ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Dont worry there will be ..hope you girls dont mind getting your hands dirty?..
Exit Wounds 2-(Justice For All)
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Mystery Mom
Queen of the Mist
Heather you ever
have to change a diaper on a baby with diarrhea?
Now that's getting your hands dirty.
Of course slinging a skunk around by the end of it's tail - hmmm, that could be a bit messy as well!
Myst
have to change a diaper on a baby with diarrhea?
Now that's getting your hands dirty.
Of course slinging a skunk around by the end of it's tail - hmmm, that could be a bit messy as well!
Myst
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Ohh yes dirty nappies been there done that with my nieces when they were little tackers
hope to get some more down here maybe over the weekend ..who knows he might be changing nappies soon ...pitte patter of little seagal feet..any way what ever...
hope to get some more down here maybe over the weekend ..who knows he might be changing nappies soon ...pitte patter of little seagal feet..any way what ever...
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Oopsss i nearly keep going to write Steven instead of Orin..any way the story continues now....
Orin said ' talk to the hand' and Mr Big and Jeff drove off and Orin said to George 'yeah there all talk no action'..Mean while Latrell had caught up with his brother again this time to have time out with each other since Shaun got out of jail they hadnt really spent any time together because of one thing or an other..but that was going to change as of now..
Orin said ' talk to the hand' and Mr Big and Jeff drove off and Orin said to George 'yeah there all talk no action'..Mean while Latrell had caught up with his brother again this time to have time out with each other since Shaun got out of jail they hadnt really spent any time together because of one thing or an other..but that was going to change as of now..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
While they were going along Mr Big was plotting his next move he wanted certain people dead and now he just had to plan how he was going to do it Jeff said 'iam more keen the ever now to take these pests out' he said' just tell me when and who is the lucky first one'...
Orin had an full day ahead of him he didnt like sitting still for long any way and his boss chief Hinges wouldnt allow that any way..His first port of call was to just check in on Gidget and the girls just to make sure all was ok..he had an bad habit of not calling before going to an premise just as well Gidget had finished training up the girls for the day they all deserved an well earned swim he came up to there gate and they had an intercom and he said whom he was and Mabel was quiet pissed as she was becoming very annoyed at him nooo not Orin he is such an pussy cat isnt he?..any way Gidget let him and the girls had to scatter and change into there bathing suits now Orin wasnt going to whinge at that ..hey he is an male isnt he?..he knocked at the door and Mavis answered it and said ' i gather you are wanting to speak to Gidget'? 'no' he said 'all of you' any they all sat down and he some nice home made lemonade which must have an bit to sour with his facial expression...
He said ' there is an pain in the ass by the name of Mr Big trying to put the wind up our shorts and i wanted to let you know he is nothing but trouble' Gidget said ' we can handle ourselves ' and Orin said ' iam sure you can but just be aware'
Orin had an full day ahead of him he didnt like sitting still for long any way and his boss chief Hinges wouldnt allow that any way..His first port of call was to just check in on Gidget and the girls just to make sure all was ok..he had an bad habit of not calling before going to an premise just as well Gidget had finished training up the girls for the day they all deserved an well earned swim he came up to there gate and they had an intercom and he said whom he was and Mabel was quiet pissed as she was becoming very annoyed at him nooo not Orin he is such an pussy cat isnt he?..any way Gidget let him and the girls had to scatter and change into there bathing suits now Orin wasnt going to whinge at that ..hey he is an male isnt he?..he knocked at the door and Mavis answered it and said ' i gather you are wanting to speak to Gidget'? 'no' he said 'all of you' any they all sat down and he some nice home made lemonade which must have an bit to sour with his facial expression...
He said ' there is an pain in the ass by the name of Mr Big trying to put the wind up our shorts and i wanted to let you know he is nothing but trouble' Gidget said ' we can handle ourselves ' and Orin said ' iam sure you can but just be aware'
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Having said what he wanted to he said ' well girls thanks for the lemonade it was nice' as he walked off he went and screwed up his face and Gidget saw it and called out 'Orin you better watch out the wind catches you making faces like that it will stay that way' and the girls just roared with laughter..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Thats it today..more coming soon ..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
When Orin had left the girls got back into the swing of things in other words kicking the sh.it out of sandbags whom liked like unsavoury characters...they were all doing great Gidget was so proud god helps any guy or gal that thinks they can just come up to them and want some hanky panky all they will get is slappy slappy..
He got back to his car and when he went to go off and van came by and some one emptied his amo into Orins car just as well he had that gut feeling and jumped out just in time his car kept rolling and it hit an other parked car and they were both blown sky high....
Gidget and the girls heard the explosion and they came to see what was up and saw Orin just sitting on the kerb ...They picked him up and he said 'this is what iam talking about girls'..
Since his poor car was blown to smithereens the girls dropped him back at the precinet and Chief Hinges couldnt believe what luck Orin had its obvious that this Mr Big meant business ...
Latrell and his brother were sitting in an cafe minding there own business when Jeff walked in and sat down at the counter and ordered an coffee Latrell was on the blower to Orin to tell him Shaun had to go to the bathroom and Latrell was still talking to Orin..Latrell just looked out the cafe window for an split moment and when he turned back Jeff was gone ..'Sh.it ' he said 'whats up, Latrell? Latrell he said 'Jeff is gone man iam sorr screwed up again' Latrell's heart sank because an guy came out of the mans toilet quiet upset and he could hear the cafe manager ring the police he got up out of his chair and went to walk into the toilet and he was stopped by another waiter he said 'whats up' 'you dont want to go in there ' the waiter said..but Latrell wasnt having that when he pushed his way in there was Shaun slumped near the water basin he had been knifed in the back killing him instantly..
Of cause Latrell ran out onto the streets to see if he could see the b.a.s.t.a.r.d.s.that killed his brother as he was ready to rip his head off ..but of course the mongrel was long gone...he rang Orin and said ' Shaun's Dead'..and hung up that was the signal if you like for Orin to be there pronto..when Orin got there he saw Latrell sitting there next to his dead brother and the coroner and police and repoters wanted to do there job but Latrell didnt want to come to the party as such..Orin said to Latrell 'come on mate let them do there job' after an few minutes Latrell went out side and he was clutching an piece of paper Orin had an look and it was from that prick Jeff saying' one down now get ready for the beginning of the end'...
He got back to his car and when he went to go off and van came by and some one emptied his amo into Orins car just as well he had that gut feeling and jumped out just in time his car kept rolling and it hit an other parked car and they were both blown sky high....
Gidget and the girls heard the explosion and they came to see what was up and saw Orin just sitting on the kerb ...They picked him up and he said 'this is what iam talking about girls'..
Since his poor car was blown to smithereens the girls dropped him back at the precinet and Chief Hinges couldnt believe what luck Orin had its obvious that this Mr Big meant business ...
Latrell and his brother were sitting in an cafe minding there own business when Jeff walked in and sat down at the counter and ordered an coffee Latrell was on the blower to Orin to tell him Shaun had to go to the bathroom and Latrell was still talking to Orin..Latrell just looked out the cafe window for an split moment and when he turned back Jeff was gone ..'Sh.it ' he said 'whats up, Latrell? Latrell he said 'Jeff is gone man iam sorr screwed up again' Latrell's heart sank because an guy came out of the mans toilet quiet upset and he could hear the cafe manager ring the police he got up out of his chair and went to walk into the toilet and he was stopped by another waiter he said 'whats up' 'you dont want to go in there ' the waiter said..but Latrell wasnt having that when he pushed his way in there was Shaun slumped near the water basin he had been knifed in the back killing him instantly..
Of cause Latrell ran out onto the streets to see if he could see the b.a.s.t.a.r.d.s.that killed his brother as he was ready to rip his head off ..but of course the mongrel was long gone...he rang Orin and said ' Shaun's Dead'..and hung up that was the signal if you like for Orin to be there pronto..when Orin got there he saw Latrell sitting there next to his dead brother and the coroner and police and repoters wanted to do there job but Latrell didnt want to come to the party as such..Orin said to Latrell 'come on mate let them do there job' after an few minutes Latrell went out side and he was clutching an piece of paper Orin had an look and it was from that prick Jeff saying' one down now get ready for the beginning of the end'...
Seagal_lover
Member
What are you talking about?? Is this a new movie? "Exit Wounds 2:Justice for all."??? :/
I havent heard of it.... please tell me, i dont get it.......
// from the Seagal to the Lover, Seagal_lover
I havent heard of it.... please tell me, i dont get it.......
// from the Seagal to the Lover, Seagal_lover
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
No!!! Hi Seagal_ Lover 'Exit Wounds' is just one of my favourites and thought i would try my hand at writing an sequel ..have you read the whole thing so far ?..
No my stories are just abit of fun and when i get the writing bug the words just seem to flow..most of the time iam just sitting here at the computer and start writing..smart cookie aint i?..as for this being made into an movie can i just have an little giggle as that aint never gonna happen just like my others i have written..so that why you havent heard of it before because its just an girls(mine) mind gone wild..
No my stories are just abit of fun and when i get the writing bug the words just seem to flow..most of the time iam just sitting here at the computer and start writing..smart cookie aint i?..as for this being made into an movie can i just have an little giggle as that aint never gonna happen just like my others i have written..so that why you havent heard of it before because its just an girls(mine) mind gone wild..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
The coroner took Shaun's body back to the hospital and Latrell insisted on going with them ..Orin Rang George and told him what had happened and to meet him at his place to discuss how to bring this son of an bitch and his boss down..word had soon got around what had happened to Shaun funeral arrangements had been arranged and it was going to be an big one as Shaun did make some friends while he was in prison there not all ass holes ..he always said..
On the day of Shaun's funeral George and Orin were packing heat just in case that spineless wonder Jeff turned up ...any way as the service was ending an shot rang out hitting T.K. in the chest he didnt even know what hit him it was so quick..of cause there was chaos people running every where an couple of elderly people got trampled to the ground..
Orin ran off to see if he could see anyone but nothing this prick was starting to get on Orins nerves ..Latrell was at T.K.'s side while he laid dying T.K. said with his dying breath 'Catch you later bitch'..
On the day of Shaun's funeral George and Orin were packing heat just in case that spineless wonder Jeff turned up ...any way as the service was ending an shot rang out hitting T.K. in the chest he didnt even know what hit him it was so quick..of cause there was chaos people running every where an couple of elderly people got trampled to the ground..
Orin ran off to see if he could see anyone but nothing this prick was starting to get on Orins nerves ..Latrell was at T.K.'s side while he laid dying T.K. said with his dying breath 'Catch you later bitch'..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Orin was starting to get worried now as maybe he couldnt take this prick out but whom said it would have to be an guy to do that any way why do you think Gidget was training up the girls for because she wanted payback for her sister this Mr Big may not have been directly responsible for Annette's death but any friging drug creep will do he will be just another bug squashed under her feet..(t.b.c)..
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Thats the whole idea of this story ..to make sure there wont be another one written ..as for whom will be left standing well its for me to know and you to find out..it will come down to the last one standing and it will not be whom you think?..have i got your attention GOOD....
Mystery Mom
Queen of the Mist
Oh lordy
If I have to die - please don't make it with that dead skunk in my hands!!!!!
Myst - ahem aka Donna Lim
If I have to die - please don't make it with that dead skunk in my hands!!!!!
Myst - ahem aka Donna Lim
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Dont worry girl no dead skunks in my story ...if and when i knock any of you girls off it will be quick ok..
Mystery Mom
Queen of the Mist
Just make sure
I take more than one of those slimy fat lizards with me- remember I can kick a shin faster that anyone here and make it hurt! They are always saying Steven's character is rumored to have beaten someone to death with some strange and crazy thing.
I like the skunk idea - dead or alive - actually they are pretty sweet critters, just unfortunate enough to smell pretty strongly. Caught one in a humane trap in my back garden one year. When I found it I told it very softly that I would let it go merrily on it's way if it behaved itself. It gave me a look, yawned with a rather bored look and waited patiently while I opened the door for it. As soon as it had its freedom it just calmly meandered off into the brush. Once in awhile I can smell its 'cousins' wandering around in the dark late at night, especially in the spring. Ah love, speaks volumes!
Myst
I take more than one of those slimy fat lizards with me- remember I can kick a shin faster that anyone here and make it hurt! They are always saying Steven's character is rumored to have beaten someone to death with some strange and crazy thing.
I like the skunk idea - dead or alive - actually they are pretty sweet critters, just unfortunate enough to smell pretty strongly. Caught one in a humane trap in my back garden one year. When I found it I told it very softly that I would let it go merrily on it's way if it behaved itself. It gave me a look, yawned with a rather bored look and waited patiently while I opened the door for it. As soon as it had its freedom it just calmly meandered off into the brush. Once in awhile I can smell its 'cousins' wandering around in the dark late at night, especially in the spring. Ah love, speaks volumes!
Myst
ORANGATUANG
Wildfire
Now girls no matter how much you try and what you do iam NOT telling whom meets there maker ...this girl is as sharp as an tack..
Re: Exit Wounds (Justice for all) 2
I'm gasping with suspense here gal....
you should have been a script writer of the macabre thrillers type..
some people actually have the imagination and talent , you also have to have the confidence...or do I mean the gawl to grab our attention this way,
short of not getting enough of Steven's movies,
watching them umpteen times over..
this is the next best thing...
cheers
Halkush
I'm gasping with suspense here gal....
you should have been a script writer of the macabre thrillers type..
some people actually have the imagination and talent , you also have to have the confidence...or do I mean the gawl to grab our attention this way,
short of not getting enough of Steven's movies,
watching them umpteen times over..
this is the next best thing...
cheers
Halkush