers from what I tell.”
“Oh yeah, she does. And I even hate guys who are feelers themselves and it is just distracting because it seems that they have no respect for others but they wouldn’t stop until they get what they want.”
“Jack…I’m feeling so amazed that I’ve met you.”
“Well, that’s the real reason because of respecting others’ desires and privacy.”
“Yeah, I’m glad that you’re not like one of those guys.”
“I know and ready to go? Let’s go over to your place then.”
“Are you really up to for some fun, sure about that?”
“Yeah, I’m sure because there is nothing against that and just wanted you to know that I’m not like one of those guys and one who can listen to my feelings about different things.”
“All right, let’s go then.” She smiles and grabs Jack’s hand and leaves the coffee place to her place.
The camera moves down toward Brittany’s house from a palm tree and the car pulls in the driveway heading to the garage. The house is so large, almost like the house at the ranch and it is filled with maple and wood built in. There are several glass windows all over the house. Brittany and Jack get out from Brittany’s car and walk inside the house. Jack walks in with full of awe when he wanders around the house because he didn’t expect the house to be that beautiful and exotic.
“So how did you get this house?”
“Well, I was married before but I got the ownership for this house.”
“Really? Who was your husband?”
“Joseph Long. He’s the U.S. Senator.”
“Interesting, I know him though.”
“He’s a complete ass and a sick-minded person.”
“I’m not surprised about that. But I know he is up to something at this time.”
“Obviously, he wants President’s position. I know it and he even told me that too.”
“So you two ever had children?”
“No, he didn’t even want to have one.”
“He’s too damn chicken and a lazy bum. That leads to the reason why he’s the Senator now.”
“So, what about you, Jack?”
“We didn’t have children yet and haven’t gotten a chance to have one.”
“Yeah? How come?”
“Didn’t come to our mind even Leanne and I discussed about having some children together but it didn’t happen yet and now, she’s dead.”
“Yeah, it’s sad though however, I still want to have a child for myself to rise on my own.”
“Yeah, it’d be nice to have one.”
“I agree.” She smiles and gives him a big hug then starts kissing him to make herself feel so turned on.
They keep on kissing then Jack picks Brittany up and carry her toward the pool outside of the house. He throws her in the pool and Brittany is laughing and screaming. Brittany gasps after her face came out from the water and she moves her hair so she can see then she keeps staring at Jack and smiling. She hurries taking her clothes off in the pool and leaving her tank top shirt on. She giggles says to Jack “Come here.” Jack leads his body toward her and starts kissing her. While they are kissing, Brittany pulls Jack right in the pool then starts taking his clothes off and cuddling him while kissing.
They keep the kissing going on and on and they wouldn’t even stop also they are breathing heavily. Brittany keeps giving a small moaning noise while kissing Jack. As the kissing keeps going on, Brittany takes an attempt to take her underwear off as while the camera rotates around them while they’re kissing but you won’t see anything under the water. Then lastly, Brittany finally grabs Jack’s shorts and takes it off. She starts wrapping her legs around Jack’s hips and she says, “Go inside me, inside me.” while she is moaning from kissing. The camera continues moving around them then turns away toward the waves of the water while Jack and Brittany are making love.
Little while later, they finally stop but both of them are panting and Brittany wraps her arms around Jack’s neck and keeps her body onto Jack’s. She lays her head on Jack’s shoulder and says, “I love you so much, Jack.”
The next morning, at Washington-Dulles Airport, the camera moves toward Cheyenne’s car from the airport building and continues following Cheyenne while she gets out from her car to assist Isaac to collect duffel bags and bring to the airport. They walk to the ticket agent to pick up the ticket and to drop the bags off. Isaac says to the agent, “Thank you very much.” Ticket agent says, “Have a nice flight and have a good day.”
Isaac grabs Cheyenne’s hand and pulls her toward him. He says, “Cheyenne…don’t forget what we talked about. And remember…always stay strong and be sure of yourself. I trust you.”
“Yeah, I didn’t forget what we talked about and I love you. I’ll see you in couple of weeks. Be safe.”
“You too, my sweetie and I love you too.” Then both of them give each other a kiss then Isaac walk away to the airport. The camera moves toward Cheyenne and rotates her once toward her face with a light suspense music playing. She keeps staring at Isaac while he is leaving and she bites her lips.
Then she looks at a cute guy who is about to walk in the airport, she walks into him and bumps him accidentally.
“Oh I’m sorry! Excuse me.”
“Oh that’s all right.” He smiles at her and continues, “So what’s your name?”
“Cheyenne and yours?”
“Robert, nice to meet you.”
“You too. So what are you here for? Where are you going?”
“Oh, I’m going to Seattle but my flight does not leave until later this evening. And I’m going there on a business.”
Cheyenne smiles and says, “Oh, I just dropped my husband here and he’s leaving now. So want to do something before you leave?”
“Sure, why not?”
The camera is on the ground moving upward the trunk of a car from the back left tire and the car is shaking. The camera zooms at Cheyenne slowly while she rides on Robert. She moans and gasps then she moves her head onto Robert’s shoulder and starts kissing his neck but she continues riding on him. The windows in the car get all streamed up then a little while later; Cheyenne get dressed up and get out from the car. While she is at outside of the car, she bends over to kiss Robert more and at the same time, she rubs Robert’s crotch but the camera only stays onto Cheyenne and Robert’s faces when it happens. She says, “Thank you for a great sex.” She smiles and walks off so much happier like she never felt for in long time.
Later in that morning, in Los Angeles, at Brittany’s house, in her bedroom, the camera moves toward Brittany’s face slowly as she wakes up when the camera stops moving. Brittany is so much happier than ever and she turns her body over toward Jack and snuggles toward him. She puts her head on Jack’s chest and continues sleeping. Jack puts his arms around her and holds her even they both are naked in bed but with blanket covering most of the body so the feet and chest could be seen except Brittany’s.
Brittany says, “Jack, you were really great and I had so much fun last night.”
“Yeah, me too. But it was a guilty pleasure.” He laughs.
“Guilty pleasure? I don’t think so!” She giggles.
“Oh hush up!” he jokes.
“You’re one of most great guys that I ever met and I really enjoyed spending time with you. I would like to take this relationship farther but I think it probably would be better to wait because of your issue with Leanne.”
“I am thinking of same thing and yeah, it needs to wait a little while after my issue with Leanne resolved and it takes time to get over with her death and such. Plus, I didn’t expect this so soon that I’d find another woman.”
“Yeah, I understand, Jack. But don’t worry about that because a thing like this requires patience.”
“I always love patience.”
“I love you so much.” She snuggles again and starts kissing him. The camera tilts and a move from them toward the window then everything goes into white.
Back in Virginia Beach, during at night, the camera moves toward a house that is having a big party from a street light. Cars pulls over and there are three young people getting out from the car and walk toward the house. Then the camera continues moving toward Dominic, Danielle, Tim and Melissa while they are on sidewalk walking to the house which is few houses away from Mann’s house where people are having party at. Danielle is talking to Melissa.
Danielle says, “Why did you give mom a hard time?”
“Well…I didn’t mean to be like that but I was just fed up of how things went on out there with people.”
“What are you trying to tell me?”
“Honestly, I’m jealous of you because you’re having a relationship right now and that you’re in love.”
“Hmm…all right, I’ll talk to you more about that later since we’re going to party right now.”
“All right, sister.”
They go in the house as the camera starts following them wherever they are going. Dominic and Tim shake hands with other people that they knew from before and they also hug some girls. Melissa and Danielle hug their friends when they see them.
The camera then swift toward a couple walking down the stairs and they are carrying alcohol. The girl is heavily drunk and the boy is helping her out but at the same time, he seems trying to find a way to take an advantage of her but he hasn’t shown it yet. He holds her hand and leads her to a bathroom.
In a bathroom, the boy says to the drunken girl “I like you so much and do you like me?”
“Why do you like me so much?”
“Because you’re so hot and extremely nice.”
“Ok…well, I’m flattered that you like me so much but I don’t have that kind of feeling for you.”
“Why is that? You’re interested in someone else?”
“No, not just that. Honestly…why do you come to me?”
He moves his head toward her and kisses her. He says, “For that. I want to be in love with you.” Then he begins touching her hips and stomach to feel her skin.
The girl moans a little because she’s drunk and says, “No, I don’t want you.”
The boy chuckles a little then he puts his hand inside her pants to feel her. She starts protesting him and keeps saying words like “No, Please no, please don’t.”
The boy refuses to listen then he pulls her pants down then pulls his.
The camera pulls away without showing them the action and swifts toward other people when the boy pulls his pants. The camera continues moving around to surf through bunch of people at the party. The camera goes toward a couple, keeps moving around them and they are kissing and cuddling over the couch. Both of them are drunk and the girl says, “I love you so much.” The boy says, “Nice…” He seems never to care to hear what she was saying.
Melissa approaches to them and feels so disgusted after what she hears from them. So she says, “Why can’t people even think before while they’re drunk? Just because they want to be feelers and to desire something.”
So she takes the girl off from the boy and walks away with her from him. The boy stands up and starts chasing after Melissa because she takes the girl away from him. Melissa sees the boy is chasing after them so she yells, “Tim!!! I need your help!”
Tim rushes into her and assists them to escort them outside then waits for the boy to step outside. The boy finally walks outside then Tim runs like a madman and jumps over him to grab him. Both of them fall onto the ground but Tim locks the boy’s arm while the boy’s body is facing the ground.
Melissa sighs with a big relief and sits down with the girl on the small brick area next to sidewalk. She says, “Are you feeling all right?” The girl says, “I don’t know because I’m so drunk.”
“So do you have a name?”
“Mary and what’s yours?”
“Why did you escort me out?”
“Well…I was protecting you away from the boy that you were cuddling up with because I knew who he is and just to protect you because you hardly know him and I was listening to what you were saying to him and what he was saying to you even I knew you were not thinking.”
“I was with him? Oh god! I didn’t even know that! I must be really drunk.”
“Yeah but that does tell me something else though.”
“That you are in need for love.”
“Wow…you’re so right, Melissa. I do.”
“Yeah, well, I heard you were saying that you love so much to him. So I saw his reaction and I knew he wasn’t drunk. He played you pretending to be drunk. After you told him that you loved him so much and do you know what he said?”
“All he said was nice. And that was it. So I had to stop it and pull you away from him because I knew what he was going to do next are to have sex with you as using an advantage of you.”
“Oh ****…why? Why? Why did I get with him in first place?”
“Thanks for escorting me out, Melissa. You’re a great friend.”
“Anytime and we should get in touch with each other sometime.”
“Yeah, thank you so much, you saved my life.”
“Your welcome and do you want me to walk home with you?”
“Yeah, I would like that and thanks a lot for your help.”
“All right, let’s go then.” Then both of them get up and start walking back to home.
Tim yells at the boy, “What the hell were you doing?!?”
“Go screw yourself.” He gives him that nasty look from his face.
“Screw myself? Tell me something…why were you trying to take an advantage of Mary?”
“I ain’t telling you, you dumb mother****er.”
“No! **** you and you deserved that!”
He starts spraining the boy’s arms harder and the boy starts groaning lightly. He continues, “Tell me why you were trying to take advantage of this girl?”
“To get laid. Everyone needs to get laid.”
“Laid? To get ****ing laid? Oh my god! No way!” He sprains the boy’s arm more until the pain hurts more. The boy finally screams in agony.
“No! Don’t hurt me more!”
“Well then, don’t ****ing hurt girls anymore then! And stop thinking about getting laid. Getting laid is all what boys care about! Cut with that **** then!” He finally lets him go then he kicks the boy’s butt extremely hard like how a cannon ball crash into a building then he blows his breath heavily and says, “What a ****ing idiot, I just don’t get it.” He fixes himself up and his hair too then goes back to the party. The boy runs away out to nowhere.
Back at the party, Tim continues walking around the house then he is about to go in bathroom but the door is locked and he knocks the door. The boy come out from bathroom but he disappears quickly. Tim opens the door and he stops moving when he sees the girl passes out and completely naked. He becomes more furious and starts chasing after the boy who walks out from the door. While he is running to find the boy, he yells at Danielle to help the girl out in the bathroom.
Danielle runs down from the stair to the bathroom to help the girl out. She covers her up with a blanket and trying to wake her up.
Tim still running to find the boy and finally finds him outside at the pool where he is talking to other girls. So he runs toward him and shoves him into the pool along jumping into the pool. He grabs him and pushes him toward the wall of the pool. The boy cries when he feels the pain. The boy says, “Why did you do that to me?”
“What do you think? I saw you coming out from bathroom and when I went in and all I found that there is a girl lying down completely naked so what’s wrong with you?”
“Hahaha **** you.”
“Okay then. I’ll give you a real good one, want piece of that?”
“Works for me and I don’t care because I already got laid with her and man, she’s so awesome. Her body is so ****in’ great that makes the ****ing so unbelievable!”
Tim snarls and feels so fed up with those things so he punches the boy’s face then he moves his face up close to the boy’s face and gives a quiet burp sound right at his face. He pulls him out from the pool and pushes him toward a chair.
He says, “Let me ask you one thing. Why did you want to get laid with her then?”
“Because my dick needs one.”
“The hell with your dick and its bull****.”
“Good for you.”
“Good for me? NO! IT’S TOO GOOD FOR YOU! I’m calling cops on you so you can be charged for having sexual assaults with a young girl even they’ll charge you with a rape so then you shut the **** up.” Then he ties the boy up on the chair and he says, “You will be waiting for cops so good luck.” He smiles at him then takes his cell phone out and starts calling the police.
Few minutes later, after calling the cops, Tim hurries back in the house to tell people to get out and the people finally walk out from the house. Then he walks to bathroom to meet Danielle to help the girl. People are finally gone by the time when the cops arrive.
The policeman walks in and goes to bathroom to investigate the situation. He sees a girl lying down and he asks Danielle “What happened? Who owns the property of this house?”
A man walks out from the kitchen and says, “I own the property and I’m aware of this situation which is why Tim called the cops.”
Danielle says, “This girl got passed out and a boy was trying to get into her pants which he already did then he left her in here completely naked but my boyfriend named Tim already caught him and he is with him outside by the pool right now.”
The policeman says, “All right, I will let the charges go about what’s going on in here because I haven’t gotten any complaints from the neighborhood but I will make a case about this incident and I will charge the boy with rape and sexual assault so I’ll go to the pool and question him right now. I’m going to call in an ambulance right now to escort her to the hospital. Has her parents been notified?”
Danielle says, “No, because I don’t know who she is.”
Policeman says, “All right, I’ll report in the ambulance and they should arrive shortly.” Then he walks outside to the pool to meet up the boy and Tim.
The boy gives a dirty look at the policeman and Tim.
The policeman says, “So how old are you?”
Tim says, “Liar.”
The policeman says, “Can I see your id?”
“Don’t have it with me.” Then the policeman walks toward him and found the wallet from him then he opens it up and says, “Ahh…you lied about your age. It says you’re 20 years old so I’m going to arrest you and charge you for rape and sexual assault with a young and underage girl. You’re under arrest and you have a right to remain silent or to get a lawyer.”
“Remain silent my ass.”
The policeman cuffs him up and grabs him to his patrol car. Then he shoves him into the car and kicks his butt so hard. He slams the door loudly and turns around facing Tim. He says to Tim “You’re a great guy and thanks for your help. You’ll get your reward.”
Tim smiles at him and says, “Not a problem, just doing a right thing to protect the harm of love and young people. Because I don’t want to see them get hurt.”
“Yeah, I agree with you and again, thanks for your help and appreciate your help for holding him. Have a great night.” He goes back in his patrol car and leaves. Tim walks back in the house and stays with Danielle and the girl until the ambulance arrives.
The camera moves around the front headlight of an ambulance when the ambulance arrives and it continues moving toward the door as the driver gets out running to the back of ambulance. The camera continues following two medics while they get the gurney out from the ambulance and continue to follow them while they run inside the house.
Inside the house, two medics continue walking in the house to the bathroom where a girl is still lying down and pass out. The medics checks on the girl and they find out that she didn’t have a pulse so they start doing a rescue process to start her up so she can wake up because she is so drunk and they also figured that she was raped.
Melissa and Danielle start crying a little because they are hoping that the girl would make it. The music begins playing with a sorrowful theme but a music that can give you some hope that something good would happen. Danielle says to Tim “That ******* needs to die.”
“I know but he is already turned in to the police so why should we worry about that right now? All we can do right now is to give a hope that she’ll make it.”
The medics continue the processing and finally, they get her wake up. They place her on the gurney and take her in the ambulance. The camera is at the front of the gurney following in same direction as where they’re going back to the ambulance then starts pulling away from them when they put her in the ambulance. Danielle, Tim and Melissa are standing outside and watching the ambulance as it’s about to depart and Danielle and Tim are holding against each other.
The next morning, the camera is on the ground of the street, following someone’s feet while the person is walking across the street. The person who walks across the street is Cheyenne and she is walking to Tim’s house to have a chat with Tim. The camera continues following her to Tim’s house in a small rapid speed from the ground of the street. She is wearing a bathrobe. She knocks the door at Tim’s house and Tim answers the door. He says to her “Yeah, Cheyenne. What do you need?”
“Umm…can I come in? I need to talk to you about something, wouldn’t you mind?”
“Yeah, I wouldn’t mind so please come in.”
“Okay, thanks.” She grins at him.
She enters Tim’s house then she sighs and says, “Ahh…well.” Then she laughs.
Tim says, “So…what’s up?”
“I want to tell you that I always wanted to **** you.”
Tim’s facial expression changes and he gets surprised so suddenly. He says, “That came out of blue and I want to know one thing…why do you want to do that with me and are you even aware that I’m dating your daughter?”
“Yes, I’m aware of that but I like young guys like you.” She giggles.
“You like young guys like me? Well are you even concerned about relationship issues?”
“I don’t care about relationship issues and I just like to ****. Because it’s the only thing that made me feel good and I couldn’t get enough of it so since Isaac is out of town so should I be bothered with it?” Then she begins taking her bathrobe off to expose her naked body. Tim’s eyes pop wide open and is stunned by Cheyenne’s body then he grabs her and starts kissing her. Cheyenne moans and she wraps her legs around Tim’s.
The camera moves away from them and keeps moving around inside the house showing the pictures that are placed on shelves and tables. The pictures show happiness times that Tim and Danielle had while they were together. The music starts playing in sorrow theme then changes into a suspense theme as the camera travels throughout the bookshelf moving from picture to picture then it zooms into one last picture which shows Tim and Danielle kissing each other but they held each other like they’re so tight and together that their love would last forever.
The camera continues moving upward of the house through the window where Tim’s bedroom is at. Then it is at the floor under the bed but the bed is shaking tremulously so it moves up to above of the bed from the floor and shows bare naked back of Cheyenne’s while she is riding on Tim. The camera moves toward Cheyenne’s hair and rotates around her head to show her face and she gasps while staring at Tim.
Tim pulls her down and goes on top of her as along the camera rotates back to the floor and the bed is still shaking. After a while, finally Cheyenne screams and the bed breaks down onto the floor.
Tim yells, “Whoa! Holy ****…that was so wild! And my bed is broken already, how the hell did we do that?”
Cheyenne laughs and says, “And we had a great sex too.” Both of them smile at each other.
The camera moves toward the picture of Danielle and Tim again with a suspense music playing.
It moves toward Danielle when she is about to wake up in her bed then it follows her when she walks to the window to check the sighting. The camera is at outside of her bedroom’s window and she gets pissed but having a funny feeling about her mother because she sees Cheyenne walks out from Tim’s house and the camera pulls away and continue moving toward Cheyenne as she is walking across the street to go back in her house.
The camera pulls back toward Danielle’s bedroom window then Danielle walks away. Cheyenne gets in the house and she sees Danielle standing on the stairs. She notices Danielle is mad about something so she says, “Danielle, is there something wrong?”
Danielle is getting pissed and she says, “What were you doing at Tim’s?”
“We just had a talk.”
“Had a talk? What was that about?”
“Can’t we have something like mother in law and son in law conversation since you two are planning on getting married so…I don’t see a reason why you’re pissed.”
“Well…the reality is that I do have some suspicious about you because of who you are and that you couldn’t get away from a thing that you’re so into. I think Melissa may be right about who you really are.”
“No, that’s not what you think. Melissa is so wrong about that.”
“Well…what about that conversation that we had in the van when we were coming home? I think you lied.”
“What did I lie about?”
“Most likely everything…just everything and why should I trust you?”
“Everything? What did I lie to you about then?”
“Jack Craven…you knew him from your college times. You know…I began wondering why he showed up at my school and starts talking about relationship stuff. I think the whole thing has to be everything that happened with you.”
“Didn’t you really ever knew anything my past? You don’t and you will not going to dig up my past.”
“Oh yes, I will because you will do something that you won’t stop doing and that reveals of who you are and what you did in your past.”
“Past is not something that we should discuss and you will not going to regret it.”
“You will regret it.”
“No, I will not because I still love your father and I always do.”
“Well, why did you show up at Tim’s house with bathrobe, anyway? That’s so connected, you stupid moron slut.”
“Stop that and don’t call me that! We only had a talk and that was it.”
“You’re a true big liar, a big one. I don’t even know the reason why we’re still love each other as a family. Whatever your mistake that you made will happen again, trust me on this.”
“No, it will not.”
“I had enough of you, already!” Danielle snaps and walks off back to her bedroom with a loud slam.
Cheyenne gives that small chuckle and says, “You are going to regret this. You never really understood who I really am or never understand why I’m doing this.” She goes back to her room to change her clothes and pack her stuff for her departure to New York City.
Back in Los Angeles during the morning, the camera keeps moving upward toward Jack while he’s standing at the porch of 2nd floor of Brittany’s house. Brittany comes outside covering up her naked body with a blanket and snuggles in with Jack. Jack picks her up and kisses her. Brittany laughs then screams, “Jack!!!” and she giggles. Jack keeps staring at the scenery of Los Angeles and begins thinking.
Brittany says, “Jack…what’s wrong?”
Jack sighs and says, “Honestly…I don’t know what I’m doing this time because the history seems coming back to me.”
“Yeah…I couldn’t figure out why she came to see me at Leanne’s funeral.”
“Maybe she wanted to have a talk with you and let her have another chance?”
“No, I’m not giving her a chance because I know she is still doing same thing as what she did in the past. Why do you think I said that she’s a damn whore?”
“Well…past is different compared to today.”
“Not really because people’s characteristics are basically still same and their personality don’t change that much. Let me ask you this…why didn’t you give a chance to Joseph?”
“Because he was an asshole and he didn’t treat me that good.”
“That’s the same reason…his characteristics don’t change. Don’t you still see that in him today, anyway?”
“Yeah, I see your point.”
“You know…there is another thing that I’m wondering about. I’m wondering if the whole thing is a fake to me, like Leanne isn’t really dead or something like that.”
“Was her casket open?”
“So she’s dead.”
“Yeah, I believe so but something is still bothering me.”
“Well, Cheyenne will do something crazy and also something would happen to me in next few years with Leanne’s issue.”
“It’s your mind that is bothering you and it’s because you’re so crazy in love with her. It just tells you that you want her to be here today.”
“Yeah, that’s what I’m thinking but I’m not so quite sure.”
“I have one big question for you.”
“Yeah, what is that?”
“Do you love me?”
“Yes, I do but love’s a strong word. We can feel that we’re in love but we’re not just really in love yet. It’s just a progress. Everyone has to know that but you have to know this that love is not the only thing that can keep you happy because you have to be sure that there are things that can keep you happy.”
“Very interesting speech from you. Wow… I haven’t quite had a thought about that.”
“Yeah, well a lot of people always get fooled by love. I know it’s crazy and fun but it’s dumb at the same time.”
“I can tell something bad happened in your past.”
“Yes, a lot of bad things happened in my past and I couldn’t even get to a goal that I always wanted to do, not career-wise but it’s an imitate-wise.”
“Lot of girls always fall for bad and asshole guys.”
“They always do which I was not surprised about. It’s because they want to be loved which is the most annoying thing, it just seemed like they didn’t have a goal in life that they want to do besides having sex with random people.”
“I hardly had any sex with random people.”
“Yeah but that’s not the point. My point is about people in general. Sometimes, I just don’t know why people just keep coming back to people who they had a history with and keep doing more things.”
“So, I didn’t have a chance to be with enough women that I would like to be with because at some point, I don’t know why they’re not that much interested on getting know me. Aside of that, sex can’t be the first thing on their minds. It’s like shut up and get past with that so we can get know each other enough or else.”
“A lot of guys were interested in me but I keep turning them down.”
“That’s what hurts the most in relationships, better the truth than nothing because people can always find out one way or another.”
“Yeah, I see your point and I always believed in truth. Truth could make people get closer than ever but it depends.”
She pauses for a moment and says, “Jack…I love you.” Jack keeps staring at Brittany, smiles and kisses her. Then both of them hugging each other and staring at the scenery.
Back in Virginia Beach, the music beats keeps going on and on while Cheyenne is in rush packing up her things for her departure to New York City. Then she runs down the stairs, carrying her duffel bag and runs out of house like a speeding demon. She gets in her car and leaves so quickly.
In Danielle’s bedroom, Melissa knocks the door and says, “Danielle?”
“Melissa, please come in.” She enters the room and sits next to Danielle on the bed. Danielle is crying but she lays her head on Melissa’s shoulder. Melissa says, “What’s wrong, Sis?”
“What about her?”
“She’s so sick.”
“Why? What happened?”
“She had sex with Tim.”
“No way! Are you serious?”
“Yes, she did. I’m so much furious about this and I don’t know why Tim lets her. He could have avoided that but guess what? He lets her!”
“Wow! I couldn’t even believe that!”
“Damn our mother. I wished I could have listened to you in first place. Your incident at the dinner was very reasonable. I didn’t believe it at first.”
“Don’t worry about that but I’m glad you heard me out. You didn’t believe it because you were in love and hell…whatever is out there that kept you away from believing.”
“Yeah, all of this kept me not believing. I’m so sorry that I didn’t believe you in first place.”
“That’s okay but don’t worry about it because I always knew some people tend to get a second look into things and change their mind.”
Danielle hugs Melissa and says, “All right, I’m going over Tim’s and call it off then we’ll finish this off. We have to do something about our mother. Heck…I don’t even know what to do about our parents and I don’t know why Dad is on our mom’s side.”
“Yeah, that’s funny to me.”
She walks out and goes over to Tim’s.
At Tim’s house, Danielle knocks the door and Tim opens the door. Tim says, “Hey honey, come in.” She walks inside and Tim closes the door. He grabs her and starts kissing her against the door. Danielle doesn’t want to kiss him but she starts crying. Tim stops kissing and says, “What’s wrong?” He acts like there is nothing happened. Danielle says in a weak voice, “Oh god…I don’t know what to say…what am I going to say?”
“What’s going on? What’s wrong? What?” He keeps pushing his body against Danielle’s and keeps trying to kiss her gently. Finally Danielle snaps out and shoves him. Tim falls onto the floor and seems pissed.
Danielle screams, “Why did you have sex with my mother?!?”
Tim’s eyes give a big surprise and says, “Danielle! Why did you think we had sex?”
“Don’t be a ****ing dumbass! I don’t even get it. I don’t even get the reason why you did this!”
Tim couldn’t even know what to say but he keeps making that sputtering noise coming out from his mouth and says, “I don’t know what to say but I don’t know why you think we had sex.”
“Damn you, Tim. I hate you! I ****ing hate you! I ****ing hate my mom! I just ****ing hate both of you!”
“You hate me already?”
“Yes! I know you’re not telling me the truth. We’re finished!”
“We’re done? For real? Because of not telling you the truth?”
“We’re done! Yes! We’re done!”
“I’m so sorry, Danielle. I’m so sorry! I’m sorry!”
“Sorry for what? For having sex with my mother, huh? No way, screw you!”
“No! Screw you!” She walks off. Tim tries to grab her arms and pull her. Danielle grunts and yells back “Don’t do this, Tim! Get away from me!”
Tim continues pulling her and says, “Don’t leave me, please!!!”
“No! I’m leaving you so go away!” Tim wouldn’t let her go so Danielle finally kicks Tim’s crotch and he lets her go. Danielle leaves the house with a loud door slamming right at Tim’s face. Tim continue crawling over the floor and in pain. He continue crawling on the floor to a window and takes a peek. He starts crying and yells, “Son of a bitch!”
The camera moves past Danielle quickly as when she walks across the street. She is so furious and pissed off while she walks across back to her house and goes inside with another loud door slam.
At night time, in New York City, the camera is at the sign of a bar place and moving downward onto Cheyenne and her friend then begins following on both of them when they go inside the bar. They approach to the bar counter and request drinks.
Cheyenne’s friend named Ashley Hutchison. She is 2 inches taller than Cheyenne and has blonde hair, wraps up, and she’s wearing leather type of clothes. She is more of like punk-type girl and has no boyfriend or husband. She has green eyes with a makeup on her face.
The music is playing lightly with a band group. Ashley says to Cheyenne “So…what’s happening with your life?”
“Melissa and Danielle are starting to get suspicious of me. The actual thing is that I had sex with Danielle’s boyfriend.”
“No way! You did?”
“Yeah, I did.”
“I couldn’t believe it!” She laughs.
“But it was a great sex though. I love sex so much.”
“You know what I’m thinking?”
Cheyenne laughs and says, “Hmm…what would that be?”
“A threesome. I love that so much!”
“A threesome? Wow…yeah, let’s do that. I haven’t had that in so long time.”
“A good thing though. All we need is to find a guy.”
“Yes…a hot guy is all what we need.”
“Let’s drink few more and we can go off to find a guy that we can do with.”
“All right, let’s do that.” She smiles. Ashley smiles back then they continue drinking more until they get tipsy.
The camera is at the side of a person’s feet and follows the same direction where the person is walking in slow motion and the suspense and sinister theme music begins playing. The person is wearing black sporty running shoes and is wearing a black leather trench coat. The person is dressed everything in black, is also wearing a leather and rubbery mask on face and wears a black cowboy animal skin-like hat so people wouldn’t able to recognize the person.
The camera is at the side view of a right arm of the person, following the person when the person walks up to the bar counter. The music ends.
The bartender says, “What can I do for you, today?” as he wipes down the counter to clean.
“Call me, Mister Dark.” He grins devilishly as the camera moves and zooms at him suddenly.
“So, Mr. Dark, what can I get you?”
“A bottle of water, please.”
“Right coming up!” He grabs a bottle of water and slides the bottle down to Mr. Dark. Mr. Dark places the money out and gives it to the bartender and says, “Thanks.” He walks off and the camera starts following him while he walks to find a chair to sit. When he sits down on a chair, the camera quickly swift around him in half way when he sits down then he sees Cheyenne and Ashley are drinking to get trashed.
Then he turns his face toward the door and sees Senator Joseph Long walks in the bar. The bartender says to Senator Long “Howdy, Senator Long, what I can do for your service?”
“Hello there, can I have a bottle of Coors, please?”
The bartender opens up the bottle and gives the beer to the Senator then he says, “It’s on house.”
Senator smiles and says, “Thanks.” Then he drinks a sip while he wanders around the bar to find two women that he is supposed to meet. He sees a man with leather and rubbery mask on and he figures that it is him who contacted the Senator few days ago. He walks up to meet him and sits down next to him and says, “Things are pretty peachy around here.”
Mr. Dark gives a small chuckle and says, “Peachy? What make you think you would talk to me?”
“What do you think?” He scoffs.
“Because of my mask? What does my mask look like to you now then?”
“The phantom in a way but you remind me of someone who is doing all of those serial killings.”
“Things aren’t what they seem.”
“Maybe, maybe not.”
“What make you think you’d be able to trust me?”
“I know who you are, Mr. Dark. You think no one would find your past? Obviously you’re wrong.”
“Who says my name is Mr. Dark? I told you my name, haven’t I?”
“There is no reason to bring that up. I want you to help me to finish my job, for that, I just want to be a mother****ing greedy person.”
“Perhaps, but I already found two women that you should have a fling with. Does a name of Cheyenne Mann ring a bell?”
“No but why do you mention the name?”
Mr. Dark takes out three photos and shows one picture each of Jack, Cheyenne and Ashley then he says, “I can tell you small information about Cheyenne but nothing more than that because I want her to ****ing die, same goes with Jack Craven.”
“Who the **** is Jack Craven?”
“The brain-****. Cheyenne is the one who sucks up everyone’s hormones to **** around.”
“So what do two of them have to do with anything about this?”
“I don’t believe you. I won’t make a move until you tell me more about them. I just want to know a reason.”
“Ok, I’ll tell you now but you have to make a move soon. Cheyenne is out on the floor dancing with her best friend even I overhear their conversation about wanting to have a threesome so here’s your chance to make that happen.”
“Okay, I’ll do that but I need the reason why you want Cheyenne and Jack dead.”
“Both of them lost their friendship in each other but with Cheyenne’s situation…she needs to be stopped because she’s hurting everyone else emotionally even I know she hurt her daughter’s feelings so why do you think I want her to dead? Because she deserves it. And with Jack…I know he is still in love with Cheyenne but he’s just a guy who has lot of mixed feelings about things like he always feel confused about what things should be shown or not, on relationships for one instance. He lost everything and I just hate him because he deserves my fate. There is one last thing that I want to say…everything is all about dark rainbow.”
“Well, Jack seems not to be a bad guy who deserves the fate because he hasn’t done anything wrong. And what the hell is dark rainbow?”
Mr. Dark chuckles and continues, “Love is always all about pain, and you know that. Jack has been in pain for long time but he doesn’t even realize it, he just thinks he knows it and gets away from it by not regretting to forgive Cheyenne.”
“He must have a reason to do that and what about dark rainbow?”
“Dark rainbow implies a situation that is something bad is about to happen or knowing a person who has a dark secret that nobody knows about who a person really is. And the another…rainbow gives a meaning that you’re beautiful and no one could resist you, keeps wanting you for more because you’re good at it. Also it gives a sparking side of who you are. The profile sounds fitting to who Cheyenne really is, that’s why she is looking for a threesome.”
“Like I said…everything is all about dark rainbow. You even have it too because you do have a secret that no one knows about and at the other, a good character trait of who you are, whatever you name it.”
“Interesting thought, Mr. Dark.”
“You better do your assignment now and I’ll be seeing you again soon in couple of hours at the hotel.” He walks off in slow motion then the camera swifts toward the Senator while he watches Mr. Dark walks out of the bar.
“Okay…okay…I need to focus on what I’m supposed to do…I need to find those two ladies…Cheyenne and Ashley. Need to remember their names…okay.” He sounds nervous then he clears his throat and starts walking through bunch of people on the dance floor.
The camera is moving through above people’s heads while Joseph is walking to find Cheyenne and Ashley. Then finally, Joseph finds them and says, “Hey there, sexy, want to dance with me? However you can bring your friend too so I can have two ladies doing a lap dance with me. Want to do that?”
Cheyenne and Ashley gasps in awe and giggles then says, “Yeah, we will do that for you.”
“Ok, then let’s get onto it.” Then they begin doing lap dance.
Everything goes dark and the lights go out but the strobe lights are still on with bunch of colors like a color of a rainbow. The camera starts rotating around Joseph, Cheyenne and Ashley slowly while they are lap dancing and the suspenseful music begins playing. The camera starts zooming slowly at Cheyenne while she stares directly at the camera and the strobe lights are still flashing on her showing varies of colors on her and the camera still zooming at her directly to her eyes. She closes her eyes then moves her head and gives a light moan. The camera keeps zooming at her then zooms back when the camera goes up overhead of her face when she moves her face up.
At Four Point Stars Hotel, the camera moves from the building toward the black limo slowly while the driver is getting out from the limo then it rotates toward the back door of the limo; the driver opens the door to let Cheyenne, Ashley and Joseph out from the limo. They begin walking inside the hotel and they are drunk. Cheyenne and Ashley are feeling full of enjoyment while being drunk and they also are flirting with Joseph. Both of them keep pinching and touching Joseph’s butt.
“His ass is so cute!” Cheyenne giggles.
“Hell yeah, totally tight and very muscular.” Ashley says and she smiles. Cheyenne laughs and says to Joseph “My god…you seem doing better than my husband.” She is feeling in so love with him at this moment. Joseph keeps trying to not expose himself to the public that he is having 2 women with him.
At the hotel reservation office, the agent says, “Hello, welcome to Four Point Stars Hotel, how can I be a service to you?”
“I’d like to have a room, just for one night.”
“Ok, let me check into the computer and see if there is any opening. Just in a moment, please.” He starts searching through the computer and finds an opening then he continues, “Yes, we have an opening but would you be interested in having a penthouse?”
“Yes, that’ll be fantastic and I’ll take that room.”
“Ok great!” He starts prepping to reserve the room for Joseph.
Joseph says, “But I would like to pay now because I won’t have a time to do it in the morning even I have to leave at 6am but I know the policy that people who reserves the room usually have to leave by 11am.”
“All right, sure no problem and how would you like to pay?”
“I’ll pay in credit card.”
“Okay.” Joseph gives him his credit card for the room charge then the agent charges it and gives the card back to him.
“Ok, I need you to sign this paper and you’re all set.” He smiles and continues, “Thank you for coming to Four Points.” Joseph signs the paper and returns the paper to the agent then the agent gives him a door card.
Down in the lobby, the camera is at far left by side of Joseph, Cheyenne and Ashley following them while they are walking through the lobby. When the lobby becomes into an alley, the camera turns to follow them directly behind them and continuing following them down in the hallway to the elevator. Light music is playing. Finally, they got in the elevator.
On 7th floor, the elevator doors open, Joseph, Cheyenne and Ashley walks out and they starts laughing and flirting each other. The camera turns from the elevator and starts following them to the room. They make it to the room then Joseph slides the card in to open the door and all of them go in the room.
The camera keeps moving toward the door knob as the door closes. After the door closes, the camera starts moving and facing the wall toward the next door then keeps moving upward above the ceiling and when it is at the ceiling, the camera starts facing down but continues moving to show what people are doing in their rooms.
In the room, a couple is watching TV but they are cuddling and kissing each other. The camera keeps moving left to the next room and Joseph, Cheyenne and Ashley are on the bed naked and they all are crawling and cuddling each other. The camera turns upside down to the next room and another couple gets in a fight and they are shouting at each other.
In the room where Joseph, Cheyenne and Ashley are in, the camera is in the bathroom facing a mirror to show them kissing each other then it starts moving to show a bathtub in the bathroom and swifts toward the bed where they all are at. Cheyenne and Ashley are moaning but all of them are covered with the blanket but Joseph is under the blanket.
The camera goes fast and swifts upward facing Cheyenne and Ashley when they scream. Then all of sudden, they get pulled under the blanket and the camera starts moving up toward a huge picture frame that shows a surreal picture about love and happiness with a strange feeling of death.
Few minutes later, Joseph punches Cheyenne causing her to get knock out and her body flips over onto the floor from the bed. Then he puts his hand on Ashley’s mouth so Ashley wouldn’t scream for help but at the same time, he wraps his arm around Ashley’s neck while holding his hand on her mouth to pull her into the bathroom and throws her in the bathtub. Her head hit on the layer of the bathtub and her head starts bleeding. At last Joseph shoves her legs in the tub and starts running the water. He closes the bathroom door when he sees Cheyenne leaves her eyes open but actually she’s in shock. The camera keeps moving toward Cheyenne and goes up close to her eye toward the black area of her eye then everything goes into black.
The camera is on the floor following somebody’s right foot and the carpet is red. Then it moves from right foot toward the face of Cheyenne while she is being pulled on the floor by Joseph. Joseph stops pulling her to look around to make sure that there is no one on the floor then he picks her up and starts carrying her over his shoulder toward the emergency exit stairway.
The camera is at the front of someone’s foot following in same direction as where the person is walking toward the room where Cheyenne, Joseph and Ashley were having a fling at then it rotates around facing front of someone to give a sight of the room. There is lot of damage going on in the room. The bed is a mess and there is a broken lamp including a bathroom door is being closed. Then the camera rotates again back to the person and the person is Mr. Dark. Mr. Dark begins laughing and says, “Wicked, ain’t it?” Then he walks by to start cleaning up the murder scene.
In the stairway, Joseph is still in hurry running down the stairs but he is very worried and nervous while carrying Cheyenne on his shoulder. Back at the room, Mr. Dark makes the bed and places Ashley in a corpse bag. He continues cleaning the room and throws a lamp in the corpse bag also. Then he leaves the room carrying Ashley over his shoulder and starts running.
Back in stairway, Joseph is tired and panting, he feels sweaty and starting to not feeling well after what happened so he drops Cheyenne off from his shoulder on 3rd floor stairway. He suddenly hears a door opening downstairs and he looks down quickly to find out who it is. The hotel security is walking up the stairs then Joseph gets panicked but he puts his face down with his arms over the pole of the stairs then starts crying and puking.
The guard hears someone is puking nearby so he radioed in someone for help then he continues walking up and sees Joseph is facing down at the opposite side of the stairway but he couldn’t see Cheyenne’s body. He says, “Do you need a help with anything?”
“No thanks. I’m fine.”
“Are you sure?” He gets suspicious so he takes one more step with a flashlight on aiming next to Joseph’s right foot but he couldn’t see anything. Joseph begins getting sweaty and hot since he is very nervous and says, “Yes, I’m fine. I just needed some air besides, I’m somewhat drunk but I’ll be all right even I’m about to head back to my room.”
The guard moves his eyebrows into a suspicious expression and says, “Well, you better go back to your room before there is a trouble because I could have reported you in for being intoxicated so just go to your room. I’ll let you go with a warning this time but next time, you’re dead, got that?”
“Yeah, I got that. Thanks.”
The guard walks back down the stairs. Joseph is waiting until he hears a door close then he mumbles, “Oh **** me! This is so stupid! Why? Why? Why am I doing this?” He starts banging on the pole. All of sudden with a surprise, he screams when a door opens at third floor then he overthrows himself onto the stairs and starts rolling down the stairs. Mr. Dark opens the door on 3rd floor and starts laughing at Joseph. He says, “Man, you gotta take it easy. You’re too worried, just relax and take some breath.”
Joseph groans and mumbles at Mr. Dark “Damn you, you ****in’ scared the hell out of me especially, I was almost got busted by the security for having a dead body with me.”
Mr. Dark laughs hysterically and says, “A great feeling ain’t it? Get back up here and let’s finish this, okay? You wouldn’t have to worry about this after we get done, all right?”
“**** you, Mr. Dark!” He gets up and walks back up 3rd floor and picks up Cheyenne’s body and starts carrying her on 3rd floor. On 3rd floor, Mr. Dark and Joseph are carrying two bodies throughout the hallway until they both find a dumpster door to throw the bodies in so the bodies can go directly to the dumpster outside of the hotel. They throw Cheyenne and Ashley into the dumpster then Mr. Dark shuts the door and says to Joseph “So, missions accomplished but remember that…everything isn’t over yet because you haven’t won your goal yet. Let’s move to next phase.” They start walking away.
The next morning, the camera is moving upward toward a pigeon while it is sitting on a pole of an apartment building. Then it starts flying down as the camera starts following in same direction where the pigeon is flying down toward the street but the pigeon goes off while the camera is moving down and starts traveling through bunch of people while they are walking on the street and sidewalk just like one another busy day in New York City.
It continues traveling through people then it goes toward an alley behind the hotel where the pigeon returns back to where the camera is going to then at last, the pigeon sits on the top of a dumpster, The camera continues moving toward to get closer the dumpster then moves upward and shows two dead bodies inside the dumpster then the camera starts moving down toward Cheyenne to get close to her head. It gets closer to her eyes and she wakes up slowly.
Cheyenne wakes up and gasps. “What the hell just happened?” is the first thought that pops out from her head. She groans while she is trying to stand up and jump out from the dumpster. She sees that she’s in an alley so she walks toward the street slowly where the people and traffic are at and feeling confused not knowing what she did the night before however she checks over her body and figures that her body seems normal including nothing that was ripped on her clothes.
She continues walking through the city to find a phone booth and enters a phone booth. The camera begins rotating around outside of the booth while Cheyenne picks up the phone and starts talking. She calls Isaac for help.
“Cheyenne? Where did you do?” seems worried.
“I don’t know where I am!” she begins to sob.
“You don’t know where you are? Don’t you even remember anything?”
“No, not really but all I know that I’m in New York City.”
“New York City? Why did you go there in first place?”
“To visit Ashley, that’s all.”
“So why do you have no clue of where you are at? Then what did you do last night?”
“We were crashing to have a drink.”
“Crashing to have a drink? I don’t believe you.”
“I’m not lying! I just want to come home now! Please help me!”
“Ok, I’ll help you but you have to come home directly.”
“All right, Isaac. I love you.” She hangs up and starts walking to find a cab.
The cabdriver says, “Where to?”
“To the airport, please.”
“Off, here we go.”
At JFK airport, the camera moves downward toward the cab and starts following Cheyenne while she gets out from the cab and walk to the airport even she gives the money to the driver.
She wanders slowly around the airport to find someplace to sit down which she does. She starts sobbing and weeping. A minute later, someone hands her a tissue and says, “Need a tissue?”
She grabs it and says, “Yeah, I need it and thanks so much.”
“No problem.” Showing a face of someone named Mr. Dark. He smiles.
“God, I don’t know what to do anymore!”
“Hey, weren’t you at the bar last night? I thought your face looked familiar to me.”
“Yeah, I was and why do you ask? I haven’t seen you.”
“Well…you left your purse there.” He hands her the purse.
“Oh my…thanks! That’s why I was so upset because I didn’t have anything for me to go back to home in Virginia.”
“Yeah but you’re lucky though.”
“I know and I have to get going now so see you around. And thanks for giving my purse back!” She runs off to the ticket agent to pick up her ticket. Then she picks up her ticket and starts running off for her departure. The camera moves toward Mr. Dark’s face slowly with a sinister music playing.
Back in Los Angeles, at a diner, Jack, Candice and Brittany are sitting and chatting. Inside the diner, the camera is at the cashier register and it starts moving when the cashier register pops open to follow a waitress and keeps moving toward the table where Jack, Candice and Brittany are at. Candice says, “I have no ****ing clue of what’s going on! I don’t even get why Fred wants something from me. What is he expecting from me?”
Jack says, “Well…did you look around what’s out there? Men always seek for sex and you know that because none of them ever get away from sex, believe me.”
“I’ve been taken advantage from them before but I never understood why myself.”
“No things would ever make a difference. I know it’s tough to find a good guy that you’re looking for. I had a hard time trying to find a woman for myself also.”
“What a small world.”
“Tell me about it.”
“Jack…I need to tell you something.”
“What is it? What did you want to tell me about?”
“Fred raped me.”
“The night when he got out from jail, few days after we went to the dance.”
“Are you serious?”
“What do you think I’m lying about?”
“How did that happen?”
Few days earlier, at Candice’s house, Candice is in the kitchen fixing a dinner for herself. The camera dolly around her but keeps sneaking out to different windows around in kitchen. The suspense music begins playing.
At outside of Candice’s house, the camera is focusing on the grass moving upward a man’s feet and follows the direction where the man is walking to. He walks and breaks in Candice’s house. He shows up in the kitchen where Candice is at and Candice screams.
“Fred! What the hell?!?”
“Remember what I said?”
“Go away! Or I’ll call the police!”
“That I’ll keep coming back to you until I get what I want.”
“No! You are not getting any from me!”
He wraps Candice’s mouth with his hands and pushes her into a couch in living room. He takes his belt off and tie it around Candice’s mouth then he slaps her face. Candice is crying and whimpering.
The camera is facing at the side of Candice and Fred when they’re laying down on the couch and it keeps moving across them toward the window. The outside changes from night to morning and the camera pulls away from the window and shows back where Jack and Candice are at when they’re at the table at a diner.
Candice has tears coming out from her eyes and she keeps shaking her head lightly.
“I just don’t understand it…I mean why does Fred wants to have sex with me?”
Jack seems furious and says, “Candice…that’s the same question that I’ve been asking for long time, along with why a woman isn’t interested in me.”
“You mean why would women would fall into wrong kind of guys…maybe like an asshole type? A controlling type?”
“Yeah, but that is not the question that I’m referring to…the question that I’m referring to is what do people see when they’re in love and why would they feel so depressed that they want to be in love with someone who they had history with? Why can’t they bother living the life to its fullest? Why do they expect to find love in first place? In following that, if they’re in love so soon, they won’t be happy later in life because one of those days, they’ll realize that they would feel that they aren’t experiencing enough in their own lives. A twisted theory, huh?”
“Jack…I’m starting to realize what you’re trying to ask and from my experience…I see the point of what you’re talking about. To myself, I have no clue to say because I went though this stuff before because I was in love at a wrong time and the reason, I said that I’m starting to realize is because I haven’t found the love of my life yet and that I’m experiencing the life while its too short to have fun by partying, going to club to meet people of course men too and to spend a night with a man for my own sake.”
“Exactly, there is nothing to love someone, just doing a life that you love to do before you die or before you wouldn’t able to have a chance to do so. That’s why, I haven’t been in love in first place when I was in my twenties. It’s a complicated idea to talk about because not everyone would understand it. Love blinds people all the time.”
“That’s true…blinds people and it hurts people.”
“It always hurts people and I have to go now so I’ll see you again later.” He gets up and leaves right away.
At outside of the restaurant, the camera moves down toward Jack when he walks out from the restaurant and begins dolling around him in many weird angles. He begins walking angrily, pissed and feeling full of hate in himself.
Few minutes later, a car pulls in toward Jack while he is walking and a man rolls down his car window and says, “Jack…get in.” Jack stops walking and says, “What?” Then he became surprised when he sees Fred and he said, “Why?”
“Jack…I want to talk to you. So get in now.”
“No, I don’t want to.”
“Just get..****ing in now!”
“Man…what the ****?” He gets in and slams the door.
“So…Jack, I see that you’re so ticked off and what would that be all about?”
“Why do you need to know? I don’t have anything to say to you.”
“So...” He takes out his gun and points at Jack’s leg and continues, “Tell me right now or I’ll ****ing kill you at this minute because I’ve always hated you for long time.”
“Wow…so full of hate coming up from you? This is getting interesting because you never had a reason for doing that in long time.”
“And **** you for that!”
Jack laughs but he is pissed at the same time. “What would be the history of between us? You were the one who started it all, that’s the reason why I always had full of hate on you for long time because you never forgave or apologized me on something that I never did.”
The camera swifts around then begins following Jack with lot of weird angles while dolling him in a dark hallway. Jack was only about 14 years old at that time and he made it out to a room that had a light. He saw some of his friends and started talking to them. Fred came in and walked by Jack. Fred was 3 years younger than Jack and he was being mean and full of disrespectful. He pushed Jack and said, “You’re such a stupid fat Indian and you’re eating like a fat ****ing pig!”
“Excuse me? What would be your reason of saying that? I never gave you any of disrespect and why would you bother being mean and what is your real purpose of doing that? Is it because you need an attention then you must be out of your damn mind.”
“Oh **** you, go **** yourself, man. Fat ****er!”
Jack rolled his eyes and walked away. The camera swifts again then starts moving left while facing at front bumper with headlight being on of a car then moving upward and moving right slowly. Jack, and 3 of his friends were in the car. Jack was 23 at that time and he saw a boy walking down at the sidewalk near the school where he used to go before when he was younger.
“I don’t have a real good feeling about this.” Then he saw a car pulled in then pulled back on the road and drove toward the boy who was walking on sidewalk. Then the car pulled back again and parked behind Jack’s car. Three friends of Jack’s got out and ran toward two guys. Jack stayed in the car and kept staring at his rear mirror to find out what was going on then after few minutes later, he got out from his car and recognized Fred. Jack was so pissed but this boy who was Fred’s friend had his eyes watery and he said to Jack “Why did you call me nigger?”
“Nigger? Did I call you nigger?”
“Yeah and why?”
“ I didn’t call you anything.”
“I was so scared because I thought someone would be after me and kill me?”
“To kill you? Please, you would think it’ll happen? I don’t believe so.” Fred said, “And why did you call him nigger then?”
“I didn’t besides you two wouldn’t have knew exactly who said to him? And have I called him that face to face in person? Then what would be the point? And why did I come out from my car?” Jack and Fred were so furious at each other and a friend said, “Calm down, you all need to calm down.”
Then Fred walks off and start talking about what’s going on then a friend of his said to Jack, “You know what? We already talked to our friends from gang about that and they including us will come out and shoot you.”
“I don’t care and do whatever you like.” Then he stood there finding out what was going on then he got back in his car and left. He started driving like a madman because he was so ready to beat up Fred because he always knew that Fred was never a good person and that he never gave him a respect. Then the camera zooms toward Jack’s eyes then pulls back to where Jack and Fred are at now.
“So what would your reason be? Then if there isn’t any and what is the point of you being pissed off and disrespecting me? I never had a problem with you and you always do with me.”
“Man, **** you and I had my reputation!”
“**** your reputation!”
Fred punched Jack’s jaw with his gun and starts driving. Jack passes out for few minutes then he wakes up feeling blurry and confused. Then he finally got full awake and realizes that Fred is driving but at the same time, he sees the gun and Fred grabs it right away. He points the gun at Jack again and he said, “So didn’t you like it?”
Jack spits out blood out from his mouth and he says, “I don’t understand this, man.”
“That is the point, everything in life is always full of misunderstood people and love is always confusing.”
“And what does this has to do with you and me then? Besides, this was not always about love, it was always about respecting people and you don’t give people their respect then that has to do something with…like what the **** is wrong with you!?!”
“**** you, Jack!” then he shoots but he misses because the bullet goes through the window and Jack grabs Fred’s arm and snaps it while Fred tries to keep shooting.
The people on the street starts screaming because they heard lot of shooting going on even one person get hit when Fred blew his first shot. Jack finally get the gun on his hand and starts smashing Fred’s face with it while the car goes out of control even at the same time Fred and Jack keep trying to take control of the wheel. Jack keeps smashing Fred’s face with his left elbow then at last, the car crashed onto a car causing it to flip around and lands on the road with the hood upside down.
There is a truck coming carrying some sort of wood crashes the car and there are lot of wood falling and flying around. One piece of wood finally hit Fred’s mouth. Jack makes it out but he is badly injured and couldn’t able to walk so he keeps crawling out from the car. He says, “**** you, bitch.” He passes out afterwards then the camera starts pulling back and far back showing the place where the accident occurred.
Three days later, at the hospital, Brittany and Candice are standing next to Jack while he is in the bed and still sleeping. Brittany is crying and says, “Why can’t you even wake up yet? The signs didn’t even show that you’re in coma.” She keeps holding Jack’s hand. Everything turns into white.
At a plaza during night where a haunted house took place, the camera pans toward the entrance from a long continuous shot at the parking lot and it starts following 5 people when they got in the haunted house. Jack was 23 at that time and hanging out with 2 friends that he knew and the other 2 that he hasn’t met yet.
The two friends that Jack knew were named Travis who was 20 and Roxann who was 15. The other two were Penelope who was 18 and Haley who was also 18. Penelope was currently dating Travis and they kept cuddling and fooling around throughout the haunted house at rest of the time. All of them were talking about many different and random things but mostly involved dating and relationships.
Jack tried to break the ice with Haley to open up a conversation since he kept noticing that Haley’s eyes were showing signs that she’s upset and pissed from his perspective. He said, “Since, I’ve noticed that you, Roxann and Travis were talking about the guys that you were dating or seeing. So…I take it that you dated someone that I knew named Arvin?”
“Yeah, we were on and off with relationships.”
“So what was the reason of you two broke up?”
“He dumped me.”
“Did he say at what reason?”
Jack suspected that there were a lot more going on but he never really asked for more details but he said, “Interesting…that’s how typical guys are when they’re at 15 to 20 years old, maybe up to 25. Those guys never really know what they want especially with an issue on a girl. Guess what? They don’t go for love at first place.”
“Why would you think they don’t go for that in first place?”
“My god…don’t you even seen it? Why do you think guys want you all the time? What would be the exact reason? I mean people are always confused on love and love isn’t something that you’ll find in first place. It all takes time to find a love but can’t always expect to pick up quickly.”
“Oh my god…” with a shocking reaction but got quiet down for a second.
Jack chuckles a little and said, “How sad but it’s true. I’m looking for love myself but I kept telling myself that love only takes time.”
Finally, Roxann interrupted Jack and said, “What do you feel about the idea of being friends with your ex and decide to go back out with him afterwards?”
Then Travis interrupted and said, “It’s never a good idea.” Then both of them kept bickering on and on. Jack told them to stop and said, “Stop! Stop talking! I don’t like it when I get interrupted and distracted when I’m trying to talk to Haley!” They finally stopped and Jack continued to Haley “Are you single, right?”
“About 3 months.”
“Ok…well, the thing is to myself, Travis is right that it is never a good idea to go back out with your ex especially if the relationship keeps going on and off because the result will end as the same as you’ve gone through, I mean it’s something that people should have seen from anyone. But if you’re trying to be friends with your ex…I honestly don’t know because I don’t care and you pretty much can do anything what you want since you’re single and nobody controls you.”
Haley said, “Exactly, you got my point!” Then Travis and Roxann got quiet down. They all went in 2nd haunted house area in the same haunted house; they all lined up and followed. Haley grabs Jack’s sweater and an instant thought came out of Jack’s mind “Wow…my god, maybe I should grab her hand and hold onto her hand.” Then he took her hand off from her sweater and held her hand throughout the haunted house. He was starting to have feelings for Haley but not only a lot, only a little at a time to get know her more but what made him fell for her because of her eyes that can tell what kind of emotion is involved.
He knew that Haley was not happy and that’s when he tried to break the ice more to give out humors to make her laugh and smile but at the same time, he wasn’t feeling happy either.
While waiting in line for 3rd haunted house, Jack said, “I want to tell you something.”
“Yeah, what is it?”
“Well…I know you’ll be shocked about what I’m going to say but I’ll tell you this. I’ve been single for 7 years and I haven’t dated in long time.”
A reaction came out from Haley and said, “Wow…” then she stopped and turns away for few seconds and said, “Oh my god.”
“Mostly, it’s because I don’t understand people sometimes. With guys, they hurt girls all the time and use them. And with girls…they’re so confused with their emotions and they get fooled by love. Aside of that, I kept getting turned down by girls and none of them would hang out with me as along we could have gotten known each other more in that way so that’s why I said I don’t understand them sometimes.”
“I don’t understand people sometimes either.” Jack began to feel something that clicked between him and Haley but he kept it lowdown with her because he had high doubts about love and he doesn’t expect to find love right away and he kept telling himself that love takes time to build feelings and trust for each other.
About an hour later, they’re leaving from haunted house and Jack had to drive to drop them off home but Roxann asked Jack about meeting up someone. Jack said, “For what? Do we have a room in my car and if we’re picking up then what are we going to do to hang out besides it’s getting late?” Then she got quiet down and talked to Haley.
Jack continued, “You know what? If he keeps changing his mind about meeting then **** this and **** him. Because I don’t like it when people change their minds in last minute and this is last minute.”
Then finally, he drove to a place where to meet Haley’s ex named Arvin and parked in an empty parking lot on side of a store. After waiting for 5 minutes and Jack said, “Well…is he coming or not? Because I’m not waiting any much longer.” Roxann said, “Just wait here.” Then Jack heard Haley starting yelling at Roxann and he turned around.
He said, “Well…what do you want to do?” Roxann tried to interrupt him again and Jack said, “Shut up and I’m not talking to you!” Haley seemed nervous and upset and said, “I just want to go home.”
“Ok, I’m going to take you home.” Roxann said, “Go right.” Jack screamed, “No!” Then he turned left and drove off by the time when Arvin showed up on sidewalk about less than 1/8 mile away. Jack started to snicker while he was driving and had a thought, “Wow…bunch of drama with relationships on exes and such.”
Thirty minutes later, the camera moved down from a house toward Jack’s car. Penelope and Haley got out from the car. Jack stood by his door and he was going to give a hug to Haley but Haley didn’t see it and she was in hurry. She said, “Thank you so much!” then she hurried back to her house with Penelope. The camera turned to Jack and moved slowly toward his face angle and everything went white.
A transition of white into white bed sheets of Jack’s bed in the hospital then moves upward facing Jack when the camera is at near the ceiling while he is still sleeping. Brittany and Candice are still there with him.
Brittany says to Candice, “I wonder why he takes a long sleep even he isn’t awake yet.”
“Well, I’m not sure either but I think he’s having dreams about what happened in his past.”
“Does it involve a girl that he knew?”
“I don’t know but it could be possible.”
“Well…anyone that you might know since he could have talked to you about it before? I’m sure it’s not about Cheyenne.”
“Yeah, this isn’t about his feelings with Cheyenne and he’s completely past with that but I do actually think there’s someone that he has been thinking about for long time.”
“Well, who do you think this person could be?”
“I know you haven’t met this person yet but I think it has to do with everything between Haley and Leanne.”
“I know about Leanne, he talked to me about her and he even tells me how much he missed her. By the way, who is Haley?”
“He hasn’t told you a thing about her?”
“Nope, not even a thing.”
“Interesting…it’s something that I never really thought that he would tell you about her.”
“Why do you say that?”
“Friendships and love are always complicated and you know that.”
“Of course, I know that but I do have an idea of why he didn’t tell me a thing about her.”
“I honestly think that he hid that feeling about her because he misses her and he could be in love with her as well.”
“You guessed the right thing as what I’ve guessed. I mean, he does tell me things about her and at the same time, he tried to get past of a feeling for her.”
“So, do you think he has still feelings for her?”
“I don’t know…he hasn’t really talked about her anymore after he met Leanne. Why don’t you ask him yourself?”
“I don’t know, I don’t really care about who he has been with in the past because past is past and sometimes, people don’t really need to bother with something from a past for many different reasons, it could be something that he is completely past with or whatever.”
“Exactly, he usually talks about different things that would come into a full circle and to reveal a point of what a reason could be all about.”
“Ahh…that makes sense now.”
“What makes sense now?”
“He talked to me about many things as what he has seen so far in life especially about dating and relationships. When I first met him and I was so into him even I asked him to have sex with me as no strings attached but he somewhat tried to avoid the issue.”
“He is always like that, he’s a very sensitive guy and he cares for people’s feelings and emotions.”
“Yeah, I can tell and originally, he was going to deny it but the more I talked to him and the more he opens up his feelings. Obviously, he didn’t get past with Leanne’s death at that time.”
“He doesn’t and he’s like that because he always wanted to find answers and find the real truth. He doesn’t like it when things are left out unanswered and that’s what drives him mad because he doesn’t do that to people.”
“That’s what makes everything more sense now and I got the point of what he was telling me about especially when he saw you meeting up with Fred. He was so irritated about it and that’s when it happened to the idea of getting people hurt. You got yourself hurt already since Fred raped you.”
“I know and that’s why he cares a lot and sometimes he can’t let things go until he knows the truth or know the exact answer. I mean, he knows it’s all about a wild roller-coaster feeling and emotions when you fall for someone. But that is not the whole case, there are a lot more toward the issue that people can’t get away from.”
“You are so lucky to have Jack as your best friend.”
“I know and thanks. With Leanne’s death…I honestly don’t know what went on but he told me that he kept getting a feeling that Leanne might not be dead after all and that’s what bothers him now.”
“Yeah, that’s completely understandable and even he told me the same thing.”
“Even I pointed him out that Leanne’s dead because there was an open casket of her coffin.”
“Exactly and that’s true.”
“Now, with Haley’s issue, I know he hasn’t told you a thing about her but it’s not something that you should worry about because she is part of Jack’s past life.”
“Yeah, I believe so.”
“Sometimes, he wouldn’t want to talk about it because you two just met and also he hardly talks much about her because he still hasn’t gotten an answer about him and Haley.”
Everything flashes into a flashback and at Jack’s old apartment, Jack was sleeping and he finally woke up. He has a friend staying over at his place and the friend was Travis. The first thing he checked his phone when he woke up and he got a message from Haley a week after they first met.
“Oh my god…what made her change her mind?” Then he looked again at the messages and said, “What the hell? She doesn’t know anything? She doesn’t feel like talking to me and she doesn’t want to see me? She doesn’t feel comfortable with me? What the hell did I do wrong?” He finally got irritated when he was left out many things unanswered and he kept messaging her back to find out but she had not said a thing besides saying, “I don’t know…”
Then he came up with a thought in his mind, “I think she is probably afraid of falling in love again or else because she’s afraid to get hurt again but it could be the reason but what would be the other reasons? Still having feelings for an ex-boyfriend? Of course part of it is because too many guys want her or some of her exes wanted her back.”
So he said to her, “Whatever the reason can be…I just wanted to hear the real truth and I haven’t pushed you into anything because I hate controlling as you know that. And I just wanted to understand more about who you are and the more I accept you as who you are. All I’m asking for us to hang out and get know each other more before we could decide but I know I don’t give people many chances because they don’t deserve it and you know why. Have I criticized on your mistakes that you made? I don’t because I know and I understood as in a common sense. Be lucky that I’m willing to give you another chance.”
Back to Candice and Brittany as where they leave off. Brittany says, “Wow…that explains a lot. It is because he was left unanswered about Haley.”
“Yeah and that’s what I know so far as what happened. She actually hurt Jack much as what other girls had done when one of them was interested in him with leaving things unanswered. But at the end…Jack could always find out the real truth in other ways around and once he does that then he doesn’t really get in touch with one of them much anymore.”
“I’m afraid that Jack’s going to get hurt again sometime.”
“Who knows but he might would. I wouldn’t like it if it happens again but who knows what could happen this time.”
“That’s what make even scary. So scary.”
“I don’t want to see him getting hurt again this time around.”
“Do you think this will get worse?”
“I think so.”
The camera moves toward Brittany’s face while suspense music is playing.
In Virginia Beach, Cheyenne arrives back home with a taxi and she starts walking to her house. The camera dollies around her when she walks into her house and continues dolling her until she sees Isaac standing by a kitchen counter. She notices that Isaac is seemingly pissed.
“Isaac…why are you pissed?”
“I don’t know…maybe you can tell me?”
“What am I supposed to say?”
“What do you mean about what you’re supposed to say?”
“Believe it or not…I’ve always cared for you and I’ve always been there for you. You keep screwing this marriage life up.”
“What did I do?”
“I know you’re not telling me the truth.”
“Why do you think I’ve always forgave you for long time?”
“Forgave me for long time?”
“Wow…you never really understood what love and a marriage life meant to you?”
“It gives me a meaningful life.”
“You know…that is not one of the vows that you made. And I swear you did something more than just a regular hanging out with Ashley.”
“No, I didn’t.”
“Want to know how I figured?” The music begins playing and the two detective walks in from the kitchen. The camera moves toward Cheyenne’s face with a shock.
“Hi Cheyenne, my name is Detective Johnson and he is Lieutenant Stephenson. We’re from New York City police. We have some questions for you relating to the death of Ashley Hutchison.”
“Oh my god…” she sobs.
“So are you ready for questioning?”
“Were you with Ashley two days ago?”
“What did two of you do on that night?”
“We were hanging out at a bar and Ashley was so drunk. I helped her to stay at a motel and that’s when I left my purse at the bar. Then after I left her at a motel, I didn’t know what happened.”
“Well, the forensics told us that she was raped and killed.”
“What? She was raped?”
“Yeah but there’s one thing…since you were with her that night, I have to take you in for more further investigation and take some test to find out if you were raped too or not.”
“I was raped too.” The camera swifts toward Isaac. Isaac gets angry.
“Since you confessed that you were raped and why are you alive and Ashley’s dead?”
“I don’t know and I don’t even know who the rapist was.”
“Ok, we’ll let you go now but we will contact you if we need more information so thank you for your cooperation.”
“Have a good day.” Then the two cops leave and Isaac approaches to Cheyenne.
“That’s the big surprise that you finally admit the truth!”
“And your point is?”
“My point is that we’re getting a divorce.”
Cheyenne begins crying and says, “No baby, I don’t want a divorce.”
“You don’t want a divorce then why did you have sex with Tim? That tells me that you don’t change at all!”
“How did you figure that I had sex with him?”
“Jesus…Danielle told me! But I need some understanding going on…why did you do this?”
“I don’t know…”
“You don’t know? You don’t know a damn thing?”
“Yeah, I don’t know what to say…”
“You’re screwed, seriously. You shouldn’t have married me in first place if you’re still feeling like this. Now I feel like this is one of the biggest mistakes that I ever made in my whole life!”
“That’s because you’re a damn *******!” All of sudden Isaac grabs Cheyenne’s neck and pushes her against the wall.
“You think I’m a damn *******? No…you’re the biggest slut that I ever seen and no regrets! Divorce is the right thing to do for now and you can go and have sex with many guys as you want!” Then he walks away quickly to upstairs in his bedroom. Cheyenne starts crying hard and she slides down onto the floor. Isaac comes back with his baggage and about to leave. He says, “Cheyenne…you know, I’ve always loved you and I still do but I can’t take lies anymore. I’m done with you. So good bye.” He leaves off.
The camera moves slowly toward Cheyenne when she is having a breakdown and a sad music is playing. The camera moves toward Isaac then swifts when he gets in the car and leaves. The camera moves upward to show the location when the car gets on the street.
In Los Angeles, at the hospital, the camera is on the floor at the front of a cop’s foot and following where the foot is going. In Jack’s room, Jack is finally awake and he is eating dinner. Brittany and Candice are sitting down and chatting with Jack. They stop talking when they saw a cop walks in. The cop says, “Jack Craven, am I correct?”
“Yeah, what do you need, officer?”
“My name is Officer Gates and I need to ask you few questions about your incident with Fred Savage.”
“Go ahead, what is it that you need to know?”
“From the report, from what I tell, I knew it was a self-defense because a male was injured during the incident and he was shot in the chest. We matched the bullet with the shooter. Fred was the shooter and we matched his fingerprints on the gun. But I have a question…why were you with Fred when that incident occurred?”
“He asked me to get in his car with him because he wanted to have a talk with me then we got in a fight. He was threatening me so I fought him back in a self defense then the car got in out of control. That’s when we got in a huge accident and I made it out alive.”
“Ok, so I will file this report as in self defense and there will be no charges against you in regarding to this.”
“Ok, and is there anything else that you want to know?”
“Umm…no, I’m sure this is pretty much it and thanks for your help with my investigation.”
“No problem and give me a call if you have any more concerns or anything, I’m more than happy to help you.”
“Yes, I will do that and have a nice day.” He walks out then the camera swifts toward Candice.
Candice says, “Fred’s dead?”
“Yes and I didn’t kill him, you know that.”
“Okay, I just wanted to make sure but to be honest with you…I’m just so glad that he’s dead for sure.”
Jack laughs. Then everything goes into white.
Back in Virginia Beach, at Cheyenne’s house, Cheyenne is still sitting on the floor and crying. Dominic, Danielle and Melissa show up at the house and they see Cheyenne sitting down and upset. Danielle says, “This is really lame and you know what? I don’t care.” Dominic yells, “Stop that, Danielle! You’re supposed to love your mother and you know better than that!”
“You really think everything is all about love, forgive and respect? No, this isn’t everything! She never change as who she is!”
“Shut up!” as he kneels over to help Cheyenne.
All of sudden, a group of 5 men show up at Cheyenne’s house, all of them dress up in black with ski-masks so no one could know who they are. They grab Dominic, Danielle and Melissa and leave right away. All of them are screaming but one guy in the group slams on their heads to get them pass out. Then the last guy that leaves the house, he throws a phone to Cheyenne and says in a distorted voice, “Hit the redial and you will get your instructions. You better do it now!” Then he leaves with a door slamming in front of her.
Sorrowful music begins playing while the camera moves slowly surrounding Cheyenne. Cheyenne’s crying so hard and she says, “I don’t think I can take this anymore. Why my children are kidnapped? At what reason?”
She picks up the phone and dials. Another end answers and says, “Hello.”
“Yes, this is Cheyenne and I was told to contact this number with instructions.”
“Oh Cheyenne, you know what? It’s so great to hear your voice again. You really have a sexy voice, don’t you know that?”
“Who the hell is this?”
“Let me give you a guess.”
“No! You tell me who you are!”
“Shut up and do you want to see your children again? If you don’t then you will see their pieces in a package coming at your door if you don’t listen carefully!”
Then she hears a loud knife scrapping noise and a person scream. The camera moves toward Cheyenne’s face quickly and she says, “Ok..ok…don’t hurt them anymore! And tell me what you want!”
The person starts laughing hysterically and says, “Great feeling, ain’t it?”
“Shut up! And tell me what you want!”
“First of all…you won’t see your children again until you do some things for me in order for you to have them seen and released. You need to find someone who can train you with using a sniper gun because you will be expected to assassinate two important people of this country…President of the United States and the Vice President.”
“Shut up! You listen or do you want your children dead? There is nothing that you can do and I’m sorry for what you’re feeling but that’s all what you have to do in order to see them again. So when you assassinate both of them, you need to escape but you have to get yourself caught. There are consequences that will be expected to happen but not all of it. When you get caught, you will be sentenced for a death penalty but there will be someone who will reverse that and give you a pardon. You will be sent to work and train in the marines instead of getting the death penalty. You have to stay in the marines through life. Your children will be sent down to see you when you’re serving for the marines.”
“What can I do about my life?”
“There is no way that you will get back onto your life. Your life is pretty much over. Think about it…you’re getting a divorce and your two daughters don’t love you anymore.”
Cheyenne starts crying. The person continues, “There is nothing that you can do about it and that I can’t do anything about it because fate happens. You get your own fate.”
“Seriously…if I don’t see my children by the time I go to the marines, I will come out and go after you. When I find you, I will kill you and make sure you will be sent down to your hell grave to make sure that death doesn’t exist.”
He starts laughing hysterically and says, “You think you’ll ever find me? Go for it because there will be more fate going on if you decide to do that.”
“I don’t care and I just want you to ****ing die!” She burst sobbing and starts jumping around.
“Nice talking to you and I will be talking to you again soon.” He starts laughing and hangs up the phone.
Cheyenne throws her phone and starts screaming. She starts destroying things around the house by throwing dishes, and all stuff. She continues crying and screaming. “I will find you and when I do…I will make sure you die!” Then she throws a lamp and everything goes black abruptly.
Somewhere in the woods in an isolated town of Virginia, a car arrives then the camera moves toward the door and rotates when a door is open. Cheyenne steps out from her car and starts walking. The outside is stormy, rainy and very muddy. She continues walking toward a man standing by a fence.
A man who is standing by a fence, he wears an army looking-like type of clothes and he has 5 briefcases laying on the top of his truck’s hood. His name is Mark Rivers.
He says to Cheyenne, “Hi, are you Cheyenne Mann?”
“Yes, this is me.”
“I heard that your children are kidnapped, correct?”
“I was told that I have to train you how to use a sniper gun to assassinate the President of the Unite States and the Vice President.”
“Yes, I have to do it.”
“So are you ready to do some training?”
“Yes, sir. I am.”
“Then let’s go.”
He begins train her how to use guns including sniper gun and varies of wide/far shootings. Cheyenne starts using it and the thing that Mark didn’t expect is that Cheyenne is actually a good shooting for a beginner. Lot of cans, glasses and equipments are being shot into broken or shattered pieces.
Two weeks later, at a shooting practice station outside in the woods where Cheyenne is in training, the camera moves down from the roof of a wooden house toward Cheyenne while she wanders slowly for her final shooting test and she beats the test. Mark says to her “There is one more thing that I want you to finish this test.” As he gives her the sniper gun and continues, “You take this and go to the woods. When you see a real life looking-like human doll, you have to take a shot in a good far distance and when you prove that you can take one good shot then you will be able to do your job faster and easier.”
In the woods, Cheyenne walks slowly and begins searching for the doll. Then she finally finds the doll and she begins climbing up the tall tree carrying the sniper gun with her. She sits on the arm of the tree silently while setting up the gun and aims at the doll. The distance of a shot is about 5,000 feet and she makes the shot. The doll’s body flies away almost like when a person get hit by an explosion nearby. Cheyenne climbs down and says, “I will get you.” Then everything turns into black.
In Washington, D.C., the camera moves down toward the street from a corner store when a car arrives then rotates around after the door from the car is opening. Cheyenne gets out from the car and begins walking toward an abandoned hotel.
In an abandoned hotel, suspense music begins playing while the camera begins following Cheyenne and the camera is in varies of different angles and shots while following Cheyenne until she gets to a room where she will assassinate the President of the United States and the Vice President. The camera follows her as she opens the door and she walks toward left away from the camera as it continues moving toward the window. She opens the briefcase and prepares to set up equipments to form a sniper rifle while the music is playing. Then at last, the sniper rifle is established and the camera moves away in a rapid movement with a titled angle from the scope of the rifle to show Cheyenne’s face profile while aiming the gun.
Outside at the street across from the abandoned hotel where Cheyenne is at, the camera moves right slowly aiming at the highlight of the limo and when the limo is parking, the camera moves toward the back right door of the limo as it rotates once when the door is open then it continues moving back of the limo and moving upward over the overhead of the limo. It begins following the President and the Vice President while it is moving overhead of them as they are walking up to the stage.
The camera is at the back of the stage then it starts moving when it rotates around in a 90 degrees circle angle onto the President and the Vice President while they are making the speech. It moves toward the crowd of people to pass them and it continues moving upward as one person walks away from the crowd onto the street and moves toward the window of the abandoned hotel where Cheyenne is at.
Cheyenne is still holding her sniper rifle and still aiming at the President and the Vice President. Her tears start falling out from her eyes and she whispers, “Oh my god, I can’t believe that I’m doing this. What else could I do?” Then she takes few moments to clear her head and says, “I want to see my children.” She shoots and the bullet goes directly at the President but it also goes through the Vice President. One bullet hits directly at both of chests and their bodies flies off from the stage. Cheyenne whispers, “Oh my god!” as she hurries pack up her equipments and starts running.
At outside, after President and Vice President are shot, the crowd and the guard goes nuts and they are screaming and yelling but they already enabled a perimeter for a further investigation to find out who assassinated the President and the Vice President. The police and FBI agents rush into the incident to assist the investigation. A witness tells the officer that she thinks she sees the blast coming out from the window of the abandoned hotel. The officer says, “We are pretty sure that it was shot from a far distance and for our security reasons, we have to investigate this perimeter to double check but I will send someone up there to take a look.
Cheyenne walks out from the hotel and walks directly to the police but she does not have the briefcase with her. She confesses to the police that she assassinated the President and the Vice President. The officer says, “Madam? Why did you come to us? Why did you make the confession?”
“Because I feel so guilty about this.”
They arrest her and take her in for custody. When she gets in the car with the police, everything goes slow motion when she recognizes the man who raped her. She recognizes Senator Joseph Long and she gets pissed. And also she sees Mr. Dark walks with Joseph. She’s about to scream but the door shut on her. The camera moves upward to show the wide location while the car is moving away.
Few weeks later, in a hearing trial in Washington, D.C., Cheyenne is standing next to her lawyer awaiting for the final testimony from the jury when the jury people comes out. The judge says, “Cheyenne Mann is accused of being guilty for assassinating President of the United States and the Vice President. There is a death sentence awaiting as part of the verdict but the death sentence has been waived off so we are going to find out from the jury. So please stand up and tell us what the verdict is.”
The man stands up with a note on his hand and says, “Cheyenne Mann is found guilty for assassinating President of the United States and the Vice President and we know that death sentence was placed on to be part of the verdict because she killed two important person of the country but thanks to a good evidence from Senator Joseph Long who helped in to assist the psychiatric evacuation on Cheyenne Mann for her emotion break down and having a medical excuse to not have a death sentence so our verdict will be despite to determine her guilty so for her punishment with a pardon to replace the death sentence is to have her sent down to the marines and work for them rest of her life.”
The judge says, “So your final verdict is that she is found guilty and with a pardon to send her down to the marines as part of sentence to life working in there. And she can have visitors while serving her life sentence at the marines but there are more consequences if you don’t serve your life time. The case is adjourned.” Everything fades into next when the cops walk with Cheyenne while she is handcuffed for the transport.
Outside where the helicopter is waiting for the transport, Cheyenne walks out in slow motion with the cops and her hair is blowing because of the force of air from the helicopter. She gets in and the helicopter departs.
Somewhere in South of Florida, at a marine’s base, the camera moves toward the base from the ocean while the helicopter is making a landing on the base. Three marine sailors runs out to pick up Cheyenne and bring her to the base to serve her sentence. They are walking and passing where the camera is at in slow motion and everything fades into white.
Three years later, somewhere in suburban Los Angeles, the location looks like it’s a country setting and the camera is at the street light moving down toward left while following a mother and a young son when they are carrying bags of groceries then it continues moving to rotate once around the headlights of a car then starts following someone’s legs while walking to a restaurant.
In the restaurant, at the table, Jack is sitting down and keeps looking out at the window with a lot of thoughts on his mind. The music begins playing quietly in an emotional sense. Someone approaches the table where Jack is sitting and Jack turns his head toward the person. He gives that a huge surprise look on his face with a huge smile and he is happy. Someone says, “Hey Jack, it has been long time.”
“Haley? Oh my god…” he becomes speechless when he sees her and he begins having tears on his eyes. His voice begins quavering and weak. He feels like he couldn’t able to speak. Then finally he says, “My god…Haley! Wow…I don’t know what to say and how to say this!” He stands up and gives Haley a big and tight hug implying how much he misses her and how much he loves her. Then he continues, “I didn’t think I’d see you here. Please sit.”
Haley sits down and she begins crying too because of how much she misses Jack. Jack says, “Haley…where did you find me?” Haley has brown hair, blue eyes and she is about 8 inches shorter than Jack. She’s wearing casual type of clothes and she has very beautiful eyes like how bright the blue is like as shown from the ocean’s color.
She sighs and trying to clear her throat because she still have tears on her eyes and says, “I’m sorry about Leanne and after I found out about her death so I realized that I have to find you. I know we haven’t seen each other in long time.”
Jack becomes quiet and says, “I wished that we are together now. Well, actually, there is so much to say and part of it is because I always knew that my marriage life was never been a meaningful life for me.”
“I know, Jack. I’m so sorry about that and I’m so sorry that I didn’t give you a chance so that we could have a life together.”
“What made you think that you didn’t give me a chance for that?”
“Once when you married Leanne and also because of how confused I was. I mean you were the first guy who actually made me try to take some effort to find out what I want and the first guy who taught me what a love is really all about. You were the one who made me smile, laugh, and to have a good time. You also made me to try to open up a bit at a time to realize how many things can happen to you and to build a good trust on each other.”
“Haley…everybody has their own faults and their own mistakes. I mean, people get those confused feelings all the time. It’s just that I always wanted to be with you forever and be the same as how I’ve been to you and you deserved that.”
“Jack…it’s so sweet for you to say that but one thing…if we really want to be together so how can we make it work?”
“Well, we have to find things to reconnect for each other and at this time, I still need to clear some things out.”
“I know we need to reconnect for each other and how did I find you? Well…there’s something that I want to tell you but I rather to wait until you’re done with whatever you are doing to clear out something because I’ve made up my mind of what I want.”
“Do you think I would believe that? Not after what things have been happening to me lately. I want to be with you, I really do but I don’t think this is right time to reconnect. If I believe that you want to be with me and I will get my answer if you show up at my beach house downtown in Los Angeles.” His eyes are starting to get watery because he really wants her so bad and wants to spend his life with her.
“Jack…you will find your answer sooner than you think and don’t forget this…I love you, Jack. And be careful with what you’re trying to clear out.”
“I love you so much, Haley. I want you to be in my arms and I know we’ll see each other again soon. Also don’t forget where to find me and when you do or if you don’t…I will know what my answer is going to be but it’s only by your decision that matters to you the most.” He puts his hands onto Haley’s hands and holds in a good tight firm and says, “I love you.” He gets up and walks away holding back his tears.
Haley keeps staring at him while he walks out to his car and she sees him taking one last look at her. He gets in his car and leaves. Haley sits there keeps looking out at the window while Jack is leaving and the tears keeps falling out more. She bites her lips lightly and whispers, “I missed you so much, Jack and I love you so ****ing much.”
Later at night, at the graveyard where Leanne’s 2nd coffin is buried. Jack walks through the graveyard to Leanne’s grave as the camera is following him. He kneels over to the grave and he puts a vase of flowers in front of the cement. He closes his eyes and he says, “You know how much I’ve missed you, Leanne. But I do have to admit something.”
He pauses for a minute then he continues with a weak and quavering voice, “The truth is that I’m actually in love with someone for long time. I know I haven’t told you a thing about her and I decided not to. I had a feeling that you were not telling me something which is why I decided to not to talk to you about her plus she’s part of my other life which has to do nothing with now. After your death, I’ve been looking for some things to reconnect with others and some of my old friends to dig around to find out if there is anything that I’ve missed on life. I’m not here to ask for your permission and I didn’t even really think we have found a real love for each other which is why I’m not going to ask you for permission and you’re dead after all.”
Sinister theme music begins playing as someone approaches to Jack at the graveyard and says, “Hello Jack.”
Jack turns around and gets an unresponsive look on his face. He says, “Who are you?”
“How do you know my name?”
“I know everything about you.” He snickers.
“What do you know about me?”
“Leanne’s dead and you’re not in love with her. You’re in love with Haley.”
“What? What? What are you talking about?”
“You do know what I’m talking about and do you really love Haley?”
“Why are you asking me all of this?”
“Because I know Cheyenne Mann still has feelings for you. And you still do.”
“Who the hell are you?”
“Someone who gives a message. A messenger more likely.”
“A messenger? What? There is nothing to prove and I don’t even have feelings for Cheyenne anymore. That’s all in the past. And Haley? Why do you need to know?”
“So why is Cheyenne still screwing around with other guys? That is something else that is telling me.”
“That she misses someone.”
“And your point is?”
“My point is that you ought deal with your feelings and to get over with.”
“I don’t think so.”
“Well, don’t you want to see the truth?”
“Everything? I don’t believe you.”
“Well then, go to the dock. Pier 22 at Los Angeles Harbor. You will get your answer when you go there. It is the truth about everything that you will ever face and possibly to alter your life forever.”
“What does this has to do about Haley, Leanne and Cheyenne?”
“You’ll see but all I can say that Cheyenne’s life is pretty over so you can know that.”
“Why are you coming to me and telling me all of this? What are you trying to prove? I don’t trust you.”
“I’m not asking you to trust me. I mean we barely know each other.”
“Then why did you tell me that you know everything about me?”
“Just wait until you find the truth. I’m only giving you a message, that’s all.” He walks away.
Jack turns his face then stares at the ground and begins thinking. Then he says, “Pier 22. Why do I have to go there?” He kicks the vase and the vase breaks apart. He snarls, “LEANNE!” He walks away.
The next morning, at the dock in Los Angeles Harbor at Pier 22, the camera tracks around the surrounding area then moves down toward Jack’s car. He gets out from the car and begins walking as the camera follows him. While he’s walking, he keeps looking at everywhere then he gets on a parked cargo ship and wanders slowly. He goes to different rooms to search through for the truth that Mr. Dark asks him to look for.
He continues wandering around in the cargo ship then at last he goes to the lower level of the ship where there are several wooden and steel boxes that are belong to shipment or some kind. He sees a wooden box that has a crack open and he assumes that someone must have opened the box so he goes toward the box and begins searching through.
Suspense music begins playing while Jack is searching through the box and he finds a medium sized chest box. He pulls it out and opens it. He continues search through and he gives that a shock look on his face when he opens the chest. He says, “Oh my god…” He starts pulling all documents out and he sees some papers regarding to Leanne.
“What does this has to do with Leanne, me and everything?” he whispers. All of sudden, someone shuts the door and locks it. Then there is a small hole starting to open and the water comes out. Jack gets up and starts running toward the door but he couldn’t get out since the door is locked. Then he gets paranoid and he stops running when he sees an opening above him in the lower level.
He sees Mr. Dark standing outside and Mr. Dark says, “Have you found anything interesting?”
The music changes into a sorrowful and harmful theme when Jack sees someone walks by Mr. Dark but the person does not look at Jack. Jack says, “What? Who is that?”
Mr. Dark says, “That’s the truth that you will have to find out. I’m not telling you who that person is.”
“Who?” He starts running and he pushes the door against so he could get out while the water is still running onto him. He finally make it out then continues running like a crazy madman and he keeps chasing after the person that he wants to find out but the person keeps disappearing. Then finally, he stops running and with a surprise, the person shoves Jack off from the ship into the water. Jack is screaming when he is being pushed into the water.
Mr. Dark approaches to where Jack is at and he begins laughing. He says, “Jack…you know, this is your fool’s game and you won’t be able to find out the truth, not this time. You need to admit the truth that you really love Haley.”
“Why do you need me to tell you that I love Haley? How do you know that I love her? But do you know what? I think Leanne is alive. Because I think that mystery person is her.”
“Who said that Leanne is alive? Wasn’t her casket open?”
“Bull****, I know her casket was open and there is something that I don’t believe about. And my friends already knew that I’m in love with Haley for long time. But isn’t this a life, right?”
“Why would you say that?”
“Everybody gets fooled by love and you knew that.”
“Assuming from what everything that has been happening, I do think Leanne has fooled me about love. I knew that she wasn’t in love with me at all and do I care about that? I don’t because I will always find the truth.”
“**** the truth! It’s about choosing a right path in your life.”
“Why don’t you take a damn tampon and shove it up in your ass? What about you? How would you treat a life to yourself? Why do you bother getting into my life business? Is it because Leanne asks you to?”
“Leanne asks me to?” He laughs then continues, “Bull****! No, she hasn’t asked me and isn’t she ****ing dead, right? And yeah, you’re right that I have no business to be getting into your life business.”
“Exactly and you don’t have to bother getting in Cheyenne’s business either.”
“Don’t you love Cheyenne?”
“No, I don’t and what’s your point of asking me that?”
Mr. Dark laughs and he runs away.
Jack says, “Yeah, that’s what I thought.” He begins swimming back to the dock.
Later in the afternoon, at Candice’s house, a car pulls in and Candice walks out from the house in slow motion. The camera is on the ground moving toward the driver’s door when it is opening and revealing Haley. Candice says, “Haley? Oh my god!” Haley smiles and Candice runs toward her and gives her a tight hug.
Candice says, “Where have you been?”
“Long story but I saw Jack yesterday.”
“You saw Jack yesterday? How is he?”
“Not in a good shape but I saw something on his face that I haven’t seen in so long time, he was so delighted to see me.”
“He was delighted? Oh my god…he must be really happy to see you again. To be honest with you, he really misses you and he really loves you so much.”
“Yeah, I can tell that from his face when I saw him. He wanted me so bad for long time.”
“So what make you come here?”
“Well, I thought maybe I could stick around for few days until I hear more about Jack. But don’t tell him that I’m here though, just yet…”
“Why do you say that?”
“Because he told me that he doesn’t want to reconnect right now, he wants to but it is a bad time for him right now.”
“He is in processing of finding the answers on his own, mostly about Leanne.”
“Well, he knows that Leanne is dead.”
“I know but I saw something from his eyes and it tells me that he doesn’t believe that Leanne is dead.”
“So, is he thinking that someone is trying to play the fool’s game on him?”
“That’s what I’m assuming.”
The music changes into a happy mood theme when someone gets out from Haley’s car and revealing a 15 years old girl. Candice says, “Who’s that?” Haley smiles and says, “That’s Jack’s daughter. Her name is Julie.” Candice leaves her mouth wide open and she couldn’t even speak but feels so happy. She says, “Come in and stay for few days.” They all walk in the house.
Candice says to Haley “What really happened between you and Jack?”
“Well, throughout in my early twenties and I never knew what exactly I want in life and I just happened to be dating with Jack. Then I blew him off because I never knew what I want and my feeling changes at random times. After I blew him off, he never came back and I found out that I was pregnant at that time. I wanted to get in touch with him but I couldn’t even find a way until 3 years ago when I found out that Leanne was dead and that Jack was her husband. After I found out that I was pregnant, I didn’t even go see anyone but busy raising Julie on my own and always wanted to find Jack. I wanted him to give me another chance and I wanted him to know that I didn’t even see anyone after I blew him off even though he didn’t even do anything wrong. He was there for me and he cared for me. He wanted us to be together.”
Candice begins crying and says, “I can’t believe that you blew him off and you know…at the whole time when Jack was married to Leanne, he was never that happy at all.”
“He wasn’t? Wow, he told me the same thing. He really misses me and he wants us to be together.”
“Then make that happen.”
“Yeah, I will after he clears out some things that he has to do.”
“Did he even know that he has a kid with you?”
“No, that’s why I want to tell him for long time.”
“Julie is so beautiful! And she has Jack’s eyes. My god…”
Haley laughs and says, “Yeah, she has Jack’s eyes and they’re so beautiful.”
“You have to be lucky that you had Jack to be in part of your life and I knew he wanted you to be happy with what you have and he was happy that you let him to be part of your life.”
“I know. I love him so much!” She starts crying.
“Don’t worry, Haley. He’s here and you’re close. Both of you will work something out.” She gives her a hug.
Somewhere in South of Florida, at the marines base where Cheyenne is staying at, Cheyenne is physically good in shape since she has been on training for 3 years. She becomes a tough lady almost like Ripley from Alien movies.
At outside of visitor’s office, Cheyenne is sitting down and waiting for someone. Supposedly that she is seeing her 3 children after serving in the marines for 3 years. Then everyday for few days now, Cheyenne has been waiting for them and no one shows up to see her.
Four days later, Cheyenne finally gets pissed off and she screams at her officer asking where her children is at. No one has a clue. Then later at night, before bedtime, there is a group of women sitting down on floor as in a circle. Their names are Ivy, Esther, Wendy, and Gloria. The camera keeps rotating around surrounding them while they are talking.
Cheyenne says, “I have to say something. I’m supposed to see my children here after 3 years of serving my sentence in here but they didn’t show up. I’m wondering if something happened to them.”
Gloria says, “Why do you think something happened to them? I mean why do they have to see you here after 3 years?”
“What actually happened was that they were kidnapped before I assassinated the President and the Vice President 3 years then they told me that they were going to release them after I serve my first 3 years in here but right now, I don’t know what’s going on. I feel like I have to escape from here and find them.”
“How would you make that happen?”
“Only that will happen if some of you help me. I’m forced to serve rest of my sentence in here instead of having a death penalty and my life is over but I want to see my children again.”
“You were forced to do something because your children are kidnapped and that is not right. You need to tell someone.”
“It’s too late now and I need to get out of here soon as possible.”
“Well, do you know that the police and the government will be going after you if you escape?”
“Yes and I don’t care. I just want to see my children.”
Then everyone rushes to bed when the Sergeant calls in for bedtime. Cheyenne gives Ivy something to hold the door so Ivy could throw something to the door after the Sergeant shuts the door. Then she runs to bed and sleep. The Sergeant checks the room and shuts the door but Ivy throws something onto the floor to the door to hold the door temporarily and the Sergeant leaves. Ivy calls Cheyenne and Cheyenne runs over to the door. She opens the door then takes last look at her friends and says, “Thank you.” Then she leaves quietly so no one could know. She continues running quietly for her escape route then she makes it outside and she sees a truck waiting to leave the base so she runs to the truck. She slides underneath the door and holds on the truck while leaving the base.
Few miles ahead, the truck finally stops and Cheyenne let herself go so her body is laying on the road while waiting for the truck to leave. As the truck leaves, she rolls off from the road onto the ditch. She gets up from the ditch and starts running into the woods to hide for a little while.
All of sudden, she hears loud blare meaning that someone has escaped from the base so the officers are sent out to find Cheyenne even they sent out 2 helicopters. Cheyenne whispers, “****.” Then she begins running fast as she can through the wood. She makes it out from the woods and continues running since she finds railroad tracks and the train is running ahead of her. She keeps running and running. She finally jumps onto the train and hide. The camera pulls away from the train to show the surrounding area of where the train is going and revealing 2 helicopters.
The next day, in Los Angeles, at a park, the camera is at a street light moving down toward 2 late twenties couple while they’re on their rollerblading through the park holding their hands. The camera then moves toward an elderly couple while they’re walking being happy and such. Then the camera moves toward a family while they’re having a picnic. A father is playing with two boys and a girl is helping her mother preparing the picnic. Again, the camera pulls away from them toward another family where a young man is laying down on the grass while holding the baby in the air. The young mother is smiling and having a good time.
Then the camera swifts toward a wooden bench and turning slowly on Jack’s face profile while he is staring at the water while the music changes into a sad emotional music. He puts his hands onto his face covering his nose and he begins sniffling.
Fifteen years ago, Jack was sitting on the couch and crying while staring at Haley. Haley was crying too and she said, “Jack…I don’t know what to think and I think we have to call it off because I don’t really know what I want.”
“Haley, what’s bothering you?”
“One of my ex boyfriends wants me really bad and I’m still in love with him?”
“My god, you don’t even let that go? I mean, have you really thought about what’s making you happy in life for once?”
“He loves me and I love him.”
“Do you really think he loves you? I don’t believe so. You knew that but why are you coming back to him? I mean you gave him so many ****ty chances and he blew it off all the time and what the hell is this all about?”
“Haley, you have to be strong for yourself and to find out what you really want. If you’re going back to him, I’m done. I’m not giving you another chance.”
Haley begins crying so hard and said, “I’m so sorry, Jack.”
“Don’t let him fool you. This has to end which you should have done long time ago.”
She approached to Jack and gave him a good and tight hug but she pushed him away and said, “Jack…thank you for being here for me and everything. You’ve done so much for me and I’m grateful for that. I’m so sorry.” She continues crying and Jack walked off so fast. He slammed the door in front of her.
Two months later, at a counseling office in an office building, the camera followed Jack while he was walking through bunch of people and greeted them. He was carrying a cappuccino with him. He made it to his office and sat down. He opened up his files of his clients that he was working with.
Few minutes later, Jack got up and walked to his secretary. While he was talking to his secretary, the romance music began playing when he saw a beautiful woman with black hair, dark hazel eyes and very tall but only about 2 inches shorter than Jack. This woman smiled at Jack and said, “Hello there, how are you?”
Jack smiled and said, “I’m okay and what about you?”
“I’m great and I’m Leanne.”
Jack laughed and said, “I’m Jack and nice to meet you.”
“Jack…so what’s going on? Because you seems to be not in a good mood. Well if you ever want to talk, we could go somewhere to eat or something.”
“Yeah, that’ll be great, Leanne. So here’s my card and contact me anytime so we can set it up.”
Leanne smiled and said, “Here’s my card too and we’ll keep in touch.” Then she gave him a wink and walked away. Jack turned his head and kept staring at Leanne while she walked away then he smiled.
Couple of days later, at a fancy Italian restaurant, the camera moved down and began following Jack and Leanne while they were walking to their table. And they sat down. They ordered for drinks and food.
The camera slowly rotated around the table of where Jack and Leanne was at while they were making a conversation. Jack said, “I’m glad we set this up and you told me that you’re willing to listen to what I want to talk.”
“Yeah, you can tell me and we could talk about it then take it from there.”
“Yeah, so you were right that I was not in the mood even I still am.”
“So what happened?”
He sighed and said, “My girlfriend just broke up with me but I don’t want to go into details.”
“You two broke up and weren’t you married at all?”
“Nope, I never got married yet even though I was considering on getting married but things had gone bad.”
“I haven’t been married yet either so what kind of things are you into?”
“Except the whole counseling thing…” he laughed and continued, “Pretty much anything, I’m not really picky with anything. I’m more of a down to earth type of person but I hate fishing.”
Leanne was laughing and said, “You hate fishing? I thought lot of guys like fishing.”
“That’s true but not every guy is the same. I think fishing is boring and I’m usually into adrenaline type of stuff, like being on roller coasters, or anything that has a fast speed. I’m addicted to it.” Jack and Leanne kept smiling at each other and Jack put his hand onto Leanne’s hand.
Everything kept fading into many different things that Jack and Leanne were doing while they’re together and how happy they were that led them for marriage. The camera moved toward Jack’s face when he said, “I do.” Then shifted toward Leanne and said, “I do.” After the priest gave the statement on her vows. Then he said, “You may kiss the bride.” Jack and Leanne kissed then everything turned into white.
Back at the park, the camera is tilting at Jack’s face while he keeps staring at the water and the water keeps coming out from his eyes. Jack says, “I always thought that I haven’t been always that happy and nothing could match the happiness that I had when I was with Haley. What I had with Haley is so special and it is not same what I had when I was with Leanne. And the outlook on my life, I have to get Haley back with no regrets in my life. What I had with Leanne is pretty much over. I’m going to end this and get myself back together with Haley.”
Three weeks later, at night in Los Angeles, Cheyenne gets off from the bus then she begins walking down to the waiting room at a bus station. She walks to the phone booth and shuts the door. She opens up the phone book to search for Jack Craven on the list and she finds it. She dials the phone to call Jack.
At Jack’s house, the phone is ringing and Jack picks it up. He said, “Hello?”
“Yes, this is Jack and who’s this?”
“It’s Cheyenne. But please don’t hang up on me.”
“Why? I have nothing to say to you.”
“Jack…please listen to what I have to say.”
“Why should I?”
“It’s important, Jack. Please…I need your help.”
“Why do you need my help? You have your own husband that can help you out.”
“No…he ran away and I have no one.”
“What about Dominic, Danielle and Melissa?”
“This is what I wanted to tell you about. That’s why I said it’s important.”
“Well…I don’t see a reason why you want my help after not getting in contact with me for 3 years which we last saw each other at Leanne’s funeral.”
“I know that but that’s why I called you because I need to tell you something and that I need your help.”
“Ok…I will help you but this will be the last time that I help you because I still can’t trust you and where are you?”
“I’m at the bus station in Los Angeles.”
“Where’s that exactly at?”
“In Orange County.”
“There’s only one in Orange County and I know where that is. You’re about 20 minutes away from where I live.”
“Ok, I’ll be waiting.”
“See you in about half hour.” He hangs up.
Half hour later, at the bus station in Orange County, the camera begins following Jack when he gets out from his car and the outside is raining. Inside the station, the camera moves left slowly with emotional music playing while Cheyenne is sitting and crying and the focus changes onto Jack when Jack walks in. Jack stops walking and stares at Cheyenne. He says, “Jesus Christ…I don’t get this.” Then he walks toward Cheyenne and puts his hand onto Cheyenne’s right shoulder.
He says, “Cheyenne, I’m here.” Cheyenne smiles and stands up to hug him. She says, “Jack…I’ve missed you.” Jack gives a small smile but it is a fake smile and his face shows that he doesn’t want to see her. He says, “So, what’s going on?”
“Can we go somewhere?”
“Just go and I’ll explain to you.”
“Jesus Christ, I knew this is going to happen.”
“I need your help though and I just want to explain you everything.”
“Let’s go then.” They left the station for the motel to stay for a night.
In the motel, Jack says, “So, tell me?”
“Ok, first of all, do you know why I haven’t contact you for 3 years? It’s because I was serving my time at the marines in Florida so let me tell you right from the beginning when Isaac left me.”
“Three years ago, I went to New York City to visit my good friend Ashley and we had a fling. So we were raped but Ashley was murdered. Then I contacted Isaac to help me to find me a way to get back home because I didn’t have anything with me.”
“Why didn’t you go to the police? And do you know who the rapist was?”
“I was afraid and I don’t remember who the guy was.”
“I was afraid, I really was and I didn’t know what to do.”
“That’s because you were so dumb when it comes to love and sex and you know that!”
“Goddamn it, Jack! Why do you always have to be that way?”
“Oh really? It’s a part of you that you never change and you know what? That has to be the reason why Isaac left you.”
“Why do you have to be such a dick?”
“Yeah, I’m a dick and who cares? And add to that, I’m an asshole anyway.”
“Just let me finish my ****ing story!”
“Finish it then. I’m tired of hearing your bull****.”
“Then how can I get you to believe me again?”
“I don’t really have to because you proved who you really are.”
“Goddamn it…why don’t you even listen? I thought you were one of my old best friends. You were a really good listener and you were the one who help me to get through a lot of stuff when we were in college.”
“This isn’t about love. It’s about proving who you really are. You won’t admit who you are. And love isn’t something that people can change people for who they are. Love is about acceptance and respecting others for who they are when they feel a strong connection. You knew that! Love isn’t about having a natural high! Sure, love is a great feeling that anyone could have but that is not something to prove with a high feeling. It’s about trust, acceptance and a ****ing respect!”
“Ok, Jack. Maybe I’m not proud of myself as what I did to break trust with other people. I’m a very sexual person myself and I couldn’t get away from that kind of feeling. I admit that I’m crazy about sex but I regret that mistake for hurting Isaac so much because he has been so patient with me and helping me so much with many things.”
“Now, don’t you see? That’s what Isaac has been doing all along, he loved you and he proved that because he accepted you as who you are.”
“Oh my god…thank you, Jack for pointing that out.”
“Don’t be stupid and you know that! I never knew why you don’t understand that!”
“It could be because I’m afraid.”
“Everybody is afraid in their life, it can be anything. I’m afraid too. It’s because I don’t trust people anymore and they kept blowing it off.”
“So I went home to see Isaac and all of sudden two officers showed up for questioning about the incident in New York City. The reason Isaac left is because I finally admitted the truth that I was raped. Then after they left, some people broke in my house and took Dominic, Danielle and Melissa. Then this person told me to call a certain person but I never knew who it was because this person told me that I can’t see my children again until I serve my 3 years in marines.”
“Go back a bit, how did you get in the marines?”
“Well, I was forced to be trained to become an assassin and assassinated the President of the United States and the Vice President then had to force myself to surrender to the police. I was supposed to get a death penalty but it got waived because I surrendered and made a confession so they decided to send me to the marines and serve there for life. My children were supposed to come to see me after 3 years of serving but it never happened so I escaped because I want to find them because I know they haven’t been released yet. So here I am.”
“Thanks for the truth and I understand why you need my help now. But here’s a thing, the police and the government can’t know or can’t find out that I’m assisting you with everything about your escape so you’ll have to make them think that I’m your hostage, one way or the another. Plus, it’s another way to prove your innocence that you were forced to assassinate two important people of the country.”
“It sounds like a good plan.”
“Let me ask you this, do you know who your rapist was?”
“Senator Joseph Long.”
“He was? Oh my god…I think he was the one who is behind this whole thing. I mean I think he was the one who made the orders for you to assassinate the President and Vice President.”
“Why did you say oh my god?”
“Well, I knew his ex-wife and I slept with her few times 3 years ago after Leanne’s death. Her name was Brittany Starsky.”
“You slept with his ex-wife? And I don’t see her anymore. It was a need in each other type of relationship.”
“Yeah and I somewhat suspected it was him because after what you explained your situation and I fitted that in with Brittany’s story about Joseph and it’s connected. We have to bring him down for good and when we do, you have to prove your innocence but one more thing, do you know who Mr. Dark is?”
“Oh ****, I know who he is and I met him once.”
“You met him once too? I just met him few weeks ago when I was visiting Leanne’s grave.”
“You met him? Damn, he keeps popping up from nowhere.”
“I know and I think he’s working with Joseph and he’s part of this too. To be honest, I don’t know what the hell he is trying to prove.”
“I don’t know either.” Then the music begins playing slowly when Jack and Cheyenne begins getting closer to each other. They stop for a moment then they keep feeling so much intensity in their own emotions so eventually, they begin kissing. Few seconds later, Jack pulls away and says, “Cheyenne, I can’t do this and I don’t really miss you.” He stands up from the bed and walks toward the chair next to the window. He sits down and says, “I used to like you a lot before but that feeling isn’t here anymore. Time changed a lot and I do appreciate for that kiss but I don’t feel that we deserve that kiss.”
“That’s okay but it’s just one time in a lifetime and I thought why not? Do you love Leanne?”
Jack blows a breath then sighs and says, “Honestly? I don’t.”
“Really? Why not?”
Jack begins having tears and says, “I always knew something was not right about Leanne because I know she kept a dark secret that I never knew about which I still don’t. And there is someone that I love for long time.”
“Wow…I haven’t heard about her.”
“Yeah, I met her few years later after we left college.” He pulls out his wallet and shows her the picture of Haley. Cheyenne smiles big and says, “My god, Jack! She’s so beautiful! It would be nice to meet her. I’m glad you met someone but I don’t get why you didn’t marry her but with Leanne?”
“Haley blew me off but it was because she wasn’t sure of everything about herself and what she wanted. She was confused. So I walked away after she blew me off.”
“I’m so sorry, Jack.” She walks toward him and gives him a hug.
She continues, “Jack, you know you’re a really great friend and a good person for someone to get along with because you’re a very trusting person and a great listener. Also you’re a great helper too.”
“Trust is the hardest thing of all. And people don’t want to face the truth.”
“I know, Jack.”
“You know, I won’t forgive you for everything that you did but to move on.”
“I know, everything isn’t about forgiving others.” She pulls a key out from her pocket.
“It’s a key that I found at my old house. I went back to my house after I escaped the marines few weeks ago and Isaac was there. He told me that someone left an envelope for me and that’s what I got from the envelope. I think it’s a key for me to find where my children would be at. And there is a note attached to it.”
“What did it say?”
“It said the key is on a locker with a number and it’s at the airport which we have to go in the morning to get it.”
“All right, we’ll go there and find out.”
The next morning, Jack and Cheyenne walks out from the hotel room and Jack walks to the main office to turn in the key. The camera moves toward the car and rotates around the car once while Jack and Cheyenne are getting in the car then starts moving up when the car pulls out from the motel. The camera continues moving up to follow the car then stops when the motel sign is flashing after the car leaves the location.
At parking ramp at the airport in Los Angeles, the music begins playing while the camera tilts and moves in a fast and steady speed as the car approaches into the parking space. Jack and Cheyenne gets out from the car and begins walking rapidly to get in the airport terminal. The camera moves out from the parking ramp onto the bridge where the elevator leads to the airport entrance. Jack and Cheyenne finally get in the airport and continue walking.
Outside of the airport, the camera turns slowly as the airplane arrives to the terminal. Inside the airplane, the camera moves in the aisle toward Senator Joseph Long and 4 FBI agents as they’re getting up from their seats. The camera continues moving to follow in same direction while they’re walking to get off from the airplane to get in the airport terminal.
Jack and Cheyenne continues walking to find the locker that Cheyenne has a key for to open. When they get to locker area, they begin looking for the locker number and the camera rotates once around Mr. Dark while he is sitting in the waiting area and he is reading newspaper. He pulls the newspaper down to take a peek on Jack and Cheyenne.
Cheyenne finds the number and she puts the key in to open it. She stops and takes a look at Jack. She says, “Are we ok?” She opens the locker and finds the gun and a few documents proving where her children will be at.
Jack says, “I think I saw Mr. Dark and he’s looking at us.”
“Damn it! Let’s get this done and we better run.”
The camera is at front of Joseph and 4 FBI agents while they’re walking and the music continues playing. Joseph sees Mr. Dark reading newspaper but he is showing a middle finger while holding the newspaper. He suddenly knows it is a warning sign that Cheyenne and Jack are at the airport even though the sign points out where they are at. Then he sees them at the locker area and he tells FBI agents about them so they are on alert. The FBI agents call in the security and the police at the airport informing that Cheyenne is the deserter and is also holding a hostage with her.
Jack whispers, “Are you ready for this?” Cheyenne grabs the gun out from the locker and points at Jack’s neck. She screams, “Get out of my way!” She walks slowly leading Jack to Mr. Dark then she quickly pushes Jack onto Mr. Dark and begins shooting at Joseph and FBI agents until she finds a safe place to hide.
Jack and Mr. Dark falls onto the floor behind the ticket agent desk and Cheyenne runs into behind the desk. She says to Mr. Dark “Here I am and I will get my revenge.” She shoots him in the head and says, “You’re ****ed.” Then she whispers to Jack “We have to get out of here and do you have the papers with you?”
“Let’s get our ass moving now!” She pulls Jack up and starts running with him while she treats him as her hostage guarding herself so that no one can shoot at her. They finally start running to get out of the sight and Joseph screams at FBI agents to go after them.
At lower level of the airport where coveyer belt is at, the camera moves slowly at the people while they are waiting to pick up their bags from the belt then swifts quickly toward Cheyenne and Jack when they are running off from the escalator and begins following them when they are running to get on the belt. They get on the belt and escapes from the airport as the camera stays on the belt. The belt is still moving while the camera stays on Jack and Cheyenne while they are running onto the stairs in the mechanical area. The belt is moving out from the area, the camera swifts toward Joseph and FBI agents while they are running toward the belt to get on the belt while the camera continues following them. They get off from the belt and the camera begins moving overhead of them to follow them while they are running to get on the stairs in the mechanical area.
In the mechanical area, the FBI agents and Joseph begins shooting at Jack and Cheyenne but they miss often while Jack and Cheyenne are trying to run out of their sight. Few times, Cheyenne tries to shoot back at them and she screams at Joseph “What the hell do you want, Joseph?!?”
“I want your body!”
“**** you! Why do you have to do this to me?”
“Because I want to and I’m a sick person.”
“Believe it or not…you’re insane! Why don’t you just let me go?”
“No…not until I have your body!”
Jack says, “What the ****? He wants your body? What the **** is wrong with him?”
Cheyenne says, “What do you think I am? Am I a slut?”
Jack laughs and says, “I don’t want to talk about that.”
Cheyenne screams at Joseph, “You want me because I’m a slut!”
“No, you’re a **** mother****er!”
Cheyenne gets so pissed and Jack keeps snickering, he is trying to not laugh. He says, “Forget him and don’t you want to find your children? Then let’s go and forget about him!”
They begin running out from mechanical area back into the airport terminal and they run onto the bridge route where there are several glass windows. The bridge is called Through the Glass Bridge. They continue running across the long bridge inside the airport. Joseph and FBI agents keeps chasing after them while they are trying to call in more security guards and the police to catch Cheyenne and Jack.
They make it off from the bridge and there are 4 security guards standing by upper exit/entrance of the airport in the way. Cheyenne pulls Jack onto the escalator that leads to lower floor entrance of the airport. They keep running and Cheyenne shoves a guard onto the floor. She gets up and begins running again. She reaches out to the window and shoots to break the window so she and Jack can escape from the airport.
Outside at the parking ramp, they are still running back to Jack’s car and Cheyenne says, “You drive!” They get in the car and leave off. Joseph and the agents stop running and he yells, “Damn it!” He radios in to get a car. They rush to find 3 cars to track down Cheyenne and Jack and they leave off to start chasing them.
Throughout the city of Los Angeles from the airport, Joseph and the FBI agents are chasing Jack and Cheyenne. They get on the highway and start passing several cars and trucks on the traffic. Few miles ahead, the landscape changes into suburban however Jack and Cheyenne see a road block so they pull off from the highway onto a small pathway throughout the woods.
Joseph yells, “Where the hell are they going?” He shifts off from the highway to continue the chase.
In the woods off from the highway, there is lot of road dirt dusts flying around in the air. All cars are experiencing several road bumps and dips on the pathway. Finally, all cars make a huge dip over to get onto the road in suburban of Los Angeles and continue the pursuit. They also are passing majority of the traffic in the town.
Back in the city of Los Angeles, the cars are still in pursuit and Joseph finally starts bumping Jack’s car to try to create an accident but Jack keeps changing the lanes to avoid the bump.
Jack says, “I don’t get you. I never understand why you are after Cheyenne. Why do you need to have all the power to control a woman’s life? You’re such a pimp mother****ing bitch!”
He slows his car down then speeds up to smash Joseph’s car. Joseph’s car get out of control and spins off from the traffic. Joseph starts screaming and changes the shift in his car to continue the chase. Jack finally turns his car to go in an alley and continue driving in high speed. Joseph misses the turn but he changes his direction on the street to continue in same direction where Jack is going.
Jack turns left back onto the street after passing 9 blocks in the alley and drives in high speed. He pulls over onto the street next to an underground subway station intersecting with a large strip of the mall. The camera turns quickly as the car approaches to the parking space on the street and starts following Jack and Cheyenne when they get out from the car. They start running on the sidewalk to get on the stairs to the mall.
In the mall intersecting with underground subway station, Jack and Cheyenne continue running through many of people and they find a stairway so they could run down to a lower level. Joseph and the FBI agents pull in and start running after them even though they already have their guns reloading. The music begins playing.
In lower level where the subway station is located, Jack and Cheyenne are still running on their feet and they keep running down on several stairways and escalators to get to the subway station.
At the subway station, Jack and Cheyenne are still running all over in the station like they’re in the maze. Joseph and the FBI agents are still running after them but they tell each other to spill up to set a trap onto Jack and Cheyenne by going on a different route in the subway station. The other three FBI agents continue to chase on same route where Jack and Cheyenne are going.
Few minutes later, Jack and Cheyenne starts following the signs toward the escalator and by the time when they turn left toward to the escalator where there is a wall around that no one can see oncoming walking people. They finally get trapped by Joseph and the FBI agents. The camera starts rotating around the FBI agents and Joseph while Jack and Cheyenne are trapped in the middle surrounding by them. Joseph and the FBI agents have their guns pointing at Jack and Cheyenne.
Joseph says, “At last, you’re caught.” Then he starts laughing.
Cheyenne says, “What the hell do you want from me?”
Joseph turns his face toward one of the FBI agents then the agent hit Jack with his gun. Jack falls down on the floor and passing out.
He says, “Cheyenne…finally, at last we meet…do you really want to see them? You still have to do one last thing and you would have to do it if you really love your kids.”
“Why are you doing this to me? Why are you torturing me? What are you trying to prove?”
“Mr. Dark was in contact with a mysterious person known as The Wolf. The Wolf is the person who is behind this whole thing. And I haven’t met The Wolf at all yet. So I don’t know what The Wolf is trying to prove. I’m just following under orders and so Mr. Dark was too.”
“Who the hell is The Wolf?”
Two of the FBI agents lock Cheyenne’s arms so they could put handcuffs on her and blindfold her eyes. Then they take her away and leave Jack on the floor. Cheyenne starts screaming and Joseph puts a duct tape on her mouth so she wouldn’t able to scream.
Fifteen minutes later, an elderly man is walking down with a cane and he sees Jack lying down on the floor unconscious. He walks toward Jack and he slowly kneels down next to him. He rolls Jack over and starts shaking him to wake up. He says, “Hey mister, are you awake?” as he keeps shaking his body to try to wake him up. Finally, Jack wakes up with a confused look on his face and he starts getting a little panic. The old man says, “Are you awake? Are you all right? Do you have any injuries? What’s your name?”
“I’m ok. I was knocked out by one of the FBI agents. Do you know where the woman goes?”
“Who is this woman? I haven’t seen anything.”
“Oh crap…” He starts looking around then he sees a security camera and says, “Can you go to the security and tell them to play back on the incident that occurred a while ago? And I need you to call the police and report it. I have to find her now before it gets too late. Can you help me out?”
“Yes, sir. What’s your name?”
“Jack Craven and don’t forget to report what you found me in here but please do what I say about the camera. I need them to see the evidence.”
“Ok, just go and I will take care of it.”
“Thanks for your help…”
“Oh, name’s Gregory.”
“Oh ok…” he laughs then continues, “Thanks for your help, Gregory.”
Jack gets up and starts running to get on the escalator to find Cheyenne. He keeps running to get out of the subway station from underground and he makes it out to the street. The camera moves toward Jack then rotates once around him while he keeps looking left and right while trying to find out where Cheyenne would be at. He starts running down on the sidewalk while the camera is moving at same direction as Jack is going at different kind of shots. He runs on the street passing several waiting cars during a long rush hour then he stops running when he sees 2 black vans parking on the side of a street few miles ahead.
He runs toward the vans and looks through the windows. He sees several stuffs that the FBI agents normally have with them. He turns his face toward the abandoned building and it is a building where filmmakers would do their porn films. Then he breaks the driver’s window of the van to steal a gun and he takes a look at it. He knows in his own sense of how to use a gun so he loads the gun to prepare.
He starts wandering slowly in the alley next to the building to find an emergency exit ladder so he would able to climb up to get on the metal stairway outside of the building. He sees 2 FBI agents standing at the top next to the door to enter the building near the roof. They are guarding the door. Jack continues to walk up the stairs slowly and quietly to try to reach toward the 2 agents. He finally reaches up to where they are at and he has his gun pointing at them.
“Where is she?” He snarls.
“I don’t know where she is.” The agent replies.
He points his gun closer and repeats the question. Then he pistol whips the agent’s head and kicks another agent. After he kicks the agent, he grabs him and throws him off. The body falls onto the alley then he picks another up and throws him onto the stairs. The agent gets a fatal killing when he gets a neck snap after falling down on the stairs.
He opens the door slowly while holding his gun and starts wandering slowly down in the hallway. He enters the building and the hallway is very dark with two little lights showing. One light keeps blinking and Jack keeps looking at the light while he is walking slowly. The music begins playing slowly while Jack is walking down the hallway slowly. In middle of the hallway, Jack sees a small opening of a door and he reaches his hand onto the door to open the door lightly. The door opens as Jack is about to point his gun in the whole room.
“What the ****?” as the first word that Jack whispers when the door is open wide. He sees Cheyenne is riding on someone on a bed and he starts getting mad. He runs toward Cheyenne and pushes her off from the person and he gasps when he sees Joseph. Then he points his gun at Joseph.
“Oh my god…what the hell are you doing? Weren’t you the one who forced Cheyenne to assassinate the President and the Vice President? And weren’t you the one who raped her and Ashley?”
Joseph begins chuckling and he is about to stand up to start a fight but Jack slams his gun onto Joseph’s face. Joseph yells and starts moaning.
Jack says, “That’s for your plastic surgery, ****cake.”
Then he stares at Cheyenne while pointing his gun at Joseph. He says, “Why are you doing this?”
Cheyenne starts sobbing and says, “He forces me to. If I didn’t then I won’t be able to see my children.”
“I don’t believe it was a force kind of thing. You were having so much pleasure on doing it and don’t ****ing lie to me!” He screams. Everything freezes and changes into white.
Almost twenty-five years ago, the camera was moving down toward the entrance of a yellow house while young people who were in college, were walking in for their drinking party. Jack and Cheyenne got out from the car and started walking in the house. Cheyenne knew how much Jack liked her and knew that Jack was on her side and been there for her.
Jack walked down from the bathroom and he saw Cheyenne was all over two guys even though all of them were very drunk. Jack got pissed off and he saw the boys were having sexual touches on Cheyenne and teased her to have her ****ed by them. He also saw them giving her a weed for them to smoke.
Jack said, “Oh my god, why are the guys doing all of this just to get in her pants? What’s so ****ing attractive about her that made the guys fall for her?” The camera moves toward him after he saw one guy started squeezing Cheyenne’s breasts and started kissing her while Cheyenne was moaning leaving her mouth open.
He growled then started walking through many people in the party to get outside of the house. He was having some fresh air and began thinking.
“I don’t know what the hell I am doing. I never had a girlfriend for 4 years and this is the reason why I never wanted to have a girlfriend because nobody knows what they want.”
Few hours later, Jack and Cheyenne arrived back to their friend’s house and stayed the night there. Jack looked away and didn’t even want to talk to Cheyenne. Cheyenne tried to start touching Jack’s hair and his body. Jack pushed her away and he moved his body away from her.
Cheyenne stood up while sitting and said, “Why are you doing this, Jack?”
“Do you ever think I really ever want you at all?”
“Yes, you wanted me and it’s because I got a hot body.”
“Just because of your hot body? Aren’t you ****ing kidding me? You’re so full of ****.”
“It’s true, lot of guys fell for me because I have a perfect breasts and it’s a well-rounded.”
“**** you, I don’t want to hear any of your **** anymore.”
“**** me? Why don’t you want to do it with me?”
“**** off and I’m done talking to you.”
“Why are you being such a mean?”
“Don’t you even take a look at yourself? It’s about who you are! And to me, you’re a slut because I don’t see a reason why you were going on orgy with two guys at the bar.”
“You’re such a ****ing dick, Jack!”
“Well, why don’t you just go **** off and go **** many guys as you like and shut the hell up?” He stood up and walked away.
Back at the building where Jack, Cheyenne and Joseph are at, Jack says, “Joseph…You’re just admiring a queen of whorebags and you know what? I already slept with your ex wife.”
“You slept with my ex wife?”
“Yes, I did.”
Joseph starts screaming and Jack shoots him once and quick. Everything goes so quiet after Joseph get his head blown off but the blood did not splash on Jack. Jack walks right slowly then he stares at Cheyenne and he moves his gun onto her.
“Oh my god…my god…what the hell are you doing? What the hell are you thinking?!?”
Cheyenne starts crying and says, “I’m so sorry, Jack. Joseph forced me to have sex with him.”
“Well, you had sex with the same guy who raped you three years ago and I don’t see a point of that.”
“Well, you know what? I always knew you never change who you are and you never understood what the hell you were doing. I don’t know why you have to have sex with random guys and I knew you were cheating on Isaac.”
“I was never happy with my life and I’m just a lovesick type of person. I’m a very sexual person myself and it’s just that I love it too much.”
“Cheyenne…I don’t want to hear any more of that. You should have thought twice about Isaac but you never did anyway. Don’t you even care what he felt about you? You ****ing hurt him just like how you did to me. I don’t know how Isaac got you in first place. I’ve always liked you so much long time ago and I don’t know what took you to not realize it and I thought it might be something about what you want from a guy. In the end…you should have knew that lot of guys are assholes and they don’t go for love that much. And also they never care about feelings and emotions which is why they never understood a ****. And what about me? Why am I different compared to them? And what does that tell you?”
“I love you, Jack.”
“You love me? You really love me? **** you! You should have realize about a guy who is able to make you happy and smile because of how well this guy treats you. You could have thought about that and Isaac was the one for you because of that and you don’t even have a damn thought about that.”
“Jack…I’m sorry and I do really love you.”
Jack closes his eyes and he starts getting really pissed off. He pulls a trigger and shoots at Cheyenne. He misses the shot on purpose and Cheyenne is gasping and getting scared.
Jack says, “Know what? You deserved this and I’m done.” He walks off toward a closet and finds three people being handcuffed and their mouths are wrapped with duct tapes. Dominic, Danielle and Melissa are surprised to see Jack opening the door and Jack helps them to unlock the cuffs and let them go. The music begins playing when they start walking by Cheyenne and they didn’t even take a look at her. They are pissed off at her and Cheyenne is still sitting on the floor naked but with a blanket covering her body. Jack clears his throat and he shakes his head when he walks by Cheyenne to walk out together with Dominic, Danielle and Melissa.
Cheyenne starts crying so hard and whimpering. She says, “Why? Why are they doing this to me?” She continues crying and her stomach feels like there is a stab in it that makes her feel sick in the stomach. She collapse onto the floor and continue crying so hard. She turns her head toward right and she sees a gun lying on the floor under the bed. The music continues playing and she closes her eyes for a moment. She opens her eyes and she bites her own lips. She moves her right arm slowly to reach for the gun and grabs it.
She starts screaming hysterically when she grabs the gun and starts shooting toward the wall next to the door then all of sudden, she stops screaming and she gasps. Then she drops the gun and she hears a body thud at the same time when she drops the gun. She whispers, “Oh my god…” She gets up and starts running out to the door and she sees Jack lying down on the floor. She starts sobbing and says, “I’m so sorry, Jack. I’m so sorry!” Her eyes are very red and her face becomes red like on a fire.
In the hallway, Cheyenne keeps crying and all of sudden, she hears someone walking on the stairs and she runs away. The camera moves upward to the roof when Cheyenne reaches out from the door and she climbs up to get on the roof.
On the roof, Cheyenne walks lightly and kneeling down while she watches the police and the rescue people are arriving. She also sees Dominic, Danielle and Melissa are being taken care of and they are in police’s custody because they are the victims of the kidnapping. She starts crying and says, “I’m so sorry about everything and I’ve always loved all three of you. Having all three of you are the best moments that I ever had in my whole life.” Then she walks away and no one knows where she has gone to.
Back in the hallway, the police and medic people are taking care of Jack and his wounds. One cop says to Gregory “Is this person who told you to call the police?”
“Yes and this man name is Jack Craven.”
“Ok, thank you for telling me the name and I’ll take care of it plus with the rest about the evidence from the security camera.”
“Your welcome.” He walks away. The camera is on Jack’s face and starts zooming slowly toward both of his eyes and everything goes in black when he shuts his eyes.
One week later, at the hospital during the day, the camera moves slowly from Jack’s hand where he has an iv on his left hand toward his face. He is sleeping but he starts to wake up few minutes later. He finally wakes up then he stands still and he is not moving. He sees a woman standing next to the window and the woman is staring out at the window. He is shocked and surprised at the same time, “What the ****” is the first thought that he comes up with in his mind.
He says, “Leanne?”
Leanne turns her head right and looks at Jack. She says, “I’m here, baby.”
Jack is not able to know what he is thinking because he always thought Leanne is dead but he always knew that she is alive somehow. He says, “Oh my god, where have you been?” He starts crying.
“Jack…don’t worry. I’m here and I want you to rest so you can get better and we’ll talk about that later, honey.”
“I’ve missed you so much and I’ve loved you but with the whole 3 years thing?”
“Jack…listen to me, we’ll talk about it when you get better ok?” She gives him a hug and she joins in the bed with Jack. She holds him and she gives him a kiss. She says, “Don’t worry, Jack. I’m here.”
“I love you.”
“I love you too.”
Three weeks later, in San Diego, the camera is tracking through above the ocean then starts following a car while it is in motion. There is yellow and orange looking mountains on the side of the road next to the ocean. Cheyenne is driving her car and she seems pissed and upset because of what happened few weeks ago especially with her children. Her children does not want to see her anymore.
Few minutes later, a phone is ringing and Cheyenne answers, “Hello.” She doesn’t know who she is talking to.
“Hi, Cheyenne.” Cheyenne feels surprised and says, “Who is this?” as she is about to pull over but she is still driving and the person says, “You know…you’ve lost everything in your life and I have a question for you…”
Cheyenne starts screaming, “Stop playing games with me, you mother****er! What the **** do you want from me! And **** you!”
The person starts laughing and says, “Well…aren’t you ready for this?” as Cheyenne is about to turn her car and a car crashes her car. The car flies off from the road and a strong force causing her car to crash into a tree and everything shuts into black quickly.
The camera moves up and across a segment of bushes and flowers and there is a car being slammed onto the tree. The rescue people are already there to clean up the mess and the police are there to investigate the incident. Cheyenne is on a gurney in an ambulance and she is being questioned by a detective.
“Cheyenne, I want to let you know that you are cleared with all charges that you had in the past because of the evidence that is found by your friend Jack Craven. Actually, Jack told Gregory to recover the security camera on that day when you and Jack were being chased by FBI agents and Joseph. But I’m happy to give you the great news. You’ve been cleared.”
Cheyenne smiles and says, “Thank you so much, detective.”
“Not a problem.” He walks off from the ambulance then the camera turns onto Cheyenne. Cheyenne is happy and smiling. She keeps looking at the sky since it is so bright and sunny. The sky is so clear and it is very beautiful day. She whispers, “Thank you, Jack.”
The music begins playing when the camera is following a person while the person is carrying the gun while the person is walking through rescue and medic people. The person make it to the ambulance to see Cheyenne and Cheyenne says, “Who are you?”
The person takes off the gas mask and the face reveals Leanne. Cheyenne is shocked and says, “Oh my god…”
“Ain’t this life fun?” She shoots her with a silencer gun. Cheyenne dies and Leanne says, “That’s your last fate. And I’m the Wolf, that’s who I am.” Then she secretly walk out from the area without anyone noticing her and the camera pulls away to show the surrounding area.
Later in the evening, at the beach where Jack’s house is located at, Jack and Leanne are walking on the sand and they are laughing and smiling at each other. Then they both sit down on the sand. They start making out and try to make love with each other casually. Leanne pulls away and says, “Jack…I want you know how much I love you and I want you know that no matter what you did…I forgive you.”
“I love you too, Leanne. And why are we together? It’s because we love each other.”
“That’s true and do you really love me at all?”
Jack stops for a bit and says, “Why are you asking me this? And why were you telling me that no matter what I did and you forgive me? What are you doing?”
“Just trying to find the proof.”
“The proof for what?”
“That you actually love me.”
Jack stops for a moment and keeps looking at Leanne in a funny way because he doesn’t seem to trust her anymore then he says, “So what does this has to do with us? I mean you were dead for 3 years and what the hell were you doing? I mean, where have you been all along during those 3 years?”
Leanne starts crying a little and she tries to hold back the truth. She says, “Jack…I don’t know how to say this to you but I want you to know that I love you.”
“You just don’t ****ing love me at all!”
“I love you, I really do.”
“Ok, I’ll admit the truth…” She gets up and starts running away from Jack. Jack says, “What the f…” He gets up and starts chasing her. Leanne is crying so hard while she is running and finally, when she reaches to the street and a car hits her. Her body flies onto the window of a corner store across the street from the beach. Jack screams, “NO!!!”
He continues to run to get to Leanne and he sits down next to her. He pulls her up so her body can be onto his arms. Leanne has some broken glass stuck onto her body. She doesn’t seem to be in a good shape. Jack starts crying and says, “Why are you doing this?”
“To prove you the truth.”
“The truth of what?”
“The truth about love.”
“Do you really think I believe that you love me?”
“Why do you think I don’t believe you? Tell me, please.”
“Well, it’s because you knew I was hiding something from you. But here’s a reminder…we have our own faults.”
“What the hell are you talking about our own faults?”
“You got a kid, Jack…”
“I have a kid? With who?”
Leanne tries to hold back but she decides to let it go and says, “You have a kid with Haley.”
“Haley? Are you serious?” He seems surprised.
“Yes, and do you know that Haley has been looking for you for long time?”
“Oh my god…I didn’t know that.”
“Jack…don’t worry and I made a mistake because I was pissed off at myself for that mistake that I made. It’s not you. The truth is that it is not about our own faults. It’s a fault that I made in the past while I was married with you.”
“What the hell did you do?”
“I cheated on you and I had 4 kids with a different man and now, you see…that’s why I was gone for 3 years because I was trying to spend my time with my kids with that man. And don’t you see..that’s another reason why I lied to you about going out of town for few months often while we were married.”
Jack feels so burned up and so mad and he wants to hit her so bad. He says, “Why in the hell you do that for? That’s what I have always knew for long time. That nobody is ready to be committed for marriage and nobody is committed for love.”
“I’m so sorry, Jack.”
“Don’t say that to me. I’m finished with you and **** you for this. You’ve been ****ing around with those stupid ****ing games with Mr. Dark, Cheyenne, and Joseph and with Haley too. **** you! **** you for pulling Haley into this sick game for us to reconnect. But the way I see this, I’m glad I get to see Haley again for myself to realize that I should have given her another chance because I loved for who she is and I ****ing accepted her! And with you…god! **** you!” He pushes her off and gets up to walk out. Leanne starts to pass out and she dies.
The camera is at left side of Jack and follows him while he walks out from the store toward the beach. The camera pulls up while Jack is walking on the sand back to his house. Jack walks up to his porch and stands there looking at the sun while the sun is about to set. The camera slowly rotates in circle around Jack’s face and a thought is spoken out from his mind…
He says, “I don’t know why people need to prove something to face the truth but to me, it might mean something to show that you really love the person so much and you want to be on the person’s side to support and to have a support for each other. Why are there so many lies and betrayal going on about our love, our relationships, our life and our friends? I never understand why it comes to this point. The thing is that nobody can control you especially to control who you are to become a certain somebody that nobody would accept for. But here’s the thing…love hurts and the truth is biggest of all…”
Romance music begins playing when the camera starts following two people while they are walking on the sand then they stop and the camera turns a little from their legs toward Jack while he stands on the porch. The camera moves left slowly from Jack’s back to reveal the two people from his perspective and it reveals…Haley and Julie. They are smiling at Jack and they are so happy. Jack starts having tears on his face and is smiling when Julie screams, “Hey dad!” The camera starts pulling away from them while Haley and Julie are running toward Jack to hug him as what a family do with the hug. Jack says, I love you so much Haley and Julie.” Haley starts crying while she is smiling and says, “I love you so much too!” They both say that while the camera is still pulling away from them.
Well Joshua Davis, this is one intense drama. I would not call it a romantic/thriller. It is very much a psychological drama.
I am going to send you a PM with other comments and I hope you take them in the spirit of constructive criticism.
It was a long read - and you need to know that I am a speed reader. I hope others will stick with what you have offered and read it to the end. As it sits now it is difficult for the reader to follow the story. It would have been easier for others to read if you had posted it in smaller bits. I understand your need to 'get it out there' and seek validation of your work. Obviously, you spent a great deal of time working on it.
With some help, you can produce something in a much more commercial vein.
Thank you for offering it to us and please look for my other comments in the PM.
Well Joshua Davis, this is one intense drama. I would not call it a romantic/thriller. It is very much a psychological drama.
I am going to send you a PM with other comments and I hope you take them in the spirit of constructive criticism.
It was a long read - and you need to know that I am a speed reader. I hope others will stick with what you have offered and read it to the end. As it sits now it is difficult for the reader to follow the story. It would have been easier for others to read if you had posted it in smaller bits. I understand your need to 'get it out there' and seek validation of your work. Obviously, you spent a great deal of time working on it.
With some help, you can produce something in a much more commercial vein.
Thank you for offering it to us and please look for my other comments in the PM.
I read your PM and thanks for the comment/advice. And this isn't some kind of screenplay that I'm trying to do. It's a treatment so it can help me to clearify what I want to write in an actual screenplay which I will write someday. I do put camera movements and some kind like that because I want to be the director too, not just a writer. I want to write and direct Dark Rainbow one of those days.
And the story is very very intense drama? I knew it was drama but to me, it's more like a thriller to me in a different way because the 2nd half pretty much spend on thriller rather than drama due to non-stop fast pacing action, not in a mayhem kind of action, haha. Besides, I do feel that there are several of different genres throw in the mix such as action, drama, romance, thriller, some comedy and a little bit of horror as in a psychologist way.
And I was expecting that some people might wouldn't get a message but there is a lot to say from the story because there are so much to talk about. What I'm writing is not about giving a message, what I am trying to do with this story is that I want people to think hard about what they do in their life especially about love, friendships and relationships.
At some point, I wrote this story because I always wanted to blow James Cameron's 1997 Titanic right into the water because that film was mostly targeted at females. Dark Rainbow is the reason why I wrote because I want males and females to like it together at the same time.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story after the story was a long read!